FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sareeta

Erm... seems like I am the first one... to comment on part 4... am I ??? 😉

My fav bit was Milind thinking to himself ... abt dard and happiness ...!

And the last bit, where he jus replies promptly that he'd be home for the Puja!

What I loved abt the part was that , there was no sudden change of act in Milind after his eavesdropping albeit unintentional , but yet there was a softer side that came across... ever so slightly that his wifey didnt miss either! Enjoyed the way you portrayed that aspect of Milind! 😊

Thank you soooooooo much for the wonderful read! 😊

Aw ..I'm so humbled and honoured yaar...😊really never thought I could write anything an ff was such a far fetched thought....extremely happy that you liked it... I didn't want Milind to lose it just on a revelation he's got to go thru a lot more shocks to change ....😉

Muneeza darling...(if I may call you that dear?😃)

Aww....god only knows how I missed this FF dear😃.....just loved it....and I read all the parts in one go😉....3 parts first😆...but when I went to comment..I found out you posted part 4 too😆...so ...got busy reading that.....thus the late comment😆....

Your were fantastic dear...in protraying the emotions of Milli...so well....his self doubt...his longing....for Prachi's love...his misconceptions ...very beautifully put dear.👏

Part three was superb👏...dear....Completely agree with Sareeta on that😃.....loved Premlata and his conversation....to him sseeing her crying...and him hearing her and Neevs conversation..😉😃

Noe dear...thank god you did not torture us as Ekta does....😆 ...but duffer Milli that he si is still not accepted that she loves him....now he truly needs a whack dear...I am offering myself and my hockey stick to do the job..for free😆

Can't wait for the next update from you soon dear....an by soon one really means soon...am quiet an impatient person😆

Love

Krishna

P.S. Hey I am originally from Karachi...where are you from dear??😃

Originally posted by: kubare

Muneeza darling...(if I may call you that dear?😃)By all means darling..😊

Aww....god only knows how I missed this FF dear😃.....just loved it....and I read all the parts in one go😉....3 parts first😆...but when I went to comment..I found out you posted part 4 too😆...so ...got busy reading that.....thus the late comment😆....Lol aw hun I didn't know that was wondering wat happened to you n your big pink font it's really enlightening to see your comments.😊

Your were fantastic dear...in protraying the emotions of Milli...so well....his self doubt...his longing....for Prachi's love...his misconceptions ...very beautifully put dear.👏Thank you sweety just wanted to think like him and ended up feeling him 😊

Part three was superb👏...dear....Completely agree with Sareeta on that😃.....loved Premlata and his conversation....to him sseeing her crying...and him hearing her and Neevs conversation..😉😃 Yes I wanted some peace for the guy😊

Noe dear...thank god you did not torture us as Ekta does....😆 ...but duffer Milli that he si is still not accepted that she loves him....now he truly needs a whack dear...I am offering myself and my hockey stick to do the job..for free😆

He's gonna get some shockers soon dear dun you worry those will scare the living lights out of him....

Can't wait for the next update from you soon dear....an by soon one really means soon...am quiet an impatient person😆

Love Luv ya 2 n I promise will be prompt with the next update.can't keep ya waiting.😉

Krishna

P.S. Hey I am originally from Karachi...where are you from dear??😃 Really dear I'm from Karachi too...just up on old clifton..maybe we cud meet up someday and dicuss poor Mills peril in detail...😊

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Originally posted by: kubare

Originally posted by: red_chile

Muneeze benji,
awesome part, but too short 😭
Reg
Theeki Anju

Short.😊.....sweety that was all I could think of in my very short lunch break will try not to diappoint you next time...

Read the part! Reserving this space for my comment..later 😳

***** My Comments*************

Munezze.....Dear! Awesome! Awesome! I like the dialogues between Neev and Prachi..i have goose bumps reading them....Perfectly said! Neev is her ateeet....I loved that part!

I am loving it so far..I am hooked...can't wait to read the next part....

I liked the way, you have potrayed both of them...esp how Milind talks to himself after hearing N and P coversation...

Too good! 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: shananubis

Muneeze dear, I take my words back.. You are not at all like kekta.. 😉 😃 Never in Kekta's world some one will listen to whole conversation, but you made Milind come back.

You tried this much still the guy is confused whether Prachi means all these or not? 😕 My poor confused soul. Bless him 😳

Gr8 part dear.. Please continue soon

Shan

Lol dear Shan I really can't be as cruel as Ekta atleast not for the moment wanted some peace for the guy.....but can't help him as he is very difficult with emotions had to place him in complex emotional turmoil ......thx for the comments darling....will try updating soon