FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 64

Originally posted by: jinc118

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh Me first and Thankyou jaan. Luv you tons for this. What timing i have. Just signed onto the forum.😳 And btw i didn't turn yet...still got 4 hours to go

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

..😆...I know it's early...but I didn't think you'd come online😡😆...and need to hit the sack soon...got work tomorrow😆...but in advance hunny...Happy birthday...Thankyou thankyhou thankyou. You make me happy after a rather strange once in a lifetime kind of day that i had.😕 Its good to be among familiar ppl.

btw...I did say I changed the story a bit...so wait one more update and then you can upload...😳😆 (dont kill me) Like i said..only because i need you to finish this story.😡😆 Also...I think I made a mess of your birthday message 😭...I dont know why it's behaving like that!! so I just wanna say...I used cute emoticons😆...


Its ok Rimzi. I appreciate the thought.

Originally posted by: jinc118

Ok my comments on the update: awwww😆birthday tha tou maaf karti...but dekhte hain what'd you think...

To start i don't know if i told you last time...this Ayesha is a bit hard to fathomNo you didn't...and it is mainly because there was no transition period from past Ayesha to present Ayesha that it's probably hard to understand her... ...she is way different from the Ayesha at the begining of the FF...but gather that her mom's death made her go further into her shell that was waiting and ready for her to crawl into.But yes...for the most part...she reflected alot of her mother's life and how it accumulated to nothing much and she doesn't want to die the same way (not literally butyou know what I mean...)... I can see the discomfort of the last part being overtaken by her desire to be happy with Neev and seeing that change is heartwarming.Yes...I figured she 'd give it at least a try...if fater that she gets stung then she'll never try again but without knowing what was in store for her...she couldn't have made the descision to be alone... I am happy not just cause Neev deserves it but Ayesha too should allow herself that happiness. Yes, they both do and I think so too...And she does realize what a mistake she made with all the time she wasted. Thats for sure... In the last part I felt a bit strange about her insecurities. But this part its becoming clearer that Neev is clueless to her feelings about it...and its that she is not getting the reaction she wants from him that is feeding her insecurities. Yes, certainly...if he had known how it makes her feel when he is with other women, he would be more tactful...his interactions with Priya unnerve her but Neve isn't aware of that and he does nothing to shield her from her...Though i don't blame Neev...i think Ayesha is need for absolute attention but she doesn't show her need and therefore Neev doesn't realize it that she feels ignored sometimes.Yes, you've nailed it! She's never actually spoken about it or expressed her feeling towards it...how is he to know...There are certain men that need it spelled out...I guess Neev is one of them... I loved how you showed that lol......in Neev leaving to attend Priya's call without explaining to her who she is and then leaving in a hurry without even looking back and then at the celebration leaving Ayesha's side to get Priya to come inYes and it's gonna come bit him in the a*** soemtime soon......these things that Neev does without much thought are working to create the next update i believe.Yes...I think most people can guess what's coming next...😆 Having said all that i am so so so glad you changed the story line (slightly) because i would not have gotten a gift that made me happy otherwise.😆 Lol..yeh😆...deff this was not originally written like that...And last but the most important part...my favoritest part...actually my favorite part of the whole Neesha story...the halwa making👏 Brilliant. Yes i liked it more than their love making.😆omg😆...LOL...Really...I didn't think it was all that😆...but am so glad you liked it...making me glad I wrote it now There was this comfort level, a sweetness, and a sensual feel at the same time...and a glimpse of ...whats the word...urrrrrrrrrrrrgh...can't think...the image in my head is so powerful...makes me melt at the sight. awwwww Good good...I like how you described it...😳...I guess it is! It was beautiful Rimzi. Muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaah for that scn. ahaha...I think i love that scn and the halwa feeding too. That Neev says so proudly he made the halwa...oh my Neevu must have looked so delicously cute and his reply to Ayesha and Ayesha thinking how she couldn't stop herself from laughingYou know why I didn't think it was very exciting is because it was nothing elorate or grand...just them two..in their house...making food😆...but perhaps thats the beauty of it...and yes...Neev😳😆looked goooooood making and eating that halwa😆...a true happy happy moment. Mera dil baag baag ho gaya. 😳 Okay😳😆...savour it hunny...kal pata nahin kya hoga...Thanks soooooooooooooooooooo much for that. 🤗aww no probs For keeping promises unlike yours truly. 😆Nah...you do too...😉😆 but but...you gotta tell me what this rather strange once in a life time kinda day you had was...

Originally posted by: johnangad

luv da way their relationship is progresing. ayesha is a loner and neev is everybody's friend, she needs tym to completely open up. but their luv is so obvious!

Originally posted by: lizzy_de

Great update, I love every thing the rain , the romance . the halwa ,the feeding .awww good good...am so glad!😃😃😃...but why have you brought this priya in between Because sometimes people can fall in love with a person that they cant have...and I want Priya to convey that too, without becoming like the Ayesha in show, i was shock that Neev went to work without giving a second look to Ayesha .Because he was in a rush...it happens alot with me😆a has got frightened about Neev's and priya's relation then it is natural after what she has gone in her own lifelifeyep...there you go...most women are at least to soem degree insecure but in Ayesha's case it's greatly hightened by the fear that like her father...Neev too might end up with soemone else... But Reems..........when Michi are coming back...They're not hunny...I dont know if you read the note on page 76 but I mentioned that...sorry hun....