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Posted: 17 years ago

Shot 7

".......but to enjoy a glimpse of this luxurious life, you proudly prefer to be a one night stand ".....
Completely scandalized by his comment, she responded, "....if you think, I apologized to impress you and later on will provoke myself to be one of your so called one night stands, then lemme clear it out for you Mr. Prem Juneja........YOU are the ONLY person that I willNEVER ever fall for.......".....hiding his fury while tightly holding the glass in between his left palm, Prem smiled at her, "..don't be so overconfident sweetheart.....you never know when you may have to change your own color.."..unable to control his impulse, he gently removed the silky lock from her face that has fallen over her red face, blocking his view.......slapping back his hand, Heer warned him, "..don't you dare touch me......I am not one of those gits who can fall for your charms.......OR whom you can use for your own dirty satisfaction.......so you better keep your sticky fingers away from me....." before leaving the room, she turned back to give him one last advice "one more thing, if you believe that you can get whatever you want then here is an advice for you, STOP living with this misconception because you will never get what you want from me".......
Amazed by her challenge, he leaned against the table then slipping his right hand into his pocket, Prem grinned at her, ".....hmm!!!......thanks for the advice........" keeping his eyes on her he continued with a raised eyebrow, " but for your kind information, I DO get what I want.....just wait and watch....." accepting the challenge with a wink, he flashed his famous insolent smile.......feeling disgusted by the person in front of her, she left the cabin leaving an amused Prem......'...bad.....very bad Miss Mann......you have to take your words back hon.......and I will make sure that you can never get away from me....'
2 weeks later
"sorry Miss. you immediately have to deposit 150,000 Rs. otherwise we can't proceed with the operation.......you are very well aware of the policy here......you have to make your decision right now!!" confirmed Dr. Lal to a completely panicked Heer......."Dr. please do something......you know that we just moved to Mumbai for him, he is my family.......I will arrange the money as soon as possible.....I promise......but please save my baba......" almost begged the poor girl........knowing the girl for almost a month, he tried to console her for have faith in God, "We will try our best.......I will go talk to my seniors, till then you go arrange atleast some portion of it.......remember we don't have enough time...." saying that he left for his chamber leaving a hopeless girl crying for her father....
the one and only way to save her father is Mr. Prem Juneja.......eating up all her grudges against him, she decided to ask him for help as he was her last hope....
"she WHAT??!!!" craked up Preet out of shock.........keeping his concentration on his laptop, he smiled at his friend's sudden laugh while shaking his head as he already knew what Preet's reaction would be after hearing Heer and his latest heated conversation last week........"uwouw man.....someone actually gave YOU a daring lecture.......hats off to her....." noticing Prem's stern look, he immediately changed his tone, "umm.......I don't think she is that kinda girl, man......so you should just forget about it......."........now that was something he would never accept, HIS BELOVED EGO BEING CRASHED!!......"....that's exactly what you said in the case of Sanjana......and what did she do????.....she made this "cheapest plan in the history of cheapest plan" and that was to spend a night with me and get herself linked with the prosperous business tycoon......bit**!!.......but luckily her plan was doomed by me.....what did she think of herself??.......she thought she will play with me and I will just sit there like an audience to let her get away with it???......" reminded Prem.....
Then turning his gaze back to the laptop, he quietly confessed, "....well I admit this might not be the same case......but I have to let her know who she is dealing with........" composing himself before he gets carried away in front of his friend, who already noticed the sudden change in his voice decided to keep quiet at that moment, Prem smirked at Preet.......conscious of his look, Preet seriously asked, already feeling sorry for the girl, "...what are you going to do yaar??!!!.....again that 'one night stand' ???!!!.......you better not think about it.....she will never agree to it.......so cut it out!!!".......seeing his friend's pensive look, Prem confirmed, ".....chill yaar!!!.......I know this kinda girl......they just wait for a goddamn excuse.......then will come up to me for help......" observing his friend's face, he rolled his eyes while picking up the blue file from the desk, "....stop giving me that look......as if you don't know anything about it....remember sanjana's first approach to me??.......she had this sudden need of money for whatever that was.......anyway cut the crap......and by the way why are you being so tensed???......I am not gonna do anything with her, YOU KNOW IT VERY WELL......."
Their friendship was always in the mixture of fun, jealousy, fights, arguments, approval, sharings.......however, this was the only reason for which he RESPECTED his friend, even though he has got a pet name of casanova for flirting with girls.......but never ever he took advantage of any girl......and he knew Prem will never stoop so low to take any revenge....
Flipping through the pages, he continued, "....you see!!!! she is too sweet to be taken advantage of.......and this sweetness could be dangerous for her too.....so lets just say, I am teaching her a lesson so that she will be careful next time dealing with me...." winking at his best friend, both buddies shared a laugh......"well good luck with that then.....I gotta go now otherwise Mrs. Ashwarya will kill me for being late......" informing the person, Preet got up from his chair.... "man!! why are you so scared of her??!!"......."oyee!!!......I am not scared of her okay!!......I love her and I don't want to disappoint her for any reason..." justified Preet.......rolling his eyes, Prem giggled, "yeah....yeah!!!!......whatever...."......subsequently becoming serious he declared, "..I have no clue about your crappy 'love' but you better keep her happy otherwise, don't know about Ash but ME, the great PREM JUNEJA will definetely KILL YOU......".....warmed by his concerns, he strictly obeyed his friend, " DONE!!! BOSS!!!.....see ya!!" smiling at man Preet left the cabin......
Taking all the courage to have a talk with him, she nervously opened the door to enter his cabin when she noticed the back of his chair......turning his chair towards the large window, keeping his back towards the front door, as he didn't expect any visitors at that moment, Prem decided to do his work while enjoying the fresh air from the nature......reluctantly making her way to the front of his desk, she confessed, " Sorry to bother you Sir!!!......".......her sudden soothing voice broke his concentration from the file.......but to his bad luck, he failed to notice the pain in her voice.....
yesss.....it is still the worst day of my life after reading what harshu said about his exit from the show.....don't wanna go through it again😭....neways as i promised to my sweet readers, here is the next part.....😊
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rehana
Edited by tania86 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh, sweet part!
I love how she snapped back at Prem!
Looking forward to the next part!
Hope it all goes well for Heer's dad!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi there..very nice update dear..Prem challenged Heer..so now what's he gonna do??and poor Heer..feeling bad for her..u've shown Prem-Preet's friendship very neatly(I hope I got it right)..looking forward for the next part..

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Oh, sweet part!
I love how she snapped back at Prem!
Looking forward to the next part!
Hope it all goes well for Heer's dad!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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awwww thanks hon.......loved ur feedback.........always been an inspiration for my work😳
luv
rehana
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ranrags

Hi there..very nice update dear..Prem challenged Heer..so now what's he gonna do??and poor Heer..feeling bad for her..u've shown Prem-Preet's friendship very neatly(I hope I got it right)..looking forward for the next part..

awww thanks didz........yess u did.......i don't know but my brain has refused to function properly after reading all those "sad/creepy" articles abt harshu.......that's why trying to divert my attention towards writing the next part of it......this way i can forget abt all these saddy saddy articles😭........
love you for the wonderful comments di.....always appreciated😃
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rehana
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Posted: 17 years ago
Updated the last one... hehee... HEY! I heard that... I'll be back with the comment for this one. Promise i'll be today.. hehe..

*edited*

See told you I wouldn't be late today.. haha! Now you have to listen to my longety-long comment.

I'm loving Heer's self-respect, the way she back-fired at him, the way she snapped him. Loved it! The dialoges were brilliant, really nice job. 👏 I thought it was really messed up of Prem to just start at her in the first place, I mean all she said was a simple thanks. Ahhh, but i still love Prem, cuz we know his side. If he didn't have a side, then only god could stop me from saying all the things i would've. I'm a girl with loads of feminine ego. 😆😆 I hate how men find themselves to be better, I hate how men find woman to be worse than there shoes, I hate how woman have been treated. Okay i don't want to get into a woman speech. Hehe...

Oh good God. She challenged him? Worst thing to do when your working under him, then again, respect comes first. So hats off, she'd doing us proud. *sniff*.... I don't trust Prem, and his way of making Heer repent. Poor girl, her fathers in the hospital, the things she's doing to get him better. This is one reason I don't like 'those' hospitals. Why can't they put it as a loan on her, and she could slowly gather money and get it back to them! Then again, destiny. ☺️ Poor Heer, having to five up against Prem becuase of her father. I love Heer, seriously. The best always have to go through the worst.

Prem and Preet's friendship is awesome too. I love how you portray friends in this FF, there so true, and just plain awesome! Preet seem's like a more decent guy then Prem, which I'm sorry, I HAVE to laugh at. 🤣 I mean in Kis Desh Preets all 'badboy' and Prem's all 'Mama'sboy'. Lmaoo.. But this IS why i love you FF. I get to see a new side of Prem. Ooh and btw, I can totally see him acting to it too. I mean all of them, i can just see them!!

So Sanjana did the same things Heer's about to do? Oh god, not liking this at all. He's so going to think she's wrong. But it did make me curious, did Sanjana go through what Heer did too, or did she just fake it all? Probably fake then why else would she ditch him? I wonder what he did to Sanjana, It would be like a Flashback in a flashback. 😆😆

Okay so Prem has something good about him, he doesn't take girls for granted. Loving that. 😍 Oh also loving the love he has for his sister.... But totally loving the love he's going to have for Heer. ☺️ I want to know how. I'm so hooked, you don't even know. Please please please continue tomorrow, a treat for me. 😃

No no nooooooooo!! Heeeeeeeeeeeerr! I hope she asks for a loan or something, nothing that makes him think that she's like Sanjana. Heer's to awesome to be sanjana. Now I wanna know SO badly about there conversation. Continue sooon! 😃

kimz
Edited by kimmu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Rehana dear,
I was sooooooooooooooo looking forward to your update coz I knew that is the only thing that could cheer me up today...
loved the way Heer gave it back to Prem...She actually challenged him😕...Now that scares me...And He is determined not to let her go so easily..Cool....
Loved the Preet-Prem conversation....what I loved even more is that Prem has a feeling deep him that Heer is different from other girls...and what I loved the most is that he never takes advantage of any girls...
Well does that mean that he actually didnt have any ONS with any girl...
Sanjana here also...No probs...Poor Heer feel really bad for her...Me really scared hows she going to ask him for the money...Since she needs it immediately, hope she doesnt take any drastic steps which would have her compromise her self-rspect....I know you wont make her another Sanjana, and
i'm really looking forward to the next part...
Now do I sense a blackmail coming up? anyways very very eagerly waiting for your next part...This is soooooooooo interesting , so different and love the Prem and Heer in this...
Hope you update tomorrow also...For a while, dont think of the actual show and spoil your weekend...
Luv
Angie
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kimmu

FIRST!

*edited*

Okay first of all, I'm really sorry for editing like a day later, but yesterday was just.. bleh.. for me. But I'm back now, so get ready, get set, GOOOO!!

**hiding myself under my blanky **😳

I can just see Veera talking rapidly infront of Heer, except i see her chewing on some doritos. Hmmmmmmmm... I wonder who she reminds me of? 🤔 Oooh and GIMME HER COFFEE! I need coffee, i'm puposely not eating a lot to make my mom worried... muahahahah! I love attention... hehe..
awwww.......i used to love it but once i gotto know that it's not halal, I stopped eating it

Veera and Heer's convo was SO cute, there such cute friends. Ugh thanks alot rehana di, you've finally got me to start liking Veera... *sigh* I was determined to not like her, EVER... but thanks to your awesome writing, I'm liking her.. (And yea, that was a compliment) Okay wait, lemme take that back, I think i'm starting to LOVE her! I mean her attitude, its so ermm... attitude-ish, but i'm loving it. Especially when she said 'I love myself'. I'm supposed to hate her when she says that, but I loved it!!! And aahhh! Heer's words back-fire on her, and SHE BLUSHES! So somewhere, where she doesn't know, she likes him too. How wonderful? 😃😃
YESSS!!!!.....**jumped in the air😳**.......finally i am successful.......wohooo........

Loved how Veer described the pair. Opposites Attract. Hot and Handsome, Sweet and Sexy. There made for eachother. 😍 You will continue writing FF's after hc leaves, write? Please, pretty please? *goes on knee's and begs*... You'll be like one of the reason's i'll hang on to this forum. 😳
awwww **placing a peck on ur nose😳**.......you guys are very sweet😊.......n don't get into that "harshu exit thingy" hon......i m still upset over it😭😭........but as far as my fiction is concerned I WILL CONTINUE IT😃

Anyways getting to the part, I'm not going to hate Prem. I'm going to feel bad for both of them instead. First of all Prem got set up by a girl, Sanjana! 😲 Poor Prem, fell for it. I can understand what he's going through, ummm sort of, i've never been through it but seen it going through someone... Did Prem love her a lot? If he did, then awwwwww... and if he didn't then, to sanjana: Suckaaaaaaaa!!... 😆😆
look down the next reply.......i will answer it there......😉

Now feeling bad for Heer, have to feel bad for them. Poor girl has to listen to so much from her boss, who doesn't even know her. I mean Prem's doing like something worse than judging a book by its cover. He's taking the cover and calling it fake... But i guess he has a good reason, seeing so many fakes, how can he trust her? I loved how Heer stood up for herself, and didn't let her character be tainted like that. But ufff.. Prem! Can't he give up? If see's something in her eyes... then why go after it? Sure everything shiny isn't a diamond, but you can't not call it a diamond till you see it? Right?
exactly yaar........after going through so many fakes, we can't even blame him......

I hope Heer comes up with something better. Now I have to go read the next part and see what happen's. Ahhh SO EXCITED!
awwww loved your expressive feedback cutie😊

kimz

Originally posted by: kimmu

Updated the last one... hehee... HEY! I heard that... I'll be back with the comment for this one. Promise i'll be today.. hehe..

*edited*

See told you I wouldn't be late today.. haha! Now you have to listen to my longety-long comment.

good girl 😉

I'm loving Heer's self-respect, the way she back-fired at him, the way she snapped him. Loved it! The dialoges were brilliant, really nice job. 👏 I thought it was really messed up of Prem to just start at her in the first place, I mean all she said was a simple thanks. Ahhh, but i still love Prem, cuz we know his side. If he didn't have a side, then only god could stop me from saying all the things i would've. I'm a girl with loads of feminine ego. 😆😆 I hate how men find themselves to be better, I hate how men find woman to be worse than there shoes, I hate how woman have been treated. Okay i don't want to get into a woman speech. Hehe...
🤣......i have written enough vashan for heer......no more speech pleaseee **hands over my ears**😳

Oh good God. She challenged him? Worst thing to do when your working under him, then again, respect comes first. So hats off, she'd doing us proud. *sniff*.... I don't trust Prem, and his way of making Heer repent. Poor girl, her fathers in the hospital, the things she's doing to get him better. This is one reason I don't like 'those' hospitals. Why can't they put it as a loan on her, and she could slowly gather money and get it back to them! Then again, destiny. ☺️ Poor Heer, having to five up against Prem becuase of her father. I love Heer, seriously. The best always have to go through the worst.
totally agreed with it😊

Prem and Preet's friendship is awesome too. I love how you portray friends in this FF, there so true, and just plain awesome! Preet seem's like a more decent guy then Prem, which I'm sorry, I HAVE to laugh at. 🤣 I mean in Kis Desh Preets all 'badboy' and Prem's all 'Mama'sboy'. Lmaoo.. But this IS why i love you FF. I get to see a new side of Prem. Ooh and btw, I can totally see him acting to it too. I mean all of them, i can just see them!!
🤣.........awww don't have to apologize hon......it is indeed a laughing factor..........🤣🤣🤣.....see even i can't resist.......glad i could make you visualise the segments...😳

So Sanjana did the same things Heer's about to do? Oh god, not liking this at all. He's so going to think she's wrong. But it did make me curious, did Sanjana go through what Heer did too, or did she just fake it all? Probably fake then why else would she ditch him? I wonder what he did to Sanjana, It would be like a Flashback in a flashback. 😆😆 (sorry not interested to do a segment where prem has to touch some git🤢.......n no you can't make me write a scene btwn prem and sanjana😛)
now here goes my explanation
"she made this "cheapest plan in the history of cheapest plan" and that was to spend a night with me and get herself linked with the prosperous business tycoon"

in the above quote, i meant to say that, Sanjana totally faked everything to get publicity.....you know!! being linked up with the most prosperous business tycoon in the town, she wanted to get fame USING prem.....but being the "ISHMART" 😉prem, he showed her the door when he gotto know abt her plan before it was put into action.......sorry if i was unable to make it clear for you guys.......my apology...😳

Okay so Prem has something good about him, he doesn't take girls for granted. Loving that. 😍 Oh also loving the love he has for his sister.... But totally loving the love he's going to have for Heer. ☺️ I want to know how. I'm so hooked, you don't even know. Please please please continue tomorrow, a treat for me. 😃
awwwwww DONE!!!!.........I am actually working on it right now.......and hopefully will finish it by tonite😉....

No no nooooooooo!! Heeeeeeeeeeeerr! I hope she asks for a loan or something, nothing that makes him think that she's like Sanjana. Heer's to awesome to be sanjana. Now I wanna know SO badly about there conversation. Continue sooon! 😃
ehm ehm ehm......i will just keep my mouth shut at this point 😉.......don't worry HOPEFULLY you will love the situation that i have in my mind😊

kimz

do i need to say how much i adore your feedback??........ur feedback is one of my favs........always been an inspiration for me hon.......god bless you🤗
luv
rehana
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

Rehana dear,

I was sooooooooooooooo looking forward to your update coz I knew that is the only thing that could cheer me up today...
awwwww di that was sooo sweet of you🤗
loved the way Heer gave it back to Prem...She actually challenged him😕...Now that scares me...And He is determined not to let her go so easily..Cool....
😉......
Loved the Preet-Prem conversation....what I loved even more is that Prem has a feeling deep him that Heer is different from other girls...and what I loved the most is that he never takes advantage of any girls...
Well does that mean that he actually didnt have any ONS with any girl...
of course i wud never destroy the image of my cutie pie casanova, Prem😳......
Sanjana here also...No probs...Poor Heer feel really bad for her...Me really scared hows she going to ask him for the money...Since she needs it immediately, hope she doesnt take any drastic steps which would have her compromise her self-rspect....I know you wont make her another Sanjana, and
i'm really looking forward to the next part...
don't worry "no more of sanjana" as that was just an example of his past experience that has led him to make such judgement on girls.......n it was sanjana, who tried to trap prem to gain fame.....damn it.....i guess i failed to clarify it properly.....sorry!! **holding ears😳**.....however, read the following quote for my clarification, and if you are still confused then i recomment you to read the reply that i made to kimmu's feedback on it😳

she made this "cheapest plan in the history of cheapest plan" and that was to spend a night with me and get herself linked with the prosperous business tycoon......bit**!!.......but luckily her plan was doomed by me

abt heer compromising her self-respect, ok in that case, I might have to disappoint you but I still will request you to read the next part very carefully😊......especially prem's part😊......hope i wouldn't disappoint anyone of you......😊
Now do I sense a blackmail coming up? anyways very very eagerly waiting for your next part...This is soooooooooo interesting , so different and love the Prem and Heer in this...
lol......the actual blackmailing part would be much more fun to read, i can bet on that😉😆......glad you loved it di.......means a lot to me **hand on my heart😊**
Hope you update tomorrow also...For a while, dont think of the actual show and spoil your weekend...
yess.......I will update the next part tomorrow di......still working on it.......your encouraging feedback always bring a smile on my face.......love you🤗
Luv
Angie

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rehana😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
nice one
can't wait...

awww thanks hon😊
luv
rehan

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