FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 3

Waiting to see how it goes further... 😳

Dear Awesome_writer of Kayamath,

I am sorry to inform you that the i am utterly dissappointed with the length of the part. Its still too short, me wanting more 😭

well thats greedy me, but the story the plot and the way u have written is fantastic 😃 Keep up the good work

🤗

Yeah dil mange more

Reg

Anju

oh sure will wait for your comments. 😊

Part three has been updated

Just read Part 3. You are just as bad as kekta 😆 😆 😆 . Why are everyone behind my darling Milind. Every ff writer is making him come to wrong conclusions.

I loved the talk between Premlatha and Milind. The way he hastily went upstairs to call Prachi when he came to know she didn't have food. hailaa... 😳 😳 So much in love.. Then he got confused again. Why didn't he notice it was Neev who was talking and not Prachi...

gr8 part dear.. please continue soon.. looking forward for the next part

love
Shan

Originally posted by: shananubis

Just read Part 3. You are just as bad as kekta 😆 😆 😆 . Why are everyone behind my darling Milind. Every ff writer is making him come to wrong conclusions.

I loved the talk between Premlatha and Milind. The way he hastily went upstairs to call Prachi when he came to know she didn't have food. hailaa... 😳 😳 So much in love.. Then he got confused again. Why didn't he notice it was Neev who was talking and not Prachi...

gr8 part dear.. please continue soon.. looking forward for the next part

love
Shan

As bad as Ekta 😆 I love this one....dear darling if it's not turmoil afore then how can the fruits of love be enjoyed after pain comes happiness. So will it be with our darling.😊

Sorry for commenting a tad bit late.. was caught up with something...

Part 1 was my fav , interms of Milind's reactions, but part 3 was something I enjoyed and re-read for the simple fact that it had so much encapsulated in such a small part.. rather so much conveyed in such less words, Mom and Milind, Prachs and Neev , Milind and his dilemma...and his so called clear vision abt things!

It was really very enjoyable. Particular fav in Part 3 would be the subtle but instant , unconscious reaction to prachi not having had her food!
😊

Originally posted by: sareeta

Sorry for commenting a tad bit late.. was caught up with something...

Part 1 was my fav , interms of Milind's reactions, but part 3 was something I enjoyed and re-read for the simple fact that it had so much encapsulated in such a small part.. rather so much conveyed in such less words, Mom and Milind, Prachs and Neev , Milind and his dilemma...and his so called clear vision abt things!

It was really very enjoyable. Particular fav in Part 3 would be the subtle but instant , unconscious reaction to prachi not having had her food!
😊

I'm honoured to think you reread it ah dear yes the simple joys of love...but yes too quickly given away to the insecurities...😊 I'm glad you liked it.

HI Muneeza, I read this ff... though its one of very few which i have read till date..few things which I liked , would like to mention ... Its very complete, (I only have seen some promos).. but still could visualize the characters and situations very well... so great job with the language and flow.. 😊
The way you have described Milind' dilemma and his inner turmoil... helps to understand the character.. and the dialogues you have chosen for him... make his image quite clear.
In part 3 you left the story at an interesting point... I was expecting happy meeting and confession of love... but you added a twist in the tale and left it there... good job.. keep it up.. 👏

Erm... seems like I am the first one... to comment on part 4... am I ??? 😉

My fav bit was Milind thinking to himself ... abt dard and happiness ...!

And the last bit, where he jus replies promptly that he'd be home for the Puja!

What I loved abt the part was that , there was no sudden change of act in Milind after his eavesdropping albeit unintentional , but yet there was a softer side that came across... ever so slightly that his wifey didnt miss either! Enjoyed the way you portrayed that aspect of Milind! 😊

Thank you soooooooo much for the wonderful read! 😊