FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 5

Originally posted by: panache

Read the part! Reserving this space for my comment..later 😳

Will look forward to your comments right now am off to read your ff.......I'm hooked to it too.😊

My comments on the reserved space! 😳

Originally posted by: panache

Read the part! Reserving this space for my comment..later 😳

***** My Comments*************

Munezze.....Dear! Awesome! Awesome! I like the dialogues between Neev and Prachi..i have goose bumps reading them....Perfectly said! Neev is her ateeet....I loved that part!

I am loving it so far..I am hooked...can't wait to read the next part....

I liked the way, you have potrayed both of them...esp how Milind talks to himself after hearing N and P coversation...

Too good! 👏👏👏

Aw! thank you so much sweety .....I'm honoured...😊well somehow after watching Ekta's serials I've developed a self speech syndrome.....all her characters keep talking to themselves...never to each other...😆 Will update soon darling.

Hi Muneeza. Its great to see you writing fan fiction. 😊
Needless to say, i fell for the romance most of all. But in terms of writing, what i liked the most is how you have explained things from multiple points of view, the same sitaution the way each individual sees it. Also, as i expected it to be, its very passionate. Its also very honest in its analysis of the emotions depicted. Way to go!! Keep up the good work. 😃

wonderful FF...

but now again I am walking around cursing all man....
how stupid can the be ......
or is it just milind 😡 .......

a very wel written 👏 👏 👏 ...
please continue....

Originally posted by: whynot

Hi Muneeza. Its great to see you writing fan fiction. 😊
Needless to say, i fell for the romance most of all. But in terms of writing, what i liked the most is how you have explained things from multiple points of view, the same sitaution the way each individual sees it. Also, as i expected it to be, its very passionate. Its also very honest in its analysis of the emotions depicted. Way to go!! Keep up the good work. 😃

Ah you know me a hopeless romantic....😆 thx for the meticulous analysis darling .....am most humbled .....needless to say will continue updating..😊

Originally posted by: shali

wonderful FF...

but now again I am walking around cursing all man....
how stupid can the be ......
or is it just milind 😡 .......

a very wel written 👏 👏 👏 ...
please continue....

thanks for liking it sweety ....he's not stupid just very insecure....😊

Hey Muneeza,
Finally got time to finish reading it. And love your writing. Your doing an awesome job. I love to read books more than watching movies (altho i like watching videos a lot so u can imagine how much my love for words is) 😛 My most fav parts were when Milind watches Prachi at the window and the way you described his emotion and thought process at watching her cry. I envisioned that expression on Milsi and it was 😭 And the other most beautiful part was the looks exchanged between Neev and Milsi. Awww..i didn't know who i felt for more, which is the case when i watch the two on screen too. You are doing a fab job with your interpretation of these characters. Very real. I loved the read and looking forward to more. Keep it up buddy. 👏

JC

hi, wht a way with thoughts and words you have. i must say u are really gifted. Its just beautiful. the way u have put it. feels as if we are actually waqtching it. I sincerely hope u shud persue a activity in wrtting if u are noe already doing so. AND most imp Ekat kapoor shud read IF and pick somne ideas fromhere too which willhave a lot of happiness and less of deaths and criss-cross marriages and lots of crisses!!

Hello.. i just read the whole story form the start and love how its shaping up..! if only Milind had heard this conversation in the show..! ah..!