FF LCMD Part-2a page9 Oct 31 - Page 4

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

The refreshing hatke storyline is def the USP of this ff😊 Hope u continue Basanti😳

thanks really appreaciate your comment

Especiallly enjoyed reading Part1a) with Ayesha and Neev, Ayesha is such a lil rockstar, nautanki😉, lol...its so hilarious how she made Neev run after her😆..pls continue😳

isnt she, i mean the character just gels into ayesha

Michi part is damn funny too, 😆😆 Miland telling her to scream as its good for the lungs😆 too good :)

i know it kind of sucks but thats the only thing i could think of

Originally posted by: JatinzWife

oiiiiiiiiiiii basanti wah cont soon

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain

Norrie jaanu,

thanks for liking it, btw when are u updating , you better hurry

Reg

Basanthi

Originally posted by: Pori

Omg.. this was soo cutee.. Im realli enjoyin this totalli diff track.. it was fab!

thanks pori ji,

Magno my jaanu, thanks for eading it, will wait for ur comments after you read the new part with translations

Originally posted by: kubare

🤣 Awww...god Anju darling....so you used the grand filmy entry for our hero Milli...and what an entry I must say...Ekdum style may...🤣

array Milind hai bhai, style to usay virasat mein mili hai, and why are u laughing at Milind 😡

Loved all that Dishum Dishoom.....🤣

And the whole Meena Kumari meets Pran tiltle for them....🤣 His dialogues to her were fantastic....🤣🤣

Actually i wanted to right pandari bhai and pran, but since you guys dont know who pandari bhai is i left that and picked up the next person i knew which was meena kumari 😆

Meena Kumari indeed adn crying queen...looks like your taking out your nager on Prachi...by making her a weakling...🤣

well ppl and situations change ppl wait and watch this prachi transforms , but the way i have it all planned this ff wil take long time to finish

Aww...so he takes her duppatta...😆

filimi style i wont expect any less kyon krishi di😆

And love the second part too....the dialogue in the end was superb...😆

its from my ks ff 😉

Great FF dear...very different .....and can't wait to read...how Prachi ends up asking him for money...adn the catch behind his motives to give her the much needed help....

yeah it will be while before we get there, unless i get bored

Update soon dear.....😃

Love

Krishna