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Posted: 17 years ago
@Rue: thanks hon😊
@Parth: thanks parth.......really appreciated yaar........all my pleasure😊.......
@Radz: awwww nice to see you dear.........n don't worry, take a good sleep first.......unfortunately i DO have to continue as i m not EKTA who always disappoint her fans every now and then........however, glad you loved the shots......thanks...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
pls.........................
update the 8 part😃
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

thanks dear.......hopefully by tonite😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Amazing part di!!! I'm sorry I can't write a longer cmment, but I'm rushing to do a lot of things today before iftar! Promise a long comment for the next part!!

It was absoloutly amazing! I loved how the standoff between PH....wow...you had me at the edge of the chair! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Originally posted by: shabo24

Amazing part di!!! I'm sorry I can't write a longer cmment, but I'm rushing to do a lot of things today before iftar! Promise a long comment for the next part!!

It was absoloutly amazing! I loved how the standoff between PH....wow...you had me at the edge of the chair! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Shabz

awww cutie it's ok.......n u better gimme a longer comment becoz the next part will be composed of two parts😳.........however, loved it.........thanks for the feedback dear
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Originally posted by: tania86

that's wut i was telling kimmu that she can't make me write a scene on prem and sanjana😛😉....so sanju is out before getting in 😉😆
wait so that means she wont ever pop in rite? 😃
heheheehheeheh........😆😆😆........
.....glad to make u giggle 😆😆
well in this case, i wud suggest "read prem's part in the next shot with extra 200% attention, coz he will go through mix of emotions which might confuse you guys BUT I promise to try my best to make it simpler......
ah u dnt even have to tell me to pay attention to his part didz, am already analyzing everything he does and says, to try and find the secret 😉😃 but will heed ur advice and pay extra extra attention! dnt wrry am always confused so wnt matter 😆
awwww thanku shona.......loved ur appreciation.....😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Shot #8

Trying to keep his concentration on the file, Prem didn't bother himself to turn around to look at her........"Go ahead!!!" came from his cool voice......"I have got some personal emergency and immediately need some advance salary......".......anything else he needed to know??.....naah!!!.....that was enough for him.......he smirked as if totally aware of her intention........here is the chance to prove her wrong......if it was an emergency and she is really strict about her values then she would never agree to it.......otherwise get ready to experience a dose of your own medicine darling....
"what's the amount??" asked Prem still keeping it calm with her......"150,000 Rs. ...." she softly blurted out with a hesitation......his pen refused to move on the paper, hearing the 'big' amount from her mouth.......of course it was equivalent to a penny to him but NOT to her, considering the lifestyle of such middle-class people......." you are talking about your 10 months salaries.......didn't you read the policy of this company before joining here??...."......slightly rolling the chair back and forth while checking out the boxes in the document, he smiled to himself......."..well, lets refresh your memory then!!.......an employee is only allowed to receive upto three months salaries as an advance.....BUT.." he paused......"but what??!!..." impatiently asked Heer........looking up at the sky through the window, while flashing his charming smile and playing with the pen in between his fingers, Prem decided to offer her the condition by taking his own sweet little time, "....how about you trash your 'precious' self-respect ONLY for tonight............come to my palace.............and be my pleasure....."
Closing her eyes in disbelief, she cursed herself for even thinking of coming to him for help......feeling like someone has just slapped her so hard on the face......as if it wasn't enough to see her father in pain, now this guy had to start too.......She wanted to scream her lungs out, let the cruel world know how she wanted to dig a grave for herself and hide there forever.......don't want to show her face to anyone of this unfair world ESPECIALLY him......how she wished she could reward him with a tight slap for having the courage to offer her the condition......
As she was about to answer him back, the words of Dr. Lal had echoed in her ears......clenching her fists, she gulped in the pain that was about to erupt like a volcano......taking a deep breathe, she controlled the tears from falling down.......she was glad that he was not facing her, because if he was then she would have given him a tit for tat by now........but was not ready to risk her father's life at any cost.......without thinking twice, she made up her mind when she whispered, "I will be there at 10:00 tonight......."
Here goes her so-called self-respect down the drain......feeling disgusted by her, he swore at himself for even thinking of her being different from other cheap sl*ts......the sudden cracked sound made him look at the poor pen in his hand, as it became the victim of his anger......
Before she could leave the place, she felt a sudden force in her heart that has pushed her to share the pain with him, when she confessed in her broken voice, "....If it was not for my father's life, then I would have accepted death over this offer.....bu...."......unable to continue any further, she ran out of the room crying, slamming the door behind, leaving a shaken Prem as he immediately turned back to stare at the door.....
Seeing Heer's somber face, Veera gently squeezed her hand before asking, hoping to get a positive answer, "Did he agree??!!"........nodding her head in affirmative manner, Heer half smiled......"Oh thank..my goodness!!!......I told ya, he will never say 'no'......" taking a deep sigh of relief, Veera broadly smiled at her........"heyyy!!! don't worry naa.....everything will be fine.....trust me......" holding back her tears, she consoled her sister like friend with a warm hug........."just relax and go to the hospital, let Dr. Lal know that the money matter is solved......okay!!!.......I will take of everything here...." saying that Veera turned back to her table to gather some important documents to photocopy leaving Heer to be lost in her thought........"if only you knew under which condition I was approved to get those money......"
Never in his life he wanted to kick himself for behaving like a Jerk........"how could I do this to her????" he whispered......he had never got this mad at himself before.......getting up from the chair, he went over to the little bar in his cabin......cursing himself, but this time, for daring to compare her with that prost*t*te.....taking heavy breathes he tried to think straight to fix the biggest mistake he had ever made in life.......running fingers through his thick hair, he tried to let out the frustration.......nothing is working for him right now as he just banged his clenched fist on the glass counter of the bar, smashing it into uncountable pieces.......to his surprise, he didn't even feel the pain of his blood that was running down like a fountain.......
Without bothering to stop the bleeding, he quickly called Veera, "......get the line to the doctor dealing with Heer's father....hurry up!!......", hearing his high tone, she didn't waste a second to connect him to the person, "Yes sir!!" she replied........
His entire body was becoming cold and numb while he was quietly listening to the doctor about the case of Rheumatic Heart Disease, ".....hmm!!!.....ok......please proceed with it......the payment will be done on time......but please do the best you can...." almost pleading the doctor, Prem pressed the wounded hand against his thigh as the uncontrollable pain from both his heart and hand was killing him.......before hanging up the phone, he made a last request, "one more thing......please don't let anyone be aware of our conversation.....including the settlement.......that's a request.....thank you..."......he knew whatever he said to Heer he can't reverse anything but he made a confidential settlement with the doctor so that, at least he could reduce some of her stress......'apart from the operation expenses, his company will take the responsibility of all the extra charges including the medications'.........keeping the phone down, he decided to involve Veera, as she is the only one whom he could trust......
Still lost in thought while walking on the corridor of the office, she bumped into Nida, causing all her drink to pour into Heer's toe length fitting skirt........"s***!!! sorry yaar......are you alright??!!!.....kahan kho gayi thi??" asked the concerned colleague noticing her......coming back into her senses, "huh!!!......nahin it's ok......don't worry, I will change......" assured Heer with a smile....."please do so yaar.....and sorry once again.......hey!!.....change it as soon as possible otherwise the stains will be there forever.......tumhare apartment pass mein hi toh hain.....so hurry up!!!" smiling at the young girl, Nida left to get another drink for herself.....
"Veera!!!.....come to my cabin please....." ordered a tensed Prem.......looking at the horrible condition of the place, she just stared at her boss with a half-open mouth.....the glass counter of the little bar at the corner was on the floor into pieces.......with a hesitation yet in a concerned tone, she asked, "are you alright sir??!!".....before she gets panicked, Prem gently calmed her down, "I am absolutely fine......just a little cut in the hand......nothing to worry about....."......but being the most frightened girl, she quickly ran out to get the first-aid-box, leaving her boss to roll his eyes at her sudden disappear.......
Entering her apartment, she quickly took a cold shower in order to release the stress out of her mind......then changing herself into a satin pale yellow color saree, Heer left for the hospital.....
Coming back with a kit, Veera gently cleaned the blood from his hand and was putting bandage around it........out of all the lady employees, she is the only one whose sudden kiddish activities always keeps him entertained.......he doesn't know why, but he always finds himself adore this little kid like a 'kitten'.......that's why whenever he becomes frustrated, he pours all his anger on her, knowing her sweet nature that she would forgive him very soon.......along with ashlesha, Prem has always kept his eyes on her in a good way, may be because she is the youngest one amongst his employees.......
Looking down at his hand, Prem inquired, "..umm.....do you know if Heer took the money from the accountant?"........keeping her concentration on the bandage, she answered, "No!!!....she didn't....."......."then you take the amount from the accountant and hand over it to her.......the doctor said, the payment should be made by today......so go ahead!!" keeping a straight face, he ordered her......for some reason feeling awkward to meet her eyes, may be because he was too disgusted by himself to meet his own eyes.....
"What are you doing here??" asked a surprised Heer......"Yeah!!.....you forgot the money......so Mr. Prem asked me to make the payment...." before she could say anything farther, Dr. Lal appeared while giving instructions to the nurses to get everything ready in the O.T........"Heer....beta, we will try our best......but I already told you the chances are very low.......just pray and keep faith in God!!......." supporting the young lady, he left for the job.....
It's been almost 4 hours, the operation had started, impatiently waiting for the doctor to come out, Heer read the time on the clock, 8:30pm......holding the coffee that Veera has offered before leaving for home........that girl has to arrange an important meeting tomorrow morning therefore, left for her home to get an early sleep......however, she did so much for Heer......in a short span of time they have become very close.......speaking of Veera, 'Why did he send the money today???.......if he knew that I may change my mind after recieving the money then would he still send it???' she thought.......but he trusted her and she can never break anyone's trust......she can never think of betraying anyone.......
The opened door of the operation theater brought her back from her thought, almost running to the doctor, she waited, hoping for a good news......feeling sorry for the girl, he confessed, "....We have to keep him under observation for 24 hours.....if he gets his conscious back by then everything will be fine....otherwise....." unable to continue after noticing the change of her expression, he completed before leaving for his room, ".....we are waiting for his conscious to come back......just pray to God dear....."
All she wanted to do was....'CRY'......but she doesn't even have any energy to cry.......looking at her right to the idols of God, she helplessly pleaded to save her only support to life......feeling all weak she decided to leave for the Juneja Mansion, to sacrifice herself......
Looking out the window, he was listenning to the sound of the heavy rain while rolling up the left sleeve of his shirt.........then transferring the glass of drink to the wounded hand, Prem loosened the tie and unbuttoned the upper portion of his sky blue shirt.......it's been half an hour that he came home but still not in the mood to change himself.......feeling low and pathetic.......finishing the last gulp of his drink, he decided to go down for another one......
He felt his heart just skipped a beat at the sight of her.........there she is, almost hugging her partially soaked figure.......thanks to the steady rain.......seeing her for the first time in saree, he just couldn't take his eyes off........as if he could live the rest of his life by staring at her........even though, he wanted her NOT to come but somewhere in his heart, he was pleased to see her as if he had been waiting for her since ages........she came here ONLY to be loyal with me......damn me!!!......how could I hurt this innocent girl?........still staring at her red face, he felt like someone has just ripped his heart off his chest.......why am I feeling like this?.......what is wrong with me???.....
Entering the Mansion, the first thing that caught her attention was his wounded hand.......'what happened to him??......how did he get hurt??......why didn't he change himself yet??' unknown to herself she thought like a typical 'wife'...... noticing his heated yet intense glance at her, gently hugging herself, she lowered her gaze, feeling awkward......
Why is she looking down??.......is she crying???......of course she is.......all because of me........already feeling obnoxious for making her cry, he wanted to yell at her to get lost from here........her presence was killing him........he was being attracted towards her........before things get too far he wanted to save her from his desirable passion that was growing inside him........he had never felt like this for anyone.......closing his eyes, he turned his face down in order to interrupt his own overpowering emotion, at the same time, clenching his fist inside his pocket......
"Can I help you beta?" a sudden voice made both of them look up at the elderly woman......."ummm......yes....Mrs. Bregenza....!!" interrupted Prem, as he stared at the woman with respect........"Take her to the guest room....."......then gesturing the lady towards Heer's wet clothes he softly requested "....and please take care of her".......nodding at her owner, Mrs. Bregenza sweetly smiled at the girl.......before Prem could go back to his room for some air to breathe, the maid gently asked him, "Excuse me, Mr. Prem!!!......It's raining outside and I have to go home early as you know my daughter is not well......so do you want me to send someone to look after the guest for the night?".......feeling bad for the lady, he assured her, "No, it's alright!!.....thanks for your concern.......I think she will be fine......don't worry.......you take care of your daughter.......and let me know if there is any emergency........"......smiling at the young man, she replied before taking the guest to her respective room, "Of course I will let you know my dear!.......I know I can always count on you"......
i had to compress to parts into one......so enjoyyy.....hope this part is not confusing😕
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Edited by tania86 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh yea first

*edited*

Okay i have to do this... HAHA RINKI BEAT YOU!!.. 🥳You too shabz.. muahahahaaaaa!!! Oh and another thing, daaang di, that was a loong part!! Not that i'm complaining, keep it coming. 😃 Now lets get on with my comment. 🤓

I could totally imagine it all in my head, Prem trying to keep cool, thinking Heer was.. err.. bad. I don't even want to put that word and Heer in the same sentence, they miles apart. And thats why I love Heer. I loved how you described Prem's emotions. Like somewhere he was hurt that Heer was like the other girls, somewhere he didn't want her to be like the others. He had himself prepared before he could hurt himself again, but he still couldn't help but feel crushed. He still could help but feel his faith being broken. Am I right?

I felt really bad for Heer, at first I thought she wouldn't give in, and that would make Prem not think of Heer as the other girls. I could totally feel what she was going through, that helplessness. Is this were the blackmail thing comes in, or is there moree? 😈 Anyways, i would've definetly slapped Prem...... No matter how cute or cool or hot.. or smexy... or how beautiful his eyes are.. or that jawline... or his body... or those strong hands... or his deep smothered voice... *cough* wait was i talking about? right.. err.. yea umm.. No its a good thing she didn't slap him... I would never do that. 😍 I hate Prem. 😆 If she slapped him, then Prem would've never gone through that realization phase, and he would've never felt guilty (for the first time?) for his actions. And I simply LOVED that. 🤗 Proves that he too is a good guy.

Oh great... more Veera liking for me to do.. *sigh* I hate doing it, but i can't help but do it. She's so freaking sweet in here, anyone would fall in love with her sweetness. I loved how she assured Heer, even though she didn't know what went on that room. She trusted her boss, i like the realtionship you showed there too. The realtionship of the faint trust they have between eachother. Ahh, I simply ADORE this Veera.

This part had to be ONE of the highlights. Notice how I say ONE of the highlights. ☺️ I think you know the other one.. ☺️☺️☺️ Ahem.. ahem.. getting on to the highlight I was supposed to say, but got carried away. Prem's guilt, anger, confusion.. and i don't know what else emotions where in there... But oh god, it was amazing. Especially the way you wrote it! He couldn't feel the pain in his hand, because the pain in his heart was stronger. The pain he gave Heer hurt him more... Thats like my Prem. Uff.. I'm falling in love all over... 😍

Back to Heer... I thought that the drink falling on her skirt pointed towards something. A lesson perhaps. Once you get stained, you can't take it out. Where you by any chance going for that? Anyways I love you for putting Heer in a sari. 🤗

Great, Veera adoring cums in AGAIN! WHY? WHY? WHYY? Why are you doing this to me? The girl i'm supposed to hate with the deepest depths of my heart... I can't help but like her. She's a much better sister than the Veera in Kis Desh could ever be. I bet she would never help her brother... i bet she would go 'ewww.. blood.. i'm not touching that'.. grrr.. makes me angry at THAT veera. But this veera is awesome. FInally I can imagine her here too.. Before she was a shady figure in my imagination, but now, she's crystal clear. So once again hat's off to you for that. 👏 Do I have to mention how much I love Prem-Veera's relationship again? I mean this time you told us the reason to his outbursts on Veera... and Veera being really sweet forgiving him all the time. *sigh*.. Made me adore Veera AGAIN!

I have a feeling Heer's father isn't going to make it. I feel so bad right now. I'm seriously loving ALL your characters in here. I mean first it was Prem, then it was Veera, now Heer. I have to give a bhaashan on how I love Heer's morals. And I guess thats what struck Prem too, she decided that if he trusted her then she should complete her part of the deal too. No matter how much she didn't want too. Heer's awesome. All the characters in your fic are awesome in there own way. Prem, Heer, Preet, Ash, and Veera. Di, seriously, YOU should've written Kis Desh. *sigh* I can already imagine.. *dreamland*

OMG! You wanna kill me? Dark light falling on Prem's face... Prem in sky blue shirt, unbuttoned, rolled up sleeves.. ☺️☺️☺️ He drinks too... 😲 Ok, i'm ok with that. Its really messed up, i hate guys that smoke, but drinking is okay.. Why? Cuz they look hot when they drink. I know, lame excuse.. cuz i can't help it. 🤣

Second highlight of the epi. ☺️
Prem see's Heer, and his heard skips a beat. Sky blue unbuttoned, rolled up sleeves shirt meets bheegi hui yellow sari... Beautiful combination. Once again loved how you wrote it all down. His desperation, love, waiting, lust... everything. It was shown so beautifully. So he couldn't hurt her, he wanted to stay away from her. He knew that whatever he did now, she wouldn't stop him, cuz she was here to fulfill her part of the deal. Poor poor poor couple. There trapped in such a delicate situation. Once again, destiny. 😍

Oh great, the maid has to leave too now. PREM! CONTROL! This munda is about to do something... I can feel it... I'm getting goosebumps. I dunno if its a good thing or a bad thing as of yet... My heart says its good, my brain says its bad. Weeeiiirdddd.. 😆😆 Anyways, I def. can't wait to see what happens next. Hey, its sunday tomorrow. You gonna continue.. pleaseee.. pretty pretty pleaseeee? You left us at a cliff hanger.. NO FAIRR!!!

*edit add*
Woaaa.. that was long.. 😲

kimz
Edited by kimmu - 17 years ago
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ah yesh the part is here!! i was waiting desperatly for this one, especially after ur advice 😆 lets start from the beginning [btw this will prolly be pretty long] 😆 the part where he's thinking "if it was an emergency and she is really strict about her values then she will never agree to it" in a way he said the complete truth, she values her parents' teachings completely with full heart, and would never betray herself like this if it hadn't been for her father...but for once even though its just a fic, im srry to say that im slightly disappointed in my prem, becuz even after going through what he did with sanjana...he is now believing every girl to be like that...that makes me pity him...becuz that is something only a person who gave up on living and trust would think... of course that amount is nothing to him...he's a tycoon for god's sake! but for poor heer, its so much, even this "small" amount rite now is practially millions for her...
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this part didz..."Closing her eyes in disbelief, she cursed herself for even thinking of coming to him for help......feeling like someone has just slapped her so hard on the face......as if it wasn't enough to see her father in pain, now this guy had to start too.......She wanted to scream her lungs out, let the cruel world know how she wanted to dig a grave for herself and hide there forever.......don't want to show her face to anyone of this unfair world ESPECIALLY him......how she wished she could reward him with a tight slap for having the courage to offer her the condition......" oh gosh my poor heer bacha!! 🤗 her emotions, were very touching di, u potrayed her fear, her anger, anxiety and everything so perfectly! a well round of applause to you 👏👏 oh how i wish she had slapped him, but then again its not the right time...she's broken rite now, tired and in need of care and appreciation, which i hope prem can shower her with...
i loved that line, "she gulped the pain that was about to erupt like a volcano" i felt so bad for heer rite then, her emotions are killing me didz and when she finally told him the truth, her reason behind selling herself to him, i could picture prem, his disgust at himself...thats when all my anger at him flew away and i felt bad for him too, we cant really blame prem for being the way he is rite now, i imagine anyone that was hurt like he was before would be like this rite now so ill take my words of anger and disgust back!
aah veera is sho sweet, she belives in prem to be innocent and kind no? i guess since prem hasn't shown "that" side to her, she would think that he'd help heer without a minute of thinking and the part where prem is kicking himself, you described his emotions perfectly 👏, he hurt his hand yet that pain went unfelt, so apt for this situation rite now 😳
aww prem is shooo shweet!! he's taking care of every thing for ballu, and that too without letting heer know, he's coming in as her "secret guardian angel" 😉😃
and aww prem and veera are so cute! hehe he's sho shweet, not lookin at her the wrong way becuz she's the youngest he is so sweet, ah i could see prem rolling his eyes while veera worked on bandaging his hand 😆 but i love her care and worry even when he's a complete meanie to her..gosh like kimz says now-a-days, your making this veera sound so nice and lovable, grr making me like her, but only here!! in the show i bet she'll stay that way till she learns her lesson! but still grr me blames you for making me start saying "cute, sweet" with veera in the same sentence! -crosses arms and pouts- grr again 😆
he was unable to meet her eyes, becuz he felt disgust at himself, aww poor premu jaan, he's learning from his mistakes 😃 that was really sweet, i saw a hint of an ashamed prem that was gonna clear his mistakes 👏 amazing di!
the heer's part in the hospital was just so sad, my heart felt for her di, she cant even cry huh? i was wishing that prem would appear out of nowhere and take her in his arms to show her his support 😳 if only...😆 aww her leaving for the mansion, to sacrifice herself, that line was like wow, showed everything rite then and there! 👏 mindblowing! 😉 for some reason i think that ballu will die, she's gonna move away becuz something will happen at prem's mansion...😲
haila!! rolling up his sleeve, loosening his tie and his sky bue shirt unbuttoned!! -faints- ☺️ you are trying to kill us prem-lovers!! but gosh damn him like that.....-cant breathe- -faints again- 😍 oh gosh making me fall even more for this guy! -shakes head and mutters to self-
oh my goodness!!! heer is wearing a sari!!! -wakes up from the last faint- haila!! thank you soo much for this treat!! 😳😃 i bet she looks gorgeous, ahh her in a sari and prem in a blue shirt....shoooo chute!!!! 😆 aww prem is feeling something in his heart...wonder what it could be? 😉😆 but his guilt, anger at himself, i hope leaves soon, becuz i cant see him bashing himself anymore! 😒😳
aww heer is worrying like a wifey for him, soo shweet!!! 😃 ah the way prem was feeling at seeing her di was just mindblowing, i imagine him clenching his hand tightly with his eyes closed, wishing for her to leave before he lost control and made her his...okay am getting ahead of myself 😆 but still his emotions right there were perfect for the situation, the guilt and anger at himself, but the yearning to hold her close to him...he's attracted to her, so he doesnt wanna hurt her, but i guess he still ends up no? but i have faith in prem to heal that pain thats hiding in heer's heart 😃
aww prem is such a sweetheart, he's nice to mrs. b, and what mrs. b says abt prem will make heer think na, and then i imagine he will prolly have the guilt eat away at him and finally he'll get the guts to apologize but...nah i think ill keep this to myself and see if im right 😆
it was a really long part di, and i appericate you working so hard on it!! thank you sooooo much for this part, and this amazing and beautful story...
ah i think my comment is pretty long enough...srry, i just kept on rambling na? 😆
i loved this part, and i get why u said to pay attention di, i think i understood his emotions, it was very clear to me what he felt, you described it perfectly! 👏😳
now i really really cnt wait for the next part!!
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rinku
Edited by ~Rinki~ - 17 years ago

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