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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hiya Guys,

How are you all? Hope you are o.k. well lets start this topic, i was reading this book and their was this scene that made me picture our very own Meet. So this got me thinking what if I started my own story. Starring our own Meet as lead couples and prem n heer as supporting. I got ash as an evil person and so does her mum . Harman does play a big part in the story but he will cum wen i want him to lol . So here i go hope you enjoy it, is a short story so if you like i post another one soon

The scene starts off our meet sleeping they show us the picture of meet sleeping together, preet laying hsi right hand protectively over meher and meher's left hand laying on top of preet's chest ahhhh. The alarm goes off ( stupid thing in my dreams it goes off too but still) so preet sleepily puts it on snooze and takes meher closer to him this time facing her and puts both his hands cuddling her like a lover. Meher wakes up and looks at preet who is still sleeping and sees their position and tries to break free but cannot so she lays like their looking at preet, who now opens his eyes and sees meher looking at him and takes his arms off and says:

p- are meher.... (Looks at his arms and breaks off) sorry

meher smiles at him and sits up on the bed and is about to go when preet takes hold of her hand and meher turns around looking at preet who looks at her and smiles

p- mujhe yeh kehna tha ke tum yahaan thero mein hamari chai banaa tha hoon

meher looks at him once again and this time smiling more widely and nods, preet goes into kitchen and fiddles with the pans while meher is laying on the bed thinking about preet, their marriage, him accepting as his wife, the button scene and the restaurant and says to herself that is she in luv with preet. Preet is making tea wen he also thinks about scenes they shared as friends, rain scene than the marriage and wen ash's mum hitting her him stopping her and says why does he always think about meher? Why cant she go out of my head? the scene freezes with both of them staring into space and then comes my favorite song that now when i listen to it, makes me think of Meet. Hulchal hui from aaja nachle.

The scene shifts to when meher is coming out of the shower and has her hair wet, preet has already entered and puts the tea on the bedside table and looks at meher getting dressed. Meher dries her hair and little tear drops fall onto preet who closes his eyes and feels it. He opens his eyes and stares at meher putting the sindoor on and him remembering him putting it on the wedding ( the hulchul song is still playing on the background of this scene so i advice you switch on this song to see the scene in your dreams i sure have done that. i think i should shut up you might think i am insane well i am ), meher than puts the magalsutra on and same again preet remembering him putting on, later maher puts earring and preet remembering him shifting the earing to the side to put the mangalsutra on and last but not the least meher try's to tie the string behind her dress but she cannot manage. She struggles to tie it but it does not help and preet sees this. He comes to meher and takes the string from her two hands, meher looking at the mirror seeing preets reflection she lets go off the string and turns around.

Preet looks at her and takes one of his hands to meher's face and touches meher and kisses her on top of the head. Then he takes mehers hand and leads her to the bed. Meher still looking at him all this time and try's to speak but preet puts his finger on top of mehers lips and looks into her eyes. he kisses her eyes and then moves to her cheeks and finally touching her lips. Meher wraps her arms around preet and preet whispers "i love you meher" and lays her on top of the bed.

He takes off her earrings and then kisses side of her neck and then slowly moves his right hand to touch meher's bangles coming to her hand and locks it. The scene becomes dull and we see the picture of Preet and Meher on the wall of their wedding. (Rest is your imagination guys what you want it to be but lets jus say that tea that our preet has made has become very cold)

what you think should i carry on and soz about my hindi translation to english 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thats great.................its interesting as i was imagining it alongside reading it.....................however there is something i would like to say hope u dnt mind...................

i think its going a little too fast.................i mean it could have been certain situtions arising first and then them being together.....................
i love it though......... so please do continue..............and sorry of u didnt like my comment/suggestion
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hy itz gud write mor plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: miss_precious

thats great.................its interesting as i was imagining it alongside reading it.....................however there is something i would like to say hope u dnt mind...................

i think its going a little too fast.................i mean it could have been certain situtions arising first and then them being together.....................
i love it though......... so please do continue..............and sorry of u didnt like my comment/suggestion

hey thanx for the comment i kno its going little too fast but you will find it in the story why is this, and once again thanx a-lot for the comment hope you make them more so i kno where i am going wrong. thank you 😊
here is another part:

Meher woke up and found herself dreaming about the same incident that she was dreaming for last few days, she slept with preet- her husband, friend and most of all her soul mate that she vowed that would never be lost like her and harman;s relationship had but who was she kidding she broke the vow that she promised herslef that she would never do after thinking about him like she has been doing in her sleep. Stop it! she told herslef he just sees her as a mate that's all one he had respected after everything and anyway preet wasn't her soul mate he was her cousin's and she had to keep it like that. Ash loves preet and Preet loves Ash even though he told her that it cannot happen she has seen the pain in his eyes as the evidence of it. She pushed a-side her tears and got up.

She looked at Preet who was sleeping on the bed he looked so peaceful just like a child, she misled and went beside him putting her fingers gently on top of preet's heart. She could feel the heartbeat and she smiled at least she had this much right to touch preet when he was sleeping, she should be grateful. She took her duppata that was laid on the hand of the sofa she slept on and put it on top of her. It was time to make Preet's breakfast before he leaves for his work.

Sorry its short but i am writting my essay while writting this so it took time, hope i get the replies and please comment if their is anything wrong.

Edited by shikha87 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
nice start...its interesting to read about meet. update soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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now that is interesting....................im sorry and i do take mt comment back about it going too fast.................
i love it..................plz do continue and try to make it longer next time coz i really liked it...............
i look forward to ur stories more than the actual serial coz they dnt show enough of meet
waiting 4 more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg i just loved it cant wait for them to start falling in love
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx to pooji123456789, Ghia, miss_precious and jamune for reading my crappy story. Sorry for a long part and is all located in a bar so you guys know where it is based. Hope you read this I kno I wont but still. Thanx again for reading it here I go.

Preet sat at the bar, wallowing in a beer. Looking at all the couples that were at the restaurant enjoying each others company, he rubbed his for head as he took the last sip of the drink that he ordered for the next round. It had been eight hours since he was supposed to be at work. Eight hours that made him feel like he was the son that his father had hoped to see in him and here he was drinking a beer in a high class restaurant spending all his salary no not his salary but rishwat that what he called it that was given from his boss to stop him leaving the work. How stupid could he be? Their were all the signs telling him that their was something wrong at his work, it was only week since he had joined his company and they already promoted him the position of an assistance manager all thanks to his Harman bhaiya. He took hold of the next drink that the waiter had given him when his phone rang, he looked at the screen and saw 'papa' name flashing before answering the phone finding mere on the other line. "Ha Meher" he answered taking another drink "nahi I am cumin home late, yes I know but I have an meeting that's why sorry bye" putting the phone down he looked at the screen before throwing inside his jacket. He took out his wallet and saw ash's photo smiling at him before searching the back of it to find the picture that he was looking for, his wife. Meher.

He looked at the photo and smiled staring at the features of one woman that stole his heart, one person who would do anything to see him happy and by doing this she had no idea that she made the whole thing opposite. He longed to touch her and kiss her when he wanted to like a real husband but instead he just got away most off the time staring at her when she wasn't looking or just sneaking behind her while she worked at the kitchen. Preet took another sip and ordered his….. He didn't even know how many he had but whatever he had didn't stop the pain that he felt in his heart and wanted anything that could help him to ease the pain or even let it go for few hours so he can feel himself again. Every night he would stay awake and just watch Meher sleeping and he would just walk beside her and sit next to her, look at her. It was the only time he can hear her heartbeat without breaking any rules that he had formed when they first got married. Like a stupid person he blabbed on how guilty he felt, how much he had hurt ash and loved her despite the fact she had made his family suffer and Meher so much. But here he was thinking about Meher all the time when in his mind he knew they were nothing more than friends than why does his heart say that their something more?

"Drinking alone?" Preet looked up from the picture and found the image of one person that he had wished to see none at all.

"Harman bhaiya" he said while closing his eyes wishing that it would disappear. "Sorry I mean yes sir" he laughed after asking for another round of the drink. "What makes you come here……. Oh I am sorry you here on a date right where is she? To offended to speak to me?" he looked around before standing up but to no avail as he fell on the chair.

Harman smiled at Preet and sat next to him as he ordered a drink and took hold of the drink that Preet had secured in his hands with his wallet. " don't you think you had enough?" he looked at Preet who was trying to speak but failed as the drink got better hold of him than his senses. He laughed at the sight in front of him, here was his younger brother who never touched any drinks and now the time has changed and here he is getting drunk all thanks to him. He should congratulate himself for making peoples life miserable its not uneasy job as far as he was told but look at him his life has played tricks on him too. He ahs landed up with someone who he hates and only wants her that he can fulfill the deal that he made to her father in return for the happiness of his family.

"You o.k.?" Harman asked while shifting Preet to the chair properly instead of him hanging on to it. "Why wouldn't I be? I mean I got a perfect wife ooops I am sorry a perfect friend and then I got our parents who think that I am not capable of anything and to make it better I have my ex who thinks that I still love her. Wow I think I am more than o.k. what you think bhaiya"

"You mean that Meher is not your wife? But just a friend"

"Was my friend now I don't know you tell me what is she to me I mean she must be something but what am I to her? Nothing like everyone I am nothing" Preet spoke the last words as tears fell remembering all the moments that he had shared with Meher and how he took advantage of these moments. Well like thy say you never appreciate something when is near to you but you do when it's gone, well something like that.

'No really, I mean how dub...I mean...how dumb do you have to be to just leave your love? I think...I think...I can't remember what I think but it is seriously stupid.' Preet slurred, topping up his mouth with another drink.
Harman carried on listening to Preet not who had become increasingly drunk but Harman couldn't stop him drinking more because it was the only way he could understand what Preet felt but also get more insight into his real love's marriage to his younger brother. He could blame himself for this because if he had not ran away that night at his own wedding than today he could be with Meher enjoying all the moments that he had dreamt of instead of sitting here alone and pining for her.
Preet raised his glass, 'To loser! Who has no-one but this friend' pointing to the glass that had sucked little sadness out of his body. Who said that alcohol is bad for you? Infact alcohol is the only thing that makes you forget all the pain that was given to you.
'To people who make alcohol!' Preet cheered.
'To people who-' Harman repeated, before interrupting himself, 'sorry'
Preet cracked up laughing.
'No really.' Harman said earnestly, his eyes following every movement of Preet, 'I am sorry for all the trouble I caused you and Meher.'
'No!' Preet cried, 'No no no. sorry no, thank you yes:' he gestured
towards his heart, 'I love Meher.'
Harman nodded, 'if you weren't this drunk I might have heart attack '
'well...' Preet said, grabbing the wine bottle and tipping it into his glass, 'We'll just have to act like we are friends, only friends nothing more or nothing…. More but I love you Meher I really do.'

Harman stared at Preet who was now more focused getting himself up to leave for home. Did he just say I love you to Meher no he must have got it wrong? Preet never liked Meher in the first place, he hated her but eventually he became friends thanks to him and ash but lovers no way. Did Preet always wanted to marry Meher and him leaving her was Preet's way of getting what he always desired for. No he will never do that, Preet he knew, his own brother would never do that but this Meher and now Preet is married to her. He is in love with his own wife. Harman closed his eyes and prayed to god if god listens that please let this be wrong because he was in love with his younger brother's wife still and if Preet is in love with his wife than he can never dream or think about Meher like he always had and has. But can he?


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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow its getting better............quicly get preet home so that he can say sometrhing to meher in this state and then drop dead on his bed............just to find himsel wake up in the morning and ponder on what he had done the previous night..............
btw its up to u wht he does when he goes home
just trying to help
more meet scenes
i cant wait for next update nw
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Posted: 16 years ago
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haila, a story on meet *dreamy*.... i have to tell you more than premeer i am meet fan .... so i am loving your fic ... please do continue soon 😳

tc

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