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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: uzmaaltaf1

excellent... awesome.. kash humaray creatives ko bhi itnay achay ideas atay

uzma thank you for reading
and all those who are pm me thanks alot this part is a gift from my very dear friend they some time 😉 cheat
Edited by brokenheart26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey great update rahul turns evil shoker
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
awesum super update
loved it
thankz for pm

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow...awesome ff....update soon 😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi naadia, here comes my commet on ur last update, for which u were waiting so long. sorry abt it.

u know, i love the name rahul.
y did u put that name for a guy like rishab.
that i didn't like, but its ok.

Ok now my premeer.
i love the part where prem asks whether u believe me.
and the way heer says u know the ans for it.
it was awesome.

Next prem singing a song for heer. wah wah. 👏

Then prem carrying heer to the hotel room. i loved that scene a lot.
So nice to imagine.

I loved the morning note, with the white rose. i love the color white a lot. (b4 knowing that its harshu's favorite as well). And the way heer blame herself for sleeping shows how much she misses prem.

U gave me a shock by the scene where heer falling on prem's hand unconsiously. i didn't expect it at all. I hope nothing will happen to heer. don't seperate them. i know u won't do it.

The true love can b seen in ur ff. that's wht i love more in ur ff. especially when heer says Prem mujhe maaf kar do. Shayad apna saath yahin tak tha. It made me cry. the whole dialogue related to this scene is so nice. i loved it. where they say that they can't live without each other shows how much they love each other.

Agar Heer ko kuch bhi huya to main bhool jaunga ki main Prem hoon." I love this line also a lot. Kitna pyaar. The anger bcos of so much of love.

Prem can't agree to marry sanjana. not at all. he belongs only to heer. noone else.

do logon ko zabardasti pyaar ke bandhan mein nahin bandha jaa sakta.Pyaar bas ho jaata hai.. This line is awesome. And its so true. Love just happens, u can't make someone love u.

I was able to feel the pain in prem when he says Sanjana main tumhe apna sabse achha dost maanta hoon.Par aaj is dosti ne mujhe apne pyaar se door kar diya hai.He couldn't bear the sorrow of getting seperated from heer.

I love the friendship of prem and sanjana. its so nice.

Prem tum meri zindagi ke pehle insaan ho jis se maine pyaar kiya hai.Aur pehla pyaar dil ke bahut kareeb hota hai.Pehle pyaar ko khone ka dard kya hota hai,ye mujhse behtar koi nahin jaan sakta. Mujhe is baat se koi fark nahin padta ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho ya nahin.Pyaar hamesha paane ka hi naam nahin hota.
This is my next favorite dialogue. I loved it so much. It shows the feeling of first love, and it shows that u can't hurt ur love if u loved him truely.

Prem and heer are definitely made for each other. Rad ne bana di jodi.

I loved the character sanjana a lot. she is so good and her love to prem is so true. In prem's point of view she is a good friend.

OMG i can't wait foir the next part make it fast. waiting for the next update. u r not going to finish this story that easily. U should continue for ever and ever.




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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: priharsh

hi naadia, here comes my commet on ur last update, for which u were waiting so long. sorry abt it.

u know, i love the name rahul.
y did u put that name for a guy like rishab.
that i didn't like, but its ok.

Ok now my premeer.
i love the part where prem asks whether u believe me.
and the way heer says u know the ans for it.
it was awesome.

Next prem singing a song for heer. wah wah. 👏

Then prem carrying heer to the hotel room. i loved that scene a lot.
So nice to imagine.

I loved the morning note, with the white rose. i love the color white a lot. (b4 knowing that its harshu's favorite as well). And the way heer blame herself for sleeping shows how much she misses prem.

U gave me a shock by the scene where heer falling on prem's hand unconsiously. i didn't expect it at all. I hope nothing will happen to heer. don't seperate them. i know u won't do it.

The true love can b seen in ur ff. that's wht i love more in ur ff. especially when heer says Prem mujhe maaf kar do. Shayad apna saath yahin tak tha. It made me cry. the whole dialogue related to this scene is so nice. i loved it. where they say that they can't live without each other shows how much they love each other.

Agar Heer ko kuch bhi huya to main bhool jaunga ki main Prem hoon." I love this line also a lot. Kitna pyaar. The anger bcos of so much of love.

Prem can't agree to marry sanjana. not at all. he belongs only to heer. noone else.

do logon ko zabardasti pyaar ke bandhan mein nahin bandha jaa sakta.Pyaar bas ho jaata hai.. This line is awesome. And its so true. Love just happens, u can't make someone love u.

I was able to feel the pain in prem when he says Sanjana main tumhe apna sabse achha dost maanta hoon.Par aaj is dosti ne mujhe apne pyaar se door kar diya hai.He couldn't bear the sorrow of getting seperated from heer.

I love the friendship of prem and sanjana. its so nice.

Prem tum meri zindagi ke pehle insaan ho jis se maine pyaar kiya hai.Aur pehla pyaar dil ke bahut kareeb hota hai.Pehle pyaar ko khone ka dard kya hota hai,ye mujhse behtar koi nahin jaan sakta. Mujhe is baat se koi fark nahin padta ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho ya nahin.Pyaar hamesha paane ka hi naam nahin hota.
This is my next favorite dialogue. I loved it so much. It shows the feeling of first love, and it shows that u can't hurt ur love if u loved him truely.

Prem and heer are definitely made for each other. Rad ne bana di jodi.

I loved the character sanjana a lot. she is so good and her love to prem is so true. In prem's point of view she is a good friend.

OMG i can't wait foir the next part make it fast. waiting for the next update. u r not going to finish this story that easily. U should continue for ever and ever.




i will think i should talk to you or not as you are bit late . 😉 and some one send me her commets yesterday . i have to translate for my that special read at some place .
thank you for reading and giving me support . i will not argue with you as i really dont get why you like that much my ff as it is you.
thanks for liking the part
do logon ko zabardasti pyaar ke bandhan mein nahin bandha jaa sakta.Pyaar bas ho jaata hai.. This line is awesome. And its so true. Love just happens, u can't make someone love u.
😳 it is so very true you can not force . or you cannot stop your self . ☺️
i didnot know you like rahul name otherwise i must have change it
thnaks for leave your comments
keep waiting hope you get your next part soon
😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART 26
Prem is sitting beside Heer in the emergency ward.
"Plz aankhein kholo Heer , mujhse baat karo , sirf ek baar tumhaari aawaz sunna chahta hoon."Prem is holding her hands & tears r rolling down his cheeks.
Suddenly the doctor enters & Prem wipes his tears.
"Mr. Juneja I have been watching that you have not slept since the last 3 days,I am afraid that if this continues u might fall ill."
"Its allright doctor I am okay."
"Your wife is still not out of danger. I just wish her speedy recovery."The doctor leaves.
Sanjana returns home & finds Rahul angrily staring at her.
"Maine yeh sab tumhaare liye kiya aur tumne..."
"Mere liye?? Mere liye aapne Heer ko maarne ki koshish ki. Aap apni behen kay liye is had tak gir gaye.Aap kaise bhool gaye ki Prem ki khushi meri khushi hai.Aur Prem ki khushi Heer mein hai.Aapne sirf Prem ka hi nahin ,aapne anjaane mein mera bhi vishwaas toda hai."Sanjana is in tears.Rahul moves towards her & wipes her tears.
"Reh sakti ho Prem kay bina??"Rahul asks looking into her eyes.
"Koshish to kar sakti hoon."
Rahul hugs her & Sanjana starts weeping.
"Sanju main tumhe yakeen dilata hoon, tumhaari is koshish mein main tumhaare saath hoon."
At the hospital Heer finally regains consciousness.Prem is unable 2 hold his tears & he simply embraces Heer & weeps in her arms.
"Prem.."Heer gently strokes his head.
"Kuch mat bolo plz...main sun nahin paunga...plz ...in 3 dino mein mujh par kya guzri hai yeh koi nahin jaanta. Ek-ek pal jaise bojh sa ban gaya tha mere liye..."Prem tightens his arms around Heer.
Heer doesn't utter a word & simply wraps her arms around him.Heer is discharged 4m the hospital 3 days later & they return home.Prem tells Heer all about Rahul. Prem assures her that everything is fine & settled .
Its time 2 dress her wounds & Prem tells her that he would do the dressing.
"Par Prem..."
"Kuch nahin sun na mujhe.."
Prem gently carries on the dressing of her wounds & suddenly Heer starts crying.
"Kya hua.."Prem is scared thinking that he has hurt her wound.
"Dard ho raha hai kya?"Prem asks.Heer tells him that she is not hurt.
"To phir yeh aansoon kis liye?"
"Meri wajjah se tumhe kya-kya..."but Prem shuts her mouth with his hands.
"Main sab kuch bardaasht kar sakta hoon par tumhaare aansoon nahin."He wipes her tears & having completed the dressing makes her lie down on the bed.
He gently bends down & kisses her forehead.Prem lies down beside her.
"Hum waapas India jaa rahein hain."Prem informs her gently running his fingers through her silky hair.
"Tumhaara kaam?"Heer inquires.
"Sab poora ho chuka tha kaafi pehle.Magar main ruka to sirf is liye ki tumhaare saath kuch pal bita sakoon.Lekin jo kuch bhi tumhaare saath hua uske baad main yahan aur rukne ki nahin soch sakta."Prem gently lifts her hand & casts a look at the wedding ring in her fingers.He kisses her hands.
"Heer main tumhaare saath beete har ek pal ko yaadgar banana chahta hoon."
"Prem kisi bhi pal ko yaadgar banane ka intezaar nahin karna chahiye.Kyunki kabhi-2 hum sirf sochte hi reh jaate aur lamhe humaare haathon se ret ki tarah phisalte jaate hain.Hum laakh koshish kar lein par un guzre lamho ko dobaara kaid nahin kar sakte. Humaare paas abhi ka pal hai Prem,ye pal jahan main aur tum saath hain aur ...."Prem shuts Heer's mouth with a kiss.He interlocks his fingers with her fingers & kisses her around the neck. Heer also kisses Prem on the forehead.
SONG HERE
O re piya haye
Udne laga kyon man baawla re
Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re
O re piya haye
Tanabana tanabana bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawa
Boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahan
Sagish mein shaamil sara jahan hai
Har zare zare ki yeh iltiza hai
Nazrein bolen duniya tole
dil ki zaban haaye dil ki zubaan
Ishq maange ishq chahe koi toofan
Chalna aahiste ishq naya hai
Pehla yeh vada humne kiya hai
Nange pairo pe angaro
chalti rahi haaye chalti rahi
Lagta hai ke gairo mein
Palti rahi haaye
le chal wahan jo
Mulk tera hai
Jahil zamana
dushman mera hai
FROM AAJA NACHLE
Prem & Heer return 2 India a week later & Heer is surprised 2 discover that Preet & Harman's wedding is goin 2 take place.
"Tumhe pata tha Prem?"
Prem holds her ears & says "Sorry.Main tumhe ek surprise dena chahta tha.Kaisa laga."
"Achcha."
"Sirf achcha kehne se kaam nahin chalega."Prem puts forward his cheek.
"Prem tum kabhi nahin sudhroge."
"Ab kya karoon tumhaare saath ka asar hai."Heer stretches forward her hands 2 pull his ears, but Prem holds her hands & pulls her in his embrace.He starts 2 * her suddenly withdraws.
"Heer...not again yaar.Tum kitna sharmati ho."
"Ab tum besharam ho to kisi ko to sharam karni padegi na balance banaye rakhne kay liye."Prem givs a naughty smile.
The wedding takes place & Heer is really happy 2 find both her sisters finally settled.
A few days later Prem offers 2 take Heer on a long drive.Heer refuses saying she first needs 2 take Maa-Bauji's permission.
"Maine pooch liya hai unse."
Heer agrees.
Prem takes her 2 their farm-house in Himachal.
Prem lights the fire-place.Heer cums out drying her hair.
"Bahut thand lag rahi hai Prem."
"Yahan aao."Prem beckons her 2 cum & sit beside him.
Heer gently moves 4ward & sits beside her.Prem's runs his fingers through her wet hair.He takes the towel 4m her hands & asks her 2 turn around so that he may dry her hair.
"Kya zaroorat thi is waqt baal geelay karne ki, "Prem chides Heer.Heer doesn't say anything. Prem removes her long locks 4m her back & slowly runs a finger down her neck.
"Ab bhi thand lag rahi hai..."Prem asks.Heer knows what he means.Prem kisses her on th back & folds her arms in his .Heer turns around & pulls over the blanket so that they feel cozy.
"I love you Heer ...."Prem whispers.
Song Here
haafiz khuda
iss ishq ka pyaar ka
haafiz khuda
ab har jagah hai wafaa
aankhon mein jo tasveer hai
mere khwaabo ki taabeer hai
aankhon mein jo tasveer hai
mere khwaabo ki taabeer hai
haafiz khuda
iss ishq ka pyaar ka
haafiz khuda
ab har jagah hai wafaa
mujhko pata ab chal gaya
ki kitni rangeen hai kismat meri
darr tha magar ab hai khabar
ki hai yeh chahat salamat meri
haafiz khuda haafiz khuda
badi pyaari si hai meri dua
hai masoom sa haan yeh dil bada
jo bhi isne chaha tha woh mil gaya
haafiz khuda
iss ishq ka pyaar ka
haafiz khuda
ab har jagah hai wafaa
aankhon mein jo tasveer hai
mere khwaabo ki taabeer hai
aankhon mein jo tasveer hai
mere khwaabo ki taabeer hai
haafiz khuda
iss ishq ka pyaar ka
haafiz khuda
ab har jagah hai wafaa

hi here is your pisces26 (or brokenheart26) with her last part of her ff love story Premeer. I really enjoyed writing it and loved you all who had taken their precious time out to read . this ff is very close to my heart as I never ever dream of that one day I will write . because of this I met many new friends and few very close . There was alot of up and down in writing this ff but i gain a lot from that . No regret

I had my life best time with you all . I really enjoy each and every comment and your pm how to thank you I don't know but . you are lovable I will miss you all a lot but every thing had to come to an end on day and today it is the end of this FF .

Please forgive me for my mistake and for being so emotional . it is a sad moment for me but it had to happen one day and today is the day .

take care of your self love you all may be we meet again some other day some other place
thanks to simi for writing last 2 parts 🤗(sorry i just rub 3 words other than that the 2 parts are like you wrote ☺️ sorry you can say....☺️ raho 😉)
and
someone you dont visit this place but i must say if you not there i dont know what would happen of me 🤗 love you both from core of my heart you both are my strength always be there for me please
your's
pisces26 (naadia)
The End
Edited by brokenheart26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey great last part but u will be missed
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely update and end...Thanks naadia for beautiful updates
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great last part but u will be missed

i will miss you all dear
thanks for reading and being there for me

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