FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 28

Originally posted by: kimmu

Ooh i'll reserve anyways.. tehehe..

*edited*

This was a treat to read... I loved every bit of it... Now lets continue on with the details. 🤓

Ms. B is so nice... There really aren't maids like that anymore.. *stares at the girl sleeping on my bed* Poro Heer, she's lost her mother too. And when she felt the motherly affection from Ms. B, Ms. B left too. *sigh* If only she could stay to comfort her... Wait nooo.. I take that back. ☺️

you better take that back.......🤣........n wut was that on ur bed???? **raised an eyebrow**

On one side there's a broken, lonely Heer, and on the other side is a guilty and.. err hurt? Prem. I loved how you put in the 'dard ka rishta' in here. Oh god, that is seriously what i love about this couple. I love how they know when the other is in trouble...

awwww i love that too😳

I loved how you kept changing POV, it gave us detail on what the two were thinking about at that moment, and made much more nicer to read, cuz you could imagine what both of the people were thinking. I loved how you described Heer's pain, and her longing for a shoulder. And then they both get there angels, Prem is Heer's angel, and Heer is Prems.. *sigh* Perfect, na?

indeed perfect😳........thanks for appreciating my writing skill hon.......really ecouraging hon😊

I loved how he comforted her, and what I loved even more was that what they did wasn't out of lust, but pure love for eachother. That moment of affection, that one glance in eachothers eyes, they knew how much they loved eachother. And what was even better was, how you described... it was brilliant... 👏

my pleasure😃

Oh noooo... Misunderstanding, she thinks Prem just left her, and he thinks she left him. But he wouldn't let her leave him, will she? I'm just confused about one thing, so has he been searching for her for 2 years, or did it take him a while to clear the misunderstanding? Other than that, poor Heer. She lost her father too... I had a feeling this would happen. Arghhh.. why didn't she run back to Prem... stupid girl with to many good morals.

just to clear YOUR misunderstanding......there is still some flashbacks coming up😉......so chill 😛

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGGGGG!!!!... YESHHHHHHHH!!! Heer has a lil kid, what's his name, is it Arjun? ☺️ I'm sorry, i'm in love with Arjun, the lil kid from shabz fic.. tehehe.. So whenever i think of a cute kid i think of him. I loved how you put in his lil innocent thoughts... Awwwwww... I wonder how Prem's going to react to the kid, hope he doesn't think any thing wrong and run away before Heer can see him.

awwww it's not arjun hon😳........i have another name in my mind.....😉

I'm sooo soo sooo curious now... AHH! Can't wait for the next weekendd!!.. 😃

same here........😃.....however advance EID MUBARAK dear.......i have uni from 9-5 as i have 6 hours inorganic lab that day so won't be able to wish you on Eid😭.......so here it goes🤗......

kimz

Originally posted by: angel82

Rehana, loved it.....Me was waiting for your update past midnite...crazy na?

even i was waiting for your feedback😳.........n i already know that I M CRAZY🤣

Heer at the mansion, witnessing a completely different Prem...The kind of Prem she likes to see...😊

But poor thing was in such a miserable state...her deep pain and sorrow...her fear for her father and fear of loneliness..her praying for an angel...that was a wonderful part...

awwww.....going through mixed feelings.......and it kills ppl when they go through different horrible situations at the same time.........like me

Premu trying his best to calm himself but how could he when his heart could feel her pain...

''how he wished he could fight with those every single drop of tears coming out of her heart........how he wished he could hold her into his arms forever, protect her from all the black evils........how he wished he could shower her with happiness and LOVE.......he didn't know whatever he was feeling could refer to love or not.......but all he wanted to do was take her into his arms and love her........love her until all the pains apologize to her for even thinking of hurting her......love her till she smiles........love her till she forgets all about her sorrows......''

You have beautifully brought out his feelings..

thanks😊

Loved the way he tried to comfort her and her feeling the warmth in his arms...

Premu had no intentions to do anything , he's such a good guy😉 but what to do , all of a sudden he was sooo much in love that he couldnt control loving her...But since his feelings were genuine, he wasnt wrong...😳

we are damn good at justifying him.......aren't we???!!!😳🤣......but yesh i do agree with you😊

She was lost in his love and concern that she saw in his eyes but later his absence killed her..😭

She misunderstood him😭 she thought he just used her... 😭

awww i know........but if she didn't misunderstand him then how wud he blackmail her???......here comes the original "blackmailing" part😉

Oh so sweet of him, he was ready to marry her or atleast propose to her right then and there...

Oh felt bad for Prem, he just missed her and felt bad for Heer ...poor thing lost her father and him too....they both are soo lonely, found each other but lost each other...

'' that was just an attempt to get rid of the emotions that he was feeling for her at that time......her presence kills him inside to be with her.......to look at her.......to be lost in her......never in his life, he felt like this for someone BUT her.......''

For him it was love at first sight...But i have a feeling even she was attracted to him in the

first meeting...

she was😳......good for you to figure that out👏.......but his tactics made her call him a 'perfect jerk'😆😆

Oh his nervousness in meeting her again was sooooo sweet...

😳

Each and every sentence you wrote to describe the baby and its little movements were simply awesome...very sweet and lovely...You had done it earlier in your other FF and now here too...

you make the whole thing sound extremely adorable..🤗

awwww🤗........i love to describe kids' activities........they are just too adorable to resist😃

I told you ,while eagerly waiting for your updates, I try figuring out what would be next..I had a feeling if the ONS happens then the baby part might come up...loved the idea...👍🏼 Its become more and more interesting.....and adds to cuteness and depth of the relation...And after reading your previous FF , I can say you are very good at it...

all my pleasure to treat you guys😃.........i always love your feedback😊

Very eager to read the next part...to know Prem's reactions, Heer's reactions , what will they say to each other...But me will wait till next friday for your update...

luv,

Angie 🤗

Originally posted by: tania86

you better take that back.......🤣........n wut was that on ur bed???? **raised an eyebrow**

Don't worry, i did, how couldn't i? ☺️ oyeee.. don't be raising your eyebrow at me.. its only my maid being lazy and not cleaning up... kambakht kahin ki... *sigh*

just to clear YOUR misunderstanding......there is still some flashbacks coming up😉......so chill 😛

Hehe, why is that i'm the only one with misunderstandings? 🤣 Ooh awesome, err... so we get to know why he ran after Heer again? Woohoooo.. can't wait. 😃

awwww it's not arjun hon😳........i have another name in my mind.....😉

I'll bet you can come up with something better... wonder if its symbolic... 🤔

same here........😃.....however advance EID MUBARAK dear.......i have uni from 9-5 as i have 6 hours inorganic lab that day so won't be able to wish you on Eid😭.......so here it goes🤗......

Awww... well i'm probabaly not gonna be here on Eid too, soo.. Eid Mubarak to you too.. 🤗 I hope it goes great for you... I know mines gonna be hectic.. *sigh* Partiess...

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

-reserved-

ill come back and edit it later di, my computer is acting up...grr!!!

but i read it and it was just beautiful!! perfect!!

ill write more laterz!

rinku