FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Blackmail
Part 1 to Part 35 (last) on Page 133
Shot 1: Pg 1
Shot 2: Pg 5
Shot 3: Pg 8
Shot 4: Pg 11
Shot 5: Pg 18
Shot 6: Pg 25
Shot 7: Pg 28
Shot 8: Pg 31
Shot 9: Pg 35
Shot 10: Pg 39
Shot 11: Pg 43
Shot 12: Pg 47
Shot 13: Pg 51
Shot 14: Pg 54
Shot 15: Pg 57
Shot 16: Pg 60
Shot 17: Pg 63
Shot 18: Pg 68
Shot 19: Pg 71
Shot 20: Pg 74
Shot 21: Pg 78
Shot 22: Pg 81
Shot 23: Pg 84
Shot 24: Pg 87
Shot 25: Pg 91
Shot 26: Pg 96
Shot 27: Pg 98
Shot 28: Pg 103
Shot 29: Pg 105
Shot 30: Pg 111
Shot 31: Pg 117
Shot 32: Pg 119
Shot 33: Pg 123
Shot 34: Pg 126
Shot 35 (LAST): Pg 129
Shot #1
Taking a step back in extreme anxiety, the helpless secretary looked down at the scattered papers all over the floor that her boss has thrown out of frustration.......closing her eyes Veera named all the Gods to save her from this situation, especially from her boss.......'Oh God!!! I promise, in fact I swear....I will never ever doze off during my duty....just save me this last time....i beg you please!!!'.......a sudden noise brought her out of the imploration as she looked back at her boss, who just stood up banging on his luxurious office table, all ready to kill his good for nothing secretary for being careless......."Listen Veera......one more time you give me that crap, I swear you will find yourself dozing off for the rest of your life.......do you get that??....." clenching his teeth while balled up his fists tight to control his anger, Prem warned the poor girl, in front of him, making her fear for her life.......
"I am giving you one last chance.......GO AND FIND HER ADDRESS BY HOOK OR CROOK.......and that too IN 24 HOURS......for the last 2 years I have been ignoring all your stupid excuses but NOT ANYMORE........all I want is her address....and a correct one.......otherwise you know very well what's coming on your way.......did I make myself clear Ms. Kapoor?" throwing a serious look at the person, Prem ordered her.......nodding her head in affirmative manner, Veera obeyed her boss before leaving the room........
As soon as the secretary left, Prem ran the fingers through his thick hair, trying to calm himself from being stressed out when his eyes fell on the photo frame in front of him on the table......the picture was taken at one of his business parties, the first time his eyes fell on her elegant figure, instantly reserved her for himself only.......gently picking up the frame, he touched the innocent face over the glass with his fingers as if trying to feel her......her beautiful eyes, her red blushed cheeks....and........not to mention, his lips still have that taste of those luscious parted lips.......
"I know I was wrong.....I am sorry......I swear that night I had no such intention to hurt you......I didn't know what came over me all of a sudden.......that night for the first time my heart felt something for you that I never felt for anybody in my life....that night was the most beautiful night of my life........as I got to feel you......may be it's called love.......even if it doesn't, I really don't give a damn.......all I want is YOU....and ONLY YOU....you can't just throw me out of your life and decide to haunt me with your memories.......if you think you can forget me and lead a peaceful life in your own little paradise then you are totally mistaken honey......no matter what, I won't let anyone touch you after me.......only I have the right to touch you......so mark my words that I will get you back in my life........that's a promise from me, Mr. Prem Juneja, to you, Ms. Heer Mann!!!"......smiling at her photo, Prem carefully placed the frame back at the corner of his table.......making sure he doesn't hurt her even in the picture.....
Sitting on her chair, Veera immediately turned on the AC to cool herself......."this guy surely needs some lessons on controlling his anger as well as manners to talk to women.."....then contradicting herself she thought "...well can't even blame him though.......who would teach him anyway???.......he has got no one in his life EXCEPT his "bossy ego"......"......holding her head with her hands Veera howled "..Oh!! Heer dear!!!.....where are you yaar???.......you made my life miserable by leaving this job.......what did you do to Mr. Prem Juneja that he is after you like a hungry beast??.......hope he better goes easy on you......" all of a sudden feeling concerned for the girl whom she considered as her sister......thinking of her sister like colleague, Veera recollected the last conversation with her over the phone.......she still remember her painful broken tone as Heer sobbed uncontrollably.......Veera felt her inconsolable emotions when she said those last few words, "I have lost everything Veera.....you take care....."
hey friends......hope you all are doing fine.......this new storyline has just popped up in my mind so thought of giving it a shot........every shot will be as same length as this one....so don't kill me coz this is the most i cud do for you guys......i didn't want to wait for the next summer to write it as i have this bad memory so don't wanna take any risk......i don't know when i will be able to write the next shot......may be next weekend..........till then take care and feel free to criticize...
luv rehana
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
awww ur bak!!!
hehe yesh i love this one already!!
........prem was a playa??
ooh me is even more interested!!
cnt wait to read it di!
take ur time!
rinkz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

awww ur bak!!!
hehe yesh i love this one already!!
........prem was a playa??
ooh me is even more interested!!
cnt wait to read it di!
take ur time!
rinkz

awww thanks for liking it hon😳........🤗
luv
rehana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tania86

awww thanks for liking it hon😳........🤗
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rehana


i was bound to...after all u wrote it 😉😆
rinkz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Your backkkkkkkkk!!! With another intriguing FF, your first parts always come off with a BANG! Ahh your really good at inciting readers. [I used big wordies... tehehe]

*edited*

The first thing that came to my mind was, YESH! Veera's getting scolded by our very own Prem. And i could totally imagine it. [Maybe cuz I have been imagining it for the last few weeks.] I mean I want that girl beaten balck and blue, grr.. i hate her so much. I hope she dies somewhere.. tehehe..

I'm so glad she's not a rich brat though, she's still lazy. She's a shame in all categories. When she was rich she was putting rich people down by her bratty attitude, and now she's middle class, right? and she's bringing them down with her laziness. This girl will never learn will she.

Like i said before, your fics are VERY intriguing. The title itself is very intriguing. I mean 'blackmai'... Where's that going to come in from? Aaah do I want to try and predict? Prem blackmailing Heer, so far I think thats what it is. But you could come up with anything, your really creative like that. I like the situation Prem's in right now. He's after Heer like a... hungry beast, as Veera had said. But i like it. ☺️ I like possessive guys, show's how much they love.

I have a few things figured out, Heer used to work for Prem? And Prem got out of control one day and kissed her, and she left, and Prem's hearstbroken? Am I right? Well whatever, this is why i like your fics. You keep us in loads of suspense. Veera's nice side is kind of creeping me out though. 😆 But I'm very confused about Veera and Heer's relationship. And, Heer's lost everything. So wait, Veera already knew where Heer was. Aaah i can't wait till the next part. You always leave me desperate to read more. Cheattteerrr.. << Don't know where that comes in, but when i don't get what i want i call the other person a cheater. 😆😆

Now go and continue soon. 😃
Edited by kimmu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ur back with another ff i am so happy
very very intersting nice
can't wait

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

Your backkkkkkkkk!!! With another intriguing FF, your first parts always come off with a BANG! Ahh your really good at inciting readers. [I used big wordies... tehehe]awww always wait for your feedback😳

*edited*

The first thing that came to my mind was, YESH! Veera's getting scolded by our very own Prem. And i could totally imagine it. [Maybe cuz I have been imagining it for the last few weeks.] I mean I want that girl beaten balck and blue, grr.. i hate her so much. I hope she dies somewhere.. tehehe..

I'm so glad she's not a rich brat though, she's still lazy. She's a shame in all categories. When she was rich she was putting rich people down by her bratty attitude, and now she's middle class, right? and she's bringing them down with her laziness. This girl will never learn will she. unfortunately or fortunately you would love her in this package😛

Like i said before, your fics are VERY intriguing. The title itself is very intriguing. I mean 'blackmai'... Where's that going to come in from? Aaah do I want to try and predict? Prem blackmailing Heer, so far I think thats what it is. But you could come up with anything, your really creative like that. I like the situation Prem's in right now. He's after Heer like a... hungry beast, as Veera had said. But i like it. ☺️ I like possessive guys, show's how much they love. the most passionate and desparate prem ever.......this prem gets everything he wants in his own way😉......i love this prem😳

I have a few things figured out, Heer used to work for Prem? rite......And Prem got out of control one day and kissed her, and she left, and Prem's hearstbroken? Am I right? WRONG.......la la la la......surprise.....lets keep it a surprise hon😉.... Well whatever, this is why i like your fics. You keep us in loads of suspense. Veera's nice side is kind of creeping me out though. 😆 But I'm very confused about Veera and Heer's relationship. they were colleagues.......but were more like sisters......And, Heer's lost everything. So wait, Veera already knew where Heer was. i think i answered it already Aaah i can't wait till the next part. You always leave me desperate to read more. Cheattteerrr.. << Don't know where that comes in, but when i don't get what i want i call the other person a cheater. 😆😆cheaters?????🤣🤣🤣

🤣

Now go and continue soon. 😃aww u will have to wait till next weekend hon.....😳

luv rehana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

ur back with another ff i am so happy
very very intersting nice
can't wait

awww thanks dear🤗
luv
rehana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*jumping up and down * YIPEEEEEEE YIPEEEEE....
Ahem sorry acting my age now... wooow Rehana.... im sooo glad to see you back with a new fresh FF... i haven't chatted to you in a long time hun... where were you!!!
Do you like aggressive man or shall i say aggressive Prem...loool he seems soo aggressive ( i know i said aggressive 3 times... now 4 times can't think of any other words rights now, i have no idea why)... I surely love Prem like this... shows power and love that he feels for Heer...

The title makes this story all the more interesting, Blackmail... what is going on???? Prem kissed Heer (when/how/why/where??) and Heer has done the runner and told Veera that she has lost everything... hmmm hun you surely have grabbed my full 100% attention for this FF...

Originally posted by: tania86

what did you do to Mr. Prem Juneja that he is after you like a hungry beast??...

🤣🤣 now i had to laugh at that part... Hungry beast... Prem sounds better and better 🤣.... first time ever i felt sorry for Veera, she was getting screamed at... very very enjoyable yet terrifying... Veera not Prem's sister, i love it already!!!

Edited by salma_786786 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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UR BACKKKKK!!! NEED I NEED TO SAY HOW AWESOME IT WAS??? 😊keep writing!

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