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Hello guys... hope you people are doing well... so it has been a hectic week for me with tests and assignments and so I am posting a longer part... hope you'll like it.
Next I'll lend my sincere thanks to Sunayna, ash, sweta and Marica and all the silent readers for appreciating my work..
One more thing, while starting the FF i have already said that I wont be able to update regularly because of my hectic schedule so please dont send me PMs regarding posting an update... even I am eagar to post my update asap but if time does not permit then I am unable to do so...
ok bak bak khatam here is what happens next...
PART 6
"This is not done...", said Prem as Preet and Veera filled him with the latest updates as they were happy on success of Plan 1. Preet gave him an annoyed look.."KYa???"
"Yes, I am happy by the way she is, why are you people on a mission to bring out the girl in her? if she doesn't like romantic songs then why force her to dance in that no.?"
"I'll tell you why." Prem turned and saw his best pal Karan standing with Lalit and Gayatri.
"Karan?" Prem became wide eyed and then happy to meet his friend who was off to Toronto attending a seminar on criminal psycology.Prem gave Karan, a bear hug and Karan whispered in his ear,"Really happy for you."Prem smiled knowingly and then again curiosity dropped on him as he asked,"What were you saying?"
Karan said,"Everyone's working according to my instruction". "But why?", Prem blurted out in shock.
"So that she rediscovers herself"
"What do you mean?????"
"Prem, when I came in here and Lalit uncle filled in with the updates,I got doubt and asked about Heer's history and even talked to Balraaj uncle and came to a conclusion"
"What?"
"Did this question even once came to your mind that why she changed?"
"yes...because she thought we all left her"
"Not exactly buddy", Karan pointed out.
Prem gave him a questioning look while Karan turned and took a coffee mug from the tray Gayatri was holding and winked at her and she let out a small laugh.
Karan sipped his coffee and continued," Prem, after you people left India she made a barrier around her so that no one see her grief. Like father, like daughter she also has a problem of speaking her heart out.But Balraaj uncle had Lalit uncle, she didn't have any..frustration ke mare woh ziddi banti gayi, and then she turned into a tomboy so that no boy gets so close to her..koi use dusri nazar se na dekhe...koi bhi ma apne bete ke liye use na chune, to summarize woh kisi ki layek na rahe."
Prem looked as he has lost all his senses...and came back to reality when Preet tapped his shoulder."So now what?", Prem spoke after few seconds of silence.
"Now we have to make her realize that she's a beautiful girl, life is beautiful, we have to bring out emotions in her...in total we have to bring out the real Heer..."
"But how?",Prem questioned"We'll answer this." ,Preet and Veera answered and continued speaking about the rest of the plan.
After a while, Lalit, Gayatri and Karan looked satisfied by the plan but Prem spoke out,"Why you people are making the whole thing complicated? Wouldn't it be easier if I went in front of her and clarified her misunderstanding.."
"But Prem the thing's agar tum yeh karoge she'll feel pressurized and feel that you don't deserve her because she has completely modified herself. Shayad woh tumse door jane ki koshish kare. That's why we are trying to bring out her real self so that she feels confident. Magar tum chahte ho to we'll not continue with the plan more.", concluded Lalit.
Prem thought for a while and gave a shrug, which means ok let's do it. Each and every members of the got elated and Preet shouted,"Plan 2...starts."
Tring-tring-tring-tring....
the phone kept on ringing and Heer sat in front of it dribbling a basket ball.Teji shouted from the kitchen "Oye pick up the call, tabse baj rahi hai."Ritika lost her patience and said,"Main hi uhtha..."Teji pulled her back to the kitchen and indicated a no, Ritika realized and backed off. Finally Heer picked up the phone,"Hello...", she said in a robotic voice.
"Hello Teji, main Gayatri..."
Heer's jaws dropped after hearing the voice, she wanted to speak to her Gayatri chachi since it has been ages, but Gayatri did not give her a chance to speak a that'll ruin the plan.
"Teji, Prem ki engagement cards taiyaar ho gayi hai,I am very happy you know,tumhe bhi bhijwaungi and kuch extra copies bhi, you have to distribute them to our close friends like Kuldeep Singh, Zohra Khan...."
Heer was not listening anymore, her heart clenched and she felt like weeping after so many years, it was like her worst dream coming true she came back to senses when she heard Gayatri screaming on the other line," Teji...Teji? aur ek baat pata hai Prem simply adores her eyes aur uske lambe baal...Hello?"
Heer couldn't take it anymore..she ran to her room and closed the door.
Gayatri kept the phone down and looked at her viewers and gave a smirk,"How was it?", Preet dramatically came in front of her and screamed,"Awesome mom..you are being wasted in this jewellery designing field."
On the other hand Ritika was looking at her Badi ma...
"Badi ma... is plan ka kya aim tha? What will it do?"
"It'll make her cry."
"Kya? cry aur Heer...maine to aj tak unko rote nahin dekha"
"Yes she must be crying rite now, and that's what we all wanted..that is to make her cry.."
Ritika ran towards Heer's room and peeped through the window...
There Heer was crying her heart out, letting all her frustrations, all pain, everything that was pent up in her heart ,flow out...she was punching her punching bag while doing so...after somtimes she stopped and turned her vision towards the mirror and saw her reflection probably for the 1st time. She examined her eyes and wondered what magic that girl has on her eyes that mesmerized her Prem... then she removed the cluther from her hair letting her waist length hair fall to its real length...she knew Prem loved long hair, she remembered how he used to pull her hair when they where kids...smile approched her lips but did not last for even a fraction of second... tears again crept through her eyes and she sat on the groung again crying...
Ritika was totally shocked and glad at the same time...shocked because of witnessing the new side of her cousin and glad that she cried and let go her pain...
Ritika's cell vibrated giving her clear indication to put up her act for the plan.She knocked Heer's door,"Heer chachu aaye hai, he's calling you, it urgent."
Wiping her tears quickly and again making a bun with her hair she blurted out,"Ya I'm coming..."
Downstairs Arjun was waiting for Heer and was dead nervous as he has to perform a real life play for his niece's sake...he wanted to end his part quickly as he couldn't take the tension long, while Teji was supporting him and giving him encouragement. Heer came down and sat opposite to her chachu waiting for him to speak, unusually quieter than she use to be. Arjun cleared his throat and started his part,"Beta, this time our charity function is going to be really a big event because few some leading names have extended their help to us." Heer looked at her uncle elated, happy with this news.
Arjun again started,"One of those leading name is GIC"
"geek??? chachu yeh kaisi company hai"
"geek nahi GIC, G.I.C., its a top fashion institue of the world and they have agreed to sponsor us, but with few conditions."
"What are those conditions?"
"Well they want to supervise the event and manage everything."
"So, you said them no, right." Heer sounded confident a she knew her chachu will never let anyone interfere with the function matter other than Heer.
"I agreed."
"What?" Heer screamed with disbelief while Arjun nodded.
"Yes, I agreed because I couldnt say them no due to their world wide reputation and they have signed a deal that they'll sponsore each child's school education and get them admitted to GIC when they pass school and there they will be trained free of cost."
"Come on chachu I never knew you were such a business mentality type of person", Heer almost shouted.
Arjun retorted back," This is not business, its my and Natasha's dream to raise these children and make them succesful in every possible way and when I got this opportunity I will not back off."
"Fine", Yelled Heer," So you want me to back off now,me... the person from whom these children are like angels."
"No, you dont have to back off but you have 4 more days to reherse for your performance coz they'll take your audition and decide whther you are performing or not."
"Audition?" Heer looked at her chachu wide eyed in shock..."you want me to give audtion to these geek people or whatever???? I was the one who danced all through these months sparaining my foot, in pain , in difficulties but one never uttered an uff and you these geek and all are coming to take my audition?"
"Who stopped you from sharing you pain with us?", Arjun shouted back and Heer was taken aback with the statement" We are always here with you and for you, you could have shared your pains your suffering with us.", Arjun concluded, no more acting...
Heer calmed down a bit,"Fine! I'll give an audition... who's coming by the way?"
"PJ sr. and PJ jr."
"What kind of name is that?"
"I dont know but they are addressed like that, PJ sr.in a fashion designer and PJ jr. is a makeover artiste and they'll be in India within 4 days. So you better hurry up."
"Ok,I will."
" and Heer...behave yourself."
"I will be in my best behaviour you see...but if they mess with me that i am not responsible for my action."
Heer got up and made her way to her room speaking with herself,"I cant let go everything that is mine... So you geeks, welcome to India."
howz it?
Priyadarshini aka Priyo😊
Next I'll lend my sincere thanks to Sunayna, ash, sweta and Marica and all the silent readers for appreciating my work..
One more thing, while starting the FF i have already said that I wont be able to update regularly because of my hectic schedule so please dont send me PMs regarding posting an update... even I am eagar to post my update asap but if time does not permit then I am unable to do so...
ok bak bak khatam here is what happens next...
PART 6
"This is not done...", said Prem as Preet and Veera filled him with the latest updates as they were happy on success of Plan 1. Preet gave him an annoyed look.."KYa???"
"Yes, I am happy by the way she is, why are you people on a mission to bring out the girl in her? if she doesn't like romantic songs then why force her to dance in that no.?"
"I'll tell you why." Prem turned and saw his best pal Karan standing with Lalit and Gayatri.
"Karan?" Prem became wide eyed and then happy to meet his friend who was off to Toronto attending a seminar on criminal psycology.Prem gave Karan, a bear hug and Karan whispered in his ear,"Really happy for you."Prem smiled knowingly and then again curiosity dropped on him as he asked,"What were you saying?"
Karan said,"Everyone's working according to my instruction". "But why?", Prem blurted out in shock.
"So that she rediscovers herself"
"What do you mean?????"
"Prem, when I came in here and Lalit uncle filled in with the updates,I got doubt and asked about Heer's history and even talked to Balraaj uncle and came to a conclusion"
"What?"
"Did this question even once came to your mind that why she changed?"
"yes...because she thought we all left her"
"Not exactly buddy", Karan pointed out.
Prem gave him a questioning look while Karan turned and took a coffee mug from the tray Gayatri was holding and winked at her and she let out a small laugh.
Karan sipped his coffee and continued," Prem, after you people left India she made a barrier around her so that no one see her grief. Like father, like daughter she also has a problem of speaking her heart out.But Balraaj uncle had Lalit uncle, she didn't have any..frustration ke mare woh ziddi banti gayi, and then she turned into a tomboy so that no boy gets so close to her..koi use dusri nazar se na dekhe...koi bhi ma apne bete ke liye use na chune, to summarize woh kisi ki layek na rahe."
Prem looked as he has lost all his senses...and came back to reality when Preet tapped his shoulder."So now what?", Prem spoke after few seconds of silence.
"Now we have to make her realize that she's a beautiful girl, life is beautiful, we have to bring out emotions in her...in total we have to bring out the real Heer..."
"But how?",Prem questioned"We'll answer this." ,Preet and Veera answered and continued speaking about the rest of the plan.
After a while, Lalit, Gayatri and Karan looked satisfied by the plan but Prem spoke out,"Why you people are making the whole thing complicated? Wouldn't it be easier if I went in front of her and clarified her misunderstanding.."
"But Prem the thing's agar tum yeh karoge she'll feel pressurized and feel that you don't deserve her because she has completely modified herself. Shayad woh tumse door jane ki koshish kare. That's why we are trying to bring out her real self so that she feels confident. Magar tum chahte ho to we'll not continue with the plan more.", concluded Lalit.
Prem thought for a while and gave a shrug, which means ok let's do it. Each and every members of the got elated and Preet shouted,"Plan 2...starts."
Tring-tring-tring-tring....
the phone kept on ringing and Heer sat in front of it dribbling a basket ball.Teji shouted from the kitchen "Oye pick up the call, tabse baj rahi hai."Ritika lost her patience and said,"Main hi uhtha..."Teji pulled her back to the kitchen and indicated a no, Ritika realized and backed off. Finally Heer picked up the phone,"Hello...", she said in a robotic voice.
"Hello Teji, main Gayatri..."
Heer's jaws dropped after hearing the voice, she wanted to speak to her Gayatri chachi since it has been ages, but Gayatri did not give her a chance to speak a that'll ruin the plan.
"Teji, Prem ki engagement cards taiyaar ho gayi hai,I am very happy you know,tumhe bhi bhijwaungi and kuch extra copies bhi, you have to distribute them to our close friends like Kuldeep Singh, Zohra Khan...."
Heer was not listening anymore, her heart clenched and she felt like weeping after so many years, it was like her worst dream coming true she came back to senses when she heard Gayatri screaming on the other line," Teji...Teji? aur ek baat pata hai Prem simply adores her eyes aur uske lambe baal...Hello?"
Heer couldn't take it anymore..she ran to her room and closed the door.
Gayatri kept the phone down and looked at her viewers and gave a smirk,"How was it?", Preet dramatically came in front of her and screamed,"Awesome mom..you are being wasted in this jewellery designing field."
On the other hand Ritika was looking at her Badi ma...
"Badi ma... is plan ka kya aim tha? What will it do?"
"It'll make her cry."
"Kya? cry aur Heer...maine to aj tak unko rote nahin dekha"
"Yes she must be crying rite now, and that's what we all wanted..that is to make her cry.."
Ritika ran towards Heer's room and peeped through the window...
There Heer was crying her heart out, letting all her frustrations, all pain, everything that was pent up in her heart ,flow out...she was punching her punching bag while doing so...after somtimes she stopped and turned her vision towards the mirror and saw her reflection probably for the 1st time. She examined her eyes and wondered what magic that girl has on her eyes that mesmerized her Prem... then she removed the cluther from her hair letting her waist length hair fall to its real length...she knew Prem loved long hair, she remembered how he used to pull her hair when they where kids...smile approched her lips but did not last for even a fraction of second... tears again crept through her eyes and she sat on the groung again crying...
Ritika was totally shocked and glad at the same time...shocked because of witnessing the new side of her cousin and glad that she cried and let go her pain...
Ritika's cell vibrated giving her clear indication to put up her act for the plan.She knocked Heer's door,"Heer chachu aaye hai, he's calling you, it urgent."
Wiping her tears quickly and again making a bun with her hair she blurted out,"Ya I'm coming..."
Downstairs Arjun was waiting for Heer and was dead nervous as he has to perform a real life play for his niece's sake...he wanted to end his part quickly as he couldn't take the tension long, while Teji was supporting him and giving him encouragement. Heer came down and sat opposite to her chachu waiting for him to speak, unusually quieter than she use to be. Arjun cleared his throat and started his part,"Beta, this time our charity function is going to be really a big event because few some leading names have extended their help to us." Heer looked at her uncle elated, happy with this news.
Arjun again started,"One of those leading name is GIC"
"geek??? chachu yeh kaisi company hai"
"geek nahi GIC, G.I.C., its a top fashion institue of the world and they have agreed to sponsor us, but with few conditions."
"What are those conditions?"
"Well they want to supervise the event and manage everything."
"So, you said them no, right." Heer sounded confident a she knew her chachu will never let anyone interfere with the function matter other than Heer.
"I agreed."
"What?" Heer screamed with disbelief while Arjun nodded.
"Yes, I agreed because I couldnt say them no due to their world wide reputation and they have signed a deal that they'll sponsore each child's school education and get them admitted to GIC when they pass school and there they will be trained free of cost."
"Come on chachu I never knew you were such a business mentality type of person", Heer almost shouted.
Arjun retorted back," This is not business, its my and Natasha's dream to raise these children and make them succesful in every possible way and when I got this opportunity I will not back off."
"Fine", Yelled Heer," So you want me to back off now,me... the person from whom these children are like angels."
"No, you dont have to back off but you have 4 more days to reherse for your performance coz they'll take your audition and decide whther you are performing or not."
"Audition?" Heer looked at her chachu wide eyed in shock..."you want me to give audtion to these geek people or whatever???? I was the one who danced all through these months sparaining my foot, in pain , in difficulties but one never uttered an uff and you these geek and all are coming to take my audition?"
"Who stopped you from sharing you pain with us?", Arjun shouted back and Heer was taken aback with the statement" We are always here with you and for you, you could have shared your pains your suffering with us.", Arjun concluded, no more acting...
Heer calmed down a bit,"Fine! I'll give an audition... who's coming by the way?"
"PJ sr. and PJ jr."
"What kind of name is that?"
"I dont know but they are addressed like that, PJ sr.in a fashion designer and PJ jr. is a makeover artiste and they'll be in India within 4 days. So you better hurry up."
"Ok,I will."
" and Heer...behave yourself."
"I will be in my best behaviour you see...but if they mess with me that i am not responsible for my action."
Heer got up and made her way to her room speaking with herself,"I cant let go everything that is mine... So you geeks, welcome to India."
howz it?
Priyadarshini aka Priyo😊
Arjun
