FF LCMD Part-2a page9 Oct 31 - Page 3

Originally posted by: red_chile

well In india, the chunri or the dupatta for salwar is considered to be the most imp piece of clothing, as it covers your maan, purity womanhood etc etc Now Laaga daag chunri mein is like your respect woman hood and other things are tainted, it has nothing to do with the cloth.

:) Thank you for the explanation, Basanti. I knew it's a literal translation and that it must have a deeper, cultural meaning to it😊

Originally posted by: red_chile

Now before going to the story for now, some flash back is needed

Part 1(a): Meena kumari meets Pran 😆

Few years ago, young prachi had gone to visit her nana for the first time in so many years. Inder had been very reluctant but let her go at the end. She still cursed herself was deciding to come here, as it was here she had met him the first time.

Clad in an yellow salwar kameez, prachi had got out of the train, waiting for somebody to pick her up. All of a sudden, there are 5-6 men chasing another men, who was running. Prachi being so young was instantly scared😭 (ok she is 17 she is a chicken ) and decided to go into the only room ( storage room i think ) in the small station and wait for somebody to show up before she went into the village

The room was pretty dusty, with a shutter door, there were lots of bags of grains hay etc etc... there ws no sign of anybody or phone. Just then the all the chasing guys come in looking for the dude,

Random guy : odhar daayk, haath say nahi nikalnaa chaiye

So they look around, just then the shutter closes.

Random guy: oh kyon hai bay, who clsed the door

Randon guy : oye munna, its him, dekh kudh aakay pas gayaa

Prachi who was hidng behind one of the hay back slowly peeks to look at the man, he was wearing a dark shirt ( black one), he had hair all over his face 😳, she couldnot really see his face, but he had a green stick on his mouth. Now prachi was more terrified of him than of the other 5 as he was hitting other ppl without mercy that too with a cycle chain . Unable to see the voilence prachi hugs herself and ducks down behind a big sack of grain.( well there was lot of dishoom dishoom)

After 5 minutes, there is a silence then the shutter opens letting lot of light in, prachi who had closed her eye shut had difficulty with the light, assuming that everybody left, prachi comes out only to find him near the door, his head was bleeding badly, but looks like all the others just ran escaped and he survived. Prachi was not used to see all that in her everyday life was terrified to see the man, now she could see him, he had long hair, all curly, dark complexion, the hair was falling on his face, and was dripping with blood. Unshaven face, He looked like a road side loafer aka gunda, prachi was immobile with fear as she was going to be the next target. Horrible stories told by ayesha and her other friends ran into her mind. She stood there and could only do one thing, like ayesha said, her favorite pass time, she started crying😭.

Then immediately biting her lips😳, as if he had not noticed her earlier, he would surely notice now.

He called out : Oye kyon hai tu!! then he located her😡

Prachi looks at him terrified unable to open her mouth

He: yeh shaani, train kay liye wait karrahi hai kya😕

Prachi without thinking noded, she ws not going to tell him she was here to stay, she was not sure if she even wanted to stay😕

He: well acha hai, warna to problem ho gaathi, you know witness police and all that

prachi at the mention of police😲 was even more scared decided that he was criminal

He looked amused😉 : You know mujhe koi problem nahi, mein to andhar baahar aatha rahathaa hoon, par tu takleef mein aajaathi, chal edhar aa

Prachi was immobile

He: dekh tu edhar aajaa, yaa mein aavoon😉

Prachi walks very slowly hugging her bag the only possession she has in a slow whisper : dekhiye aagar(swallows) aapko* mera inaudible, then doing the ahem ahem and swallowing* baag chahiye to lelijiye gaa ( bravest line but was mere whisper)

then stops by the pillar about 10 foot away from Him. He then slowly walked towards her

Prachi: dekhiye, humay chodijiye, hum apne papa ek luvthi badi beti hai

He has a "What" kind of expression : acha thats nice, kal say to sirf ek hi rahay gi phir😉😆

Prachi: Dekhiye, please mujhe kuch maath kijiye, yeah bag lelijiye, letting her bag out😭

He still continues having this really horrible look on his face still continues to come close to her, terrified prachi tries one last attempt😭

Prachi: dekhiye mein challivungi😭

He grabbing her with his arm : chilla chilla!! it will do good to your lungs😉😛

Prachi now crying loudly😭: Please mujhe chodijiye, please and starts crying loudly😭

Then abruptly she realizes he laughing so loudly😆, looking at her, his eyes were in tears, that look he gave was not horrible rapist look but a person who was in verge of going to burst into laughter

He controlling his laugh😆😆: yeah chahiyetha, taking her dupatta tyeing it on his forehead to stop the blood😳😳😳, mimicking her " please mujhe chodeejiyee, please yeah baag laylijiyee " again laugh holding his tummy😆, " oye meena kumari, you missed ( he says it animatedly) Nahi!!!! chod mujhe kameena " then 😆 laughs again, " array bilkul bollywood style dialogues tha, ethni saari pictureay maath dekha kar" laughing out leaves a shocked and angry prachi , realized for the first time she was oout without a dupatta

He walks away chuckling to himself : ekdam edi hai 😆, kyunsay museum say aayeehai

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At the same time here ayesha meets her mate

Ayesha here finally talked inder to send her to pune, it was the first time she was away from home too, freedom sweet freedom. Changing from benji type attire to ultra mordern look, ayesha came out shocking her friends as they go out to have some good time

They all had rented a car, so that they could go around, all evening they have been looking at different guys and judging them, sometimes drooling sometimes giving them marks etc etc ( usual gal stuff). Anyways they do this sitting inside the care, All of a sudden ayesha friend kitty had started drooling over a dude who was sitting on a bike and talking to his friends

Kitty: Oye hoye kya ladkha hai ray, ethana cute naa

Ayesha turns around and looks at him he looked really hot and cute such a chocolate boy so typical : he is alright, ayesha really looked bored

Ayesha: chal naa kitty, so boring, i dont want to just sit here all day lets go back to the station i dont want to miss the train.

Kitty: par i dont want to leave, he is so cute

Ayesha rolls her eyes shrugs: oh please what cute, 100 boys cuter than him are behind me

Kitty : acha chal, I will have a wager (bet ) with you, if you could make him run behind you phir we can leave from here and 500 bucks are all yours

Ayesha thinking for a while getting out of the care: Oh btw i need your red jacket along with the 500 bucks walks out

Ayesha along with couple of gals come closer to the guy on the bike and looks at the street side flower shop.

Ayesha keeps looking at the dude until she gets his attention, and winks at him 😉😆

The guy is pretty shocked 😲 and keeps staring at her, whereas ayesha here pretends as if nothing happened and keeps talking to the gal,

talking his coke to his nose smelling it, then drinking itJust when he assumes that he assumed that wink, she winks again 😉😆, he puke everything out...now he is sure something was wrong, his friends were trying to get his attention, but in vain as he was busy eyeing ayesha 😆were all drenched with coke puke 😆, ayehsa wanted to laugh, but she controlled. Then busies herself asking price to the shop keeper, then lingering for one more minute

she walks right past him, just as she reaches the car door, she turns back and gives him a flying kiss shocking him while all the ohter gals with her start laughing😆

Neev over was enraged at the audacity of the gal, nobody messes with Neev Shergill, he is the one who plays trick and today some chit tricked him and made him laughing stock, he takes his bike and starts following her

Speeding to the car, where as in the ayesha nad other gals shout at the driver

:bhaiyya ji jaldi chaliyee please train chutjaayegee, they lose track of him

They reach the station were all theo ther gals thought ayesha was some kind of hero 😆, kitty was still pouting on her loss.

Settling in her compartment, ayesha decides to get water.

Walking to the stall she gets herself a water bottle and drinks it as she finishes and looks straight ahead, there was the guy ( neev) standing right in front of her and giving her * now you cannot escape look*,

Ayesha's mind was running million cpu units persecond, she threw the water on him and ran, he was running right behind her, as she made it to her coach the train starts moving, faster

Ayesha letting out heavy breathing ( due to the running ) yells : array aur teesi say bbagoo, nahi pakadh paavogay

Poor neev is running so fast but couldnot keep up with the train

Finally giving up looks up there,

Ayesha laughing out at him : Koi baath nahi, dont feel sorry, next time olympics mein try kaaroo....zarror medal jeethogay......... bye ummmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaa😆

Let me know what you ladies thought of it 😉

Ram Ram

Basanti😉😛

Love both parts, they are captivating in different ways. Of course I prefer Michi a little bit more, though.😳

Thank you, and waiting for the next installments👏😆

🤣 Awww...god Anju darling....so you used the grand filmy entry for our hero Milli...and what an entry I must say...Ekdum style may...🤣

Loved all that Dishum Dishoom.....🤣

And the whole Meena Kumari meets Pran tiltle for them....🤣 His dialogues to her were fantastic....🤣 Meena Kumari indeed adn crying queen...looks like your taking out your nager on Prachi...by making her a weakling...🤣

Aww...so he takes her duppatta...😆

And love the second part too....the dialogue in the end was superb...😆

Great FF dear...very different .....and can't wait to read...how Prachi ends up asking him for money...adn the catch behind his motives to give her the much needed help....

Update soon dear.....😃

Love

Krishna

Ram ram Mrs Gabbar, wht brilliant ff re, had a very gd 😆 😆 read ur ff,,, very filmy re but tooooo gd.. pls update part 2 very soon 😛 😛

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Anju dear.. OMG.. Loved Milinds entry... 🤣 you have kept your name high.. My dear drama queen.. Loved the dishum dishum to bits... and Milind stole Prachi's dupatta during their first meeting 😆

Meenakumari 🤣 it just suits our Prachi rani.... I loved both the parts but loved Milind's and Prachi's better.. It was sooo cutee.... 😆 😆 😆

By the way Ayesha's and neev's part is that from some movie.. I have a nostalgic feeling about that scene.. I have read or seen it somewhere.. May be I am hallucinating...

Anyways... Kya dhamakedaar start tha.. 👏 I just can't wait to read more.. so please continue and continue fast.... Can't wait for the story to lead to the point of preview... 👏

Originally posted by: candyfloss

i can sense MICHI chemistry.prachs so funny but it was scary.

oh thanks, sorry to scare you, i mean she is 17 or below its normal for woman be scared at that age 😉

Loving it so far..! love the scene between Prachi and Milind..! 😆 😆

OMG !!!!!!!!!!
mind blowings scenes ... 👏
specially ayesha in small clothes n milind s entry.... 😳 😳 😳
i love the concept coz prachi n ayesha r sisterzzzzz n ayesha not aftr miling n prachi !!!! 😆 😆 😆
update soon! 😊
waiting 4 the next part......😛 😛 😛

Loss of word to say but keep up the good work.

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

The refreshing hatke storyline is def the USP of this ff😊 Hope u continue Basanti😳

Especiallly enjoyed reading Part1a) with Ayesha and Neev, Ayesha is such a lil rockstar, nautanki😉, lol...its so hilarious how she made Neev run after her😆..pls continue😳

Michi part is damn funny too, 😆😆 Miland telling her to scream as its good for the lungs😆 too good :)

haha i agreeee. really great story line and i love the story so far.
please continue soon :]

Just a correciton, prachi meets Milind at a connecting railway station, not at the destination. Forgive me I am enhancing the plot

Prachi had come to this place to attend a wedding representing Premlatha. She had come early to help in the preparation. The bride-to-be's name is Shwetha.

Part 1(b):

After a week, Prachi goes into Shwetha's room to wake her up.😕

Prachi : hey bhaggu!!😲 Di aap abhi taak so rahi hai, chaliye kitna kaam padahai( oh god sister you have to wake up we have lots of work to do)

Touching the blanket covered body, shaking her lightly and waits for her to wake up, but there is no response😊

Prachi : dekhiye agar aap nahi utay naa, to phir mujhe pani dalna paday gaa( if you dont wake up i would have to use water to wake u up)😉😃

Just then Prachi slowly trying to pull the blanket out, suddenly is caught by Shwetha di, almost pinning her on the bed, a strong hand held her close to ( Prachi nows looks at her capture face it was not her di but the guy from the station) she is so shocked and panicked😲, that no sound came out of her open mouth as in the process of holding her dupatta had come right over her mouth ( as she had kept it open its almost inside her mouth)

Milind : Shwetha teri problem kya hai, mujhe sonay kyon nahi derahi hoo😉, ( what is your problem, why cannot u let me sleep)

Prachi tries to answer by there is no sound coming out of her mouth 😆 trying to spit it out and wriggling😡

Milind : yaar, tujhe yaad hai, mein bachpan mein tujhe kaise kiss kartha tha 😳😉( do you remember when we were kids how i use to kiss you)

Prachi is like shaking her head in negation as he was moving closer and closer to her, 🤢😳

Milind : ab teri shaadi hojayege aur phir hum yeah saab nahi karsakthay ( well once you are married we cannot do all that )😆

Finally she managed to spit it out and screams: Nahi!!!!!!!! 😡 Let go, Are you mad what are you doing? Koi pachavo is gunday say 😡😕( no!! Let go, somebody save me from this monster )

Milind who is now wide awake looks at Prachi in confusion : Meena Kumari , Tu yahaan( You here !!!). You are shwetha ?😲 Looks shocked😲

Before prachi could say another word Milind is like : agar mujhe patha hotha ki tu ethni sundhar hai to mein tujhse shaadi karletha,( if i would have known that you would grow up to be this pretty, i would have married you myself 😆) hugging her again as she tries to get away from him😆

Shwetha who is in the next room comes to prachi rescue: Milind kya karrahai ho ( what are you doing ), chodo usko ( leave her ), she doesnot like all this😕

Milind : I doubt that, tabsay pakda hoo she did not even say a thing, i was hugging her and she was quiet😉

Prachi enraged at his audacity : I was trying to tell you that, but my dupatta got ( stuck in the mouth M did not allow her to complete the sentence)

M : I know I know, kuli palak mein joota gussa bandh palak mein pyar jeena bhi mushkil hai,😆😉 ( its a old song from professor movie, what it means is that, when everybody is around, there is this fake anger, but when you are alone you just love it )

Prach iis like : agrrh!!!😡 stomping her foot walks off as M winks at her shamelessly

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In a week neev is in a market in mumbai near the temple, Well every wednesday he goes to sidhivinayak temple.

Just as he is coming out of the temple, a guy pic pockets his purse, so neev follows the dude, both of them keep running, then the thief gets stuck in a all blocked road, with street stalls, and lots of ppl around.

Neev : ab tujhe kaun bachayegaa? 😃( Haa!! Now I will see how you can escape)

T(chor) taking the knife out and grabbing the first person beside him and tells : If you take one step, i will slit her throat😡

Just then ayesha who had come to buy something, looks at the man who has captured her and also at the person he was talking too

Ayesha face form a big "O"😲 : ohh god

Neev who looks at ayesha smiles😉 and tells to the theif : what did you just say, you will cut her throat if i take one step ahead right 😃

He takes one step forward, the T is kind of confused on his plan being backfired, still he takes a step backward😆

T : i am not joking i will slit her throat if you do that😕😡

Ayesha opens her mouth to the T : bhai( you call the don bhai, i mean like Munna bhai 😉) please kill me, if you dont then he will kill me😭

T is more confused 😆, what is going on here😕

Neev : dekh yaar you are chota gali kaa bhai😆, lekin yeh ladki is bigger than munna bhai 😆 dont fall into her trap😆( Dude you are small time theif but she is the biggest one in the entire mumbai )

Ayesha now making a sad puppy face : bhai please, aap ko dekh kar to lagtha hai ki aap bhalay aadmi hai, please agar aapki sagi behan hoti to aap chodkar jaathay😉( bhai, You look like a good man, please dont leave me with him, if i were your sister would you have left me with him )

T is falling for her feminine wails😆

Neev realising it😡 : dekhyeh( Look!!!) you can keep the wallet and i will let you go, but you have to hand her over to me

Ayesha widens her eyes pratcially hugging the T😆, who is feeling shy you know a hot gal hugging him 😉 : please bhai take me with you, i will be safe only with you please

T falls for her and take her with him, T thinks that he has the gal and he is some kind of hero, but little did he know who he was dealing with. As usual Ayesha escapes in a beed( crowd). Neev kay haath mein chuna lagaakay 😉( well ayesha as usual slips out of neevs hold like sand )