FF khel khel mein....RECAP page 63 27/1/2011 :) - Page 2

hey priyo

Hi friends... thanks a lot for your lovely comments...so my internals went well and I scored 100% in it, so I am very happy.. ok then here comes my part 4, it'll be a bt short coz i had typed it earlier... and i'll post another part too today itself if possible...
so here's what happens next...



PART-4

After Lalit left their study after the prolonged video conference with his dear friend with the decision that they'll be moving back to India...Prem took over the laptop and started scrolling through the pages of her scrapbuk...His eyes became soft and had a faint smile on his lips as he saw their pictures and as he went through the lines related to him, he felt like embracing her in his arms right at that moment and console her saying," I never left you Heer, none of us left you, bas tumhara dekhne ka nazariya alag hai..."


"Teri kadmon ki ahaat sunna chahti hoon,
Teri muskurahat ko dekhna chahti hoon,
Rab kare yeh na mumkin ho jaye mumkin...
Tujhe apni dil ki dastaan sunana chahti hoon..."


Prem became startled and looked back and saw Preet reading out the lines from the scrapbook aloud while Veera kept a small smile pasted on her lips...Prem pretended an annoyed look and Preet ignored it and continued "Apni Heer, kafi achi poetess hai, hai na bhai, kya likhi hai..wah wah wah wah i feel like kissing her hands right here right now." Veera spoke up,"Heer Di bohot creative hai bhai, just look at the way she has designed the scrapbook, it is so preety, so innovative, I wonder why didn't she join GIC (Gayatri Institute of Creativity), unka koi competition hi nahin hai..."
Atlast Prem interrupted "Tum log Heer ki analysis karna bandh karoge?bas bahana chahiye hota hai bak bak karne ka dono ko...". He closed the laptop and headed towards his workshop where he experiments with the dress materials.
As soon as he entered his workshop, he went upto the big wall right opposite the door and pulled the curtains, which revealed a gaint size poster of Heer..Prem smiled as he grazed his vision through her beautiful light brown eyes, which has a glint of mischeif in them,her messy bun as if unhappy to stay within the cluthes of the clutcher and wishing to flow free, her beautiful eyebrows, though undone but they did not make her look bad...
Prem felt a soft tap on his shoulder and turned to see Gayatri, his mother standing at his back smiling at him, satisfed as finally his son got the answer.
Prem hugged his mom tightly and in one breath let out his happiness" Even she loves me mom, can you believe it?" Gayatri gave a knowing smile,"Pata tha mujhe beta, I knew it because when Heer was born on her naamkaran, Teji ke kulguru aye they... unhone Heer aur Tumko dekhke kaha tha ke, tum dono 1 nahin 7 nahin par janmo janmo ke liye ek dusre ke liye ho...woh tumhari parchai, tumhari dhal tumi pratichavi hai isiliye uska naamkaran hua Heer."
Prem gave a surprised look to his mom as he heard this for the 1st time from her.Gayatri handed him medium sized square box on his hand which had "Aura" imprinted on top it,"Prem, ab mann main koi shaq nahin hai na?" Prem smiled and took the box,"nahin ma ab mujhe ise qubool karne main koi hichkichahat nahi hai" and he opened the box and took out a chain whose pendant is of the shape of cursive "H" the left line of the 'h' being extended a little and in between a loop is made which looks like a 'p', in total the design in a'H'and a'P' joined together.
This pendant is designed by his mom herself and was gifted to Prem so that he gifts it to Heer, but he declined it as he did not want to force this relation upon her. But now he has no doubts in his mind.. Smiling he held the necklace in front of his Heer's poster and mumbled "Perfect".


so how was it????
please do critizize so that I know my mistakes and flaws and can make it even better for u all


bye4now
priyadarshini aka priyo

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.

so here is my part 5 as promised...



PART 5


Dressed in a long white gown, she looked like a princess of the land of angels...her faces was serene and yet annoyed as she waited for him...Suddenly she feels two warm hands on top of her eyes and her lips breaks down into smile as if recognizing the owner of the hands,but she rubs of the smile just to act strict with him."Kaun hai?" she speaks out in an angry tone, and in answer the person lightly kisses her right ear lobe.She gets a feeling like stepping into a pool of ice cold water but her heart speaks out,"Strict Heer, be strict..." Again she speaks up,"kya hai, and what kind of game is this...apna haath hatao meri aankhon se jo bhi ho..."Now he speaks up in hs deep yet sensous baritone,"Aisa to ho nahin sakta, that you dont recognize me...gussa ho? okey tumhara gussa abhi dur kiye deta hoon...kya tum sunna chahti ho kaise?" 'Kaise?", thw words blurted out of Heers' lips voluntarily and she cured herself for that but a part of herself wanted to know the answer of 'Kaise.',"to suno...aise",she could feel her warmth near her ear, she knew what was comng next, she waited and waited for him to speak and he shouted to her amusement"SUBHA HO GAYI MAAMU..."
Heer wake up startled taking deep breaths...all sweaty. She heard the noise of giggling and turned to see Ritika giggling...Heer got angry and spoke up as she clenched her teeth,"Subah subah kya pagolo jaisi muskura rahi hai...and what's all this kitna behuda alarm hai, why did u set such annoying alarm in your cell.Ritika looked at her sister in a what-are-you-saying expression and handed her the cell phone which was still singing the morning alarm tone and spoke up,"Heer, this alarm is playing from our cell. tumhine set ki hai. its your favourite alarm tone, remember?" she concluded, tapping heer's forehead.
Heer's mouth opened half and again closed as she thought of giving an explainaton but declned the idea within the fraction of seconds.Turning off the alarm she ordered Ritika,"Oh Okey go and get shower and get ready ghar jana hai..."and she zipped open the bag and took out her cargo.Ritika huffed and spoke,"Isse achchi to tum neend main ho, atleast ladki jaisi hasti to ho" and turned to leave "Matlab?" Heer shouted out of shock..."Matlab yehi ke thodi der pehle you were giggling like a small child who got lots of candy" and she left.Heer looked at her sister as she left and then speaks out to herself,"Heer dont ever dream this dream again...that is not going to happen in your life."
As Heer got downstairs dressed in off white cargo and black sleeveless sports t shirt, she was surprised to see her parents there. Heer's Chachu Arjun Mann desolated himself from crowd and people ever since his wife Natasha, or her favorite Natty Chachi expired 3 years ago, leaving behind a cute 5 year old Tanisha Mann or Tannu.As Arjun is quite younger to his brother Balraaj cares for him like his own son and Teji loves him nothing less than Balraaj.After Natasha's expiry, Balraaj and Teji tried to convince Arjun a lot for not leaving the house but in vain. He loves to stay far from the crowd wth his life Tanu . His life revolves round an orphanage, a dream of his wife which he has built jointly with Heer and Ritika. Balraaj wanted to finance the the thing but Arjun declined the offer as he wanted to make this dream of Natasha come true all by himself and he was glad when Heer supported him. Not only this, but she and Ritika earned the money for their orphanage by organising charity functions twice a month and by God's grace all of them have been successful and they have collected enough funds to run the orphanage.
"Ma? Papa?"Heer's eyes widened as she saw them chatting with their chachu."Kyun? cant we come? Itna paraye hai hum Arjun?",playfully Teji asked turning to Arjun, who grinned in return,"Kya bhabhima..."
"chachuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu", screamed Ritika as she entered the hall..."Main ap pe case kar doongi,if u dont give me food right now."pouted Ritika and Arjun raised an eyebrow."Waise kya bana hai chachu?" enquired Heer, Teji got irritated a pulled Heer's ear
"Kya?? chachu se kaam karati hai? you besharam, kaha ki maharani hai tu...ja ke khud bana."
"ma, please lagti hai...chachu."
"Aj koi nahin bachayega tujhe...chal kitchen mein..."
"Nahin ma...pls nahi kitchen nahin..."
"Bhabhi let her go na...ap to khana le kar aayi hai na..."
Teji gave fiery glares to Arjun and Arjun stopped mid way..."Tumhare wajah se isko mein sudhar nahin sakti...Kya ho jata, if she entered the kichen and cooked?"
"
"Badi Ma...baad mein 1st give us food", Ritika almost yelled.


All of them seated themselves to the dining area but none of them spoke because as all were busy savouring the taste of the tempting delicious Teji Mann Gajr Halwa.Finally Balraaj spoke up,"Beta when is your next show?"
"12 din baad papa."
"But that's the day they are comin...ouch!"
Balraaj stopped mid way as Teji hit him by foot under the table.
"Kaun aa rahe hai papa? asked a confused Heer.
"Beta, he made mistake in speaking 12 din baad its our Tannu's birthday na...", Teji sighed as Heer seemed satisfied with the answer
"I will become 6...", chirped a happ Tannu and clapped.
"Ha, dadima, bohot bari ho jaogi.", teased Ritika
"Heer Didi, what will you give me as present?"asked Tannu innocently
"What do you want dear?" asked Heer.
"Aap meri Mamma ki favourite gaane pe perform karogi?"
Heer, dropped the spoon on the plate and looked at Tanu as she knew which song is she speaking about its the song Rangeela Re from the film Guide.Its a tragic romantc song and Heer wanted to perform on everything on anything but girly and romantic songs.
"Magar yeh gaana kaise?" blabbered Heer
"Kyun?", asked Teji
"Ma how can we perform on this song its too slow isme dance nahin kiya ja sakta."
"Kisne kaha?"spoke up Ritika."Hum log is gaane ka remix version pe dance kar lenge na..."
Heer gave an angry look on Ritika and like in pleading on spoke up,"ma, I cant do in this one... the song is...this song is..."
"Please Heer didi..." Tannu pleaded sweetly pouting her lips.
"Ok fine, we'll perform on this song only", Heer spoke as she finally gave up.
Saying so she left the table.
Everyone in the room smiled and Arjun pecked Tanu's cheek,"That's like a good girl" and Ritika handed her a big choclate bar. All the members of the family showed Thumbs up to each other and mumbled together,"Plan 1, succesful"


Howz it?

Priyadarshini aka Priyo.

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggggggg for next asap.

Hey!!!

wow priyo..u write really well ....
just caught up with the last 2 parts...
they are awsome yaar..
its truely a differnt story...
will await eagerly 4 ur next update...
update asap..
Ash