FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 84

Originally posted by: panache

JC...beautiful part...first the playfulness of Prachi was beautiful...so heartfelt....I loved that... thankx.

I liked the fact that you truthfully said that Ayesha has the right to hate her father...i totally agree with you there...and she alone has the rite to hate him....Neev's understanding of it was beautiful... Yup. Even though she hears only good things about Inder, what he did and what experience because it will never be erased and it will never be ok. Since she first found out 5 yrs ago...her anger has had the time to simmer down. But its still unforgivable...and tho in a remote corner of her heart she has a place for her father...she can't stop hating him.

The Alaap you are describing is way better than the one on screen..this alaap has some regrets and he loves his sister.... Yes he is much much better. Its just that i saw that streak in the Alaap on screen. The part of him that cares for his sister (even in the amt of a grain of salt). So i thought of using that and making him a slightly better person.

I liked the finality in prachi's words....She cannot forgive him till Milind and Suk have....and i think there is nothing for her to forgive...the person who has to forgive him is suk........ Suki is definitely the first person he should seek forgiveness from. But the fact is that the stage he is in right now, he isn't thinking about Suki or Ritwik. He doesn't feel that concern for them yet. Prachi and his mom are two women in his life that he has the slightest respect for (tho he may not even realize it) and so Prachi has to be hard on him for him to become the kind of guy she wants to see her brother be. Technically there isn't anything he did directly to her that requires forgivness...but she can't forgive him for what he did to Suki and how that ultimately did effect her life too.

Very nice part! 👏 Thankyou.

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Great update JC!
But who was Alaap talking about? Milind? not to be revealed yet.😆
So is Anju living with Kavya? Im sure there is something more to this yes she is living with Kavya....Anyway Im glad that she's alright...! ofcourse there is more...and that will come out soon enough. Its really not the biggest mystery of the century. Anjali just hadn't had the chance to tell anyone yet.
Loved Neev and Ayesha's portion! They are so good together! thankyou
Waiting for the next bit!

Originally posted by: shabzc1

gr8 part JC..i liked the playful prachi, i could visualise the scene, thank god asha tai didnt catch her in milsi's shirt 😆 Oh actually she did see Prachi in Milind's shirt. Prachi was wearing Milind's shirt when she was on the bed talking to the frame and thats what Asha tai heard and saw.

anjali is living with kayva i presume, interesting, i wonder what led to that. Will tell you soon.

loved the neesha scene, neev and ayesha seem so perfect for one another 😳 hehe..yes they are perfect together.

im glad alaap feels some kind of remorse and i totally agree with prachi's stand. I do to.

thanx for updating JC 😊 I had to as no one else seemed to be updating. lolz.

Originally posted by: jinc118

Oh actually she did see Prachi in Milind's shirt. Prachi was wearing Milind's shirt when she was on the bed talking to the frame and thats what Asha tai heard and saw.

Originally posted by: jinc118

Asha tai had only witnessed Prachi talking to the photo frame.

oops, sorry.. i got confused with the above line, my mistake😊

Originally posted by: optimist

Another good chapter JC although it ended up throwing some more puzzles. It seems like you are gathering all the pieces of a jig-saw puzzle slowly but they are yet to be fitted in. So the picture is still hazy. I am sure you will fit them all in good time but the impatient woman I am, I feel a little restless at the end of it. sorry Opti. Looks like its going to be a long restless ride for you. Don't kill me plz.😆😆

Prachi's deep feelings for Milsi can be seen even if she exhibited it in a cute manner. Wonder whether screen Prachi's dialogues at the courtroom during the divorce proceedings inspired this scene - you know touching his clothes and hugging his picture while sharing her thoughts. Anyway loved it. Actually no. You know how good my memory is. So i didn't really have that scn in my head but maybe subconsciously...Wish Asha tai had heard and seen everything. Would have helped to clear the air when later Michi may have their misunderstandings. Asha tai did see her in Milind's shirt and she heard her talk to the photo. I think thats enough because Asha tai is a very wise woman.😊

I could'nt understand why Prachi has been so reluctant to send Ritwik to a regular school. I understand that he had a lot of health problems as an infant which affected his development. But now he appears to be pretty normal. Given that Prachi is portrayed as a selfless being, I dont think that she would have had any selfish motives to keep him back. She is pretty selfless but she is not saintly. There are some areas to Prachi's character that are not all that flattering because she is human. I'll try to explain better as the chapter go by.

So has Anju moved in with Kavya? She seems to be another mystery girl. Whatever problems she had with Kavya (atleast that is what I thought she had when she wanted to desperately come back) seem to have vanished. lolz. Anjali's secret maybe revealed as soon as Prachi calls her next time. But i don't know if i want to wait till she come back to write about what really happened or should she just tell Prachi over the phone.

Neesha seem to have developed a certain level of comfort and Ayesha is able to share her thoughts freely with him - even if those thoughts involved her father. One always finds it hard to forgive one's parents for their failings as one ends up judging them more harshly than one would any other relative. This may be because the expectations from the children are that much more. from a child's POV they want to always see their parents are role models and therefore are very judgmental of their actions. Parents are Parents and they are not allowed to make mistakes like humans do. Parents, on the other hand, are more able and willing to forgive their offsprings of their wrongs. And in the case of Ayesha, her entire life had been messed up by her father's failure to acknowledge his other family and grant them the much needed respect in society. The scars of that will take a long time to heal. It is good she has an understanding husband to see her through it. Now how long are we to wait before Neesha concretise their relationship with a physical union as the mental and emotional union appear to have already been achieved? Not long.😃 Not long at all.😳 I just need to find the time to write it.😆😆😆

Coming to Prachi-Alaap interaction, looks like Prachi gave him a full rundown on the events that led up to her marriage with Milsi. But has she told him her past with Milsi? She has told him a lot...tho in a summarized short form. He knows more than anyone else in Shah house knows about Prachi. There appears to be some reason as to why she had put the condition that Milsi should not fall in love with her after marriage. It seems pretty strange considering that she is madly in love with him. Earlier you had ruled out the possibility that it had anything to do with her need to feel that she has to pay for her brother's sins and hence should not end up finding happiness in the marital arrangement between Milsi and her. Then what could have prompted that strange condition she imposed on Milsi? The reason I am racking that up now is I am wondering whether she had revealed that reason to Alaap She did tell Alaap the reason for the condition...tho she may not have told him about the condition she put on Milind. and is that why he is angry at Milsi (I am presuming here that 'him' refers to Milsi). haha..maybe...maybe not. *runs*

Hmmm...... at the end of all this I am more confused than ever! Hope you sort out atleast a few of the puzzles before building some more!!! sure. Anjali puzzle will be solved soon...not the MAP puzzle tho.😆😆

Originally posted by: Charmed...

Brilliant part JC. I could just visualise Prchi in Milind's shirt. It would have been dead embarassing if Asha tai had came in! 😆 yes thats why Asha tai announced that she was coming..to avoid the embarrassment. Hmmm. Your still confusing us with Kavya and Anjali. Ok i'll reveal it soon. Neesha scene was just so heartfelt. I'm glad that Ayesha has Neev with her now. Your Alaap is just so much more better than the one on scene. I'm glad he's feeling some remorse. How long is he planing on staying? he may leave soon. but he may come back too.

Lovely update hun! Thanks!

Originally posted by: jinc118

sorry Opti. Looks like its going to be a long restless ride for you. Don't kill me plz.😆😆

Why am I not surprised?

Actually no. You know how good my memory is. So i didn't really have that scn in my head but maybe subconsciously...

Michi have that effect on us, JC. They wriggle into our subconscious even if we are not aware they do!!! By the way I am not accusing you of plagiarising. Just an observation that your Prachi is coming out pretty close to the onscreen one in some respects!

Asha tai did see her in Milind's shirt and she heard her talk to the photo. I think thats enough because Asha tai is a very wise woman.😊

Well then, I hope she opens her mouth and also tells Milsi what he needs to know when the situation demands it!

She is pretty selfless but she is not saintly. There are some areas to Prachi's character that are not all that flattering because she is human. I'll try to explain better as the chapter go by.

Some more waiting?! You'll never get tired of it, will you?😆

lolz. Anjali's secret maybe revealed as soon as Prachi calls her next time. But i don't know if i want to wait till she come back to write about what really happened or should she just tell Prachi over the phone.

Now, you better make her say that over the phone, and that too soon! I think you should atleast us that much mercy considering that you are stingy about revealing the MAP puzzle!

Not long.😃 Not long at all.😳 I just need to find the time to write it.😆😆😆

So I guess we will get to see some Neesha magic in the next chapter?

She has told him a lot...tho in a summarized short form.

OMG, if the summarised short form can take 2 hours wonder how much time the long form would take!!! Milsi spent only one year in the same college as her and she managed to establish such a strong bond (which the poor guy still does not seem to be aware of) within that short time, especially in their infrequent meetings?

He knows more than anyone else in Shah house knows about Prachi.She did tell Alaap the reason for the condition...tho she may not have told him about the condition she put on Milind.

You may add the readers like me to the list of people still ignorant of Prachi😆😆😆. Not fair! A downright slimeball gets to know more about her than I do?😡

Anjali puzzle will be solved soon...not the MAP puzzle tho.😆😆

OK. Atleast solve Anjali puzzle before I decide to jump into the Arabian Sea out of sheer frustration!!!!

Originally posted by: optimist