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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jinc118

Your MAP puzzle is a real big puzzle indeed!!! not that big. Like i said earlier...you were on the right track before...but now you are going off tangent.


JC, I feel like giving you a nice sound whack. So if I was on the right track why did you throw me off the track again, telling me I was not. You unnecessarily got my brains working over time! No matter what, I kept coming back to my original intuition with every passing chapter and had to keep pushing it away because of your comment. So I ended up with the most bizarre of scenarios! Anyway now I will stop taxing my brains. Thanks for giving me some peace at last.

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Posted: 17 years ago

ok hun even though i don't know how express my views i tried twice and my system eat em away lolz.it got stuck and whole thing went off i can't do it again.

luved the update hun awesome ur best work soooo far.i never thought u wud pull romance sooo beautifully, u surprised me luv it soo proud of u.the note ayesha put to neev asking him to read her dairy shows her trust in him.even though no third party in btn a couple,i luved that u brought counsler into this. much nedded. noone can their explain their trauma.luved it when ayesha ask u still luv me neev and neev's answer ahhhhhh i luv this guy .my respect for this guy reached everest high

ahhhhhhh now obiviously my fav read michi.what can i say i can totally see his grin after seeing that pic.ahhh millsi pulling our dolls leg. gawd luv them both.ahh our doll she is such an angle .her care for the puppy 😊 😊 😃 ahh asha tai is good.hun really u giv importance every single detail amazes me big time. u never forgets PL's dokhlas. awesomeeee hun soo proud of u
iam sorry if i say anything wrong.excuse my typos i wanna post it bfr my system goes bonkers on me again

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Posted: 17 years ago
i don't blame you JC, with all your exams you can not really update soon enough. i know that this long wait of everyone will be payed back as you have to give us MICHI fans a treat on the later on chapters. thanks! great! Take your time! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist


JC, I feel like giving you a nice sound whack. So if I was on the right track why did you throw me off the track again, telling me I was not. when did i do that.😕 No i told you you were thinking on the right path but the scenarios were different. Also because i still want to maintain a certain amount of suspense...😆😆😆 *runs* You unnecessarily got my brains working over time! No matter what, I kept coming back to my original intuition with every passing chapter and had to keep pushing it away because of your comment. lolz...hehe...you can't blame me...i don't want you guessing the whole story. Tho there is more twist in the story even if you guess about Michi's past correctly...i still want that revelation to be a shock.😃 So I ended up with the most bizarre of scenarios! Anyway now I will stop taxing my brains. Thanks for giving me some peace at last. lolz. You'r welcome.😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chituku

sorry about your system. Wish i could have read your comments.

ok hun even though i don't know how express my views i tried twice and my system eat em away lolz.it got stuck and whole thing went off i can't do it again.

luved the update hun awesome ur best work soooo far.i never thought u wud pull romance sooo beautifully, u surprised me luv it soo proud of u.lolz. Thanx. To be honest everytime i have to write romance...i do struggle a lot. Emotional scns are easier...and mystery too.😆😆😆the note ayesha put to neev asking him to read her dairy shows her trust in him. yup. She trusted him to read just what was meant for him to read and not the rest of her diary...and he didn't even though no third party in btn a couple,i luved that u brought counsler into this. much nedded. noone can their explain their trauma.luved it when ayesha ask u still luv me neev and neev's answer ahhhhhh i luv this guy .my respect for this guy reached everest high Neev is a darling😳 he is perfect.

ahhhhhhh now obiviously my fav read michi.what can i say i can totally see his grin after seeing that pic.ahhh millsi pulling our dolls leg. gawd luv them both.😆 yes. ahh our doll she is such an angle .her care for the puppy 😊 😊 😃 ahh asha tai is good.hun really u giv importance every single detail amazes me big time. u never forgets PL's dokhlas. awesomeeee hun soo proud of u 🤗Thankyou chits. I am detail oriented. Just have bad memory cells tho... so sometimes i forget the details that i observe or write about myself.😆😆
iam sorry if i say anything wrong.excuse my typos i wanna post it bfr my system goes bonkers on me again no probs.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: azam12neelab

i don't blame you JC, with all your exams you can not really update soon enough. i know that this long wait of everyone will be payed back as you have to give us MICHI fans a treat on the later on chapters. thanks! great! Take your time! 😊



Thankyou. I hope i can manage to please all the Michi fans with what i have in store. plz remember that i too am a fellow Michi fan when things do get tough for Michi...and it will.
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Posted: 17 years ago
JC this has to be ur best part till date 👏 👏 you dealt with ayesha's past really well and my heart went out to her...but she has neev and im sure both of them will work through this together. i love neev, his understanding and caring nature really shows, whether it was stopping the night of passion and putting ayesha to sleep or whether he was there providing a shoulder for ayesha to cry on, he really is a gem. hopefully ayesha will see happier times with neev.

coming to michi, i never thought i'd see the light hearted side of milsi, that too infront of prachi, its nice to see that he can share a joke with her, even if it is at her expense 😆 im so glad he has recognised her..and i love the way you're portraying the subtle attraction milsi is feeling for prachi. i cant wait for more michi and neesha romance 😳

thanx for the update JC 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shabzc1

JC this has to be ur best part till date 👏 👏 you dealt with ayesha's past really well and my heart went out to her...but she has neev and im sure both of them will work through this together. i love neev, his understanding and caring nature really shows, whether it was stopping the night of passion and putting ayesha to sleep or whether he was there providing a shoulder for ayesha to cry on, he really is a gem. hopefully ayesha will see happier times with neev.
yes...Neesha issues are all over now.
coming to michi, i never thought i'd see the light hearted side of milsi, that too infront of prachi, its nice to see that he can share a joke with her, even if it is at her expense 😆 im so glad he has recognised her..and i love the way you're portraying the subtle attraction milsi is feeling for prachi. i cant wait for more michi and neesha romance 😳 I am a little nervous on how to handle Michi. I do fear that i will make a complete mess of it *fingers crossed*. But anyway for the next few parts it will only be Neesha romancing and more subtle things for Michi...they still have a long way before they finally romance full fledged.

thanx for the update JC 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey JC….I had actually read it last night…but since I had an exam this morning…couldn't really comment…


And now for the update...let me tell you that I LOVED this chapter…it was absolutely beautifully written…I loved everything about it...the dialogs, the eomtions...everythnig... I think this is the best chapter you have written so far…although I loved all of your previous chapters…This one, I just it love a bit more…

And I must applaud you for giving us such a beautiful Neesha track…I love everything about them…They way you have build up the whole track is just amazing….love the way you have portrayed Ayesha…in this part we see how strong she is…it must have been so hard for her to admit what had happened to her yet she had done it…My heart goes out for her...but I know that Neev will be there for her…And coming to Neev, well I don't have words you describe how much I love him…

It was nice how you mixed both Neesha and Michi… And coming to our Michi…So Milind had finally remembered her…wonder what else he will remember…Chashmish Chooti…nice nicknames for Prachi..lol

Really enjoyed the flashbacks…Prachi saving the dog and going to see his dad...its just soo cute… and its nice to see how Milind is slowly falling for her…he doesn't realize it but its happening…
You know what I'm really waiting for is when Milind actually falls for her and remembers her condition…wonder what he will do..(I know its not going to be soon…but…)

By the just wondering…u say u will have a leap…is it any time soon…

THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH….it was a pleasure reading it..
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Posted: 17 years ago
After the last part, I had really expected Neev & Ayesha to find their happily ever after, hadn't seen this twist about Ayesha's past coming. But then again, everything about her personality and her behaviour now makes sense. I always put it down to Inder's abandonment. But her anger always seemed so repressed and tightly wound, unlike the Ayesha in the series who is so volatile. Anyway, I think Neev is the perfet guy to help her through the situation. He already knows what she needs right now is a friend, more than a husband or a lover. So, so glad that someone has done a NA FF and done it so well. 👏

Awww, how sweet are Milind and Prachi. I'm getting a bit worried here. 😆 Just like the U,Me Aur Hum (watched the movie & loved it b.t.w) song, my Gen Leap FF is also going to have an ugly duckling track. 😛 They seem such a perfect fit. I want Milind to not even give Anjali a second thought from now on.

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