FF LCMD Part-2a page9 Oct 31

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Posted: 17 years ago
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* Adult content and Language, read at your own discretion*

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Milind :Kyon Miss shah, mere paass kyon aaee hai, mein nahithi bathameez kisim kaa insaan hoon, to ab kyon aayeehai( why have you come to me miss shah, as i am very down market person )

Prachi swallowing her pride : Ji Sir woh mujhe kuch paison ki zaroorat thi( sir i n eed some money)

M giving a wicked smile its all about money when it came to woman , now he had a chance to teach her a lesson

M: oh yeah paisa kya kya karvatha insaan say, tsk tsk tsk, Kitna paisa chahiye apko( so sorry how much money do you need)

P: Ji 25 lakhs

M : hmm, aap yeah chahathi hai ki yeah paise mien aapko dun(so you think i should give you that money)

P: Ji ( yes uneasyly)

M : teek hai, mein daydunga( ok no probs i will give you the money)

P looks at him in doubt as she knows he has a catch

M: hmm, lekhin apko bhi mera ek kaam karna hogaa( but th ere is a catch)

P 😳 : Ji

M: Apko mere saath kuch waqt bethanaa hogaa, *coming closer to her * aap samajrahi hai naa( you have to spend some thing with me, moving closer, you understand what i mean right )

P: 😲 Main aapke baaray mein jo sochthi thi belkul sahi sochthi thi, aap chahathey hai ki mein 25 lakh kay badhlay aapkay cannot even tell the word( you are so disgusting you want me to * cannot tlel the word* with you for 25 lakhs)

M cooling knowing her outburst tormenting her more with his abrasiveness: Belkul teek socha apne, 25 lakh kay badlay mein aapko mera b*st*r garam karna hoga, yeah to bahut zyaada deraha hoon lekin phir bhi, tumhay zaroorat hai naa isliye ( yep, thats correct you have to sleep with me for that amount of money which is too much for your standards anyways )

P is about to tell him something

M: ah haa naa naa, koi gaali nahi, kya paatha kal tumhe mera offer lena paday, isliye kuch bolmath, chalo jaakay soocho😉( oh no, no foul language, think about it before you abuse me )

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Neev's office

Ayesha : ek minute tu yeah chahatha hai ki mein tere bachay ki maa banu, aur phir usbachay ko dekhkar chali jaavon *straight ?s always her style*(you want me to give you a kid )

N: Haan(yes)

A; aur to mujhe iskay badlay 25 lakhs deega( and you will give me 25 lakhs for that )

N: tumhe mujsay shaadi karni hoogi aur bache kay ek saal tak rahna hogaa aur phir tum apne raste mein apne raaste, Soch kay bathanaa ( well you marry me give birth to the kid, thne after an year y ou go ur way and i my way)

A: par mein hi kyoon,( but why me)

N looked into her eyes: Becoz you are the only woman who could created lust in me after a long time

A is dumb folded and shocked 😳

A: You mean i have to sleep with you 😡, I thought i was just lending my womb

N: well that and the egg too, since i dont want anybody to think my child is illegal, i want to get married to you first and then we can work on the baby making, dont worry you are probably the only woman who i am interested in after a long time, and probably its more to do with the need for the child, so once my work is done i will leave you alone

A was ready with ther list of gaali, but neev understanding her

N: sochkay kaal bathanaa , ab mujhe kaam hai (think about it)

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For knowing more about the characters and plot please lLet me know what you think of the preview, This concept is very different from the regular one so far, but a lot of scenes will be taken and incorporated from the current serial

For a change Ayesha and Prachi are not after each other throats 😆 I hate the kabhi souten kabhi saheli kind of stories 😭, why cannot 2 sisters be happy without going for each others hubby *sigh*

Ram Ram

Basanti

P.S Shan di you took so long let me know what you think over here

pg 3, 5, 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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My Dear Basanti...A.k.A Anju!!!

Hahahaha!! What a storyline!! 😆

Damn entertaining waiting for the next part!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Basanti.. 😊 Laaga chunri mein daag... I like the name.... Continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Basanti... 😆 Interesting opening 😆 Would like to read more (though do watch out for the 'warning' thing)... Oh please let me know the meaning of the title! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: panache

My Dear Basanti...A.k.A Anju!!!

Hahahaha!! What a storyline!! 😆

Damn entertaining waiting for the next part!! 😉

nandri wait and watch 😉😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Magno

Basanti... 😆 Interesting opening 😆 Would like to read more (though do watch out for the 'warning' thing)... Oh please let me know the meaning of the title! 😊

the literal meaning is stain on the dupatta or scraf 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: red_chile

the literal meaning is stain on the dupatta or scraf 😃



Thank you! 😆😆 I'm sure it sounds much better in its original language😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Magno



Thank you! 😆😆 I'm sure it sounds much better in its original language😆

well In india, the chunri or the dupatta for salwar is considered to be the most imp piece of clothing, as it covers your maan, purity womanhood etc etc Now Laaga daag chunri mein is like your respect woman hood and other things are tainted, it has nothing to do with the cloth.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow.. this is totalli diff.. looking forward to it 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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CONT NOW!!!!!!!!! 😆 love it

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain

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