FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 56

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Nice update...a well written part.

So Neev and Ayesha used to learn dance at the same school. Dance seems to be thing that is bringing them together.
Even after spending 2 weeks discussing each other's likes & dislikes these two duffers are still thinking about divorce 😕. well, two weeks don't change the 5 years that passed by. It was the 5 years that made them feel that maybe they shouldn't be together. And if they decide to just undo that decision because of something that happened in 2 weeks....would be kinda impulsive no? Don't know about Neev but Ayesha is definitely not impulsive...well not that much anyway.

JC, now please bring back Michi in your ff. I am missing them 😭
Michi is coming in the next part.

Originally posted by: pragalbha

JC!!!! How is it going?

Ok...first, chapter 29...I read it on Friday itself, but I had wanted to watch the dance clip before I commented. Its been 3 years since I saw the movie and so did not remember much and I am not too good at visualizing and so I decided I was going to watch the clip and that would help me to put in perspective your description of the dance....and I could not get to watch it till today, hence the comments are a bit delayed!!!!.........It was sizzling 😳!!!! More than the dance sequence, minute details such as Neev wanting her to look at him and then Ayesha meeting his eyes were bringing the passion on!!! I loved it!!!! And Ayesha feeling jealous.........I have no doubts in beleiving that!!! That is exactly how I perceived her!!! 😆 😆 😆
Thankyou. I am glad you visualized it. But hun that clip was on youtube. you din't have to wait. lolz. Thanks for noticing the part about Neev. Not many ppl mentioned it.😃

Chapter 30.............Again Neev and Ayesha!!! What else would I want??? 😍. I actually thought that wedding Anjali was talking about was a hoax, but it is not, huh? no no...how would Anjali expalin her behavior. If she tells them that she was trying to get them together, that would be like Gayi bhains paani mein. OK....honestly I expected there would be one more intimate interaction between Neev and Ayesha after the dance to kind of 'cement' the feelings that have started in them, and then a gradual sharing of things and talking etc Well i didn't want it to look like Neev and Ayesha were following their attraction. They need to know that they love each other and its not just a physical thing. 5 years of ignoring each other is not going to end up in intimacy just by a 5 min dance no matter how hot it is. It does however break a lot of inhibitions. because after reading this chapter it felt like while Neev was really falling for her, Ayesha was still on the edge and her idea of remaining friends after the divorce was 🤢 lolz. Well Ayesha's ideas are...well...the problem is she still doesn't know or like to admit what she feels in reality..so a round about way of explaining what she is doing to herself. She is not ready to tell herself that she loves him...evne tho she does..that make any sense?Because I was expecting that after this intimate scene between them, she was going to avoid the topic of divorce and not discuss it with him at all as it will leave her all flustered!! well its there no. They can't ignore it. they have to deal with it.

But...but..that's my take on it..I am willing to be patient and see how you would like to tackle this issue! 😃
Please do.😆
Loved them dear..........and will read whenever you post the next chapter!!! 😃 It will be Michi

Originally posted by: optimist

Thanks JC, this Chapter was worth the wait but like everybody else I miss Michi. It was interesting to read that Neev had a past with Ayesha, a past that involved biting! I am sure that would not be the last bite she gave him. Sure there will be many more bites of a different variety (if you know what I mean! 😉 ) lolz...hehehehehe...y do you think i included that bit.😳Anyway, their love story has started off, albeit on a shaky note. I am sure it will get stronger and stronger and Neev better call off his divorce because given Ayesha's stubborn character, I doubt she will be the one to admit first that she cares for him. But maybe I am wrong, maybe she may be the one who ends up screaming she wants to remain married to him - a la Divya (Revati) in Mouna Raagam.😭 i regret not watching that movie now.