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Posted: 17 years ago
No it's not bad. Very interesting though. What are these papers black cloth? At least Milsi knows he's attracted to Prachi. And Ritwik is so cute! 😳 "Yeh teri mummy nahi, meri biwi hai." Love that line.
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww...michi are back 😳 . poor prachi, she was caught in such an embarrasing situation...and milsi why didnt u look away 😡

loved the little banter between uncle and nephew..ritwick is so adorable and the whole part about preschool makes michi look like any normal married couple.

its good to know milsi admits being attracted to prachi...what were the the bunch of papers which milsi placed back, were they love notes which are supposedly from anjali?

gr8 part JC...hope there is more michi in the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Lovely update....
Just one request...more MICHI plz....plz plz....pretty plz..... 🤓
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey JC...just read the last chapter
I like the way ur bringing Neev and Ayesha together...enjoyed the whole weeding scene...hope they will realize their feelings for each other soon

And now back with our Michi...
Enjoyed the whole reading
Glad to know that Milind acknowledges that he is attracted to Prachi...now why do i have a feeling that those letters in the cupboard are not from Anjali but from Prachi...he some how thinks that they are from Anjali...or maybe i'm just thinking a lot...

Thanks a lot for the wonderful chapter...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

Lovely update....
Just one request...more MICHI plz....plz plz....pretty plz..... 🤓



lolz. hun from now on there will be a good balance between Neesha and Michi. I just needed Neesha to get to this point and that is the reason i concentrated on Michi before...till their wedding.

But ch 30 i wrote half heartedly. In retrospect i felt that i could have changed a few things. But too late now. So the next chapter will have to be carefully thought out and formulated. Besides i got my hands full right now. So will wait until i have a solid chapter till i post the next update.

Thanx for liking it.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Charmed...

No it's not bad. Very interesting though. What are these papers black cloth? At least Milsi knows he's attracted to Prachi. And Ritwik is so cute! 😳 "Yeh teri mummy nahi, meri biwi hai." Love that line.



😆😆😆lolz. my cousin's kid did exactly that to him once, haha and he told me. It was too funny.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shabzc1

awww...michi are back 😳 . poor prachi, she was caught in such an embarrasing situation...and milsi why didnt u look away 😡
lolz...why do you think.😳
loved the little banter between uncle and nephew..ritwick is so adorable and the whole part about preschool makes michi look like any normal married couple.
danx.
its good to know milsi admits being attracted to prachi...what were the the bunch of papers which milsi placed back, were they love notes which are supposedly from anjali?
you'll find out.😊 some day.😆
gr8 part JC...hope there is more michi in the next part.
I haven't really thought about whats going to be next. Possibly Neesha in court.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Heeba

hey JC...just read the last chapter
I like the way ur bringing Neev and Ayesha together...enjoyed the whole weeding scene...hope they will realize their feelings for each other soon
sooner than you think.😃
And now back with our Michi...
Enjoyed the whole reading
Glad to know that Milind acknowledges that he is attracted to Prachi...now why do i have a feeling that those letters in the cupboard are not from Anjali but from Prachi...he some how thinks that they are from Anjali...or maybe i'm just thinking a lot...
why did you even assume they are letters.😆 I just said they are papers. I do choose my words carefully don't I😆
Thanks a lot for the wonderful chapter...Thanx for reading.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry JC, I did not like Part II as much. Looks like you were not too involved in it (got the feeling it was a bit hurried). The emotions were not dealt with as much and the narration was a bit staccatoed. I am sure you would have done better with a little more time. I guess we really hurried you into giving us Michi scenes. Sorry. Take your time with the next Chapter and give it your best as you always do.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Jaan, finally caught up with this lovely story… thanks to the long weekend. Simply LOVED IT! All feels so perfect for a Kayamat fan.😃

The best I liked was Ritwik was in the center of the story… only wish that was the case in the original as well😭. I loved the fact that all characters have been given equal importance and I am not cribbing that Michi are sharing the limelight with Neesha and Kavya Anjali. Yaar, yeh Prachi kuch ajeeb hai nahi😕😆? She is so unpredictable… it took some time for me to adjust to this Prachi… I mean we are all used Milind thowing a tantrum and getting annoyed with Prachi… which actually is because of Prachi's 70s heroine act… and here Prachi actually does outrageous things(compared to the standards of the Prachi we know) I was on the floor laughing at she running in the chawl in Milind's shirt…. Must have been quite a scene🤣.

And btw when I began reading… bahut galliyon derahi ti…when Milind made such a late entry… and the entire suspense around him was making me impatient…and there is still a mystery around him with regard to Anjali. Chakkar kya hai? He was in love with her? May be the actual person he was in love with is Prachi but he has Anjali's face to it.😕

Haven't followed Kavya-Anjali…just know the very basic story… and I am loving the chulbuli Anjali in this story… there is so much of life when she is around. The other characters aswell are beautifully sketched and in the case of Pl, the epitome of motherhood is presented so beautifully. Loved the scene Bobby calls Ayesha 'Di' for the 1st time.👏👏👏

I love Michi…but I loved Neesha that bit more in this story… may be because it was refreshing or it is just the arrogant confidence of Michians… we know Michi will find there way to eachother… all they need is to look into each other's eyes and they will find eachother…. So I am enjoying Neesha the most. Ayesha is so sweet and wonderful in the story… Thanks dear for her characterization… this is the way I always wanted her… and may be someday she will be a reality. Waiting to see how Neesha's story shapes up and how Neev will get Ayesha to admit her affection toward him and the family.

Ok, now for some doubts… since I read it in a full stretch… may be I missed some things.. or the plot is yet to be revealed…

  1. How does Ritwik address Prachi? Ma? I don't remember coming across him calling her Ma… that struck me when she referred to Milind as Ritwik's Mamaji… so will she be Mami or Milind will be Papa?
  2. What promise has Prachi made to Inder.. that she said sorry to him for breaking her promise by agreeing to marry Milind?
  3. and what is the connection between Neev and Prachi? Prachi was in love with Milind and Neev knew that she was in love with someone… so how did they get engaged? Family pressure? And did Neev love Prachi and was heartbroken of sorts?

Sorry dear for being so late… now I am hooked on to the story… and I am going to bug you away to glory…be prepared for that😈. And thank you once again for a lovely story. Keep it going, Jaan…

Lots of Luv & Hugs🤗

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