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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

^ I updated mine before Meera😃

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

omg dat was fab bravo *claps*

luved it

update soon

luv ya

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: ravioli_11
^ I updated mine before Meera😃

well you didn't have so many questions to go answer in the dil of the week thread!!😆😆😆

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

^^ LOL, true true!! Poor Meera!! :P xx

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

Lovely FF Shabz..Amazing..

I really am out of words...Prem's situation with trying to save his brother seems so realistic but for that he kidnapped Heer? That was a lil...out of control!

The quotes that Meera picked are Hahaha and Olaalaalaa...and the reactions you know Shabz!

Amazing FF...

Don't consider me one of your loyal readers...you know me...so will pop in once in a while *Hides behind a couch*

~Shifu

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

This spot has been reserved by mwah!!! bbl to update =D

*edit*

Okie dokes...Me is back!! HAHAHHhAHAHAHA!!! lol ~that was supposed to be an evil laugh 😉😆

OMG I knew it was Ranvir from Bidaai!! See how psychic I am??? OH yeah!! I'm beast!!!!😆😆

Awwwww...kya Chemistry hai yaar Prem aur Heer ki!! I swear....even when she's sleeping she dazzles him??!! LOL hahaha...guess we dont hve to take chem class kyunki yahi sab dekhe ke hum chemistry seekh lete hain!! LMAO ROFL!!! HAhAHAHAHAH😆😆...okay that was a bad joke! 👎🏼 lolz

Prem is slowly getting attracted to her!! awwww sho shweet!!! Lets see how he convinces balraj to give the money....your FF is so Interesting!!!! like seriously....I love these types of stories!!! cant wait to know what happens next!!!! *jumps up and down excitedly* continue soon!!!!!!!!!

byes!!

Love,
Gari <333333333333333333333333333333333

Edited by srklover93 - 16 years ago

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Nikita

@HCDeewani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#157

hey, thanks for the PM. thnak god ur Boyfriend's grandfater is okay. and update wenever uc an no need for a rush.. education is important. so about the update.. prem i s feeling a pull toward heer... nice!! its like -keeche mujhe koi dor teri ore-😆. awsome update. do update wen u get a chance.. and take care

~nikki😳

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Rinki

@~Rinki~

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Posted: 16 years ago

#158

IM here!! 😎 yes yes be pleased 😆

tsk tsk school sucks! i feel ur pain...and congo's for gramps being released nd ur training starting again, have fun and try not to get injured too much please? *sigh* Prem saying shit three times...wah wah! lolz, loved it! aww poor guy getting kicked by heer! 😆 haii the burning intensity he felt...😍 damn u for describing it so beautifully! *glares* hehe he's soo cute! first poking her and then picking her up *sigh* too cute! loved this part!!

aww heh, lookie here! heer is line maarying on prem when she's asleep! 🤣 ahh too funny! but this prt was rlly sweet, how she became calm when he held her...EEEEKKK!!! the phaandooh!!! 😍😍😍 tht was described soo well, i could see it playing out in front of my eyes 😍

........you placed preet on life-support now? *sigh* i am not going to say anything on this part, on purpose too! kimz knows my reason rlly well...🥱

ranvir's worry was rlly endearing, lets see wht he does now.

-Rinki

ps- im bored! 😆 i just wanted to say tht...after like hours of commenting 😆 idk why...hmm

Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago