FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 70

Originally posted by: Intellienough

lovely update and end...Thanks naadia for beautiful updates

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesum
will miss ur ff soo much
loved ur ff
you are a wonderful writer

Hey!

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

Loved the last part!

It was soo cute!

Im gonna miss reading this FF!

Hope you start a new one!

X

Ur starting made me sad. tears in prem's eyes brings tears in mine.

Oh god, he didn't sleep for 3 days and he is not bothered abt him until he finds out abt heer's health condition. he is such a loving hubby.

Aap kaise bhool gaye ki Prem ki khushi meri khushi hai. this is called true love. if u love someone truly this is how u will feel.

At the hospital Heer finally regains consciousness.Prem is unable 2 hold his tears & he simply embraces Heer & weeps in her arms. Oh I love this scene so much.

"Kuch mat bolo plz...main sun nahin paunga...plz ...in 3 dino mein mujh par kya guzri hai yeh koi nahin jaanta. Ek-ek pal jaise bojh sa ban gaya tha mere liye..." What a dialogue naadia. each and every second he was thinking of her. will someone love like this in reality.

Main sab kuch bardaasht kar sakta hoon par tumhaare aansoon nahin. Loved it.

Magar main ruka to sirf is liye ki tumhaare saath kuch pal bita sakoon. even the prem in the soap wants to spend his time with heer. but heer doesn't give him a chance. prem is prem everywhere.

Heer main tumhaare saath beete har ek pal ko yaadgar banana chahta hoon. How sweet he wanted to make each and every second that he is going to spend with her memorable.

The dialogue wht heer says is also awesome. and the way he stops her talking is lovely. and the song u chose is suitable to premeer a lot.

Heer stretches forward her hands 2 pull his ears, but Prem holds her hands & pulls her in his embrace.He starts 2 * her suddenly withdraws. wht a cute scene.

I loved the whole premeer scene at the farm house. So romantic. especially prem's whisper.

Naadia, i loved ur ff from the beginning. Urs is the first ff that i ever read. i read some others later on but none attracted me as urs did. Its so special. I loved each and every bit of ur ff. I can't forget it to my life time. I always tell u na, the heer in ur this ff is me. i see myself in her. I'm going to miss her so badly. I feel like crying after knowing that u stopped ur ff. U gave me a shock. Y did u do this to me. I'll not forgive u. i'm sorry if i've hurt u by being rude to u but seriously i'm so upset that u stopped ur ff. u can't stop the tears in my eyes which u caused by ending ur ff.

This ff is so close to my heart.
Thank u for the happiness u gave me through this ff.

Bye tc.
Will miss ur ff so badly. :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

Originally posted by: priharsh

Ur starting made me sad. tears in prem's eyes brings tears in mine.

Oh god, he didn't sleep for 3 days and he is not bothered abt him until he finds out abt heer's health condition. he is such a loving hubby.

Aap kaise bhool gaye ki Prem ki khushi meri khushi hai. this is called true love. if u love someone truly this is how u will feel.

At the hospital Heer finally regains consciousness.Prem is unable 2 hold his tears & he simply embraces Heer & weeps in her arms. Oh I love this scene so much.

"Kuch mat bolo plz...main sun nahin paunga...plz ...in 3 dino mein mujh par kya guzri hai yeh koi nahin jaanta. Ek-ek pal jaise bojh sa ban gaya tha mere liye..." What a dialogue naadia. each and every second he was thinking of her. will someone love like this in reality.

Main sab kuch bardaasht kar sakta hoon par tumhaare aansoon nahin. Loved it.

Magar main ruka to sirf is liye ki tumhaare saath kuch pal bita sakoon. even the prem in the soap wants to spend his time with heer. but heer doesn't give him a chance. prem is prem everywhere.

Heer main tumhaare saath beete har ek pal ko yaadgar banana chahta hoon. How sweet he wanted to make each and every second that he is going to spend with her memorable.

The dialogue wht heer says is also awesome. and the way he stops her talking is lovely. and the song u chose is suitable to premeer a lot.

Heer stretches forward her hands 2 pull his ears, but Prem holds her hands & pulls her in his embrace.He starts 2 * her suddenly withdraws. wht a cute scene.

I loved the whole premeer scene at the farm house. So romantic. especially prem's whisper.

Naadia, i loved ur ff from the beginning. Urs is the first ff that i ever read. i read some others later on but none attracted me as urs did. Its so special. I loved each and every bit of ur ff. I can't forget it to my life time. I always tell u na, the heer in ur this ff is me. i see myself in her. I'm going to miss her so badly. I feel like crying after knowing that u stopped ur ff. U gave me a shock. Y did u do this to me. I'll not forgive u. i'm sorry if i've hurt u by being rude to u but seriously i'm so upset that u stopped ur ff. u can't stop the tears in my eyes which u caused by ending ur ff.

This ff is so close to my heart.
Thank u for the happiness u gave me through this ff.

Bye tc.
Will miss ur ff so badly. :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

i can't believe its come to an end???

Originally posted by: _SuMmEr_LoVe_

i can't believe its come to an end???

n what a better way to end it...thank u so much for giving it a happy ending..

n ya i agree with what the person above said...

Aap kaise bhool gaye ki Prem ki khushi meri khushi hai.
is truely a beautiful line..wonderfuly writen...

i'll be waiting for ur new FF... n hopefully it'll be on...hehehe...

😉😉😉 keep waiting like i wait for your vm

Originally posted by: brokenheart26

my dearest priya

sorry to make you cry dear i know it is a shock for you .and i knew you will react like that let me tell you last 2 parts are totally a gift to me by my very dearest friend ( as i couldnot write it any more). each and ever word is her's and i added like she had send me .

you can fight with me that i closed it but i did not closed it like before i finished it as every thing had to come to an end one day or other . dear every time i will not get some one to save me and bring me out of depression and to support me .

i know you like my writing but take it as you were reading a book and today you read its last part . what all i had gone through only i know that . may be i start a new ff . but first i had to complete my ff aitebar .

thanks alot for taking your time out and reading .

dont be angry every thing had to finish one day yesterday it was the end of Lovestory premeer

your's naadia

Dear Naadia,
I fought with u as i know that u r my friend with whom i 've the right to do it. Yh i agree that everything should come to an end one day. I accept that. Ok from ur point of view this ff hurt u in someway, so i understand y u've stopped it. And i know who made u write it again. As u say we can't expect, that all the time people will b there to get us out of our worries. that's so true. but we r lucky enough as we got someone upto now. even u were there for me when i had one prob. but i was not there for u. sorry abt it. but i didn't do it purposely. u know that. Wht so ever this ff is so close to my heart. i'll remember this for my life time. Will miss it so much.

Hope u start ur new ff very soon. My support is always there for u.
Love Priya.