FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 70

Originally posted by: ~AngelCake~

r u gonna write anything abt milind???
everytime ur stating its final part n nothing abt michi.
if ur not gonna write abt them atleast inform me through pm.
or let me know milind's entry.
the title is v.misleading.its abt neev n uv written michi/na
i find this quite cheating so pls let me know if michi is part of it.

First of all...learn to READ! I clearly mentioned two updates back that I did NOT intend to write anything on them and secondly, I OWE you NOTHING to inform you of anything esecpially when you are so rude as to demand such a thing...

I will write about whoever I chose and you are not obligated/forced to read it so merely stay away...this is a personal request...do not post in my thread again.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

First of all...learn to READ! I clearly mentioned two updates back that I did NOT intend to write anything on them and secondly, I OWE you NOTHING to inform you of anything esecpially when you are so rude as to demand such a thing...

I will write about whoever I chose and you are not obligated/forced to read it so merely stay away...this is a personal request...do not post in my thread again.

Rimzi...you are making me laugh...is that you getting angry.😆

^^No JC...That is be pretending to be polite...😒😆...I didn't think cursing like a sailor would be appropriate...

i wasnt rude,the reason i dont post i know u all h8 me.so i keep way posting.
i wasnt rude.i didnt read any updates or announcement.
i dont read post by post or each line.
hut i didnt mean to be rude.
anyways good u cleared 4 me not writing abt michi.
yes i've read all michi parts but its wasnt much compare to neev dats why i asked.
u cud hv said this in a lighter tone.

Rimzi i love you...or do i. 🤗 But finally an update that didn't make me all sad and depressed.

will comment more in a few minutes. Gotta run.

Hey Rimz, I just read enough of the new chapter to know that NeeSha's kids name is Arjun!!! I like the name Arjun!!! 😃

Anyways jokes apart, I read this chapter and I thought it was very well done, I must say I liked it much better than the final part I which was no offense, a bit too depressing for me... Atleast things are moving forward this way!!! 😃 NeeSha have changed quite a bit from their previous selves, but its pretty realistic. And I can understand both of their point of views. Neev makes a pretty adorable father, which I'm sure he would be in the serial as well...

What I found interesting is the light in which you portrayed Ayesha as a mother, I found it intriguing because we never got to see Ayesha's maternal feelings in the show... And, it fits her character well... One part in the FF that tugged my heart was when Ayesha was thinking to herself, that had her child gone on her, he wouldn't have been accepted well at his school. That sentence just revealed so much about her character, and the type of childhood she led, and I think thats important because Ayesha's childhood is a crucial factor in shaping her up to be what she is. You know one of the primary reasons I was interesting in writing a Neesha FF, is that I always wanted to pen down a chapter on the origins of Ayesha, what her childhood was like living with a mentally retarded mother and an absent father... That aspect really intrigued me. So I'm glad that you explored it as well.

Anyways the chapter didn't have much of romantic NeeSha scenes, but I liked it as much as the previous chapters, because it gave a more wholesome perspective on NeeSha respectively, and how their parenting methods differed, obviously due to the way each was brought up.

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Originally posted by: milindkidewani

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My Arjun is here.... I still have to read it though...I m just way too excited.......Arjun is here....he is finally here.....😆

Your Arjun??? 😆 You were expecting this??? Lolz did Rims leak out a part of the story to you... But am gonna say Arjun is just made for me yaar!!! 😡😆

ok me back

Rima i just want to hug you for giving me this Neesha. Its an awe that not only do we share our love for Neesha but our understanding of them is similar to such an extent if not the same. I think thats why your Neev and Ayesha i've always loved..cause i can completely understand where these two are coming from and where they stand. The last update had left me a bit worried though like i said. It wasnt' that anything lacked in your explaination of Ayesha but i just have a blind spot when it comes to children. Anyone or anything that brings harm to kids is evil for me so i tuned myself off to Ayesha. Therefore i must hug you for not killing her for me. I would have cried buckets.

Somehow i am not sure if i ever believed Neev to move on with his life. Though you haven't made that part clear...i am not certain whether Neev and Priya are just good friends sharing living space or has their equation changed...which might have because what they've been living together for 5 years and Priya was in love with him all this time? But for some reason i don't belive Neev to have moved on...maybe its my need for fluff. 😆 and you didn't really give me a reason to think so. You did a fabulous job in doing justice to both of them. Helping explain their reasonings and their current state of mind and the complexity of how they reached where they are. And it made absolute perfect sense. Thats what storytelling is about. Though i did wish that you have just elaborated a slight bit more on the scn when Neev finds out that Ayesha didn't get rid of the baby. But thats ok you got the point accross.

And Arjun...sweet. I think this is new to KYM...a kid being shuffled between the parents...would love to read more on him and his interaction with both his parents. Though i am a little sad for Ayesha seeing that even Arjun hasn't been able to curb her insecurities. She is still afraid of loosing him too. Seriously she is a tragic character. My heart goes out to her.