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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
The storyline was excellent and you ff was wonderful 👏 , I think you watch lot of Telugu movies like me 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: basanthi

Hi shezeenk

Thanks for liking it, i hate the usual sister after sister hubby, it is not like that in real world, so indulged in something that was different, I am so glad you liked it

Ram Ram

Basanthi

ANJU Firstly my name is just shezeen its not shezeenk .......

i liked ur work it was an awesome ff...👏

I like d concept of ur ff its soo different than others ...... its gud that sis id not after her sistrz hubby ..... milind is a little badmash but he s nice this really suits him 😉...... ayesha is pretty well 😃....... prachi is a bit dumbo but her charactr is innocent😛 ....... n neev is d same just running after pretty girls .....😉

i would luv 2 read ur next part ...

Update soon .........😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Hey Anju..honey..Where is the update..Just because i haven't commented doesn't mean i am not reading it!!

Seekeram Update Pannu...kanna...Waiting for your next part! Love you!Mwuaaah.... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Basanthi raani.. where are you now.. I am missing you.. jaldi update karo ab.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

This part wouldnt be complete without the help of my baby Meli and ofcourse sheen is practially the prachi i wrote in this part 😉

Part 1(c)

Milind has been thinking too much about the gal, had spent the whole week teasing her. Shwetha had been giving him knowing looks.

Prachi had dressed smashingly for the sangeet ( I suck at rituals, as i dont know any north indian rituals before marrige so if its back and forth just ignore it and enjoy the plot 😆)

Milind had almost wanted to kick Waman ( the new dude from the boy's side ) for dancing with prachi. Not only that he was flirting with her outrageously. The chit was allowing it, when he looks at her, she doesnot even look at him, just lowers her eyes and walks off. M was getting angrier and angrier 😡
Both waman and Prachi did the dholna song from hey baby. Waman got a bit out of hand gets all touching and pulls prachi's choli's dor. Prachi was more shocked as it was not expected. Before she could say anything, M was already fight with waman😡, hitting him. Prachi was more scared for waman as he was going to die for sure in M hands. Not knowing what to do, not wanting to create a scene, prachi comes in between.
Prachi : What are you doing? Why are you hitting him?
M: Move away, didnot u realize what he just did
Prachi: Well it is for me to tell what he did is wrong or not, I neither called you nor want ur interference, kindly leave before others come, as M is going to argue, she stops him from further talking by raising her hand ( to say stop) and he sees W written on her hand. Remembers what swetha had told him about the significance of the word on. So M concludes that she loves Waman.
M 😲 😔 was hurt and walked away in anger
Prachi once M leaves turns back and gives a tight slap to waman and walks away behind M.
After some time P finds M in his room, angry with himself and all sad, he starts throwing his stuff around. Just as he seee prachi gets more upset and slams his hand against the wall.
Prachi is always scared walks to him without any fear.
Prachi : Yeah kya tamasha tha neechay, what are you some kind of rowdy that you go around saving every damsel whether or not in distress, aur aakar yeah sab kya hai, neechay ceremony chal rahah hai and you are missing, what will shwetha think haan, agar shaadi mein problem hogayaa tho
M😡 Yeah lecture maatha!! apne yaar ki side to tu leghi hi, and please uske aad mein tu swetha kaa naam ku lerahi hai, you are not the only one who loves swetha ( *wink* sweets), I love her more than you do so kindly stop your nonsense and go back to your yaar, maybe this time he can take ur clothes off, god you woman are so sick ( makes a disgusted face), cannot you see he is such a jerk all he wants is to touch you
Prachi : We are sick, you are sick, To judge me becoz i didnot want to create a scene in the marriage, becoz i didnot want a person to die becoz i didnot want you to go to jail, ofcourse i am not sick but bone stupid, and who are you calling a jerk. You are all the same some use hands some use eyes, leaving a stunned M
Edited by basanthi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
😆 I couldn't help but laugh all the way through out the update.. Sheen honey I love you 😆... told you to be careful with basanthi 😆

Basanthi I loved the slap that Prachi gave to that jerk..

Continue soon and this time jaldi...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

Great going👏👏👏 enjoyed reading this part to the max....loving Miland's possessiveness...and love prachi's confidence.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Basanthi.. lol..! thanks at least he loves me.. in whatever way.. he loves me..! lol..!

yeh kahaani kahi suni hai maine.. pata nahin kahan.. Shan maybe you can help me out..? lol..! 😆

Love the update basanthi.. love the way Prachi is confident enough to stand up to Milind and the jerk Waman..

And how cute is Milind rushing to Prachi's defence..!

jaldi update karo..!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heheh so I am the Prachi now.. 😆 .. Shan I will watch my back..lol.. great update. I liked the laffa to W-dawg!! It was perfect.... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Finally Prachi got to work, after the beed bad and pushing pulling of mumbai train she was finally here, It had been only a month that she had come to mumbai, started working for Sukruti Industries. She missed mumbai, it had been 7 long years she would have never come back if it wasnt for her mother, she would have never come back to the city which killed her father and ruined their life. She was always half hour early to work and stayed up later to finish her work. She needed the money, soon they would have to do the operation, she and ayesha are working so hard to make the end meet, god only knows how they were going to pay for the surgery
Hurrying through the main floor, prachi got into an almost closing Elevator, pressing the button of her floor, she turned around to be 😲
She could only see the back of the gal, wait it was not gal but a guy ( wiht long hair) and the some gal whom he was ... let out a disgusted sound, making them break up.
Milind here was almost irritated as Sahana his business partner got her freaking chain was stuck to his tie and he had spent last 15 minutes to seperated it from that. On the top of that there was this gal who is judjing him as some common dude and making disgusted face
Prachi here was shocked as she saw the man undoing his shirt buttons closes her eyes tight : Hey bhaggu why cannot ppl just get a room, and do watever they want there, but no some no cultured loonies get kick in doing ti public
poor M was trying to get his tie out so that sahana can have his tie and her chain back, but this gal looked so scandalized he almost wanted to laugh
folding his shirt on either sides, M lazed out on the side wall totally checking out the gal. She was wearing a black trouser , he was impressed with what he saw so far( her legs), thanks to the professionalism and woman's equality, it definitely did men some good, she was not exoctic beauty who flocked on him all the time, but there was something about her that intrigued him, her lips looked so lush and inviting when they were being bitten to red by the gal, ( prachi was biting her lip in nervousness), he could spend hours
Milind checked himself: Hours doing what M, are you mad you dont even know her and Dude control ur harmones
All the blood in prachi's body flooded to her face, not only he was with the other gal like less than a minute now he was checking her out.
Grabbing her bag and hugging it against her chest prachi gave the dude a disgusted look and walked off
M has a shocked look and thinks : what the F*** does th gal think of herself, I was not even looking there, making me feel like a rapist, gripping his had tightly, Elevator finally reached his floor, angry M walks in a huff to his office
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3 weeks later, it was garba, the office had a party for it. Ayesha had made efforts and got her a dress from her shooting to wear to the party. Prachi loved teh dress, but the only problem was that she had never worn anything that had a window at the back.
Ayesha had chidded her and asked her to act sophisticated. It had taken an hour to get ready, get all the dories tied 😡
Playing dandya was fun, it had always been fun for prachi, being a gujju she felt the pride in her. Half way through dandiya she realised that all her dories have come loose. Not knowing anybody there, she walked to the ladies room to tie it as she saw her friend krishna go that way. Hurrying to the ladies room, prachi got busy in tieing the dories,
Prachi bangle gets stuck in her sare pallu, krishna comes out of the washroom,
P: krishna di can you please retie my dories for me, i have to get this thing out of my pallu
P feels a weird kind of sensation but shrugs it off busying herself in ensuring the saree is not damaged.
after a while Krishna had done the job, Prachi is like : Di can you take the pin off the back of my pallu and help me retie it
Getting her pallu down, prachi turns around so that they can have a proper tieing done, is shocked to see the guy from elevator standing and staring at her , for an instant prachi wanted to faint as her mind had gone blank
M estimating this kind of reaction, goes forward and hold her. gripping her against him
Prachi feels as if she has just touched a live wire, the intensity of the feeling was making her dizzy
M clearing his throat : As much as I would love to continue this game, I am afraid somebody might walk in and spoil the fun
And with a jolt, prachi came back to this world
Prachi finds her feet somehow not before falling one or more times on M
P turns around and decides to walk off as she has nothign to stell him
M : Suniya, aap kaahaan jaarahi hai
P turns arond and glares at him
M : agar party mein jaarahi hai to phir, Not that this is a bad way of dressing or anything, lekin agar aap apna pallu teek karle to aap shaayad uncomfortable naa feel karee
P is looking around for her starting of the gagra holding her hands around her chest
M : ji woh mere paas hai
P wanted to just die right there, not only she was standing in front him but also had convininet handed him the
P walks towards him and snatches from his hand 😆
P grumbles : bathameezi ki haad hothi hai, ladies washroom mien yeh aaya and he is making me feel uncomfy, but what todo prachi this is all you can expect from such jerks, look at him, he is not even blinking looking at you, what a shameless creature
Poor M was not standing there looking at prachi as she reminded him of somebody 😳
Getting ready Prachi walks off in a huff, as she walks out only then realizes that it was her who was in the wrong washroom not him
In the tension of notmissing Krishan she had walked into gents washroom instead of ladies which was on the other side 😆
Edited by basanthi - 17 years ago

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