FF: WOH AJNABEE: Update:Part 48:Dec 6th 2009:p 172 - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Jai-Bani_Kasamh

inally caught all the parts and they are so awesome especially how Ayesha broke the vase so Milind won't kiss Prachi, but next time they should lock the door so no one can distrub them. 😆



it's locked in the hotel room they went to ;)
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Posted: 17 years ago
CB u r wonderful story writer keep up the good work...looking forward to read more of ur upcoming ff..
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaar the temperature just went up 😳 😳 ....
I wanna know what has happened at the 5 star hotel...
so start writting 👏 .....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shali

yaar the temperature just went up 😳 😳 ....
I wanna know what has happened at the 5 star hotel...
so start writting 👏 .....



it will be up by friday
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow...loved ur part!!!!!!!! i cant wait for another update......
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 14

The sun's rays were reflecting through the posh hotel blinds. The light fell on a woman's sleeping face.

Prachi opened her eyes in irritation from the sun rays, as she lay in bed, and then closed them again to remember what had happened last night.

****

She had gone in search of Milind…

She had found him in the rain…and they shared a special moment, which led to Milind picking up a rain-soaked Prachi and carrying her to the car.

Prachi opened the car door and slowly sat down, as Milind placed his body in the driver's seat.

"Woh.." he stuttered, "The weather is really bad…I don't think its safe to drive in this weather….so….there…there's a 5 star hotel not even two minutes away from here…I think we need to stay there…." He said his whole sentence without once looking at Prachi.

Looking at the floor of the car, Prachi responded meekly, "Acha".

In silence Milind drove to the hotel, lost in his own confusing thoughts. Prachi too did not make eye contact with her husband.

As they arrived, Milind instantly jumped out of the car, relieved to escape the confined vehicle.

Milind gave the keys to the concierge and ran up to the front desk. Prachi was surprised at how he was behaving, considering what had just happened between them not even ten minutes ago.

As soon as Milind got to the front desk, the hotel's manager became excited. "Arrey! Mr. Mishra! What a pleasure to see you at The Grand Empire Hotel! My name is Sikander Ibram. I am the manager of this hotel. What can I do for you?"

"Well, the weather is horrible outside. My wife and I can't make it home. Can you get me a room?" inquired Milind.

The sharply dressed manager smiled, "Of course! Anything for Mr. Milind Mishra and his beautiful wife!"

As the manager acknowledged Prachi, Milind turned around to look at her. He had not paid any attention to her since they left the parking lot. Milind noted how shy and embarrassed Prachi looked. She was soaked from head to toe, and her saree was almost see-through from the top. It had been much wetter before, but had dried up a little. Still, Milind realized that Prachi was uncomfortable. Not wasting a minute, he took off his business coat, and placed it around Prachi's shoulders, and she lifted her eyes from the ground to his look at his face.

She was confused. Why was he acting like this? Before it had seemed like he liked her. Now, when they arrived to the hotel, he was practically ignoring her presence...but now he was giving his coat to her. What was going on in his mind?

Milind could sense that Prachi was upset. Before he could say anything, the hotel manager came up beside them and handed Milind a set of keys.

"These are the keys to the best suite we have Mr. Mishra. These are the keys to the Royal suite on our top floor," he beamed.

Milind took the keys, and replied "Thanks."

"Don't mention it Mr. Mishra. Please do not hesitate to let the front desk know of anything you need."

"Thank you Mr. Ibram, and good night," stated Milind, as he surprisingly grabbed Prachi's hand.

"Good night," yelled Mr. Ibram excitedly, as Milind and Prachi made their way up the elevator.

As they entered the elevator, Milind quickly dropped Prachi's hand, realizing what he had been doing. Their walk to their hotel room was completely silent; neither said a word.

As they entered the enormous hotel suite, Prachi walked towards the already burning fireplace. The hotel staff had obviously gotten the room ready for them, as soon as the manager had found out they were here.

The fireplace was near a large window, which overlooked the city. Prachi stood by the window, and folded her arms, in an attempt to warm herself up.

Milind stared at her sexy figure. He didn't bother turning the lights on in the suite, since the burning fireplace provided just enough illumination for him to see his breath-taking wife. Milind locked the door behind him and grabbed a blanket which was lying on an armchair near him. He walked over to Prachi, and removed his business coat from her shoulders, and replaced it with the warm blanket. She turned around to look at him. "Umm…mujhe laga key tujhe tandh lagree hogee" he mumbled, as he started walking away.

"You must be cold too" Prachi replied.

That was all he could take. Why did she play with emotions? Why did she pretend to care? Milind knew he was supposed to be compassionate to his wife, since that was what the doctor had ordered him to do, but he could'nt take it anymore. "What the hell difference does that make to you?" he asked.

"What do you mean?" inquired Prachi, with visible shock in her voice.

"Enough Prachi! Enough! Stop doing this to me!" he yelled.

Prachi did not know what was going on. How had she upset him? "What happened? Are you okay?" she asked, as she placed her hand on his arm, in genuine concern.

He quickly brushed her hand aside, and grabbed her by the shoulders. "Arrey tumhare kya fault hai!?! Galtee to meri hai! Don't worry Prachi…I am not upset with you. I am upset with my bloody kismet. It's my own fault. Every relationship I have is full of deceit. Everything is a damn failure. Every one misleads me! Every one betrays me! Salaah….loyalty to meri life main hai nahee!" yelled Milind, as he turned away from his wife.

"How have I betrayed you?" asked Prachi, still standing next to the fireplace.

Milind turned back around to face her. "PRACHI!" he said with shock visible on his face, "You are asking me this? YOU are asking ME? Arrey betrayal to terey khoon mein hain…deceit runs in your family….your father, your brother, and now you! You think that I am an idiot? That I don't know about you and your lover….do you think that I don't know that the only man you will ever love is Neev….do you think…."

That was it. Prachi had enough. All these days, all these weeks, she had stayed quiet, but today was the end of the line. She could not take this abuse from him anymore. Today, she was going to speak up. Enough was enough.

"BUS! No more Milind!" screamed Prachi.

Milind was shocked at her intense reaction. He simply just stared at her, as she spoke.

"How can you even think such dirty thoughts? You don't know me at all!" she screamed, as tears started running down her face, "I thought that in these last months, we have at least gotten to know each other. But, today you proved me wrong! I am a married woman! How can I even THINK of another man? Dekho Milind, if you want to divorce me then just divorce me! Don't try to defame me and my family. I know you want to marry Ayesha…then go ahead! Who am I to stop you?!?! But please do not do it at the expense of my self-respect! Since the day I married you, I have never even looked at another man, the way you look at Ayesha. I have never even thought of anyone else. How can you think that I would? You insult my family, and I don't say a word. You have insulted me in public and I haven't said a word….but today you went too far. Well let me tell you one think Mr. Mishra, my parents have taught me good values and morals. I have since my marriage acted as loyal your patni, and as the bahu of the Mishra parivaar….and you doubt me?"

Milind stood there shell-shocked. The enormous weight of Prachi's words fell right onto his heart. He could not believe what he had just heard. As he tried to absorb what Prachi had just said, he noticed that she was walking speedily towards the door. Reacting quickly, he grabbed her arm as she tried to walk past him.

"Let go of me Milind!" she stated with a strong authority in her voice. She twisted her hand around, but Milind's grip was tight.

"Leave me alone!" she cried.

"Prachi…" Milind started to say.

Prachi interrupted him, "I don't want to hear anything else!"

Milind's desire to speak grew. He finally mustered up enough courage to say it. "Prachi," he said as he turned her towards him, and pulled her close to his body.

She stood there with tears in her eyes, trying not to look at him. Milind took his free hand and moved Prachi's chin up towards his own face, and finally said what he had been longing to say for so long, "Prachi, I love you."

Now it was Prachi's turn to be surprised. She couldn't believe her ears. "Really?" she asked softly, as she wiped her tears.

"No! April Fools!" retorted Milind, as Prachi tried moving away from him. He quickly pulled her back, so that their chests were touching. "I am sorry Prachi. I am a horrible husband…but...but I really do love you a lot."

"You aren't a horrible husband," replied Prachi, "…but Ayesha?"

"Ayesha is my past. Prachi Mishra, you are my present and my future. I want to spend the rest of my life with you. But I will understand if you don't feel the same," Milind softly stated.

Prachi put her arms around her husband, and answered, "I love you too."

Now Milind could not believe his ears. "What?" he asked, as he tilted Prachi's face up close to his own, with his index finger.

Prachi moved away from Milind's grasp. "I said I love you," she giggled softly, as she wiped away the last of her tears.

Milind was ecstatic! She loved him! SHE loved HIM! Wasting no time, he lunged towards Prachi and grabbed her waist.

She turned towards him, and put her arms around his strong body. He instantly placed his lips onto her soft neck, wanting to feel her soft skin like he had earlier. She didn't refuse him. He moved his lips towards hers, as he placed her gently on the bed. He lay down next to her, and moved his hand along her body, and she willingly obliged. They touched, they kissed and their passion ignited.

***

Opening her eyes again, Prachi looked to her left and saw Milind still sleeping soundly. She put her hand in his hair and softly moved through it. Milind's eyes opened.

"Sorry, Milind," a worried Prachi whispered, scared that he might be angry that she disturbed his sleep.

Milind smiled. "Why are you getting so scared?" he muttered. He looked at the clock, it was only 6. He grabbed Prachi's waist and pulled her in next to his body. "It's only 6 am! Go back to sleep Prachi!," he instructed as he wrapped his arm around her. Willingly she agreed to his request. A few more hours of sleep alongside her husband would do not harm.

***

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Edited by canadianbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful...
just wonderful.....

will be waiting for the next...
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Posted: 17 years ago
CB you rock..! this part was awesome..! wish Prachi had an outbreak like this on the show as well..! that would set Milind straight..! continue soon dear..
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww...they finally confessed their love to each other 😳 😳 😳 ....now when is tht gonna happen on the show...but neways loooved this part too...gr8 job 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
just got hooked up.......really running out of words to adore ur writing

love
nihita

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