SFF: 'Forever' (MP)Part 10, P.26, July 10 - Page 2

Beautifully written, and very descriptive, really wonderful..hope u decide to continue..pretty please😳

Originally posted by: sareeta

Good one DC.. typically your style... and whatz with the kohl layered eyes dahling... You jus cant seem to forget that bit in any of your FFs! 😆 Kiddin' .... its the only thing that strikes me hard when I read your FFs....

A good read! 😊

PMed my comments! 😊

thank you Di... the kohl-layered eyes, 😆 I had totally expected you to notice that... I dunno why they keep haunting my writings... you aren't around much, but wherever you are occupied, you are greatly missed! I will pm you back sometime soon as I am in a fix with my own school work miss you di!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: sssiham

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Excellent work......really creative....I've read some of ur other ff and I really admire your writing skills...You have a way of making the reader get lost in the story and start imagining it as though they were actually watching the show itself & not reading a fanfic.

Keep writing!!!!!!!!

Hi there,

*hand on heart* thank you so much! the writer writes... paints the picture... the details if some... and the rest is up to the reader. you're comments are priceless, and I am deeply humbled although I'm not worthy of such praise.

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: panache

Arre..My neetu puttar..you did heed my request hah!

You have written a SS..amazing....I loved it! 👏

Beautifully written....I can imagine the scene too.....he can't help himself but walk towards her...Aptly potrayed! Awesome! 😳 😊

di... this one was actually a random thought thingy. as for your "request" I do have something in mind... that will come when I have more time... anything for you! I don't want a big committment at the moment so this one will be done soon. thank you for the sweet comments, I hope I live up to your expectations.

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: candyfloss

continue soon.i'm loving michi ff.

Thanks Candy... I will do so hopefully😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: shali

neetu....
your started it and do finish 😡 ....
otherwise my jootha tera sar 😆 .....

and I love your start 👏 ....but what is new about that 😉 ....

My dearest rubbisher, *japphi*... hai meri amma, I will finish... keep your joota in the cupboard for later, it might become helpful😆... thank you so much for the lovely words!

Cheers,

dc