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Rima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: fahimataq
Ya already know my comments but loved this part...everything about it.hehe I know...and you're far too generous with your praise 😆 Ayesha i love even more noe cos her insecurities have a base and it feel snatural to have that feeling..awww yes you mentioned and I'm glad you told me that...part of the reason I had to change the story too😉😆.pls pls dont let anyone come between..itni mushkil se neesha ek hoye hain😭 No one is coming in between except themselves really...Pls get priya married to a decent rich businessman with a big family so she is happy forver away from neesha!!!LOL...you'll see what happens😆...amn you're going to kill meeeeee Ok how cute and romantic is neevHaina😳..i forgot to tell you but have you heard the song Kuch khaas i think its suits them soo wellll!!OMG...you wont believe it!!! I chose the same songs for Munee's fic...Love them!😳😳😃...And also the song mar jawan it reminds me of ayesha! somehow...her love for neev...These set of lyrics reli suit neesha:

''Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..''

And from Mar jawan i think brilliantly suits your ayesha:

''Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,

Bheege bheege sapno ka jaise khat hai,
Haii..
Geeli geeli chahat ki jaise lat hai,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan'

Soche dil ki aisa kaash ho,
Tujhko ek nazar meri talash ho,
Jaise khwab hai ankhon mein basse meri,
Waise needon pe silvate pade teri,
Bheege bheege armaano ki rahad hai,
Haii
Geeli geeli khwahish bhi to behad hai,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan..'

Beautiful songs😳😳 and soooooo right! And finally lovely writing...cant describe in words how good you are! 👏😳Thank you so much...now am sure you dotn want me to start so I'll accept the compliment😆Very eager for the next part...keep the neesha scenes coming😉Lol...will post soemtime next week for sure...thanks for reading it for me hun! You're a great help!!!!!🤗

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Goldy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#642

☺️v☺️ uff uff.....haaye....loved this part.....This is exactly what I wanted to read ...thankyou for changing the story........loved it....BEAUTIFULLY written......⭐️

The part where they make Halwa....OMG...that was so good and sexy....I m making my next halwa like that 😆 How do u come up with such ideas??? so so romantic....😳😳

Plus the part where Neev takes her to terrace in the rain and later for celebrations.....that was so good...I love ur Nessha...Neev a bit more...he is romantic at heart but jhalla (paagal)....he is gonna get his a** kicked later by his adorable wife...Ek to usko bina dekhe office chala gaya and then he calls Priya into their private moment...But i m guessing this was all so that ayesha could meet up with Priya and know all that is going on in Neev's professional life....

I really hope Ayesha can loosen up a bit more n tell all her insecurites to Neev....coz he is totally unaware of them......the part where he says to Priya "Main hoon na" Ayehsa kya main khud dar gayi...... I really hope Priya doesn't come in between Neesha....but i m ready to take whatever u throw my way 😛

Can't wait for the next part....😊

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Rima

@PourQuoi

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: milindkidewani
☺️ uff uff.....haaye....loved this part.....This is exactly what I wanted to read ...thankyou for changing the story........loved it....BEAUTIFULLY written......⭐️Lol...aur bhi hein...I mean things you wanted to read...Imma include it in later updates...turning out longer than I expected...😆..Thnak you for the compliemnts Goldy....😳

The part where they make Halwa....OMG...that was so good and sexy....I m making my next halwa like that 😆Lol...😳...mein bhi😆😆😆actually mujhe halwa banana nahi aata...so I guess it'll be the other way around😆 How do u come up with such ideas??? so so romantic....😳😳I dunno...actually I was thinking that Neev just make it and surprise her but this was cuter I thought...

Plus the part where Neev takes her to terrace in the rain and later for celebrations.....that was so goodGlad you liked it....I love ur Nessha me too!😳...Neev a bit more.Somehow...I love Ayesha alot...cant even explain it..he is romantic at heart but jhalla (paagal)....he is gonna get his a** kicked later by his adorable wife.woh tou hain...and it'll change him too..Ek to usko bina dekhe office chala gaya and then he calls Priya into their private moment...But i m guessing this was all so that ayesha could meet up with Priya and know all that is going on in Neev's professional life....Yes, that was mainly the reason...and also because I think people were unsure why Ayesha felt so insecure and I needed to show that too...

I really hope Ayesha can loosen up a bit more n tell all her insecurites to Neevdont we all...but she's just not like that....coz he is totally unaware of them.he is...when he thought she wanted to tell him soemthing...he assumed it was soemthing else.....the part where he says to Priya "Main hoon na" Ayehsa kya main khud dar gayi...... awww...nothing to fear really...especially not from Neev...I really hope Priya doesn't come in between NeeshaShe wont in the way you think she will.......but i m ready to take whatever u throw my way 😛 LOL...Partly because you know most of it...😆😆😆

Can't wait for the next part....😊Might post tonight or tomorrow😉

Thanks Goldy! You're an ace!⭐️🤗

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Rima

@PourQuoi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#644

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@-JC-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#645

I am here I am here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Rimzi...tu update kar ke kahana chali gayi?😆 i had expected something of the sort..but then i hadn't quiet. Now whom do i blame...😕 Kiske sar pe danda maarun?🤔 Urs would be the obvious answer.😳😆 Don't worry ..i am laughing...cause its a defense mechanism....i laugh when i can't handle the heartbreak.

Somehow though i knew it...just doesn't make it any easier to read. I find myself in Ayesha's position...heartbroken...(actually the part where Ayesha is walking home i thought was the best written🥺) but i feel like i hate Priya...but then i don't cause she gave me no reason to hate her.😭 But i hate her still.😕 Ok to be fair i understand her fright...and that she didn't do anything wrong...but still i wonder...if she wasn't in love with Neev...would this have happened...would she have stood there hugging Neev and even though Neev tried to talk to her would she have still behaved that way...Maana Neev is clueless...but grrrrrrrrrrrrrr....i guess i am just as possessive as Ayesha (someone who would mark her territory even while sleeping😆 and would hate to see my man hugging another girl just like he would me) ...so maybe thats the reason i want to blame the two of them...i know its unfair....but thats what i am feeling right now...like a jealous, pissed off girlfriend/wife.

*SIGH* *BIG SIGH* ....*BIGGER SIGH*. *SHAKES HEAD* and *CRAWLS INTO BED*. Good night.😒

P.S. : i think Ayesha and I need a slap from Neev.

Edited by jinc118 - 16 years ago

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-Deepa-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#646

Rimu, enjoyed reading Part 2. Beautiful!! Neesha at their romantic best. ☺️☺️ Haaye...rain romance...kitchen romance. 😍😍😍 Bole tho ek dum jhakaas!!😛 Ayesha seems so chui-mui in your ff.😳😆 Ab yeh Priya ko kyon invite kiya Neev ne? But anyway good...Ayesha got to know that she is just an associate. Hope this Priya doesnt interfere/create problems in Neesha's life.

Reading next part...will comment.

Part3: Ayesha!! yeh kya kar diya! She came to wrong conclusion and moreover she didnt trust Neev. What to say! Hope she doesnt take a drastic step. But good that Priya is a nice girl...she wont take advantage of the situation.

Update soon.😊

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#647

Oh dear once again I believe this is the most difficult phase in KYM be it;s ffs onscreen or offscreen the story has no light to it. Ok I'm sorry but I'm depressed very much I can understand Ayesha I can understand Neev and strangely enough I can understand Priya too. Why oh why whoever said ignorance was bliss was so eight. This is heart wrenching I believe your Neesha might never find peace till they breathe, sad end to a fitting story.