FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 25

Originally posted by: ranrags

wow..such a neat update..it was really good..finally he knows she is NOT that type of girl..finally!!..whew..too good dear..the way u've shown her emotions and his in reciprocation(I hope I got it right) it..everything went well together..now looking forward tot he next update!!

Originally posted by: kimmu

oh yea first

*edited*

Okay i have to do this... HAHA RINKI BEAT YOU!!.. 🥳You too shabz.. muahahahaaaaa!!! Oh and another thing, daaang di, that was a loong part!! Not that i'm complaining, keep it coming. 😃 Now lets get on with my comment. 🤓

😆.......u gals **shaking head**

I could totally imagine it all in my head, Prem trying to keep cool, thinking Heer was.. err.. bad. I don't even want to put that word and Heer in the same sentence, they miles apart. And thats why I love Heer. I loved how you described Prem's emotions. Like somewhere he was hurt that Heer was like the other girls, somewhere he didn't want her to be like the others. He had himself prepared before he could hurt himself again, but he still couldn't help but feel crushed. He still could help but feel his faith being broken. Am I right?

perfectoo!!!!.....100 on 10😃......isn't he the sweetest casanova????😳

I felt really bad for Heer, at first I thought she wouldn't give in, and that would make Prem not think of Heer as the other girls. I could totally feel what she was going through, that helplessness. Is this were the blackmail thing comes in, or is there moree? 😈 Anyways, i would've definetly slapped Prem...... No matter how cute or cool or hot.. or smexy... or how beautiful his eyes are.. or that jawline... or his body... or those strong hands... or his deep smothered voice... *cough* wait was i talking about? right.. err.. yea umm.. No its a good thing she didn't slap him... I would never do that. 😍 I hate Prem. 😆 If she slapped him, then Prem would've never gone through that realization phase, and he would've never felt guilty (for the first time?) for his actions. And I simply LOVED that. 🤗 Proves that he too is a good guy.

🤣.......can't help ourselves......can we😉😳

Oh great... more Veera liking for me to do.. *sigh* I hate doing it, but i can't help but do it. She's so freaking sweet in here, anyone would fall in love with her sweetness. I loved how she assured Heer, even though she didn't know what went on that room. She trusted her boss, i like the realtionship you showed there too. The realtionship of the faint trust they have between eachother. Ahh, I simply ADORE this Veera.

awwwww........thanks dear😊

This part had to be ONE of the highlights. Notice how I say ONE of the highlights. ☺️ I think you know the other one.. ☺️☺️☺️ Ahem.. ahem.. getting on to the highlight I was supposed to say, but got carried away. Prem's guilt, anger, confusion.. and i don't know what else emotions where in there... But oh god, it was amazing. Especially the way you wrote it! He couldn't feel the pain in his hand, because the pain in his heart was stronger. The pain he gave Heer hurt him more... Thats like my Prem. Uff.. I'm falling in love all over... 😍

ahem ahem ahem **looking away**☺️, i couldn't help but make him like that😍😍😍

Back to Heer... I thought that the drink falling on her skirt pointed towards something. A lesson perhaps. Once you get stained, you can't take it out. Where you by any chance going for that? Anyways I love you for putting Heer in a sari. 🤗

didn't u just answer your own question???!!!!😛........that was to put her in a sari😍☺️

Great, Veera adoring cums in AGAIN! WHY? WHY? WHYY? Why are you doing this to me? The girl i'm supposed to hate with the deepest depths of my heart... I can't help but like her. She's a much better sister than the Veera in Kis Desh could ever be. I bet she would never help her brother... i bet she would go 'ewww.. blood.. i'm not touching that'.. grrr.. makes me angry at THAT veera. But this veera is awesome. FInally I can imagine her here too.. Before she was a shady figure in my imagination, but now, she's crystal clear. So once again hat's off to you for that. 👏 Do I have to mention how much I love Prem-Veera's relationship again? I mean this time you told us the reason to his outbursts on Veera... and Veera being really sweet forgiving him all the time. *sigh*.. Made me adore Veera AGAIN!

awwwww i wanted to give her the title of a 'kitten' 😉so i portrayed her character such way😊.......

I have a feeling Heer's father isn't going to make it. I feel so bad right now. I'm seriously loving ALL your characters in here. I mean first it was Prem, then it was Veera, now Heer. I have to give a bhaashan on how I love Heer's morals. And I guess thats what struck Prem too, she decided that if he trusted her then she should complete her part of the deal too. No matter how much she didn't want too. Heer's awesome. All the characters in your fic are awesome in there own way. Prem, Heer, Preet, Ash, and Veera. Di, seriously, YOU should've written Kis Desh. *sigh* I can already imagine.. *dreamland*

awwwww how i wish ekta hired me as her creative........glad that i could present the characters that i imagined😳.......love you for the appreciation hon🤗

OMG! You wanna kill me? Dark light falling on Prem's face... Prem in sky blue shirt, unbuttoned, rolled up sleeves.. ☺️☺️☺️ He drinks too... 😲 Ok, i'm ok with that. Its really messed up, i hate guys that smoke, but drinking is okay.. Why? Cuz they look hot when they drink. I know, lame excuse.. cuz i can't help it. 🤣

🤣....same here, that's the only reason i made him drink☺️☺️☺️ **fanning myself with inorganic lab notebook**

Second highlight of the epi. ☺️
Prem see's Heer, and his heard skips a beat. Sky blue unbuttoned, rolled up sleeves shirt meets bheegi hui yellow sari... Beautiful combination. Once again loved how you wrote it all down. His desperation, love, waiting, lust... everything. It was shown so beautifully. So he couldn't hurt her, he wanted to stay away from her. He knew that whatever he did now, she wouldn't stop him, cuz she was here to fulfill her part of the deal. Poor poor poor couple. There trapped in such a delicate situation. Once again, destiny. 😍

.☺️......**sighhhhhhh**.....your 'day dreaming destiny' is killing me yaar🤣

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Oh great, the maid has to leave too now. PREM! CONTROL! This munda is about to do something... I can feel it... I'm getting goosebumps. I dunno if its a good thing or a bad thing as of yet... My heart says its good, my brain says its bad. Weeeiiirdddd.. 😆😆 Anyways, I def. can't wait to see what happens next. Hey, its sunday tomorrow. You gonna continue.. pleaseee.. pretty pretty pleaseeee? You left us at a cliff hanger.. NO FAIRR!!!

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🤣......i m unable to control this munda's passion man.......so will continue it tomorrow inshallah😳😳

*edit add*
Woaaa.. that was long.. 😲

and i absolutely loved it cutie🤗.........you are one of my best readers whom i absolutely adore......your sweet feedback always been an inspiration for me.......love you hon😊

kimz

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

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ah yesh the part is here!! i was waiting desperatly for this one, especially after ur advice 😆

....hehehehe......i always fulfill my readers UNLIKE ekta😉.....ain't i??😛

lets start from the beginning [btw this will prolly be pretty long] 😆

the part where he's thinking "if it was an emergency and she is really strict about her values then she will never agree to it" in a way he said the complete truth, she values her parents' teachings completely with full heart, and would never betray herself like this if it hadn't been for her father...but for once even though its just a fic, im srry to say that im slightly disappointed in my prem, becuz even after going through what he did with sanjana...he is now believing every girl to be like that...that makes me pity him...becuz that is something only a person who gave up on living and trust would think...

did i mislead my readers???😕......then lemme clear it out hon, Prem DID nothing with sanjana, he tought her a lesson by influencing her own plan, which was to spend a night together.........hope it clears up the confusion😳

of course that amount is nothing to him...he's a tycoon for god's sake! but for poor heer, its so much, even this "small" amount rite now is practially millions for her...

loved this part didz..."Closing her eyes in disbelief, she cursed herself for even thinking of coming to him for help......feeling like someone has just slapped her so hard on the face......as if it wasn't enough to see her father in pain, now this guy had to start too.......She wanted to scream her lungs out, let the cruel world know how she wanted to dig a grave for herself and hide there forever.......don't want to show her face to anyone of this unfair world ESPECIALLY him......how she wished she could reward him with a tight slap for having the courage to offer her the condition......" oh gosh my poor heer bacha!! 🤗 her emotions, were very touching di, u potrayed her fear, her anger, anxiety and everything so perfectly! a well round of applause to you 👏👏 oh how i wish she had slapped him, but then again its not the right time...she's broken rite now, tired and in need of care and appreciation, which i hope prem can shower her with...

awww thanks shona......glad i met the expections😃

i loved that line, "she gulped the pain that was about to erupt like a volcano" i felt so bad for heer rite then, her emotions are killing me didz and when she finally told him the truth, her reason behind selling herself to him, i could picture prem, his disgust at himself...thats when all my anger at him flew away and i felt bad for him too, we cant really blame prem for being the way he is rite now, i imagine anyone that was hurt like he was before would be like this rite now so ill take my words of anger and disgust back!

yesshhhhh i knew you wud take ur words back.....love you honnnnnnnn🤗

aah veera is sho sweet, she belives in prem to be innocent and kind no? i guess since prem hasn't shown "that" side to her, she would think that he'd help heer without a minute of thinking and the part where prem is kicking himself, you described his emotions perfectly 👏, he hurt his hand yet that pain went unfelt, so apt for this situation rite now 😳

awwwww.......thanks😃

aww prem is shooo shweet!! he's taking care of every thing for ballu, and that too without letting heer know, he's coming in as her "secret guardian angel" 😉😃

and aww prem and veera are so cute! hehe he's sho shweet, not lookin at her the wrong way becuz she's the youngest he is so sweet, ah i could see prem rolling his eyes while veera worked on bandaging his hand 😆 but i love her care and worry even when he's a complete meanie to her..gosh like kimz says now-a-days, your making this veera sound so nice and lovable, grr making me like her, but only here!! in the show i bet she'll stay that way till she learns her lesson! but still grr me blames you for making me start saying "cute, sweet" with veera in the same sentence! -crosses arms and pouts- grr again 😆

muahahahahhah😈.......well i believe that the sweetest relationship in the world is between a brother and sister........that's why i always try to show my feelings on this particular relationship from different aspects, which in this case are ash-prem, veera-prem......😃

he was unable to meet her eyes, becuz he felt disgust at himself, aww poor premu jaan, he's learning from his mistakes 😃 that was really sweet, i saw a hint of an ashamed prem that was gonna clear his mistakes 👏 amazing di!

love you for the appreciation dear😊

the heer's part in the hospital was just so sad, my heart felt for her di, she cant even cry huh? i was wishing that prem would appear out of nowhere and take her in his arms to show her his support 😳 if only...😆 aww her leaving for the mansion, to sacrifice herself, that line was like wow, showed everything rite then and there! 👏 mindblowing! 😉 for some reason i think that ballu will die, she's gonna move away becuz something will happen at prem's mansion...😲

lemme blush at this point☺️.....🤣

haila!! rolling up his sleeve, loosening his tie and his sky bue shirt unbuttoned!! -faints- ☺️ you are trying to kill us prem-lovers!! but gosh damn him like that.....-cant breathe- -faints again- 😍 oh gosh making me fall even more for this guy! -shakes head and mutters to self-

**pouring a bucket of cold water on you**.......wake up i haven't written the next part yet☺️

oh my goodness!!! heer is wearing a sari!!! -wakes up from the last faint- haila!! thank you soo much for this treat!! 😳😃 i bet she looks gorgeous, ahh her in a sari and prem in a blue shirt....shoooo chute!!!! 😆 aww prem is feeling something in his heart...wonder what it could be? 😉😆 but his guilt, anger at himself, i hope leaves soon, becuz i cant see him bashing himself anymore! 😒😳

awwwww........neither can i bear it😳

aww heer is worrying like a wifey for him, soo shweet!!! 😃 ah the way prem was feeling at seeing her di was just mindblowing, i imagine him clenching his hand tightly with his eyes closed, wishing for her to leave before he lost control and made her his...okay am getting ahead of myself 😆

🤣....u gals r awesome🤣🤣🤣

but still his emotions right there were perfect for the situation, the guilt and anger at himself, but the yearning to hold her close to him...he's attracted to her, so he doesnt wanna hurt her, but i guess he still ends up no? but i have faith in prem to heal that pain thats hiding in heer's heart 😃

he will hon......patience😃

aww prem is such a sweetheart, he's nice to mrs. b, and what mrs. b says abt prem will make heer think na, and then i imagine he will prolly have the guilt eat away at him and finally he'll get the guts to apologize but...nah i think ill keep this to myself and see if im right 😆

i better keep my mouth shut at this point😳

it was a really long part di, and i appericate you working so hard on it!! thank you sooooo much for this part, and this amazing and beautful story...

ah i think my comment is pretty long enough...srry, i just kept on rambling na? 😆

i loved this part, and i get why u said to pay attention di, i think i understood his emotions, it was very clear to me what he felt, you described it perfectly! 👏😳

now i really really cnt wait for the next part!!

even i loved the long comment😳.......glad that i cud entertain u guys......you guys are an awesome inspiration for me......god bless u all🤗.......**muah**

lub

rinku

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
loved it
finally prem knows
fantastic dear

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

^^ first di before i reply to ur reply, i didn't mean that he did something with sanjana thats just eww lolz i meant that him dealing with her...ya kno?

Originally posted by: tania86

awww i mite have confused myself then........arghhhh nowadays i m becoming a confused atma😭.......influenced by my son prem😉......neways thanks for the clarification sweetie😊

luv

rehana