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Posted: 16 years ago
I was quick this time, so shush it! -- And hey! I know I hate mondays, seriously my friends had to remind me twice that it was monday, and not friday. 🤣 We started sem2 last week, but heyy... our schools have almost the same timings! Dont' worry, I hate school too. *sigh* I didn't get to much hw though.
YAY! H's g-f (grandfather, not girlfriend *shakes head*) Got discharged!! Woohoo... Psh, you'll prolly be constant on updating. I mean you're the most constant outta me and rinkz. 😆 Uh yea, I totally understand... I don't pm you for updates, so no need to ignore me. But hey, even if I did pm you, would you ignore me? *bats eyelashes*
Lets comment on the part now, yesh I know, I don't deserve you. 😛😆
And ooh! You're don't first person's too know? It seems to be all the rage in FF's these days. 🤣 But I love how you use it, telling us exactly what he's thinking too. Wowii, I feel bad for Prem though. Getting kicked for one whole hour? Ouch. Even you wouldn't be that harsh.
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Prem in denial of being attracted to Heer was SO cutee... I loved how you described them. And then Heer tries to beat him up even in her dreams, I think? Or she just saw Prem the hottie and is chance maaring.
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PHANDOOH! *eeekkk* ☺️ That was so hot, every word you used made it even more hotter. I could totally see it too, the phoam-scene expression on Prem's face, Heer sleeping but.. kinda awake. I totally loved it! But darn-it, Prem managed to get over the mood. I wonder how though. 😆
I really hate you for putting Preet through this. Why coudln't you have used Ranvir or something, and put Ranvir in Preets spot. *crosses arms and pouts* I dont even know who Ranvir is, but I think he's cute... the on in Bidaii right? Yea, he's really cute. BUT Preets much cuter and deserves a better place.
Oohhh! Ranvir's findin out that Heer's ghayabed? For some very odd reason I do not like Ranvir in here. Maybe cuz I like Preet, but I don't know how that associates to all... err... anyway. I loved the part... continue soon.
*salutes* << dunno, just felt like doing it.

kimz
Edited by kimmu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
mine! 😛

Omg yay! His grandfather''s discharged?? That's awesome!🤗🤗


OUCH!😆😆 "No wonder she was tired, she spent a whole hour kicking me in spot's I would have rather she didn't." 😳😆😆 Poor Prem!😳😆😆

I totally love this part!!!
Leaning over, I went to grab a hold of her and let go just as quickly. Shocked I stared at her. I don't know what it was, but there was a spark, it just burned desperately. What an awesome phhandooh!!!😍😍😍😍 If only this stupid HHPrem realized it as welll!😆

Prem's already kinda liking her? That is so adorable!😆 That doctor does sound kinda annoying!😕😆😆

Life support?? 😔😔 you cant do that to Preet!😭

Hmm Ranvir....is Ranvir ranvir?? I don't like him much in the show either!😆 He's all sweet, but at times I feel diabetic around him!😳 Weird no?😆😆😆

Anyways mindblowing update!👏

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lalala. I gave up on writing in green. I don't like it anymore
*Edit*
He's been discharaged? See I told you everything would be ok.
Oh that reminds me of my art teacher. She was so dull. She said art wasn't supposed to be fun...
And sorry to break it to you Prem, but you will get in a lot of trouble. Of course since Heer's supposed to fall in love with him, everything will work out. Aww he's attracted to her already. Love how he said stupid conscience🤣
Omg a phhandooh!!!! That nearly killed me☺️ Wait lemme go read it again. And he got shocked again? Love is in the air. He knows he's starting to fall for her so he's trying to keep his distance but we all know it won't work out.
Idiot doctor?🤣🤣 I agree😳 Prem needs to control himself though. First kidnap and now thought on murder? He's trying to become a full fledged criminal isn't he?
Ooh Ranvir's gonna discover she's gone? Wonder how he'll react and what he'll do...What if Prem calls and Ranvir picks up and Prem gets all jealous hearing Ranvir😲 Don't mind me. I have no clue what I'm saying. Went to sleep at like 4 in the morning and woke up at 7 and I'm really hyper right now😆
ANYWAY...loved the update. Can't wait to read the next one and see Heer's reaction. And for some reason I can here SRK in my head saying kuch kuch hota hain Anjali....
Edited by ravioli_11 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
.... and its a record baby! *throws fist in air*
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kimmu

.... and its a record baby! *throws fist in air*



Damn! 😲 I didn't think that was possible! Ohh thanks for the comment Kimz, made my day! 🤗I shall reply back soon...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ shabz: Are you doubting my intellectual superiority? And its very possible, aww... n-p. I was bored. 🤣 .. nah jk, I thought I'd take advantage of the oppurtunity. Hehe...
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome...prems starting to have feelings lol...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yayayyayayayayayayay!! Okay I am losing it, but yaaaayyy- I knew it would be Kinshuk, I am so glad it is Kinshuk- he is such a cutie- I just love him!!!!!!!!! Thank you for adding him in your FF, have you been watching Bidaai lately- he looks so gorgeous as a dulha- mwah!!!! Sorry Heer, you have Prem, Ranvir is all mineeeeee!! 😆😆😆 Anyway, I will regain my senses now and give a proper comment on the update!! I really loved how you started the chapter, Prem giving himself the mental talk- reminding himself how to breath properly, lol!! Really well written!! And the bit about Heer hitting him in places he would rather she didn't have, was just hilarious!! :P Gosh, sparks are flying between these two even while she is asleep, lol, love how Prem can't really control himself around her and is getting engrossed and mesmerised by her so soon, I just love it!! It's getting really exciting now- can't wait to read what happens next, I wonder if Heer's father will meet Prem's demands as soon as Prem wants, as poor Preet is on life support now- so sad!!!! But will dashing Ranvir be coming to try and rescue Heer, thus wrecking Prem's plans? As much as I love Ranvir, Heer is Prem's and Prem's only, lol!! Great update Shabz, loved every bit of it!! xx
Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*SWOONS*
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Posted: 16 years ago
I updated my comments! 😃

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