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Posted: 17 years ago
me coming back to say thank u JC once I read it 😃but sure u must have done a lovely job I'm sure of that so well done dear👏 👏
Edited by wande - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
JC, I so luv this FF! I already loved your Ayesha but Prachi is also growing on me. What I like about them is that they are quirky, relatable and real. They are not fairy tale princesses, who are perfect and everything they touch turns to gold and has every man swooning over them. 😆 Also, liked Prachi's interaction with Alaap. Your siblings should be the people that you can count on to give you a reality check when you need it and Prachi certainly seems to be doing that with Alaap.
Edited by blackcurrant - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow.. thts all I have to saii
hmm im realli waiting fo ru to disclose more abt Kayva and Anjali
I think what Prachi did to Alaap was good.. he realli shud be regretting.. onli if he didnt do what he did, Prachi wud have a better life..
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
JC...looks like I'm last... tbh...I really didn't know what to think after this chapter and so was taking my time to comment. No criticism what so ever of what you've written, just personally finding it difficult to feel any sympathy for Alaap...I dont know whether that was your intention or not, but I think because I hate him so much in the show, I no longer has the capacity to see him other than what he is now. With Ayesha, it was alot different and dont kill me but even now I can sort of sympatise with her on the show and thats why I love her in your FF too.

Can we get Milind to beat him, just once? for me???😳 I know, I know...it's harsh

But of what I did read and enjoy was Prachi's reaction to him. I loved when she said, "Maybe I'm paying for your deeds..."

Also...I do harp on about her but Anjaliiiiii!! This girl! She is a total enigma or rather her situation is and it is fustrating me no end!!! But I have promised patience and shall try and abide by that... 😊

Also...as small as it was, I'm clinging on to the Neesha part until you bestow us with more 😊 (Which I am hoping will be abundant in the next part? 😳 )

Lastly...Prachi talking to Milind's photo was very sweet and I liked that she put on his shirt. I can only too well appreciate what that means.

Will be waiting (patiently) for your next update! 😊 THANK YOU JC! 👏
Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Prachi wearing Milind's shirt and talking to his picture was very cute.😳 Poor girl...she cant even express her feelings for the past few years. I hope this girl gets the well deserved 1 day of happiness that she is asking God.

Whats up with Anjali?😕 She had been calling every now and then with titbits of information but whats going on with her. She moved in with kavya? 😕

So the Alaap over here is feeling guilty. Sounds good. Will he help Sukriti to get back to normal? Thats the only way he can be forgiven for what he did.

Lovely update, JC. Enjoyed reading it.

Waiting for the next part. 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
I went through the Alaap-Prachi part again because it was the most confusing. Could understand why Alaap hates Milsi considering that he got thrashed by him but could'nt understand why Prachi slaps him and ask him not to be so ungrateful. What did Milsi do to deserve his gratitude?
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Posted: 17 years ago
Opti...JC...

Okay...after reading your comment Opti...I went to re-read it...I too at first thought it was Milind...but this is now a total stab in the dark most likely...but were they talking about someone else, if it were Milind, you would not have needed to refer to him as Him? Perhaps Inder...I'm trying to find some logic behind my guess and when I do...I shall get back to you...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Rima, I also first thought it was Inder but like you I was left clueless as to why his name sprung up in all this. Maybe she has promised Inder something which prevents her from leading a happy married life with Milsi.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

JC, I so luv this FF! I already loved your Ayesha but Prachi is also growing on me. What I like about them is that they are quirky, relatable and real. Thankyou. Thats really nice to hear as i am struggling with that aspect...its so hard to keep them real.😆 They are not fairy tale princesses, who are perfect and everything they touch turns to gold and has every man swooning over them. 😆 Also, liked Prachi's interaction with Alaap. Your siblings should be the people that you can count on to give you a reality check when you need it and Prachi certainly seems to be doing that with Alaap. Yup that was what she intended to do when she had a chat with him. She was hoping that somehow she will get through to him and make him see life differently and she did accomplish that...at least he is thinking about doing something to undo what he did. How successful he will be is to be seen. Thanx for the commets BC. appreciate it.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

JC...looks like I'm last... tbh (what does that mean?)...I really didn't know what to think after this chapter and so was taking my time to comment.uh-oh. Is that a bad thing? No criticism what so ever of what you've written, just personally finding it difficult to feel any sympathy for Alaap...I dont know whether that was your intention or not, but I think because I hate him so much in the show, I no longer has the capacity to see him other than what he is now. With Ayesha, it was alot different and dont kill me but even now I can sort of sympatise with her on the show and thats why I love her in your FF too. I can understand that. I am like that too. The feelings i have for the characters in the show spill over to the characters in the FF i read. BUt thankfully it doesn't happen when i write my own FF>😆😆😆 I don't expect there to be sympathy for Alaap. No one can. But hopefully he'll just be given a chance to lead a better life...be part of his own family again.

Can we get Milind to beat him, just once? for me???😳 I know, I know...it's harsh lets just say that Milind is not one to forgive easily...not someone who hurt his sister...not a guy like Alaap. So you can well guess what their meeting will be like when Milind sees him. 😃

But of what I did read and enjoy was Prachi's reaction to him. I loved when she said, "Maybe I'm paying for your deeds..." That was truly meant to hurt him. He needs to get hurt in order to have some justice for what he did to others.

Also...I do harp on about her but Anjaliiiiii!! This girl! She is a total enigma or rather her situation is and it is fustrating me no end!!! But I have promised patience and shall try and abide by that... 😊 Don't fret so much. I'll put in a KavyaAnjali part in the next chapter.😆

Also...as small as it was, I'm clinging on to the Neesha part until you bestow us with more 😊 (Which I am hoping will be abundant in the next part? 😳 ) hmm...now toss between Neesha or KavyAnjali?...I can try to juggle both...well Michi will be on hold anyway...so...i hope i have the time this weekend.

Lastly...Prachi talking to Milind's photo was very sweet and I liked that she put on his shirt. I can only too well appreciate what that means. lolz...shes crazy. But she loves him to death. Poor girl can't even tell him.😭 Oh my dear Prachi *sigh*

Will be waiting (patiently) lolz. for your next update! 😊 I'll do my best to do it on Sunday night. THANK YOU JC! 👏



BTW i see that you and Opti have started your guessing games. 😆😆😆 Interesting views. Now also come up with a reason behind your guess that the "him" is Inder.😆😆😆 Actually you are right if there wasn't a secret behind the HIM then i would have opted to put the name down.😳 So keep guessing guys. *runs*
Edited by jinc118 - 17 years ago

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