FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 66

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Ghia

hey

your back. loved the update...finally premeer are alone and can spent time together. cant wait to read more. update soon 😊

hi
yes i am back with a 😊 yes the are finally together and alone but how they are alone they are together
Insha Allah very soon i will up date
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice up date really speech less
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Posted: 16 years ago
the 1st thing i liked is where heer is so worried wht has happened to prem when she got up. U know, me and saveetha was talking that it can't b real to get the ticket for heer if prem couldn't get the tickets. but ur flash back proved that u r going with reality. Bcos her plan of going with prem was decided long time back by preeth. 👏
I liked the part where prem asks "heer is that u?". She replies "no my ghost". then the hugging part. it shows that they can't live without each other.
I liked the ending of the letter "ur naughty students".
Prem there is always 2 choice in each and every matter of life. it is u who decide. wht is ur Priority? u'll listen ur mind or heart. I loved these words. And it is very true.
I don't think prem let her down. looking after his job is his duty. So he did his duty and of course he tried to get a ticket for her na. So i don't think there is any fault in Prem.
Then the part where heer slesps on prem's shoulder. I just love it.
How sweet prem is, he didn't want to disturb her sleep. I loved the words where it says there is another life other than business.
Prem didn't want to disturb her sleep but heer was waking him so hardly. yh, she is confused, so she should. The scene that follows is so romantic.
Even i felt that heer is behaving differently now. Prem is so nice while staring at her behaviour.
Then the words wht prem says is so sweet. he didn't want to waste any min of their life any more.
OH my my! he was feeding her.
Naadia i'm just loving this whole part. Its so romantic.
Its so true that the girls have so much of happiness in small things.
I really loved the place where premeer went for a walk. Its so nice. I can imagine premeer in that place.
WHAT R U TALKING. PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS CONTINUE. DON'T STOP IT. IF U STOP OUR FRIENDSHIP WILL STOP. I REALLY COULDN'T BEAR U STOPPING THIS STORY. I REALLY FELT, NOW ONLY THE STORY IS STARTING BCOS IT WAS FULL OF PREMEER. BUT U TELLING THIS IS THE END. I'M IN SHOCK😭
U go with their story only. But bring in preeth as saveetha likes him na. so on behalf of her i'm requesting.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: priharsh

the 1st thing i liked is where heer is so worried wht has happened to prem when she got up. U know, me and saveetha was talking that it can't b real to get the ticket for heer if prem couldn't get the tickets. but ur flash back proved that u r going with reality. Bcos her plan of going with prem was decided long time back by preeth. 👏

I liked the part where prem asks "heer is that u?". She replies "no my ghost". then the hugging part. it shows that they can't live without each other.
I liked the ending of the letter "ur naughty students".
Prem there is always 2 choice in each and every matter of life. it is u who decide. wht is ur Priority? u'll listen ur mind or heart. I loved these words. And it is very true.
I don't think prem let her down. looking after his job is his duty. So he did his duty and of course he tried to get a ticket for her na. So i don't think there is any fault in Prem.
Then the part where heer slesps on prem's shoulder. I just love it.
How sweet prem is, he didn't want to disturb her sleep. I loved the words where it says there is another life other than business.
Prem didn't want to disturb her sleep but heer was waking him so hardly. yh, she is confused, so she should. The scene that follows is so romantic.
Even i felt that heer is behaving differently now. Prem is so nice while staring at her behaviour.
Then the words wht prem says is so sweet. he didn't want to waste any min of their life any more.
OH my my! he was feeding her.
Naadia i'm just loving this whole part. Its so romantic.
Its so true that the girls have so much of happiness in small things.
I really loved the place where premeer went for a walk. Its so nice. I can imagine premeer in that place.
WHAT R U TALKING. PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS CONTINUE. DON'T STOP IT. IF U STOP OUR FRIENDSHIP WILL STOP. I REALLY COULDN'T BEAR U STOPPING THIS STORY. I REALLY FELT, NOW ONLY THE STORY IS STARTING BCOS IT WAS FULL OF PREMEER. BUT U TELLING THIS IS THE END. I'M IN SHOCK😭
U go with their story only. But bring in preeth as saveetha likes him na. so on behalf of her i'm requesting.😉

hi
i was waiting for your reply i knew you will read today i am feeling 😳 as you and saveetha talk about my silly ff it is only what is in my mind nothing else dear friend if every thing in my hand i will not let any one cry or apart you dont worry that all preet part is for saveetha
the way you describe each and every part and write in detail how to tell you 😳
my heer is naughty , emotional , sensitive ,caring she cannot live without him that it you liked the letter last line what to say as you said no thank you 😳
about that line
Prem there is always 2 choice in each and every matter of life. it is u who decide. wht is ur Priority? u'll listen ur mind or heart. I loved these words. And it is very true.
i dont know my self how it come to my mind everyone liked that i was thinking it was rude to say to prem but ........
you really made my day when every you add your comments
i think you get life once and if you get it with your loved one you are more lucky he does not want to waste
no thankyou for loving the part😉 or reading as i write for you. i feel romance is like that only few people like my ff and they read
Its so true that the girls have so much of happiness in small things. but just few are like that not everyone
dont request order me you want preet 😉
and about that last part give me sometime i will not run away i need some time as i know if i stop i will lose many frineds which i dont want i am confused my self
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi pisces i think u should involve a bit of the family member in but more of premeer and u should continue th estory plz updtae the story so far is great
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Posted: 16 years ago
where r u jaan.....waitng for u n ur part....u told already completed....thn y late to update....cant wait more dear...plzzz update....
Urs...
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Posted: 16 years ago
where are you dear friend
hope in good health .when ever you have time update if not leave it but come to forum you are emotional

involved with forum and few friends no one will ask you to up date we want friend

your writting is most emotional on forum which reflect your personality in last part heer was strange she was emotional if i say your ff story heer is you your self .
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Posted: 16 years ago

My dearest sweet readers of love story PREMEER

I don't want to leave you any one like that from part 1 till 16 I did alone after that my angel came in my life

To give you best I started taking her help what help only she online nothing else if I type a line first she will read do this or do that . I became so use to of it now I cry I try a lot as I promise miss hyper 24 part this year but can not do it now when she is sick I feel down really down don't feel like coming . I know many of you like and read as readers increasing daily . I am saying sorry from bottom of my heart to each and every person as I hurt you all a lot as always I have an excuse. What to do?

My journey to forum and to write this ff

Nans who introduce me forum 🤗 I know on you tube I use to tease you a lot daily my who want I should smile 24/7 you made that on my request http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3itqTdOZ9NI

*Shifali* who added a topic create your scene where I wrote first part and I tease you a lot with my problem

Simi : who not knowing me force me to write next part and many other relation with you. My sis

Parth Garewal who teach me how to make a ff if u remember I really eaten your brain I am not getting you said leave it go to sleep see it in morning you will get what I want to tell you today when I read your that mail slap my head your silly didi

Lian : always there for me helping really when I am down you say I am there

Iqra : baji I am there my cute sis helping me few days back your offer baji send me I will edit for you don't cry

xganga.x: who always add nice comment

Ron : always leaving great comments and helping if you change it like that it will suite more

You area great friend made a vm on request http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eSBfypeUxfQ

angel82 : you support me you reply before I comment if anyone add any strange comment .and you edit that I will never forget

tanyaaaa26 : I know you are busy but we had nice time

sweta2005: you are my strength you ask me to get up lazy lump up date you are my support I know if no one will read you will

Maira686 : baji missing you

ranrags : you are a dear friend really a dear friend who love to read and leave comments .your support and pm

pooji123456789: your di love you thanks for reading and leaving comments

priharsh : what to say to you? you are a great friend nothing else

you made this on my request no words

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8zlC8XEJ08Q

last but not least premeer as there love bring me here
And thanks for all my pm friends it is very long list that why I am not taking any name thanks for your support who know me or not forgive me I am not taking many names really many names

Your writer will come back in next year with same story or other don't know but for this year hamara saath yahaan tak tha

May next year bring you happiness and joy you all stay hale and hearty and in peace full mind

Allah bless you all happy new year

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Edited by brokenheart26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
update soon and hope ur friend gets welll
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Posted: 16 years ago

You came you conquer our heart and lost some where

where are you ? plz up date

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