FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 68

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sorry exams now days as soon as exams over i will leave commnets please dont be angry always keep smiling . as i got my old apu back .
apu really jazak Allah to your friend as a real hard push your friend gave you . i cannot stop crying after watching that . what friends are for apu to help . keep smiling always

Hi Naadia,
See i'm back to comment on ur ff.
Only in ur ff.

I should welcome u also back.
We were out of this forum for a long time na.

Ok now my comments to ur last update.
My 1st fav part where prem says i want to company u in everything. Wow wht a wonderful hubby. Then where heer says naughty husband. that brought smile on my face. Prem is so caring hubby.

Loved the dialogue where she says i trust u more than my self.
yh the song doesn't suit her personality. preeth is so funny as always.

Its a nice update. do continue. plssssssssssssssssss.😊👍🏼👏
👏👍🏼
Love Priya.

hey

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Awesome Update.... Update soon...

Sorry i didnt comment before.. I was busy with school work and i finally came on the computer!!!😊

Originally posted by: priharsh

Hi Naadia,
See i'm back to comment on ur ff.
Only in ur ff.

I should welcome u also back.
We were out of this forum for a long time na.

Ok now my comments to ur last update.
My 1st fav part where prem says i want to company u in everything. Wow wht a wonderful hubby. Then where heer says naughty husband. that brought smile on my face. Prem is so caring hubby.

Loved the dialogue where she says i trust u more than my self.
yh the song doesn't suit her personality. preeth is so funny as always.

Its a nice update. do continue. plssssssssssssssssss.😊👍🏼👏
👏👍🏼
Love Priya.

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggg asap.

😆😆 suprised to see me alive 🤗 thanks you still remember my ff

Originally posted by: angel_60107

hey

love your ff

awesomeeeeeeeee

i read all parts

update soon

part 25

Rahul has organized a party at his Hotel 4 all the holidaying couples.Prem & Heer r also invited..Heer doesn't like Prem's idea 2 agree 2 Rahul's invitation.

At the party..
"Prem kaisa laga ye arrangement" Rahul inquires.
"Nice."Prem compliments shaking hands.
"Aur Heer tumhe.."Rahul turns around 2 face Heer.Heer refuses 2 give an answer.
"Actually Heer itni lambi journey ki wajjah se kuch tired hai." Prem gives an explanation 4 Heer's cold behavior.
"Koi baat nahin. Anyways make yourselves comfortable & plz enjoy the party." Rahul leaves.
"Prem yeh kya ..." Heer is angry.
"Heer.." Prem calms her down.
"Mujhe darr lagta hai .." Heer holds Prem's hands.
"Mere hote huye????"Prem looks into her eyes.
"Mujhe Rahul par yakeen nahin."
"Aur mujh par.."Prem pulls her close. Heer simply embraces him.
"Bolo na Heer aur mujh par.."
"Tum is baat ka jawab jaante ho." Heer whispers.
"Par ek baar sun na chahta hoon."
"Prem mujhe tang mat karo."
"Main tang kar raha hoon??? Ulta chor kotwaal ko daante."
Soon Prem & Heer r at the dance floor .Prem takes on the mic & decides 2 sing a song 4 Heer.And the song is...
Dekho Zara Kitna Haseen Hai,
Phir Yeh Samaa Hai Naa Jee Le Zara Ek Pal Mila Jo,
Tanhai Ka Hai Naa.
Wo Hi Hasna Hasana,
Kuch Keh Ke Yu Sharmaana
Kuch Baaten Yu Hi Aankhon Se Hi Kar Jaana
Achcha Lagta Hai Yeh Chehra Takte Jaana
Ab Aa jo Gaye Ho To Naa Phir Jaana.. Haa.. Yahi
Dua...., Yuhi Sada?Ohhhwooo? Tere Liye..., Dhadke Jiya..., Dhadke Jiya..
Yeh Raasta Gum Hoga,
Yeh Darr Tumhe Hai Naa?
Main Aas Paas Hi Kahin Hu, Itna Yakeen To Hai Naa?
Teri Har Aahat Ka Chup Chupke Peeche Peeche Aana
Mujhe Tanhai Mein Tera Ek Lamha De Jaana
Shayad Yeh Lamha Bhi Phir Khuda Ne Tere Mere Milne Ka Socha Hai Bahana, Haaaa? Yahi Dua...,
Yuhi Sada?Ohhhwooo? Tere Liye..., Dhadke Jiya..., Dhadke Jiya..... Ohhooo..Aahhhhaaa?
Palke Yu Jhuki To Kuch Hua Tha
Yeh Pal Jaise Rukk Sa Gaya Tha
Mere Sapno Mein Bhi Har Baar Tu Aana
Ab AajGaye Ho To Naa Phir Jaana... Yahi Dua..., Yuhi Sada?Ohhhwooo? Tere Liye..., Dhadke Jiya...,

After the party Prem & Heer return to Prem's hotel. Prem stops his car in the parking slot & turns around 2 look at Heer . Heer is in deep slumber leaning against

the window. Prem decides 2 lift her up in his arms & take her upstairs.
He makes her lie down on the bed & is about 2 withdraw his hands 4m her when he notices Heer clutching onto his hands like a child. Prem gently smiles & decides

2 sit there beside her so that she doen't wake up.
In the morning Heer wakes up puzzled about how she reached the room. She looks around 4 Prem & then finds a note on the breakfast table with a white rose

beside it.
"I love u. Will c u in the evening." Heer is really sad that she couldn't c off Prem & curses herself 4 sleeping. She plans a surprise dinner 4 Prem when he returns

home in the evening.
In the evening Prem returns home & finds darkness in the room.
"Heer.."Prem calls out. But there is no reply. He turns on the lights but there is no electricity. Suddenly Prem discovers Heer slowly walk upto him with a smile .Prem

also smiles back at her & moves forward 2 hug her.As soon as Prem embraces Heer she falls unconscious in his arms. Prem gently withdraws his hands & finds his

hands smeared with blood.
"HEER!!!" Prem notices that Heer has been stabbed.
"Prem mujhe maaf kar do..."
"Kisliye.."
"Shayad apna saath yahin tak tha.."Heer is gasping 4 breath.
"Main tumahaare bina aage nahin chal sakta Heer.."Prem is in tears.
"Tumhaari zaroorat hai sabko"
"Aur mujhe tumhaari.."
Prem decides 2 take Heer immediately 2 the hospital.
"Mr.Juneja your wife is really critical, she has been bleeding for hours & the wound is quite deep.I can't assure you but I will definitely try my best."The doctor

informs Prem.
Prem is really worried. Just then he has Rahul's call.
"Hi Prem.Kaisa lag raha hai?Feeling nice???"
"Kyun kiya tumne yeh sab."
"Jawaab janne ke liye tumhe mujhse milna hoga.Abhi.Rite now."
"Main Heer ko is halat mein akela chod kar nahin aa sakta."
"Aur agar Heer zinda hi na bache to kya karoge Prem??"
"Agar Heer ko kuch bhi huya to main bhool jaunga ki main Prem hoon."
"Prem mujhe kabhi-kabhi tum par bahut taras aata hai.Heer ke liye tum kuch bhi kar sakte ho.To aaj waqt aa gaya hai ki tum saabit karo i tum Heer ki mohabbat

ke liye kis had tak jaa sakte ho."
Prem leaves against his wish to meet Rahul.
"Welcome Prem."Rahul smiles sarcastically.
"Tumhe yaad hoga Sanjana ke baare mein?"
"Haan.Usne suicide kar liya that meri wajjah se."
"No,wajjah tum nahin wajjah thi Heer,tumne Heer ki wajjah se us ka dil toda."
"Yeh sab kuch anjaane mein huya."
"Toh theek hai ab is galti ko sudhaarne ka ek mauka main tumhe de raha hoon."
"Kya?"
"Sanjana se shaadi..."
Prem is shocked 2 hear this.
"Par sanjana to mar chuki hai..."
"Nahin.Mere hote huye woh mar nahin sakti.Woh zinda hai kyunki abhi uska bahi Rahul zinda hai."
"Sanjana tumhaari behen hai???"Prem is startled at the revelation.
"Haan aur Heer ki jaan bachaane ke liye tum itna to kar hi sakte ho Prem."
"Main kaise yakeen kar loon ki is shaadi ke baad tum Heer ko chod doge."
"Main sirf ek deal kar raha hoon Prem,It's all about give & take."
Prem agrees.

The wedding is scheduled 4 the next day.
"Main ek aakhiri baar Heer se milna chahta hoon."
"Kyun?"
"Use zaroorat hai meri."
"Uske dard se tumhe itni humdardi hai aur meri behen ka dil todte huye tumhe zara bhi dard nahin huya.Tumne ek baar bhi nahin socha ki tumhaari wajjah se uska

kya hoga."
"Main sirf ek baat jaanta hoon Rahul, do logon ko zabardasti pyaar ke bandhan mein nahin bandha jaa sakta.Pyaar bas ho jaata hai...aur jo kuch bhi tum kar rahe ho

Sanjana waisa kabhi nahin karti.Main jaanta hoon achchi tarah se use."
"Tumse achchi tarah se main jaanta hoon use, bhai hoon uska."
"Ek bhai ho kar bhi tum apni behen kay ghar ki neev toote huye dilon par khadi kar rahe ho.Tumhe kya lagta hai is se woh khush reh paayegi?"
"Mujhe tumhaari advise lene mein koi interest nahin hai.Is waqt tum sirf mere ishaaron kay ghulaam ho.U r just a slave.Aur tumhaare paas meri baat ko

chup-chaap obey karne ke siva doosra koi option nahin hai."
Rahul asks Prem 2 go & meet Sanjana once.Prem enters her room & shocked 2 find that she is on a ventilator. Just then Rahul enters,
"Darr gaye naa?Main bhi bahut darr gaya tha.Par ab mujhe koi darr nahin. Main jaanta hoon ab tum use waapas lekar aaoge is duniya mein."
"Ek dost hone kay naate main apni dosti ka farz zaroor adaa karunga.Yeh vaada hai mera tumse Rahul."Prem's eyes reflect anger.Rahul leaves.
Prem gently sits beside Sanjana.
"Main jaanta hoon ki tum mujhe sun sakti ho. Sanjana main tumhe apna sabse achha dost maanta hoon.Par aaj is dosti ne mujhe apne pyaar se door kar diya hai.

Please Sanjana ...."Prem breaks down into tears.Just then he notices Sanjana open her eyes & she gives him a familiar look.
"Sanjana..."Prem whispers.He removes her mask.
"Aisa laga jaise tum mujhe bula rahe the . Tum theek ho na Prem."
"Nahin.Tumse bahut naaraz hoon ki tumne is tarah meri wajjah se apni zindagi khatm karne ki koshish ki."
"Ab aisa kuch bhi nahin karungi.I promise."Sanjana smiles.
Prem tells her about Rahul's plan.
"Yakeen nahin hota Rahul bhaiya aisa kar sakte hain."
"Main Heer se milna chahta hoon Sanjana."
"Ab Heer se tumhe milwana meri zimmedaari hai Prem. "
In the hospital the nurse tending 2 Heer is actually Rahul's agent.Just prior 2 the wedding day Rahul instructs the nurse 2 kill Heer. Heer is still unconscious &

critical. Sanjana overhears her brother.
In the morning Sanjana expresses her wish 2 visit a nearby cathedral with Prem. Prem has no knowledge about Heer's condiytion in the hospital. Rahul happily

Consents.
On the way Sanjana stops the car at the hospital.
"Tumne to..."Prem is puzzled about y Sanjana made the wrong excuse.
"Prem tum meri zindagi ke pehle insaan ho jis se maine pyaar kiya hai.Aur pehla pyaar dil ke bahut kareeb hota hai.Pehle pyaar ko khone ka dard kya hota hai,yeh

mujhse behtar koi nahin jaan sakta. Mujhe is baat se koi fark nahin padta ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho ya nahin.Pyaar hamesha paane ka hi naam nahin

hota.Kabhi-kabhi is mein sab kuch kho kar bhi kuch bhi haasil nahin hota. Main to lucky hoon Prem ki mere dil mein jo tumhare liye tha use main tumse keh

paayi.Aggar nahin keh paati to shayad zindagi bhar yeh regret karti. Ek dost hokar tumne pehli baar mujhse kuch maanga aur main tumhe ye yakeen dilana chahti

hoon ki jab bhi tumhe meri zaroorat hogi tum hamesha mujhe apne paas paoge.Main kabhi tumhaare aur Heer ke beech mein nahin aaungi, kyunki tum dono ek

doosre ke liye bane ho.Sach kahoon Prem main bhi ek baar Heer se milkar maafi maangna chahti hoon.Aakhir uski ye haalat sirf meri wajjah se huyi hai."
Prem leads her in & the nurse is surprised 2 c Prem & Sanjana there.She secretly informs Rahul about it.
"Tumhaare yahan der tak rukne se Rahul ko shaq ho sakta."Prem cautions.
"Ab main akele hi lautungi Prem.Tum saath nahin aaoge."
"Aur Rahul..."
"Bhaiya ko main achchi tarah se jaanti hoon. Woh maan jaayenge."Sanjana slowly turns around 2 leave with teary eyes.
"Ruko Sanjana"Prem stops her.He slowly wlks upto her & hugs her.
"Ek baar Heer ko nahin dekhogi."
"Phir kabhi Prem.Main use hanste huye dekhna chahti hoon."Sanjana leaves.

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