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nagina

@jeb1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Beautiful update jasmine

plz continue soon

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Life Partner Part 7

Prachi is dressed in a grand navy blue saree for the engagement ceremony.
Parvati:You look very beautiful.Let no evil eye fall on you.
Manthan:Don't worry mom.When i'm here,i will not let anyone harm my sister.
Parvati smiles.
Bhoomi:Not any evil eye,Milind jeeju's eyes will fall on her.
Everyone smiles.Prachi blushes.
Om enters the room:Not ready yet?Milind and party have arrived.
P:We are ready.
O:Not about you.Prachi is ready?
P:Yes.
Prachi is brought to the hall.Milind is really bowled over by her beauty.
His eyes are rolling on her.
Bhoomi whispers to Prachi 's ears:I told you..jeeju's eyes are on you.
P:Stop it Bhoomi.If anyone hears it..
Bhoomi chuckles.

Anirudh:Now let us move on to the ceremony.
Michi exchange rings with an innocent smile.

All the busy with having food.Milind's eyes are searching for Prachi .
Bhoomi goes near him with naughty smile:Wht are you looking at jeeju?Searching for Prachi ?
He smiles.
B:You can't sit peacefully without seeing her?
He smiles.
B:I will send her to you.
Prachi is helping Parvati to serve sweets.
Pa:Hey..you are the bride and you are doing work?
Pra:I'm bored mom.I will help you.
Bhoomi comes:If you re bored,go to jeeju.He is also bored.
Parvati smiles:Right.You go to milind.
Pra:Mom...
She is shy.
Bhoomi pushes her out.Prachi goes slowly to Milind.Their eyes are touching each other.
Their eyes sing the song 'Tere Naina..'.(Chandni Chowk To China)for each other.

Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago

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Tanu

@ytanuja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Hi jas

The update was cute very well done 👏

Note: jas here is a small thing u may need to chance check for it may be it was a mistake.

Bhoomi:Not any evil eye,Maan jeeju's eyes will fall on her.
Everyone smiles.Geet blushes.

u have to change the names in this line

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111priyan

@111priyan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

very nice & sweet continue soon.

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Panna

@OptimisticEyes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

thanks jasmine for beautiful update..

plz cont soon...

thanks again for pm.

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pri

@Persephone_Pri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Hey Jass
Such a Cute part 😳'MiChi r soo sweet luv dem ❤️
Lyk ur Bhoomi here😉

thanx 4 dis beautiful part n d PM 😃
Plzz cont. soon

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Life Partner Part 8

Milind:You look very pretty.You look like a film star.
She blushes.
M:I'm nothing in front of your beauty.
Prachi:What nonsense!Nothing like that.You are...very nice.
He smiles:You are a Goddess.
P:No no...
All are dancing.
M:Will you teach me to dance now?
P:Now? What are you saying?
M:All are dancing.We are the couple of the day.We hv to dance.Right?
Mohini comes saying:No.Before marriage don't hold hands together and dance.
Michi become dull.
Mohini goes away.
M:My mom is a nosy poker.She follows us always.
Prachi feels like laughing.

Milind rings up Prachi.
M:Hi ...5 more days to go for our wedding.I'm cutting the date in the calender to know for how many days i should wait.
She smiles.

Wedding morning..
Prachi and Parvati are in the temple.Prachi has closed her eyes.She opens her eyes.She is surprised to see Milind standing near her with a smile.
P: Milind!
M:It's a surprise.You also came here.It is not a joke.
Prachi and Parvati smile.
Pa:Bye Milind.We have to leave now.
M:Ok...
They go.Prachi turn back.She sees Milind looking t her with lovely smile.She smiles and walks away.
Anirudh touches Milind 's shoulder.
M:Dad!
A:This is God's game.Otherwise you both would not have met in the temple surprisingly just before the wedding.
Milind smiles.

Wedding...
Milind ties mangalsuthra around Prachi's neck.He fills her forehead with sindoor.
Prachi hugs her parents and siblings.Then she gets inside the car with Milind.
M:Surprisingly you did'nt cry like serial heroines who cry at the time of departure.
Prachi smiles.

Michi enter Milind 's house.All the guests are looking at prachi.
One lady:Mohini..your daughter in law is very fair and beautiful.
M:Yes,my daughter in law has to be fair and beautiful.
Another lady:She has worn lot of gold.
M:My daughter in law will be rich no.
After the guests went Mohini touches prachi's ornaments:You remove it and give it to me.I will take care of the gold.Otherwise it will be lost.
M:No need.Let the gold with prachi.
Mohini's face becomes dull.

Michi are sitting on the bed.