FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 68

Originally posted by: fahimataq

Ahhhaaa Dil ko thandak mil gayi yeh sunke thanks goldy ..Lol...you'll like the next part...I promise...kinda...😆😃😉

Loved the update rims i understand what is going thru Neev poor baby 😭isn't he just...why am I doing this to him? I dont even know......I hear the word for people like me is sadist😭😆... His dialogues just got to me when he was angry with Ayesha I can say nothing is gona happen between Priya and Neev Pls say there isnt You'll have to see...soemthing does happen...but not what you think...😆 Hope priya plays the cupid between Neesha, calls up Ayesha or Ayesha turns up knowing what she has done to Neev.I dont wanna shoot down possbilities...but noaisa nahin hota... Nice to see sukiLOL...I really just needed soemone to make ayesha have a conversationw with...😆... I just think that I am not able to see Ayesha doing anything wrong 😕😕 She does and to some extent already has...she did wrong by Neev...Cos i understand how insecure she is...i mean her childhood (anybodys childhood) leaves a deep mark in their nature and it carries with you all your life so i kinda get what you are trying to do !I'm glad you do sort of get it...I guess it's hard to explaina nd soemtimes I do wish I could do it better but I think the jizt of what I wanted to show is there... Btw can i ask why u thot of me when writing the Part III the ayesha bit?Was it cos i sed i wasnt sure why she is been insecure without any reason? 😕 LOL...why the face???😳😆...yep mainly because of that...Anyways Great writing i tell you loving the story so far.........Cant wait for the next part!!!!!!!! 😳will post Friday I think...till then enjoy the MIX jc made...I love it...😉

Originally posted by: jinc118

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR...aww cutie...meri sherni!!!!!!



I am not supposed to be sad...i knew this was coming...but then why do i get sad.Because you didn't exactly know what was coming...or did you????/ tell me dammit!! i am supposed to be prepared for it. Neev takes my sympathy vote this time.I was certain he would...actually I added his bit just now...otheriwse I would have ended it with Ayesha but even then Neev would have had us going awwww I know all this time i've been leaning more towards Ayesha because i understood herI've been exactly the same...I didn't think ther would be anyone that didn't to a certain extent...and been unfair to Neev even though i knew what he was going thruawww no you haven't......but now its over...i can't see my Neevu jaan like this. his dialog to her...Gosh Rimzi...it was like squeezing my heart out of all the juice its got.HEHE...I shouldn't be delighted but it got the desired result so me happy😆...I feel terrible for him though... And his drunkeness and the thoughts...that sharp pain he felt at how much he loved this woman...😭That last bit was my favourite too... This update was ruled by him. I am sorry i can't forgive Ayesha for wanting to get rid of the child. but is there any way, you'll ever be able to udnerstand it? That was un-forgivable...no matter what her reasoning was...lol, I guess not...that turned me off to her pain.really......In my head it makes sense why she wants to do it...perhaps I didn't explain it well enough... You know how i am about kids...i think its my bias in this case. Okay...wont push...🤗sowieeeeeeee

K now waiting to see how much more this relationship can deteriorate.😕 Or is this the pit of hell from where they will at least be back to live like humans again. I LOVE this sentence...this is it baby...it cant get any worse can it...or can it...muhahahahaha😆...no please dont kill me...

Originally posted by: jinc118

Rimzi to you too. May i implore you to write your trademark fluffy stuff after this one is done. 😳 Aaj kal me no happies...all ffs making me sads.

Originally posted by: fahimataq

Oh My God 😲 That mix was mindblowing JC👏 Omg i lorvvvveedd it the scenes and words everything was so perfect and it goes hand in hand with this update as well...just brilliant work! 😳

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Thanks JC...🤗really appreciate it!

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

😆...I'll see...I cant do a fully fledged fic...might write one offs...😆...actually I got a few...let me send them to you if they're still saved...😆
I was just about to Pm you as well😛

😆