FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 2

Originally posted by: panache

Wow! Wow! Wow! I would never have thought to start the FF at the point that you started it from....Perfectooo!

Me and Sareeta are you inspirations!! Hmmm! What should i say for this!! I am deeply humbled... and i hope you keep on writing...you are good with words....

The flow of the story is very good...Nicely thought out scenes..I especially liked the scene when prachi's mother is worried about her daughter...

His guilt and his thinking, the frustration as sareeta said is reflected perfectly in your FF...

Waiting eagerly for your next part!!! I am so happy that we have another FF for us to read and enjoy!!!

Thanks a lot sweety for likng it ,I have in all honesty started writing becuz I was inspired by you and Sareeta.Loved your ff too. Will update soon as I said am home today lol so will write away.😊

Originally posted by: shananubis

Just read part 2. For a first time writer you are very very good. 👏 👏 👏

If the first part showed Milinds confusion and frustration. Second part showed Prachi's love and her turmoil. You have a way with words. You can feel Prachi's emotions. I especially liked where she tries to contemplate whether she is prachi shah or prachi mishra or just Prachi?? excellent.. 👏 👏

The interaction between mother and daughter was also nice. I would love to see these scenes in the serial..

Keep up the good work. I am eagerly waiting for your next installment.

love

Shan

Thank you dear for the kind appreciation ....am so glad you loved my work will look forward to more comments .😊

Ok , I didnt realize Part 2 was up so soon....

Jus finished reading it...

My fav bit, was someone watching the tear escape her eye! The entire line had this sense , that someone dear was a witness to her pain... her agony... her desire ... and that she aint alone...

At the risk of being misinterpreted , I do say this, the word Pyaar struck me too strong, for a relation between the two that is as delicate , the beginning of realization of their own feelings...

Jus my perception... 😊

Originally posted by: sareeta

Ok , I didnt realize Part 2 was up so soon....

Jus finished reading it...

My fav bit, was someone watching the tear escape her eye! The entire line had this sense , that someone dear was a witness to her pain... her agony... her desire ... and that she aint alone...

At the risk of being misinterpreted , I do say this, the word Pyaar struck me too strong, for a relation between the two that is as delicate , the beginning of realization of their own feelings...

Jus my perception... 😊

I agree but I think we got over the pasand part long back when she was getting ready for him the ever so dramatic one night stand episode...I felt her connecting to him in a certain way. I feel their relationship has crossed reverence and adoration it's simple pure love and I'm sure he'll realize it soon too. But thanx for the pointer will try n make it subtle now.😊

Wonderfully written akka, love it, but could u make the parts a bit bigger, greedy me wants to read more 😭😆

Originally posted by: red_chile

Wonderfully written akka, love it, but could u make the parts a bit bigger, greedy me wants to read more 😭😆

lol and I thought I was giving in too much detail. Your wish is my command will make the third installment longer..😊

wow i just love it keep writing dont have word to say very nice 👏

Love Leena 😉

u said updated.. only oart one is there? do continue though !!

Originally posted by: koolaries4

u said updated.. only oart one is there? do continue though !!

Ah sweety am trying my best to come up with the third part soon.😊

Originally posted by: Rano 22

wow i just love it keep writing dont have word to say very nice 👏

Love Leena 😉

Thank you sweety appreciate your comments immensely. Did I mention I've just fallen in love with your siggies they're so cute.😊