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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Prachi wearing Milind's shirt and talking to his picture was very cute.😳 Poor girl...she cant even express her feelings for the past few years. I hope this girl gets the well deserved 1 day of happiness that she is asking God. Lets c if the Gods have some mercy on her.

Whats up with Anjali?😕 She had been calling every now and then with titbits of information but whats going on with her. She moved in with kavya? 😕 yup she did. Why will most likely be in the next chapter.

So the Alaap over here is feeling guilty. Sounds good. Will he help Sukriti to get back to normal? Thats the only way he can be forgiven for what he did. Alaap is definitely feeling guilty now. But don't know what he can do to gain forgiveness. Maybe everyone will just need to have a magnanimous heart and finally maybe at the end just let things go...as holding on to grudges will really not solve much.

Lovely update, JC. Enjoyed reading it.

Waiting for the next part. 😳 Thankyou Deepa. I'll try to update on Sunday.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jinc118



BTW i see that you and Opti have started your guessing games. 😆😆😆 Interesting views. Now also come up with a reason behind your guess that the "him" is Inder.😆😆😆 Actually you are right if there wasn't a secret behind the HIM then i would have opted to put the name down.😳 So keep guessing guys. *runs*



I actually haven't come up with a reason yet but the word ungratefulness and phrase I hate him have something to do with it...I will develop a theory soon...😊 though I suspect opti may beat me too it...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey JC very beautiful part dear 👏..and iss part meh milind nahi tha ..i miss him 😳..lekin next part meh jaroor milind ko wapis bulana 😆..

i really love ur writing style 😳..am waiting ur next part

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hello JC!!! I kept looking for your update and then did not for a couple of days and then boom it was there!!!! 😆 😆
It was a good part, kind of 'covering up all angles' part. And is that why you had that title..."Things that matter" because I was searching for relevance of that title in the chapters!
I felt bad for Alaap! I genuinely did and credit goes to you for that! I feel he is being punished too much!! Personally, I feel Alaap should be forgiven provided he is genuinely repenting! But I leave it to you how you wanna tackle it.
For some reason you got Saumya to the Shah house. You probably are planning to build something around her and so I will wait for it!
No Neesha 😔 and I was sorely sorely disappointed 😆 😆........lekin wait karti hun, aur kar bhi kya sakte hai??? 😉 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahib29

Hey JC very beautiful part dear 👏..and iss part meh milind nahi tha ..i miss him 😳..lekin next part meh jaroor milind ko wapis bulana 😆.. I don't think he'll be back next chapter. As next chapter has almost no Michi. But we'll see..cause often when i start writing..things come up as i go along and tends to be different from what i plan to write.

i really love ur writing style 😳..am waiting ur next part Thanx Mannu. I'll update on Sunday.

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Hello JC!!! I kept looking for your update and then did not for a couple of days and then boom it was there!!!! 😆 😆 lolz. I did the same for ur FF hun.😆😆😆 But ya i only found time on Wednesday to write.
It was a good part, kind of 'covering up all angles' part. And is that why you had that title..."Things that matter" because I was searching for relevance of that title in the chapters! I realized only after i finished writing that the relevance of the title was not revealed in that chapter. The title was meant actually for the conversation Prachi and Alaap had...that really was the most important part of the chapter. But since i didn't actually say what the convo was...the relevance won't be understood now. Basically because what Prachi has told him...has put things in perspective for Alaap...about the things that really matter in life.

I felt bad for Alaap! I genuinely did and credit goes to you for that! I feel he is being punished too much!! Personally, I feel Alaap should be forgiven provided he is genuinely repenting! But I leave it to you how you wanna tackle it. lolz darling. I think you are the only one who feels bad for him (because as the writer even i don't)😆😆😆 It has to do with how much we all hate the character on screen but you have that advantage cause you don't watch the show.😊 But if you feel that in a unbiased reader my writing is invoking sympathy for him...then i guess i am doing a good job. Thankyou. But he'll be punished severely...he has only begun to repent...he has to endure everything that he put others thru.

For some reason you got Saumya to the Shah house. You probably are planning to build something around her and so I will wait for it! lolz. umm...i did plan something but its not a concrete plan. I just wanted Shah house to be full of ppl. Since Neev and Ayesha are spending so much time with each other...and no one else was there PL was getting lonely.😆😆😆 So now she has company. lolz. thats not the only reason tho.😆😆😆
No Neesha 😔 and I was sorely sorely disappointed 😆 😆........lekin wait karti hun, aur kar bhi kya sakte hai??? 😉 😆 😆 haan aur kar bhi kya sakte hain. Trust me it is better that i don't hurry and give you what you want. I have learned my lesson from the one time i did that. There is only few more important Neesha parts left and a lot more intense Michi parts and both need my full focus and attention to details...so i'll write them when i am not distracted.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
JC, my mind is now buzzing with a lot of thoughts about your FF. Seriously I need to get a life! This week was one of the most gruelling at work and here I am discussing your FF!!! Anyway I will come back with my intrepretations of your puzzle once I firm up on my idea. For now there is one prediction I am fairly certain about. Soumya's delivery will be a difficult one and Suki may witness it and this would trigger a rapid progression in her mental health since it would remind her of her own ordeal. She may later meet Alaap during the christening of the baby and that should bring out some more of the repressed feelings and soon she may be fully fit. Then comes the difficult decision Prachi would have to make regarding Ritwik since she has already decided to leave Milsi after Suki gets well and is in a postion to take care of her own son.
Edited by optimist - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
After a lot of thought I have come up with my own interpretations of Prachi's strange behaviour.

The facts as we know them:
-Milsi came to SM on the day Inder died and had a confrontation with him over Alaap which was witnessed by Prachi
-Prachi then confesses the truth to Inder
-Inder promises to set things right
-He meets with an accident and dies
-Prachi blames herself for everything
-She raises Ritwik up and is responsible for keeping him alive
-She wants Suki to get better and accepts Milsi's proposal of marriage not just to hold on to Ritwik but to get back Suki her lost life
-She asked Milsi to promise her that he will not fall in love with her under any circumstance
-She apologies to Inder's portrait for breaking her promise but says that it is only to set things right
-She is planning to leave Milsi once Suki gets well
-She locks herself up with Alaap and talks to him for two hours at the end of which the guy is remorseful and says he hates him.
-She slaps him hearing this and asks him not to be so ungrateful

Now the incidents I listed I feel are all interconnected. Here is my take. After Milsi leaves SM, Prachi would have gone to Inder and told him that Alaap indeed had duped Suki and Milsi's indignation was justified. Something in her voice would have made Inder realise that his daughter is in love with Milsi. While he would have trusted her words, the shrwed business man that he is, he would have immendiately seized on the opportunity to negotiate.

Now my own feeling is that Inder did not think highly of Milsi.(although you have not said so explicitly anywhere). In fact he would have been convinced that Mishraji's son was a wastrel and his daughter would be better off without him in her life. Being a doting father he may have wanted the best for her. I think he may not have been aware that Milsi did not even know about Prachi's love for him let alone reciprocate it. So he would have asked Prachi to stay out of Milsi's life and in return he will ensure that Alaap marries Suki and brings her home as his daughter-in-law. Prachi would have agreed to this considering it is for the good of Suki and also considering that her love for Milsi may in any case be unrequited since she had never revealed it to him. Inder may have then gone to meet the Mishras to fix up the alliance when he met his death. This would explain why Prachi feels guilty about Inder's accident.

Coming to Prachi's condition that Milsi should not fall in love with her. This is related to her promise to her father. While she admitted to her father's portrait she will be breaking her promise, it is to set things right for Suki, something which her father was in any case about to do. However, she wants to fulfill that promise in spirit. This is why she intends to leave after getting Suki well and uniting her with Ritwik. Given her soft heart which cannot bear anyone suffering because of her, she wants to ensure that Milsi does not develop feelings for her during their marriage which would only complicate things when she finally leaves.

She knew that Alaap only cared for her and he needs to realise the consequences of his action on her life. He would have had not much sympathy for Suki. So it would be no use discussing her plight. That is why she would have told him Inder's condition and her decision to fulfill it in spirit by staying away from Milsi even if she is married to him and loves him.That is why he said he hates him and asks her, "Why you, Prachi" for at the end of the day it is Prachi who is suffering as a consequence of what her father made her do which in turn was a fallout of what he did to Suki.
Edited by optimist - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow opti, i love reading ur predictions. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh my darling JC may GOD bless u for this awesome,beautiful,wonderful and lovely part and I just want u 2 know that u my darling is doing an excellent job👏keep it up sweetheart 👍🏼I'm loving it thank u very much babe🤗


and also I am so sorry for this late comment of mine it just that with my graduation coming up pretty soon is making it really had for me to keep up with anything on the forum this days😊

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