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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey it has been ages since u updated..............hope everything is well............im just so used to ur updates
cnt wait for them!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry guys for the late post i was busy revsing for my exam which i have finishe one paper of so i will be late on posting fics until nxt week but i have written this two versions hope u like it i would like to say thanks to everyone who read my fics, thanks you very much 🤗. Here is another part its a light hearted one so no major things going on hope u lilke it.

The next morning, Meher sat on the edge of her bed, her hair wrapped in a soft white towel, while her body which was covered in red and blue mix salwar kamiz was showing off her figure. She glowered angrily at the useless piece of plastic in her hand before flinging it across the room, where it landed with a loud thud on her bedroom floor. Why can't you get anything this day without finding it that it was broken, she bit her bottom lip as she walked up to the mirror and let her wet hair fall down, some of it sticking on the side of her face. She glanced across to her picture of her and Preet as the restaurant smiling, so cheerful knowing that they both were just friends….. Just friends she told herself as a tear escaped her eyes. They were just friends.

"Meher?" Preet' voice filtered through to the room just as he stepped inside the room. God she looked beautiful. The red mix salwar kamiz was perfectely hanged beside her body showing the right curves at the right places not like ash who just looked like she wore anything that she got her hands on. The long hair that sat beside her cheeks made her look even prettier than it was possible to. Preet stared at Meher.

"Yeah?" Preet stopped staring as he looked down on the floor. Did she notice that he was staring?

"erm I was asking….. Do you know how long you will be is that….. papa is waiting for his tea that's why"

"Just give me a minute yea." Meher smiled as she took her comb out of the drawer that was on her right. Preet looked at her, his heart breaking with every shaky breath she inhaled. God – this is ripping her apart. And it shouldn't be like this, this shouldn't happen to her. She's a good person – better than any I've known – and she's going through this. Why does this have to be like this? Why can't they have perfect like any other couple why do they have to face this problems. Preet closed his eyes as he tried to steady himself. Preet gently massaged his temples with the pads of his fingers, the circular motions somewhat releasing the pressure that had built up there. His mind was instantly filled with the memories of what had last night. Him and Ash talking, his brother dropping him to his room and finally when he saw his own brother holding his wife.

"You okay Preet?" Meher asked, still standing on the other side of the room. Making sure that she does not go anywhere near her husband

"You can come near me, y'know? I aren't gonna bite," Preet said playfully as he turned the handle of the door to let it shut.

"Oh, right, I know." Meher's eyes immediately fixed onto Preets see through body. "Erm, what's, wrong?" Her words stumbled out of his mouth, tripping over her tongue. Not noticing the way Preet was staring at her, desire and longing mixed with the tenderness kind of love. Instead, she had begun to root around in her wardrobe, looking for something anything to stop her self staring at this gorgeous bloke that was standing in front of her. "erm…………. You wouldn't mid coming with me today could you?" Preet muttered, watching his wife rifling through the many outfits that were neatly hung up on hangers anything for her to change the subject that was going on.

"Maybe we go out for lunch or something and buy papa and them nice jacket……… anything you know?" Preet carried on, his lips curving into a grin as he pictured them out away from this house. He picked the duppata up from its resting place at the sofa's feet and carefully walked up to Meher and placing it where it belonged on her body.

Meher looked at him over her shoulder, narrowing her eyes and glaring at him, what was he doing? "Its okay if you don't want to go I mean…….. It's just shopping right? But I thought you never go out anywhere and you deserved to be treated after how you hand……….."

"Hmm, are you sure?" Meher said, distractedly, still pretending to search for something in her cupboard. Why can't he just go and leave her? She thought before facing her husband. Sighing heavily, she finally gave up and stood herself next to Preet on the edge of the bed. "So, you are willing to come shopping with me…. Spend half of your day around the shops, watch me fight for few money and than carry the bags are you 100% sure Preet because if you are not then I can stay here I don't mind" Meher relied this time glint in her eyes as she expressed the face that Preet makes when he hears that his own money is getting spent.

"I'm a guy, it's what we do," he replied, matter-of-factly. "We watch our wives bankrupt us then help them to carry the burden that they have achieved doing this"

"Really?" She asked, raising an eyebrow, a sudden glint in her eye. "And here was me thinking that all guys were good for just eating and sleeping." Turning her attention back to the floor, not noticing that Preet seemed to have choked on her words. His mouth hung open and he looked at her with sheer admiration.
Maybe things between them were going back to normal now. All they needed was time and maybe just maybe they can be the perfect picture that he always dreamed about but right now he needed to take things slowly and carefully. He needed her no matter what even if that meant he had to act like her friend when he wanted more than that
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
Great part!
Aww such a sweet part!!
Good Luck with ur exams I understand, i just completed my exams and am relaxing for a few weeks before going back into exam mode. Take ur time in updating we can wait!
Nikita
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
awww that was such a sweet part ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hy tht wz gud plzzz do cary on soon whn uv don ur xm n gud luk wid it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely part................this cliff hangers are gonna kill me!!! hope they do go shopping in ur next part
all the best for ur examz................
tk kr!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you guys, for being so kind and miss_precious thank you for waiting for my update and still reading, I would like to say thank you to nikita, iqbal-pallavi, and mevrulz4eva. I worth this part while I was waiting for my time up in the exam I am so sad but what to do I finished an hour before and half hour I spended looking back and than this half n hour writing this story. Oh well

Later that day, everyone at the junaja house were getting ready to have lunch together, everyone except Preet and Meher of course. They have gotten away together to go shopping to buy something for everyone on lodi. It was Meher's first lodi at juneja's hpouse and preet wanted to make it special for her something that she could remember even if they split up after few years, something she could remember himm by.

Preet: how long does it take for you to decide?
Meher: a lot longer than you. It's a big choice Preet I cannot buy stuff like this you know it costs a-lot of money and anyway we need to see if it matches with the suit. Anyway I thought you said you will keep shut if I help you to choose this. (Meher looked at Preet while making the bracelet move in the air, she put the bracelet that she was holding on the box with there others as she pointed at the next set to the shop assistant who took the other box out of the closet, eight times)

And it definitely shows! Thought Preet, he looked over what Meher was holding. How the hell did she had managed to have chose that it wasn't anything that special about it just a gold shiny color on top of it and it costs 25,000. Preet looked at the other set that was set in the smile line before checking his pocket where he had kept his wallet, he gulped before taking the fat wallet out and looked at the money that was stacked inside it before turning his attention to his wife that was now heading forward to observe next bracelet on the line that was sat beautifully on the see through window of the desk that the lady was standing. How the hell did he agree to come to this shop he couldn't possibly imagine? He looked cheap, but then again this was Meher we were talking about, what did you expect? He looked around the shop watching all the husbands standing beside their wives observing the jeweler that were smashed against their face making Preet smile. He took his gaze around the shop to a tall error standing in the middle of the shop facing him, catching every reflection of his body language, god this things do make you look attractive, Preet thought while making a little swirl before making his way to guard his wife for not spending money.


Meher finally chose the silver bracelet and made Preet wear it on his right hand to take the measurements as she approached the till and placing it on the desk, the bracelet was perfect for Preet thought Meher it stuck well on his wrist making the hand look attractive in all the right places if that was possible, his fingers were not that chubby making the bracelet look tight but it was the perfect size like it belonged to that hand. If she was not nay wiser than she would think that bracelet made Preet looked more perfect than he already was, he ahd all the abilities to make a perfect husband for someone, he was caring, funny, sensitive and most of all he was intelligent. He knew what was right and what was wrong not like her she fell in love with someone that didn't care about her and her best friend who once accused of stealing stood by her no matter what. No matter what she said it w-loud as she watched her husband pays for her secret present to him for their first Lodi.

Wow! Preet thought she looks, I don't know how to describe her. It's like there are no words in any language to describe her. She looks completely stunning. Glowing from the innocence that she had on her face. She looks so delicate, but so strong at the same time. Preet watched as his wife made her way out of the dressing room wearing the dress that he had chosen for her to wear. They had gone shopping for two hours searching every shop where they both can buy dresses and clothes for their family. After all the shops they went some they were forced to be seated as they thought they can make sell and later being greeted out as they had rejected all the choices given to them after looking at the prices, to being shouted back when they give the price range to the shop owner finally reaching to one shop where they felt satisfied.

still thinking about Meher I'm not making any sense, but that's what she does to me. Whenever I see her, all rational thinking goes out the window. Along with my ability to string a sentence together! Am I staring at her? I hope she hasn't noticed, but then again, I don't. She should have someone that tells her she looks amazing at every opportunity, but that someone's not me, is it? I have the right to say all this things, go up to her and take her in my arms and kiss her until she feels like she is special but that's not what she wants and definitely that's not what she likes but still I cannot help it whenever she comes near me I go blank.. She talks and all I do is dream of being a happy couple but that's not possible is it.

Preet looked over at the empty space at his side and sighed. He would do anything for the one person that was inside getting changed and making her way towards him. He was confused of the feeling or was he confused of what he liked?

Meher looked over at the shadow that just passed towards the room and watched her as she linked her arms with the man she wanted to be with before walking out of the shop.

Preet: (whispering to Meher) you okay…. You look pale… what happened?

Meher: erm, yeah, yeah
Preet: are you sure? I feel something is wrong Meher you not always like this, maybe trust me I should know ( watching their arms still linked before staring back at his wife)

(Meher replaces her hands beside her waist as she walks on not stopping to look if Preet was following her not, carrying on as she felt hands on her waist stopping her mid way as she turned around to be faced with not her husband who was standing beside but of her ex who was now smiling)

"Why are you here?" meher said as she tried to break free of the cage that was replacing her body.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
omg plzzzzzzzzzz cary on dis tym i wnt preet to fyt wid harman....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
i want to see some action scene lolz ... maybe Preet beating up his brother for his dear wifey ... lolz

anywas great part, loved how Meher bought Preet a present with his money lolz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
awesome.............im glad they went shopping................hope something happens between harman and preet
btw..........i think you should take up writing as a profeesion........u should start writing your own books..............its a great talent you have there
all the best
and keep updating!!!
Edited by miss_precious - 16 years ago

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