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jamune thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
hey first apart wans crappy it was gud and dis one is much better but jant wait until first part comes true
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Thanx to mevrulz4eva, my dedicated reader miss precious ( I am thinking of taking your idea on board but putting little twist if you don't mind, I really like it), my second most dedicated reader jamune ( love your picture of meet) and iqbal-pallavi. 🤗
Here is another part:
Harman was driving towards his home with Preet next to him sleeping. Harman watched Preet sleeping him always was fascinated when they were together how Preet could manage to look so innocent while he was sleeping. He looked like nothing in the world mattered to him; it was just him and his dream. Harman watched Preet for a-while before looking at the road; he always admired how Preet could just look straight at the road and never talk to anyone in the car. It was one of the habits he always used to tease Preet but whenever their was chance of going out everyone would rush to Preet's car and were always miles away form Harman's car knowing his reputation. Harman smiled, he missed those little jokes he shared with his father and the way he would just go to his mum and put his arms around and pick her up until she begs him to put her down, or even when he would steal some money from Prem's wallet and blame it on Preet us ever prem finds out which was once in a lifetime.

The scene shifts to Prem's room. Prem is living on the bed looking at the photos of his and Heer's wedding. He tried to search for a face that he tried to find in those photos. Face of his younger brother Harman. Why couldn't he come to the wedding just for few minutes, just to give him his approval of what he was doing was the right thing to do? Everyone blamed Harman he even did somewhere in his heart but he also knew his brother very well. He knew that whatever step Harman took at the wedding day towards his family and Meher was of some type of weakness but what? After talking to Heer he found out the half truth and what the atmosphere tends up to be whenever Harman's name comes up but his heart tells him that their something wrong about the story that Harman had shown to his family and Meher.

Heer comes to the room with a glass of milk and watches prem looking at the wedding pictures; she sat next to her husband and stared at the wall thinking about what Meher just told her. She wasn't sure what exactly she should think about it, deep in her heart she wants to believe every word Meher said but her mind was telling her otherwise. Heer was so confused, why Meher is telling her now that Preet deserves Ash instead of her and them staying together does not only force two people who love each other very much to stay apart but also ruins three lives; after everything he done for her, she has to repay him back and only way was too make him and Ash be together once again. The emotional turmoil what was going inside of Meher's mind and heart doesn't let her to do anything else. There was no other way. "Can I ask you something Prem" she looked at her husband who was now sitting up on the bed and turned his face towards his wife.
"Yer …… sure" Prem stretched his arms to Heer who sat up on the bed next to Prem and put her whole body resting on cages of her husbands arms.

"So are you going to say something" Prem asked laughing as he watched Heer close her eyes and take his smell to her heart, he knew that she would never say anything if they kept on sitting like this, she was too distracted and knew exactly what was on her mind "do you think that Preet and Meher's marriage are not made for each other? Do you feel that Preet was much better whit Ash than Meher? "
" Heer! After looking at them together I cannot think who else could make this perfect couple than them two, I have seen the way they stare at each other when another was not looking, how they take care of each other over little things like we do, I have seen the respect for each other in their eyes and f that is not love I don't know what is. I think you just looking out for your little sister but trust me them two make perfect couple than Preet ever made with ash"


"I don't know, I don't think there is way after what Meher told me and the way Ash has made their life miserable." Heer pointed out.
" But that's how Ash is like; she just takes on after her mother I suppose"
Heer was hesitating for second. "OK"

The minute Harman opened the door of his car he realized that this is going to be much more difficult that he thought. He was standing there staring at the house; neither saying a word nor managing to walk closer to the door.
After few minutes he managed to walk up to the door and ring the bell. "Here I go back to my house" whispering to himself as he managed to make Preet balanced on his shoulders. After few minutes which seemed like eternity to him the door open and stood his beautiful Meher, eyes wet of worrying and shocked to see her ex.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^ OMG now what's going to happen, why did you have to stop there *whining* .... premeer are so cute, bless them, they're so worried sor their siblings ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here is another part:

Meher was standing there looking at her husband who was drunk and rested on the shoulders of her ex, trying to find answers for all these questions which were burning her mind and soul. She was desperately trying to keep her mind straight, but she was drowning at the sight of two men who made a story of her life, one who taught her how to love and then broke her and the second one who taught her how to fulfill a promise and sacrifise everything for one desire; she can't focus on what was going to happen once these both men come to the house; the only thing she could think about was what happened to bring her all the heartache that she never deserved.

Harman stood there breathing slowly just waiting; he knew he can't make the first move this time; it was Meher's choice. She has to be the one; she has to make decision; everything what is going to happen from now on was depended on her, they both know that. Meher took a deep breath and finally stepped back leaning against the cold door and giving way t hamran who was dragging her husband towards the sofa. She watched as her ex laid her husband on the sofa and gently positioned her arms from his neck and rested them on her husband own chest. She looked up to find prem bhaiya coming down with her sister and rushing towards his two younger brothers who were sitting next to enchanter. She closed her eyes wishing the sight that was in front of her right now was just a bad dream that she will wake up next morning and find that nothing like this ever happened and she would go back to her old life where Harman never existed.

Prem saw the two men from across the hall. 'Harman you back?' he shouted while running towards his younger brother. He missed him so much; he sometimes couldn't breathe with the memory of finding his… No, he couldn't think about it. He needed to get close to his brother. He needed the contact; he needed to reaffirm the memory, to ease the loss he had felt for all those weeks when his brother wasn't with him. The guilt that he had carried since then was slowly killing him, he saw less and less of himself, he was an empty soul, missing what made him a whole person, and he would never get it back. But today made it feel like he could be whole again.

Harman made contact with the dark eyes. They burned into his own from far across the room. The message was sent, and all Harman had to do was wait, seeing the anticipation in his older brothers eyes he felt like he was still part of the love that he thought was all forgotten. Harman broke the stare that was hypnotizing him and stood up to hug his brother making the feeling that was long time dead be alive once again. He looked around and found his sister-in-law who was now staring at her sister as Harman faced Meher once again but this time knowing if he ever looked her in the eyes that he could never let go of himself or the power of his love. The sound of Preet waking up made the whole situation more ease as he watched his younger brother standing up and rubbing his eyes. Meher moved from where she was standing and legged to support her husband who was now resting his head on top of Meher's chest. Looking at his brother Harman took one arm and put it across his now tiered shoulder and helped Meher who couldn't stop staring at him. What was going on? Why did he find Meher looking at him uneasy? This wasn't supposed to be happening then why was he feeling like he was being drawn into this field where he has no choice but keep on chasing it until he finds that he has become closer and found his guide. This same feeling that he used to get when he was with Meher but it stopped when he left her so why was it returning?

To say that the situation Meher and Harman had found themselves in, felt awkward than that would have been a huge understatement, Meher had managed to avoid the constant stares that Harman was giving her while she was taking her husband to their room, Prem and Heer had followed them thinking that it was best if they don't leave Meher alone with Harman in the room, by beginning to make them separate was the first idea they had on mind. Preet lay down gently down on the bed with Meher by his side as he took her hand and laid it in his chest as he drifted to sleep.

"I think I should be going now … (looking at Meher while speaking) its already late"

He turned to Prem and hugged his brother for the last time before walking off towards the hall.

"Harman ji" he heard the familiar sound as he turned around to find Meher standing behind him.

"Thank you for bringing Preet home I was so worried……. He never acts like this" she stated as Harman moved closer to her and put his arms on her shoulder. Meher looked at him and smiled before moving back. "I think you should go home Harman ji Maya might be worried"

"What about you Meher aren't you worried about me at all?"

"What do you mean? I am your younger sister-in-law"

"I think I can figure that out I mean you are not good at hiding are you Meher"

"Please Harman ji just go yer"

He opened his mouth to speak, to protest, but he felt someone's eyes piercing through his back as he turned around to find Preet standing their, knowing that Meher hasn't seen him he took the opportunity to make her his again and only way was to do that was to create misunderstanding between his brother and his love. He slowly put both of his arms around meher and kissed the back of her neck softly. Meher turned round quickly to face Harman, shocked at the gesture that Harman had shown she slowly took hold of herself and slapped Harman, running his eyes over her lips, across her face Harman forcefully pulled Meher towards his body. It was time to play hard; if he ever wanted Meher then he had to force her to be with him even if it takes him being a bad person in front of his brothers eyes. ( sorry couldn't resist him as a bad ugly guy like rishabh 😆)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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man ur a killer...................you should have continued...............u got me all hooked up and left it....................what is preet going to do
what is harman gonna do
what will meher do
where are prem and heer
pleassssseeeeeee quickly write up another part.............im so glad that u made harman a liitle bad but for the reason for his love
i love the fact that harman wants her by hook or by crook............
man caint wait for u to update another part....................please do it soon
waiting impatiently.........👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
omg dat was a very gud post up more please very soon hope preet coems and saves his wife
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
omg cary on itz getin intrestin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Christ ...

Harman turned bad, well that was expected ...

good thing that Mehar give him a slap on his ugly face .... he deserves it, and she deserves Preet ...

good part once again

tc

yazz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Amazing!

You have me hooked
Plz Cont soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
YES SAME HERE
plz post up very soon

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