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angel82 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
~Rinki~ thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
hellowz...hehe
kay lets get to wrk! -grins-
kay me loving veera-heer friendship, its shooo shweet!!!! -pinches their cheeks- 😆
ahh heer blushes,,,again 😆😆 sho cute!!
ahhh prem ☺️ hot image again...man he's got attitude eh? but i loved heer talking bak to him! 👏 aahh this will make the next parts even more fun to read!! 😉😃
ahh so sanjana ki bachi played poor premu!! i knew it!! ahh am gnna kill her if she pops up again 😈😉, oh no!! ballu is in trouble...oh gosh no!! now she's gnna ask him for money just like the S witch did ahh i hated when he was chatting with preet and he was slightly comparing heer to sanjana...btw lved preet-prem like always 😆
i hope that he doesn't make a fool out of himself again, saying something to her and finding out how wrong he was, that'll hurt his ego but it will also hurt heer that he thinks like this of her 😲
ahh it was an awesome part!!
i loved reading it, like always 👏
cant wait for the nxt part, and wat premu babu says to heer
lub
rinku
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

hellowz...hehe

kay lets get to wrk! -grins-
kay me loving veera-heer friendship, its shooo shweet!!!! -pinches their cheeks- 😆
ahh heer blushes,,,again 😆😆 sho cute!!
ahhh prem ☺️ hot image again...man he's got attitude eh? but i loved heer talking bak to him! 👏 aahh this will make the next parts even more fun to read!! 😉😃
ahh so sanjana ki bachi played poor premu!! i knew it!! ahh am gnna kill her if she pops up again 😈😉,
that's wut i was telling kimmu that she can't make me write a scene on prem and sanjana😛😉....so sanju is out before getting in 😉😆
oh no!! ballu is in trouble...oh gosh no!! now she's gnna ask him for money just like the S witch did ahh i hated when he was chatting with preet and he was slightly comparing heer to sanjana...btw lved preet-prem like always 😆
heheheehheeheh........😆😆😆........
i hope that he doesn't make a fool out of himself again, saying something to her and finding out how wrong he was, that'll hurt his ego but it will also hurt heer that he thinks like this of her 😲
well in this case, i wud suggest "read prem's part in the next shot with extra 200% attention, coz he will go through mix of emotions which might confuse you guys BUT I promise to try my best to make it simpler......
ahh it was an awesome part!!
i loved reading it, like always 👏
cant wait for the nxt part, and wat premu babu says to heer
lub
rinku

awwww thanku shona.......loved ur appreciation.....😊
luv
rehana
Edited by tania86 - 17 years ago
-Liana- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏a huge round of plaudes to Heer for heer guts&Her spirit &know hats off to u Di for writting something like this&now it ll b fun to read thier challanges,Heer challanges Prem???i must say only she can do this😆
Oh this Sanjana???Yaha bhi a gai???😡but im happy tht u closed he chapter😉
Ohh!!feelng bad for Heer,She had to asked help frm Heer egoistic boss😭but wht ll he do???as our Prem cant b soooo rude☺️he ll help heer for sure&i hope he ll not compair Heer with others.
Preet!!So mature😲thts another surprising thing but it ll b interesting to imagine him(Mashallah)for great thougts👏
It was a superb part,i wonder how did u write it??😲as u r sooooooo depress,actually every1 is upset Moma!!Cant u stop ur Son Harshu to leave???😭😭😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
so u updated huh..
dat was a good part hon.
so now prem is gonna think dat heer is like sanjana huh
ab kya hoga??
i"l wait n watch😛
tanks 4 dat update
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Posted: 17 years ago
super update.love it yes arent we all upset about prem dying because now supposedly harshad conffirmed but then again when asked he said to ask the creatives so dont woory there hope. coming to your latest shot simply love the way heer answered back to prem and am so looking forwrd to the next shot. even when heer is genuinly is in need prem will misunderstand her.it is getting intersting.do update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
AWSUM AWSUM AWSUM.....very gud....i just loved heer self respect scene...the way she had a argue wid prem...just tooo gud....plz plz plz cont soooonnnn...i m dying to read....n the scene where prem n preet talk waz gudd too...i love ur ff...very nice awsum...fantastic...just gr8...no words left now...hope this tells u..👏

wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey gr8 update! 👍🏼its getting rlly intresting..loved the diologues.. lookin forward to next part!

Rue
Edited by ruexangel - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hello Di!
I just read all 7 shots in one go, well, I'd read the first a while back, but got sidetracked.. *sheepish smile* Got to say that I absolutely love the way you've written this! Unfortunately, am too sleepy to go into indepth detail at the moment, I'll come back tomorrow and edit this!
Glad to know that you'll continue writing even if this HC leaving business turns out to be true!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 17 years ago
@Lian: thanks for the feedback hon.........yes i am upset over this whole creepiness of BT......but i am trying my best to NOT to wreck my dedication towards something that i already started........BUT I can gurantee that it wud be my last fan-fiction of my life........oh dear!!!...how i wish i could stop my son from leaving.......but i m the helpless mother in the world😭😭😭
@ashpush: yes i did😊.......gald u liked it hon...
@Fijiana: lets just not talk abt his exit dear.........i can't tell u wut i feel abt it......i know i m being kiddish here but this is how i m hooked to this soap......arghhhh hate myself for even bothering to watch it in the first place.......neways loved ur comment sweetie......😊
luv
rehana

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