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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#251

Oh no!
I hope Prem doesn't hurt Heer anymore!
?xXx?
continue soon!
Sunayna
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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#252

oh I'm late...will be back ....reading

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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#253

hey rehana awsum outstanding...fabulous..fantastic...my my...i m just falling in love wid ur ff dear...i love ur ff....rele its fantastic...just superb...i ll rate it..if u dont mind...

its...123234546675899334567 / 10.....hey i hope u understand now that how much i liked it...its superb...ur ff is one of the best ffs i have ever read...keep it up n plz tell when r u going to update...
so sorry today i cant clap coz clappings r not enough for ur ff...

i waz feelingthe pain of heer n when prem said to cum his home... i wanted to kill him for that(no offence)..how can he do that but i m happy that he realised his mistake...when heer came n how prem saw her i imagined every thing...u described everything so perfectly that i waz imagining it infron of my eyes...hey u r a awsum writer dear,,,its a pleasure reading ur ff...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon...i ll be waiting....
wid love
PARTH😊

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#254

I'm speechless...You left me with no other option but writing such a beautiful part...I can just get drown in your fic for hours reading it over again and again....

*returning to read your last part once more*

*coming back to comment*

The part was soo beautifully written...everything so clear and well described...the situations, the characters, their activities, their reactions and emotions ,everything..simply loved it....👏👏🤗

Do I have to say how much I love the Prem and Heer in this fic...they are simply adorable...

He didnt even have to take a look to know it was her voice...Her asking for help gave him a chance, not to prove her wrong but to prove himself wrong...Deep inside he always had a feeling that she was different from all the other girls..But he wouldn't believe unless she proved it to him that she was actuallly different ....Right?

Loved the way you brought out her helplessness and her pain while accepting his proposal...

His anger and disbelief on being proved wrong that she was different, then his guilt, frustration and anger at his himself for misunderstanding her, his restlessness and concern for her after knowing her reason..mindblowing

''to his surprise, he didn't even feel the pain of his blood that was running down like a fountain.....'' ....'' as the uncontrollable pain from both his heart and hand was killing him...''

That says it all, she is already in his heart

Heer is a pale yellow saree ...😍I can just imagine how gorgeous she must be looking..She is such a sweetheart..She was ready for the sacrifice at a time when she was completely emotionally broke only becoz she didn't want to be considered disloyal.... 👏

Why does the doctor's words give me a feeling that her father isn't going to make it..Or is it her words to Veera that keep echoing in my head ''I have lost everything'', that gives me a feeling that she will loose everything despite her sacrifice..But girl don't worry, your pain and sorrow is only temporary coz you have the most desirable Prem madly in love with you..

Sky blue shirt, loosened tie, unbuttoned from top, sleeves rolled up -just perfect?😊

'' seeing her for the first time in saree, he just couldn't take his eyes off........as if he could live the rest of his life by staring at her........even though, he wanted her NOT to come but somewhere in his heart, he was pleased to see her as if he had been waiting for her since ages.''

He's lost his heart to her -the purity in her beauty and character...and you have put it beautifully..👏

Her concern for his wound...She surely feels for him deep inside..after all they are made for each other..

''he wanted to yell at her to get lost from here........her presence was killing him........he was being attracted towards her........before things get too far he wanted to save her from his desirable passion that was growing inside him........he had never felt like this for anyone.......closing his eyes, he turned his face down in order to interrupt his own overpowering emotion, at the same time, clenching his fist inside his pocket......''

Once again you have beautifully written his emotions -his concern, love, passion, yearn for her..

She surely is going to loose tonite.... Rainy night, pale yellow saree alone with sky blue shirt....don't you think that's a deadly combination?

Loved Prem's interaction with Mrs. Bregenza ..and her words to him simply says how nice a person he is....

Veera is soo sweet here..the way you compared her to a kitten was cute..And Prem having a sweet sisterly affection to her...

Sorry, wrote a long comment , couldnt help it...Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Luv

Angie

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#255

Wow Di! Amazing update.. and so nice and long!

I loved the way you characterised Prem in the beginning.. It's like the poor guy had lost faith in all women due to Sanjana's betrayal.. and his taking it out on Heer, very realistically done.. Though I really pity the girl.

And then poor Heer having to agree to such a proposal from Prem. It shows that she is willing to sacrifice her self-respect for her father, which is at the same time both commendable and well, not 'cos she has no idea what is going on in Prem's mind at that point.. He's been proven right, only he hasn't.. (did that make any sense to you? It made sense in my head..)

But I'm really glad you didn't drag out Prem's misconception of Heer's character.. So glad things got cleared up on his side so fast.. And poor Heer has no idea that Prem's not going to do anything, though he's fighting his feelings there at the end! 😳

I also really like the way you portray Veera and Heer's friendship.. So sweet the way Veera worries constantly about Heer.. And it was nice the way Prem worries about Veera, shows he's not that bad a person.. Maybe a casanova, but still a good guy at heart..

Cannot wait for the next part Di!

Love,

Radz

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#256

👏i dint found any word to praise u&ur wrtiings its awsome Di&the charecters r tooooooooo good,i love all the charecters Prem,Heer,Veera,Preet,Ash every1 is soo good&one more thing u discribe each&aevery part sooooo beautifully tht i can imagine it😳

👏

Heer was very Helpless but cant blame Prem as he always meet those Sanjana type girls😡&soon i think Heer will also fall in love with him☺️☺️☺️&i believe this Mansion night will change Heer's mind😳Impatiently waiting for part 9😃

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#257

Hey!!

I was a silent reader of both ur ff's but this time I culdnt keep myself from being silent anymore...I luuuuvvvveeeeddddddd this part and not to mention the whole story has an aura abt it... Its diffrent and unique and the way u switch from present to past and back is fab...

Cant wait to read more

plz do continue soon

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#258

that was so brilliant!!!!!😲👏👏

i love this FF, one of the best seriously. You described it so well!, & the emotions and what they were thinking..wow its all so intense!..& so glad he knows about her, he's fallin in love wif heer😳 loved it! sooo gooodd, will look forward to more premeer, please continue soon.. will be waitin!😳

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ashpush

@ashpush

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#259

great part rehana...long 2...(n i totally loved it being long)
prem got a cut on his hand???poor prem..
n poor heer 2...she must hav been really shattered..
totally loved d 'wife' like concerns of heer.
beautiful part dear..
dis part was updated faster dan usal na..guess u r also as impatient as us😊 ...we 2 read d next part n u 2 c r response
k keep going..update soon

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Rehana Kazi

@Rehana86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: .xganga.x
Oh no!
I hope Prem doesn't hurt Heer anymore!
?xXx?
continue soon!
Sunayna
= ]

awww thanks dear.......😊.....just wait......hope i won't disappoint u😳

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal
hey rehana awsum outstanding...fabulous..fantastic...my my...i m just falling in love wid ur ff dear...i love ur ff....rele its fantastic...just superb...i ll rate it..if u dont mind...

of course i won't mind considering receiving a rate from my sweet bro😛

its...123234546675899334567 / 10.....hey i hope u understand now that how much i liked it...its superb...ur ff is one of the best ffs i have ever read...keep it up n plz tell when r u going to update...
so sorry today i cant clap coz clappings r not enough for ur ff...

awwww that was touching dear......i m honored😊

i waz feelingthe pain of heer n when prem said to cum his home... i wanted to kill him for that(no offence)..how can he do that but i m happy that he realised his mistake...when heer came n how prem saw her i imagined every thing...u described everything so perfectly that i waz imagining it infron of my eyes...hey u r a awsum writer dear,,,its a pleasure reading ur ff...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon...i ll be waiting....

awww glad that u liked the storyline so far.......n next week i'll be a bit busy so i will post the next part tonite and the following one on friday😃

wid love
PARTH😊

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Wow Di! Amazing update.. and so nice and long!

hehehe....lets just say a SUDDEN treat for u guys......ok i said sudden NOT frequent......😆.

I loved the way you characterised Prem in the beginning.. It's like the poor guy had lost faith in all women due to Sanjana's betrayal.. and his taking it out on Heer, very realistically done.. Though I really pity the girl.

awwww........thanks dear

And then poor Heer having to agree to such a proposal from Prem. It shows that she is willing to sacrifice her self-respect for her father, which is at the same time both commendable and well, not 'cos she has no idea what is going on in Prem's mind at that point.. He's been proven right, only he hasn't.. (did that make any sense to you? It made sense in my head..)

🤣.....don't worry it did make sense to me as well........

But I'm really glad you didn't drag out Prem's misconception of Heer's character.. So glad things got cleared up on his side so fast.. And poor Heer has no idea that Prem's not going to do anything, though he's fighting his feelings there at the end! 😳

tadaa!!!!!.......i m not ekta😉😆......but it got clear from Prem NOT Heer yet😛.....opps did i just open my mouth😲😆

I also really like the way you portray Veera and Heer's friendship.. So sweet the way Veera worries constantly about Heer.. And it was nice the way Prem worries about Veera, shows he's not that bad a person.. Maybe a casanova, but still a good guy at heart..

awwww isn't he the sweetest casanova😳😳........thanks for the wonderful feedback dear......really appreciated😊

Cannot wait for the next part Di!

Love,

Radz

luv

rehana😊

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