FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 77

Originally posted by: Heeba

Hey JC….I had actually read it last night…but since I had an exam this morning…couldn't really comment… I understand. How was your exam btw.

And now for the update...let me tell you that I LOVED this chapter…it was absolutely beautifully written…I loved everything about it...the dialogs, the eomtions...everythnig... I think this is the best chapter you have written so far…although I loved all of your previous chapters…This one, I just it love a bit more…
lolz...that what everyone feels.
And I must applaud you for giving us such a beautiful Neesha track…I love everything about them…They way you have build up the whole track is just amazing….love the way you have portrayed Ayesha…in this part we see how strong she is…it must have been so hard for her to admit what had happened to her yet she had done it…My heart goes out for her...but I know that Neev will be there for her…And coming to Neev, well I don't have words you describe how much I love him…

It was nice how you mixed both Neesha and Michi… And coming to our Michi…So Milind had finally remembered her…wonder what else he will remember…Chashmish Chooti…nice nicknames for Prachi..lol there is a lot of missing peices in Michi track which i will add one by one. And it not all because Milind doesn't remember. There are parts of it that he just doesn't know yet...like Prachi's love for him. It'll be interesting i hope.😃
Really enjoyed the flashbacks…Prachi saving the dog and going to see his dad...its just soo cute… and its nice to see how Milind is slowly falling for her…he doesn't realize it but its happening…
You know what I'm really waiting for is when Milind actually falls for her and remembers her condition…wonder what he will do..(I know its not going to be soon…but…) lolz...that will come up soon actually because the Michi story really will start after Milind completely falls in love.😳

By the just wondering…u say u will have a leap…is it any time soon… i am thinking about it. Maybe after next chapter...actually i think the next chapter might be like an explanation of what happened in the time period during the leap...a short summary of it. And then it will be the leap..but i still haven't decided.

THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH….it was a pleasure reading it.. thankx for the comments. appreciate it.

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

After the last part, I had really expected Neev & Ayesha to find their happily ever after, hadn't seen this twist about Ayesha's past coming. But then again, everything about her personality and her behaviour now makes sense. Thats what i was hoping for. I always put it down to Inder's abandonment. But her anger always seemed so repressed and tightly wound, unlike the Ayesha in the series who is so volatile. Anyway, I think Neev is the perfet guy to help her through the situation. He already knows what she needs right now is a friend, more than a husband or a lover. So, so glad that someone has done a NA FF and done it so well. 👏 thankyou BC. that means a lot.

Awww, how sweet are Milind and Prachi. I'm getting a bit worried here. 😆 Just like the U,Me Aur Hum (watched the movie & loved it b.t.w i know i am gonna love it too...i am watching it tonight.) song, my Gen Leap FF is also going to have an ugly duckling track. 😛 don't worry BC if you are planning the ugly duckling tack. Because my Michi don't have that story line. There story is much different and i might not really use the song after all. 😆They seem such a perfect fit. I want Milind to not even give Anjali a second thought from now on. All the complaints against his memories of Anjali will be eradicated soon enough.

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Aha Jc I see the wait was worth it. I just loved the way you dealt with Ayesha's problems poor Neev and yes poor her. It's sad to see this it's a major issue in the west honestly and it does leave a mark on the concerned child for a lifetime. It's just wonderful that Neev is so understanding. yes thats the only reason Ayesha is going to move on and move on quickly... Did they make love by the way cuz I just had the impression they slept close that's all. no they didn't. They only slept on the same bed. I guess his proximity must be hard for her to understand and accept. she wants to really be a wife to him in all senses but she just needed to get that weight of the past off herself...and now that she has told him and he is so understanding and caring...she'll move on and their happily ever after is begininning now.😃

Michi I think were sidelined I miss the romance No Muneeza i didn't. The romance is missing because it hasn't started.😆😆😆 Milind can't just be all romantic and lovely to Prachi forgetting the troubles of the past 5 years so easily and condition that his sister is in currently. And he doesn't really have a reason to be that way. Their marriage is a deal between them and he has no idea how Prachi feels about him...not that it would make a difference at this point...it might..but he has to fall for her slowly. And he is also reeling from the thoughts of a lost love...a love he had held onto for over 5 yrs. He needs the time to understand his own feelings and then accept them. but it was a nice light hearted part you wrote I liked the fact that he remembered her pet name. Good job dear hope the next one's coming soon too. 😊

Originally posted by: shabzc1

JC, how old are neesha and michi in your FF?

thanx for the insight to their ages. poor sukriti having a baby out of wedlock at the age of 18 is difficult and she has suffered deeply

Stupid Inder had nothing better to do. that comment made me laugh😆

Originally posted by: Pori

ahhh.. I dont want to comment 😆 not because it wasnt good but it was too good that left me speechless yet again.. are you making excuses.😆😆
I dunno how i missed the last 3 updates of urs 😕 but somehow i did, but im glad tht i caught up on all of them 😃 .. i was wondering the same😕

lets talk about the last part... SIMPLY WONDERFUL.. I enjoyed Neesha more than Michi 😊... poor Ayesha, she had to go thru all tht.. I tell you men are **** 😡 and by the waii there aint no exception on tht 😆 i know. Its quite sad....i have to see such things on a daily basis due to my work... but I reaali hope she can cope with it and get over it since now that she has Neev by her side.. Neev is such a sweetheart... yup she will
Coming back to Michi.. 😆 I can imagine Prachi with braids, glasses and in a salwar suit.. Milsi just cant resist her cuz she saved a poor puppy.. that shows how adorable he is.. lolz...i don't it was that kind of attraction. He was intrigued by her character...she seemed odd...different from what he has seen usually. So he was curious and was drawn to her...but not necessarily in a romantic way. But now as he pieces together the puzzle that Prachi is...he seems to be developing romantic feelings.
continue soon babes

Originally posted by: jinc118

I'll try to update tonight.😃 As once again i have ignited the passion for these characters in me.