YAY! H's g-f (grandfather, not girlfriend *shakes head*) Got discharged!! Woohoo... Psh, you'll prolly be constant on updating. I mean you're the most constant outta me and rinkz. 😆 Uh yea, I totally understand... I don't pm you for updates, so no need to ignore me. But hey, even if I did pm you, would you ignore me? *bats eyelashes*
Lets comment on the part now, yesh I know, I don't deserve you. 😛😆
And ooh! You're don't first person's too know? It seems to be all the rage in FF's these days. 🤣 But I love how you use it, telling us exactly what he's thinking too. Wowii, I feel bad for Prem though. Getting kicked for one whole hour? Ouch. Even you wouldn't be that harsh. 😆
Prem in denial of being attracted to Heer was SO cutee... I loved how you described them. And then Heer tries to beat him up even in her dreams, I think? Or she just saw Prem the hottie and is chance maaring. 🤣
PHANDOOH! *eeekkk* ☺️ That was so hot, every word you used made it even more hotter. I could totally see it too, the phoam-scene expression on Prem's face, Heer sleeping but.. kinda awake. I totally loved it! But darn-it, Prem managed to get over the mood. I wonder how though. 😆
I really hate you for putting Preet through this. Why coudln't you have used Ranvir or something, and put Ranvir in Preets spot. *crosses arms and pouts* I dont even know who Ranvir is, but I think he's cute... the on in Bidaii right? Yea, he's really cute. BUT Preets much cuter and deserves a better place.
Oohhh! Ranvir's findin out that Heer's ghayabed? For some very odd reason I do not like Ranvir in here. Maybe cuz I like Preet, but I don't know how that associates to all... err... anyway. I loved the part... continue soon.
*salutes* << dunno, just felt like doing it.
kimz