FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 6

Originally posted by: jinc118

Hey Muneeza,
Finally got time to finish reading it. And love your writing. Your doing an awesome job. I love to read books more than watching movies (altho i like watching videos a lot so u can imagine how much my love for words is) 😛 My most fav parts were when Milind watches Prachi at the window and the way you described his emotion and thought process at watching her cry. I envisioned that expression on Milsi and it was 😭 And the other most beautiful part was the looks exchanged between Neev and Milsi. Awww..i didn't know who i felt for more, which is the case when i watch the two on screen too. You are doing a fab job with your interpretation of these characters. Very real. I loved the read and looking forward to more. Keep it up buddy. 👏

JC

Well you took out time to read it that's an honour enuf for me..😊keeping your hectic schedule...so you liked the ordeal btw Neev and Mills I figured if they ever had to understand each other a focal and common point of thought would be Prachi hence the confrontation..am glad you liked it.😊

Originally posted by: born-free

hi, wht a way with thoughts and words you have. i must say u are really gifted. Its just beautiful. the way u have put it. feels as if we are actually waqtching it. I sincerely hope u shud persue a activity in wrtting if u are noe already doing so. AND most imp Ekat kapoor shud read IF and pick somne ideas fromhere too which willhave a lot of happiness and less of deaths and criss-cross marriages and lots of crisses!!

Ah I'm truly blessed with such comments...honestly 😊. Well yes I do have a job that requires me picking up the pen often . Am an editor by profession hence the love of words. I'm so awed to think you believe my ff shud be read by Ekta .😳..n yes I do sometimes feel like sending her some pointers...but sadly I dun think it's gonna be any good....see I cudn't drag the story for 5 long years...😆

Originally posted by: critically-sane

Hello.. i just read the whole story form the start and love how its shaping up..! if only Milind had heard this conversation in the show..! ah..!

Well darling hoping he'd heard the convo in the serial is similar to hoping that fishes might fly someday ...not until we've cried our eyes out...gone beserk to the core and have cursed ourselves a couple of hundred times for acting like perfect lunatics will we be blessed the Michi reunion that too incomplete...😆

I read all four parts and they are so good that I read them twice today.
😉 Keep up the good work!

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Ah I'm truly blessed with such comments...honestly 😊. Well yes I do have a job that requires me picking up the pen often . Am an editor by profession hence the love of words. I'm so awed to think you believe my ff shud be read by Ekta .😳..n yes I do sometimes feel like sending her some pointers...but sadly I dun think it's gonna be any good....see I cudn't drag the story for 5 long years...😆

hey i know wht u mean. but i think even the TV people shud read IF. coz it is always abt them mostly gud stuff and alos a lot of insight on wht people think so they can pick up some clues and deliver wht the publlic wants.

but once again i want to add tht u r doing excellent work. will eagerly wait for ur next part.

Muneez di,

awesome awesome excellent part👍🏼, i wouldnt say its long enough 😔( becoz i am greedy for more info😆 ), but it is apt for reading, Loved it Loved it Loved it🤗

Love the way things are moving on, will be eagerly waiting for the next part

Cheers

Basanthi 😊

hey Muneez,

My dear Editor! I can see how good of an editor you are with the way you have written this part!!! 👏 👏

It was awesome! I enjoyed the part where he knows that sukriti withdrew the money....@ now it brings me to the point in Kayamath howcome Milind has not yet discovered that Sukriti withdrew the money!!! Amazing isn't it that we are logical and the creatives are not!!

If so much money is withdrawn won't the boss know about it!!!!

After my lament on that particular one..let me say that it was an awesome read! 👏

One word - Spectacular! 😊

Will comment more in a bit! Enjoyed it immensely~!

Hey Muneez,

Excellent part. I just love the way things get cleared in this ff, unlike the serial.

Gr8 going. 👏

Shan

Originally posted by: red_chile

Muneez di,

awesome awesome excellent part👍🏼, i wouldnt say its long enough 😔( becoz i am greedy for more info😆 ), but it is apt for reading, Loved it Loved it Loved it🤗

Love the way things are moving on, will be eagerly waiting for the next part

Cheers

Basanthi 😊

Anju darling still you find it short....😉 thx for the compliments sweety.😊 especially the fact that you loved it.