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Posted: 16 years ago
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Blackmail

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Veera felt her inconsolable emotions when Heer said those few words, "I have lost everything Veera.....you take care....."

.....coming out of her thoughts, she removed the tiny drop of tear from the corner of her eye when she prayed for her friend, '.....wherever you are, hope you are fine Heer....God! please be with her...".......still unaware of the fact that caused her colleague to leave her job over night and vanishing from the city, then their boss being agitated in her sudden absence, several times Veera tried to put up all these puzzles together but was unabled to solve it.......it's been two years that she has last talked to her when Heer called her in the midnight.......then the very morning she had to face an exasperated Prem in her office......'that was definitely not a business issue then WHAT???......what was it???.....did they have an affair???......yeah right!!.......Heer with that arrogant playboy??!!!.....what the hell am I thinking????....as long as I know, Heer barely talked to him.......once I even saw them arguing over something.....what was that????.......I just hope Sir doesn't get Heer into any trouble.... A sudden buzz brought her back from her deep thought, looking up at the phone, she decided to answer it, "Hello.....Yes!!"......as soon as she heard the next person's excited voice, her face changed into a content expression as she took a big sigh of relief, "fax me the address right now........yes please......thanks a lot man....you are a life savior..will talk to ya later"......hanging up the phone, Veera quickly got up to hand over the address to her boss.....
"Are you sure this is the correct address???" asked an impatient Prem while reading the paper....."Yes Sir!!!.....the person practically saw her over there...." answered a rather confident Veera.......still looking at the paper Prem pointed at the door with his index finger, gesturing her to leave the room......"......making a face, Veera headed towards the door before whispering her favorite adjective, invented 'only' for her boss, "khadoos"......she was about to touch the door knob when she heard his soft voice, "....Thanks Veera..".......surprised at the sudden change in mood, Veera turned around to see his smiling face, showing his appreciation towards her work......unable to keep the grudge any longer, she smiled back saying "welcome".......then closing the door behind her as she came out of his cabin, she thought, " geez!!! what was that 20 minutes ago???.....this guy, who was all ready to show me an upside down world is now saying 'thanks' to me??!!......awww chooo chweet.....he is not that bad after all" smiling to herself Veera left for her cabin.......
It's not everyday that her boss yells at her.......it's just that her boss is extremely stringent in terms of his professionalism......but again, this was not the case of any business deal......whatever it was, Veera just hoped that her friend doesn't get into any trouble because of her.....
Reading the address for the hundredth time, Prem smirked at her picture as he whispered, "..Pune....hmm....gotcha babe....your prince charming is on his way......." winking at the image, Prem grabbed the coat to leave for his destination to get his princess back to his castle.......this time making sure he doesn't leave her alone even for a fraction of time......making a promise to himself for getting her back in his life at any cost.......promising himself to confess his feelings that he had been keeping in himself since that night......making up his mind to give her the respective place in his life......
thanks for the lovely feedbacks hon........as i said each 2 parts per weekends, so next part will be posted next weekend inshallah........till then take care and feel free to criticize😉😛...
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Edited by tania86 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Hey I just started reading your ff. Its awesome! I wonder why its called blackmail...guess I'll just have to wait and find out. Can't wait to read your next update. I'm dying to know what happened between Prem and Heer
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

Hey I just started reading your ff. Its awesome! I wonder why its called blackmail...guess I'll just have to wait and find out. Can't wait to read your next update. I'm dying to know what happened between Prem and Heer

@ravjot thanks for the compliment hon.......well you have to wait a little longer coz this time it will take a bit time to reveal the past of prem and heer UNLIKE my last FF "the everlasting love"😛......abt the title, I just love it😉😆
@iqbals4ever thanks dear😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
ooh he gots her now!
well veera helped him but whatever!
lolz i loved this part di
im sooooo desperate to find out what happened, though i have a inkling as to what it is...but not sure!
cnt wait for nxt wknd!
rinkz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
yeshhhh! this is becoming like a dose for me!!!

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Like always, awesome part. Loved how you described everything, and how you started off with Veera's thoughts. So Veera doesn't know where Heer was, and now that she does she sells her out! What kind of a friend is she? Why do you have to make Veera good, i was hoping you would make her bad and put her though torture... muahahahaaa... 😈
I guess she really needs this job, atleast she's praying for Heer. Call me slow or whatever, but I just found out that Prem'a a playboy. 🤣 But i just love the fact that he's after Heer like mad man, and whatever flings he's had before are totally gone... Woaaah, they've been in a fight, already? 😲

I'm loving this Prem, please please pleaseeee don't change him. Yesh, he know's where she is. Now I can't wait to know how he get's his Heer back. ☺️ And loved how he winked at her pic. So sweeeet!
I have a feeling there's going to be lots of other twists and turns. I'm totally prepared with whatever you've got. And i'm so glad your only updating on weekends, which means I can comment each time. Cuz I can't really commen't on other days.

Can't wait for the next weekend. I have more reasons to wait for the weekend nowww.. 😃

kimz
Edited by kimmu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
rinki: awww januu.......yesss even i m desparate to write wut will happen next but gotta study for the quizzes on tuesday and wednesday😕......thanks for ur cute comment hon😳
kiran: will be waiting man😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
That was short and sweet..reeally nice..now he is headed to Pune..to get her back..waiting to read the rest..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
awesome part
can't wait for next update(weekend)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

yeshhhh! this is becoming like a dose for me!!!

*edited*

Like always, awesome part. Loved how you described everything, and how you started off with Veera's thoughts. So Veera doesn't know where Heer was, and now that she does she sells her out! What kind of a friend is she? Why do you have to make Veera good, i was hoping you would make her bad and put her though torture... muahahahaaa... 😈
I guess she really needs this job, atleast she's praying for Heer. Call me slow or whatever, but I just found out that Prem'a a playboy. 🤣 But i just love the fact that he's after Heer like mad man, and whatever flings he's had before are totally gone... Woaaah, they've been in a fight, already? 😲

I'm loving this Prem, please please pleaseeee don't change him. Yesh, he know's where she is. Now I can't wait to know how he get's his Heer back. ☺️ And loved how he winked at her pic. So sweeeet!
I have a feeling there's going to be lots of other twists and turns. I'm totally prepared with whatever you've got. And i'm so glad your only updating on weekends, which means I can comment each time. Cuz I can't really commen't on other days.

Can't wait for the next weekend. I have more reasons to wait for the weekend nowww.. 😃

kimz

lol.......wait till you see his tactics to get heer 😉.......i bet u wud LOVEEE him😳😳😳.......i m already in love with him for this character😳😳😳........neway thanks for the lovely feedback dear, always love them😃
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