FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 67

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fahimataq

Where do i start? That bad huh... It was a good part but too depressing for me. aww I'm sowieeeeeeeeee🤗...I will make it betetr I promise...Im angry at Priya im sorry i just dont like her..why did she hug neev like that, friendly hug is fine but it felt she didnt wanna let go...she was scared yaar...hota hain...she felt safe with him😉😆...main hoti tou kabhi nahin chodti... My Neev is only Ayeshas to be hugged or by me 😳excuseeeeee me...😲...aur mein?😡 I totally get Ayesha's POV Phew...you were in my head while I writing that!😳...and the bit where she is walking home was 😭 Haina...I felt so too...BUT didnt like the end part, i find ayesha''s decision totally wrongIt was...but thats how she is... and Neev was the best in this update...a great friend and hubby 👏 He's a gem...lets hope he doens't do anything to make things worse now...Ayesha plssss trust Neev Im hoping this is not the end...it BETTER NOT BE!No not the end...nearly there though... I want to see a happily ever after for Neesha 😊You'll see what I have planned soooooooon!



Thanks Fima😳🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

😭Hai meri jaan...rou mat😭...it'll get betterrrrrrrr And I thought Michi were duffers..... Beautifully written...especially the part when Ayesha sees the two together hugging and going back home....👍🏼 aha...I seem to have done good there...thanks Goldy...I'm glad everyone liked that bit...😃

I m not mad at any of the three but at you...😡 Yeh kya kar diya......😭😭 LOL😆...thats it...blame the writers...it's so easyyyyyyyyyyyyy😉😆
See thats why they say Communication is important in any relationship.oh really😲😆...maine pehli barr suna😉...nah just kidding you're 100 percent right!..Ayesha had been keeping all her worries to herself...I really wished she had shared some with NeevShe just cant bring herself to, she's always had to deal with her problems alone...she doens't know how to share them......then he wouldn't had been so cluesless and now she doesn't even let him explain....jhasi ki rani ki tarah ladaai par utar aayi....Nature hain...samja kar...ab zabaan chuli hain tou boligi na bechari...😆....Though I do feel bad for her...I would react the same way if I saw my man hugging another woman...main ghar nahi aati vahi sab ka band deti....😆LOL...I can just imagine...😉😆...I would too!!!!!...😆
I really hope they patch up and Neev gets a chance to explain everything..something like that...😳😃. Yeh Priya bhi na.....I know she was scared out of her wits and Neev is a hottie😳 but itni der tak uske saath chipki rahi 😲.....Paagal ladki.LOL...Sach kahoon tou...I wudda done the same...😳...... Neev is a true true gentleman....he was a good friend and a good husband in this update but still bechara phas gaya.....I feel for him... Uff I feel for all the characters....😭😭😭Hai...kitni emotional hai meri jaaaaaaaan...it's okay sweetie...but I am so glad that you feel for all of them..I want that...to evoke some sympathy for all of them...
All in all a wonderful update...I can't wait to read whatz next....I know I said I can take whatever u throw my way but now I m not so sure.... I don't want them to separate....😒 Ottttttay...I'll fulfil your wishhhhhhhhh...soon...ish...🤔😆...Thanks Goldy!🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.soon



AWW thanks Hun!!😃 will do...posting next part now...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
😉
Edited by PourQuoi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
😛 Me first....I m gonna go read now....it better not make me cry more....😡😆😉
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I m gonna go and make roti shoti now...loved the update (I have already read it b4) will give detail comments tomorrow....😊
Actually i m excited as now I will come to know what I have been dying to know since this last chapter started.......😉😆😆
Edited by milindkidewani - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kya se Kya hogaya Is this the last part?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fahimataq

Kya se Kya hogaya Is this the last part?

Na na picture abhi baaki hai mere dost....😳
Actually I m more interested in the next update....😉 Rimu knows why.....😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ahhhaaa Dil ko thandak mil gayi yeh sunke thanks goldy ..
Loved the update rims i understand what is going thru Neev poor baby 😭 His dialogues just got to me when he was angry with Ayesha I can say nothing is gona happen between Priya and Neev Pls say there isnt Hope priya plays the cupid between Neesha, calls up Ayesha or Ayesha turns up knowing what she has done to Neev. Nice to see suki. I just think that I am not able to see Ayesha doing anything wrong 😕😕 Cos i understand how insecure she is...i mean her childhood (anybodys childhood) leaves a deep mark in their nature and it carries with you all your life so i kinda get what you are trying to do ! Btw can i ask why u thot of me when writing the Part III the ayesha bit?Was it cos i sed i wasnt sure why she is been insecure without any reason? 😕 Anyways Great writing i tell you loving the story so far.........Cant wait for the next part!!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR



I am not supposed to be sad...i knew this was coming...but then why do i get sad. i am supposed to be prepared for it. Neev takes my sympathy vote this time. I know all this time i've been leaning more towards Ayesha because i understood her...and been unfair to Neev even though i knew what he was going thru...but now its over...i can't see my Neevu jaan like this. his dialog to her...Gosh Rimzi...it was like squeezing my heart out of all the juice its got. And his drunkeness and the thoughts...that sharp pain he felt at how much he loved this woman...😭 This update was ruled by him. I am sorry i can't forgive Ayesha for wanting to get rid of the child. That was un-forgivable...no matter what her reasoning was...that turned me off to her pain. You know how i am about kids...i think its my bias in this case.

K now waiting to see how much more this relationship can deteriorate.😕 Or is this the pit of hell from where they will at least be back to live like humans again.



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

😛 Me first....I m gonna go read now....it better not make me cry more....😡😆😉ooppps my bad...I updated before I read that!

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😭 sowieeeeeeeeeeee
I m gonna go and make roti shoti now...loved the update (I have already read it b4) will give detail comments tomorrow....😊nahin yaar...padh liya bad mere liye...THANK you jee...aab roti geele na ho jaye aansoono se...😆
Actually i m excited as now I will come to know what I have been dying to know since this last chapter started.......😉😆😆Yes you will😉...hopefully you'll remember the name this time!😆


Thanks Goldy!!

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