FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 54

Originally posted by: optimist

Brilliant Jc, I think I am running out of adjectives to describe your beautiful penning skills. Stop it😡 its going to my head. Your description of the dance was so vivid, I can well imagine Jay and Sanju dancing before my eyes! It appears that it needs three to tango (counting Anju's hand in getting these two duffers together). haha i actually thought i would put that as a title for the chapter "Three to tango" but then i didn't want to give away the content by the title. So is it going to be a hot Neesha to balance the senti Michi? Well, i believe that every happening couple had both a hotness factor and a romance/senti factor. It doesn't digest well with me if the ratio of the two doesn't balance. Every couple needs a little umph and also needs to look like they are soulmates. Thats when they look perfect (in my opinion). So i'll be balancing Michi and Neesha both. At least i hope to. Though, sheerly due to the track that i have planned, Michi might come out a bit more senti than Neesha. Neesha onscreen also had so much potential waiting to be expolited but these pigheaded creatives failed to take notice and have gone back to the same rut of a sickening love triangle after virtually destroying Ayesha in the process! Atleast in your FF we can live this fantasy! Thanks. I know yaar. They have crackling chemistry but the stupid stupid BT doesn't let go of their formula for disaster.

Originally posted by: jinc118

Well, i believe that every happening couple had both a hotness factor and a romance/senti factor. It doesn't digest well with me if the ratio of the two doesn't balance. Every couple needs a little umph and also needs to look like they are soulmates. Thats when they look perfect (in my opinion). So i'll be balancing Michi and Neesha both. At least i hope to. Though, sheerly due to the track that i have planned, Michi might come out a bit more senti than Neesha.

Agreed there. I sure your Michi will be one hot couple along with being senti but as you put it the senti factor will be a little heavier in the case of Michi than Neesha which is perfectly understandable given your settings. I am going to repeat it again. Waiting for your Michi senti track to start off being a sentimental fool myself.

Originally posted by: Charmed...

OMG JC that was amazing! I absolutely LOVED the dance. Glad Anjali's idea worked cos these duffers need it. I hope they get together soon. Shame nothing like this ever happens on screen.

Originally posted by: Nagina91

loved it it was brill!!!! 😃 😊
steaming!!!!!!!! 😳
loved the tango!!! and ayesha getting jealous!!! 😃 😃 😊
there tango was brilliant!! neev wanting ayesha to look at her!!! 😳 😃 😊 i know...i thought ppl missed that or maybe it didn't make sense the way i wrote it. but looks like it did.😊
and him smiling after seeing her face drop all soooooooo brill amazing i still cant stop smilin ive read the chapter twice now!!!!!!!!! 😊wow. hehe. see he does notice her and has somewhat of a clue as to what she feels now.

Originally posted by: shabzc1

i absolutely love part 29 JC...i must of read it about three times...the more i read about neesha in ur fanfic, the more i curse snakealien for not showing us a neesha track in kayamath...this pair had such gr8 potential...and now its gone down the drain ur neesha are fireworks and i love the way you described the dance...anjali is one smart cookie 😉 I know i luv this gal. Tede longon ko seedha karna aata hai usko.😉 She got a few more ppl to fix...before my FF finishes. One of them is going to be the biggest duffer of them all, our very own Mili baby.😆😆😆 oH i can't wait till i get to that part.