FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 67

Hi

All my readers who gave me so much or like my silly story I just wanted to tell you I cannot update this any more few personal reason I will request development team to close this ff . plz it is my request . I know if I will ask to close this I will loss a lot of friends as they warn me time and again if I do so they will kill me or will never talk to me but what is the use if I cannot update .you all pm me few add to update it hurt every time to see that .this premeer love story came to an end like this. Without out a proper ending . sorry to bore you all and make you all cry .please forgive me for this act of mine as I cannot cont any more why to make you all wait .

Take care

FF closed on writer's request.

Part 23

Few hours back

ASH and MEHER enter premeer bedroom heard some one coming hide them self behind door .they saw PREM he just looked at HEER and went back

They both relaxed as they held their breath after 2 min when it was quiet again they walked to HEER kneel down

MEHER: HEER didi get up

HEER: shocked what happen? Why you are here? Where is PREM? PREM is he fine tell me

ASH: bhabi he is fine first you listen us

MEHER relax didi

ASH: PREET and HARMAN came to know about Sameer and they want PREM bhai to stay away from it .PREM bhai will never listen to anyone .so they plan to send you both to Canada to look up business there. didi you freshen up we did your packing last night when we came in your room PREET is waiting for you make it fast .

HEER: but why PREM didn't tell me?

ASH : PREM bhai letter for you didi read it after wards as you don't have time

I will keep in your bag.do you need any thing else bhabi

PREET: form door keep some more clothes

HEER still confused while washing her face looking at her fore head in anger PREM you are to much I will not for give you so easily .

HEER change and took blessing from maa and hug everyone.

They reached air port

HARMAN waiting bye bhabi take care and please be care full he does not see you. He is very sad.

PREET: tease him for few more min if you like

HEER: I am angry you both don't worry take care of my both sisters

HEER in lounge hide her self from PREM when she saw him wiping his tears could not hold her self wanted to walk to him but stop "nahi PREM you hurt me "

In plane

PREM: surprised still thinking he is dreaming or HEER is sitting next to him HEER is that you?

HEER: no my ghost how dare you leave me like this you cannot wake me up I will not talk to you shaking his arm

PREM: who was so happy he did not listen a single word just looking at her as if he has seen her for the first time

HEER: Don't stare at me like that. I am really angry. You know I cannot live without you but you left me and yes what is this? Took out his letter wave in front of him

PREM: came back to his senses: now don't read it snatches it from her hand but how you came here?

HEER: give me back let me read your first letter she realized they are in plane

PREM: no it is not a love letter it is a sad one and now I don't want you to be sad

HEER: hug him never ever leave me (cannot hold her self more)

PREM: hold her more tightly I love you

HEER: PREM people are watching us

PREM: really

HEER: yes messages for you gave him the paper and took his letter back and keep it in her bag

PREM: what is this? Started reading

sorry we made you sad but we did not have any choice you never think about your self always thinking about other we want you to take some time out for your self and bhabi you had gone through great trauma because of D J and others. PB forgive us when you were sad we wanted to tell you but we hold our self as if we told you truth you will send Harman bhai and will say business no time for recreation in my life etc PB enjoy your trip and forget about home. we will take care of everyone after all we are your bhai trust us.

Your naughty students.

PREM smiled: see they are my baap

HEER: you were crying when I came and sit

PREM: yes i could not imagine leaving you but paused ok forget it

HEER: bus that was your love just came to know leaving me behind and going for business knowing she cannot live.

PREM: i never wanted to but had no choice.

HEER:PREM there is always 2 choice in each and every matter of life. it is you who decide. What is your Priority? You will listen your mind or your heart

PREM: shocked at her statement and felt guilt: yes you are right no body can force me if i say no.

HEER: hmmm put her head on his shoulder

PREM: HEER for give me

HEER: open her eyes PREM I will think (smiled)

PREM: ok as you wish relaxed as he saw there was a smile on her face .but thinking how correct she is if I had prefer her instead of my business HEER today I let you down sorry

HEER: shhh dont say like that as you listen me that is enough .PREM I want to sleep I am having head ache

PREM: ok sleep made her rest on his shoulder felt she is again warm warp his arm around fix her hairs dim the light both be aware from surrounding.

AIR hostess disturbed him as he was lost in staring him

Sir any thing

PREM: no thank you

sir is this lady with you as she showed PREM seat and he was alone at that time

PREM: yes my wife no thank you she does not want any thing just a blanket please .

Air hostess gave him he wraps around her as she was under medication she slept peacefully

Announcement due to bad weather flight diverted to Brussels PREM confused as she was sleeping if he again wake her up her sleep will be disturb he closed his eyes and listen from his heart let all the passenger go he picked her up walked through tunnel and to the hotel next to air port he didn't care people staring at him he walk through corridor

hotel staff showed him way to the room

PREM

PREM kept her on bed carefully without disturbing her smiled to him self as he succeed

Thank the guy who showed him way close the door and walk to his sleeping angel who just made him realized there is another life other than business. He lay down as he was too tired as for last 2 nights he didnot have proper sleep. He*ed her fore head and hold her tight and slept

After hours

PREM: kya in sleepy voice

HEER: PREM wake up see where we are?

PREM: sleep HEER and let me too please

HEER: cont shaking him PREM where we are

PREM: open his eyes kya looked at her confused face wanted to tease her more but smiled bad weather flight cancel so we are in hotel staring at her

HEER: hmmm how I got here?

PREM in my arms

HEER: what? Fixed her hairs

PREM: madam you said two choices in each and every matter of life it is you who decide you will listen your heart or you r mind .I just closed my eyes and think from my heart put her hand on his heart .staring at her

HEER: blushed at his long speech and his cont staring hmmm

PREM: madam now any other question or I sleep

HEER: hmmm no you sleep still thinking what people must be thinking

PREM: really looking at her

HEER: yes really and let me too and don't disturb me

PREM: oh I disturbed you tickle her

HEER hold his hand and did not let him tickle her

PREM you shaking me like earth quake PREM wake up we are capture by aliens laughed

HEER smiled PREM you talk a lot

PREM: you just wait and see what all your PREM do hug her and *ed her

HEER: blushed PREM I am hungry very hungry

PREM: smiled ok you go and freshen up i will order

HEER: for how long we have to stay here

PREM:12 hours I think let me check that too you freshen up

*her fore head go did not embrace her

HEER: surprised at PREM

mood thinking he talk that much as she had seen a serious PREM. quickly change and came out PREM pushing trolley in with brunch item looking at her as she was dress in a causal shalwar kameez

She knew he was looking at her cleared her throat: if you had stare me please freshen up as I am really hungry

PREM smiled walked towards her she pushed him to wash room

HEER: that side PREM

PREM: hug and whisper I am in love with you again

HEER: thanks for informing no more buttering PREM I have not for give you yet remind you that .

PREM: ok take your time he smiled and went to wash room

HEER drying her hair walk to the window and the view out side made her shout PREM come fast

PREM who was at the door looking at her walked to her Put his hand on her shoulder

PREM:Bolo

HEER holding his shirt and pointing out side from right hand :i want to walk there

PREM looking at her not at view her face reaction making him smile: ok but first you eat looking at her craziness

HEER: no first i will walk

PREM: shocked at her sudden childish act "but first" paused she was making he crazy "ok lets go "

HEER: really are you sure looked at him

PREM: yes let's go

HEER suddenly hug and *him I love you I cannot live without you

PREM hide his tears: hmmm hold her tight

HEER realized what she did: PREM how much time left we will eat you are right then we will go.

PREM: got HEER let her free as he want to see her sparking eyes do what every you want I am with you?

HEER quickly tie her hair and picked all their things pack not looking at him as she was feeling shy at her act PREM looking out thinking

HEER: PREM come and eat

PREM: you are ready

HEER: yes offer him sindoor

PREM put a pinch and hug her lets go picked up sandwiches and pull her from her arm we will not waste time HEER as each and every min of our life is important

HEER : PREM wait let me

PREM : shhh just come with me

Everyone staring at them as PREM create a scene in morning picking her up in his arms

HEER: PREM why they are staring at us

PREM: they are jealous of us dear

HEER: hmmm smiled why they are?

PREM: I showed them a free scene teasing her in way he feed her as they don't have time only 1 hour to their flight

They reached

HEER : PREM I am very happy you always full fill all my wishes

PREM: what I did? I am so lucky that in small things you get so happy see your face

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HEER busy in playing with fallen leaves PREM took many picture and hided his tears

PREM :HEER you know what I want to sing this song

HEER: yes my singer friend

PREM smiled but you will not laugh

HEER: hug him why will I ? hmmm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PG6Vio_IN8M

link of vm on same song by ron

Tu, dil ki khushi dil ki pyaas tu

Mere tan mein meri saans tu

Kami thi jo mujh mein vohi to mohabbat hai tu

Zindagi mein meri aasmaan ki inaayat hai Tu

Dil ki khushi dil ki pyaas tu

Mere tan mein meri saansTu

Kami thi jo mujh mein vohi to mohabbat haiTu

Zindagi mein meri aasmaan ki inaayat hai tu

HEER smiled and sing hold his hand

Phir se nahin duniya bani, maheke zameen tere kaaran

Pehle kahan aisi thi main, main hoon haseen tere kaaran

PREM

Na na na na na na yeh sab jhoot hai

HEER

Zindagi mein meri aasmaan ki inaayat hai tu

Hi my dearest readers of love story Premeer sorry after many months updated 24 part..You all know i started alone but after ............join me or it was a team work till 21part she was with me story was always mine but she was there to help me when i was confused.now i am back alone as life must go on

I know I had lost my readers of Premeer this FF but I will try to get them back again and finish this.

Prem looked at his wrist watch .wipe his tears:"Heer let's go we will be late."

Heer: "Prem I forgiven you I cannot be angry from you."

Prem:" I know you don't have to say all this "cup her face in his hand wipe away her tears

Heer: "you were too crying"'. looked at his face

Prem: smiled "I had to give you company to some one "

Heer:" oh you will give me company in everything"

Prem: "yes" smiled

They walk in and then to the tunnel and to plane every one smiled at them face.

Air hostess:" how are you maam "

Heer: "fine thank you" looked at Prem

Prem hiding his smile cleared his throat

Heer: "my naughty husband."

Prem: "kya what I did?"Making innocent face

Heer: pat his head "if I tell you one thing will you help me. And you will not make fun of me"

Prem: "kya "looked her in surprise

Heer: "PREM I have air sickness"

Prem: "ok but why you did not told me before "bit worried

Heer:" I forgot in anger and happiness."

Prem: smiled "ok (pat her head ) you just talk to me don't think you are in plane holding her hand tight"

Heer: "I am always giving you trouble."

Prem: "you tell me what is your really problem after hearing that I will tell you whether you are giving me trouble or not.>"

Heer: "seriously I feel air sick when take off and land ."

Prem: "ok (put earphone in her ears) listen this it is my favorite song and close your eyes. This time you will not feel sick you trust me. " she staring him in surprised he closed her eyes

Heer: "I trust you more than my self."

Prem: "ok you trust me that much I never knew now listens the song care fully I will ask you."

Heer looking at his face how quickly he changes.

Prem:"I asked you to close your eyes larki full volume."

Heer: "hmmm."

After 5 min PREM taken out the ear phone .she looked at him

Heer: "your favorite song but I must say this does not go with your personality"

'.shock at his behavior can not hold her laughter

Prem: "had a big laughter this is Preet Not mine by the way madam plan had taken off and I don't hear songs to distract you I did that. See nothing happen "

Heer: smiled "PREM you are clever".

Prem: "oh really you just trust in me I will solve your each and every problem."

At home

Kul di told each and every thing to maa and taken promise fro her not to tell Prem and Bauji .as Harman and Preet will take care of every thing.

Preet: maa just one thing ask Veera to stay at home '. During the whole talk they didn't notice Bauji standing at the dorr listening what happen at picnic

Bauji: "Preet meraa beta bara ho gaya hain he hug him aaj mein bohot khush hoon "

Preet :"bauji bus you don't worry we will take care off every thing you and PB take some time out and relax . that why we send PB

Bauji did not heard about Veera he just hear their plan of sending premeer to enjoy their life alone for few days.

Harman: OMG I was scared if bauji heard about Veera

Meher: how he could I was on guard.

Harman: how much you care about us ?

Ash: lets first talk to her Kuldi had locked her in room as she wanted to talk to Prem bhai

Preet: I will see how she will talk to PB

Ash: calm down Preet we will solve this.

Premeer reached Prem was waiting for the luggage Heer feeling some one continuously staring at her she looked around but can not find .

Pem: what are you looking for heer?

Heer: nothing lets go

Rahul : Hi Mr & Mrs Prem

Prem: Hi

Rahul : you here

Prem: yes I came here for a important meeting

Rahul: then be my guest Mr Prem.

Prem: no Thank you we already booked ..........

Rahul: how can be it possible you visit my city and stay in other hotel. Mrs Prem you asked him

Heer: it is his decision Heer total don't like him

Prem: ok we will stay

Rahul : with a smile . lets Go wink Heer

Heer : this guy is total disgusting how I will tolerated him

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey welcome bck but whos rahul