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nagina

@jeb1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Great update jasmine

plz continue soon

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111priyan

@111priyan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

nice part . Part 9 was good , but Part 10 was very short.

Mohini's character is quite suspicious, not able to understand what's cooking in her brain, is she really that much nice or u have planed something. Continue soon.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Pt 11

Mohini knocks the door:Milind!
Milind removes his arm from Prachi.
MILIND:This mom....
He is irritated.Prachi smiles. Milind opens the door.
M:Tomorrow there is Holi's puja.Get ready early.So sleep soon.
MILIND:Yes mom.
Mohini goes away.Milind closes the door and looks at Prachi.
MILIND:This mom is sometimes...
P:We need to sleep early.Because we have to make arrangements for the puja.I will change and come.
MILIND:Ok.

The next day...
Puja is going on in the house.Prachi puts a gopi on Milind's forehead with saffron and gives prasad to Milind.

All are celebrating holi.They all throw colour on each other.
Milind goes near Prachi and puts colour on her face slowly.They both look deeply into each other eyes.
Prachi thinks:I like Milind.May be i love him.But when he touched me now i felt very different.I felt secure.
Milind smiles at her.She also smiles.They both hold hands together and smile.
Mohini:Milind and Prachi...come..pose for a photograph.
They both stand together before the camera.
M:Milind...stand close to Prachi.
He is shy:What are you telling mom?
M:Stand close to her.
Milind stands close to her.They both are shy.Ronit takes their photograph.

Night....
It's raining...Prachi is standing out with a smile.Milind goes out looking for her.
MILIND:What are you doing here at night?All are sleeping.
P:Rain is so lovely.I love it.So cool.
She is dancing in the rain.Milind feels nice seeing her wet in the rain.He goes near her and pulls her close to her.
Prachi can't move.They both can't utter a word.Their eyes speak to each other.
MILIND:I love you Prachi.It's time to break the distance between us.
She is shy:I love you too.
Milind sings the song 'Zindagi Do Pal Ki...' while becoming intimate with Prachi.

The next morning...
Prachi is drying her hair.She sees a rose flower on the bed.
P:Who kept this here?Milind?
She hears somebody entering the room.She looks at him.That is Milind. She is shy to face him.So she tries to go out of the room.But he holds her hand.
She is shy:Leave my hand Milind.
She removes her hand from him and runs away.Milind smiles.

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Panna

@OptimisticEyes

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Beautiful update jasmine.
plz cont soon.
thanks for the pm.

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111priyan

@111priyan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

wow nice part loved it , really Mohini has got a great timing. 👍🏼
good work very nice 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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pri

@Persephone_Pri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Thanx 4 dis Beautiful part Jass 🤗
So at last MiChi r husband n wife in true sense 😉😳😳
Luved d cute MiChi moments hope dey remain lyk dis 😛

Plzz do cont. soon luv d way d story is progressing 😃

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nagina

@jeb1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

very nice update jasmine

plz continue soon

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Prachi is lying on the bed.Milind enters the room:Prachi...get ready...let us go out.
P:Sorry Milind.I can't.I'm tired.
MILIND:Tired?Why?You have no work at home.Right?
P:I met my old friend Satya today.We both went out.So i'm tired.
MILIND:No.You should come.
P:Why men can't understand women's feelings?
Milind loses his control:You can roam around with your friend.But you can't go out with our own husband.Then you are talking like this to your own husband?Your tongue is so sharp.Nobody has dared to talk to me like this.I feel like slapping you.
Prachi becomes upset as she never expected him to react like this.
He goes out of the room.
P:Milind!
Mohini enters the room.
M:What happened Prachi?You look upset.
Prachi tells her everything.
M:Oh!I never knew that Milind has this kind of a face.I will ask him.
P:Please don't talk to him about this.Please don't tell this to anyone.
M:No,i won't tell this to anyone.
Mohini shouts:Milind!Come here.
Milind comes.
M:How dare you shout at my daughter.
MILIND:Mom...her tongue is too long..
M:Your tongue is also long.Never behave like this to her.It's my warning.
She goes out.
Milind stares at Prachi:Immediately you told this to my mom and made her scold me?You are disgusting.
Prachi feels upset.Milind goes out.

Prachi is sitting on the bed.
She thinks:Milind is not talking to me.I can't bear this pain.
Her tears flow.Somebody wipes her tears from the back.She looks at that person.That was Milind.He is standing there with a smile.
MILIND:Forget it Prachi.Fights happen between couples.Never mind.
Prachi becomes happy and goes to his arms: I feel so relieved and happy.