Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 8

Sohniyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Wat to say.... Mindblowing yaar 👏 👏 👏 !!!

Tat censorship was for bachchon na.... We, grown ups are also here... So tooo bad tat u hv asked us also to get out of the roooom 😆

Watever we missed and missing in the serial, u are making it happen in this fanfic... Absolutely marvellous... I wish I cud put life into this fanfic and characters....

But I have a complaint .... Its tooooo short yaar 😉 😆

I know, I know... Now u dont come with a hammer to hit me 😆

Ab jaldi se tum bhi next part likhna shuru karo aur humein bhi khush karo baalike 😆 😆 😆

Krishi

oh its mindblowing yaaar .................. 😳

asswessomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part sonia
its mindblowing,excellent
just loved this part
especially da breakfast taking part is sooooooooooooooo sweet
plz plz cont soon
cant wait for da next part



rimli

great i have no words to say u r mind blowing yaar create some more romentic scene between robbie nad kasturi this is not my objection this is my advice d nt get me rong plzz nice work keep it up next part jaldi pist karo 👏

hi dear i m late ;just read d FF
Sonia u rock!!!intezaar karna fruitful saabit hua ..
u just exceeded d expectations dear ;
i simply luved it d way u described every scene btwn RK alongwid lyrics of song superb ;d song selection was brilliant 2 .
i also luv d humour u incorporate & Raunak's take on sir was hilarious 😆
very beautifully written 👏
just waitin 4 next......

sonali

Hi Sonia,

That was one sizzling dream😳 . Apna Robbie bhi na...imaginations runs wild 😆 yeh kya Robbie sofe pe? Bechara... I hope he slept well. I love Raunak in this, what an adorable friend he makes teasing his newly wed friend😆 Thankfully kissi ko tho ajeeb laga Kasturi ka 'Sir' bulana. I can so imagine Robbie's reaction when Nandini told him Kasturi has to go home t'row 😆

Devika is like a time bomb ticking away 😕 Lets see how Robbie manages it.

That was well written Sonia, love reading this FF... keep it going 😃

soni 👏
today first time i read part1 to part4
very good, thanks for the shaadi and all the dialogues .
and dream too 😉
that song was too good man, you have put comment for all the lines 👏
well done waiting for part 5

Originally posted by: CanadianAddict

Wow! u r soo good, and its so cute.

omg, if only this really happened on the show.

i say we kick out Ekta and put u instead.

Thank you... so good to know that u liked it.... Me joining Ekta?? no ya I'm better here.... otherwise even I'll start breaking couples😕.... keep tuned and and keep commenting.😊

Originally posted by: white star

sonia yeh tu bohut meta tah 😛 i swear 😆 😆 😆 will waiting for da next part badly plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon na just cant wait for da nxt part 😆 love u r ff n gr8 job on u r 4th part 👏

Thank you so much white star.... Good to know that you liked the part😳.... hoping to post the next part by tonight.... keep commenting....

Originally posted by: davia389

that was wonderful.. hopr robbie speaks out.. pata nahi kya hoga jab devika ayegi..
pls continue soon
davia

thank you davia.... hope u like the next part too..... stay tuned and update ur ff too....

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Cho sweet! My heart was beating fast and I was all hyper! You have brought me to the condition I was when RK were romancing! By reading it I am in this condition. What would happen if it really happens in real show! I think that is why Ekta never shows all this, she knows it is bad to get excited! 😆

I loved the part where Robbie cuts Devika's phone call!I am so curious to know what will be Devika's reaction! Too good! 👏 Please continue fast....

Thanx a ton ya.... I'm so happy that it reminded you of RK's romancing moments... And Robbie cutting Devika's call... that idea I took from Devika only.. remember Ra/Ka weddign day she had cut Robbie's call... keep commenting...

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Maar daala mujhe, Sonia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't seem to get enough of your fanfic!!!!!

OMG, I have just read it before going to bed and I am positive this beautiful scene is going to come in my dreams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And your style of using every line of the song to depict something was awesome. But somehow I knew that this was going to be Robbie's dream 😛 . There was no way they were going to come together immediately!!!!

Lekin mein kya keh rahi hun, ke agar dream hi itna sensous tha, toh what will happen when they actually do come together in your fanfic!!!!!

OMG, sochke hi paseena chut rahaa hai!!!!!

Awesome, Too Good 👏 👏 👏 .

Desperately waiting for the next part!!!!!

Thanx a ton Pragalbha... I know that the dearm sequence was very predictable.... I'm happy you liked the sequenue and the style coz I thot it didn't come out well... was also thinking of deleting it.... was wrting the romantic sequence for the first time na so....

Keep commenting... I hope u like them as well... Thanx sweety....

Originally posted by: zenia680

Sonia, I just had to log on today to read ur ff b4 goin to work.....tis soo addictive and very beautifully written.......tis so detailed that I actually imagined the entire scene unfolding b4 my eyes...... 👏 I luved the part where Robbioe cuts Devika out.......and am soo anxious to know how they interact with eachother... I mean Robbie and Kasturi....when will he tell her dat he luvs her like mad.....I hope Devika gives them sumtime alone b4 she unfolds her evil plans after the jhatka she gets seeing them together....

Waiting with bated brath once again for your powerpacked update......

Thank you so much Zenia... its coz of all of you that I get my inspiration to write this ff.... Will surely update soon.... keep commenting...

Originally posted by: lovefaz

it was awesome
continue soon

Thank you.... will update soon... keep commenting....

Originally posted by: me_says

Raunak: Ab dekh na wives apne husband ko pyar se kya nahin bulati…. Darling… sweetheart…. Dear…. But Kasturi duniya ki pehli patni hogi jo apne pati ko Sir kehke bulati hai…. Very innovative must say….

Robbie: Raunak tu….

Raunak: nahin nahin… hota hai…. Kahan ye nahi pata par jahan tujh jaisa koi hoga wahan yehi hota hoga…




🤣

OMG Sonia, I love your Raunak and Robbie, they are just too cute 😊.

Please update really soon.

Thanx buddy.... I know even I love them... Hope we cud have got to see more Jai-Veeru friendship on screen too.... Keep commenting....

Originally posted by: manny2rock

WOw mindblowing.........it was so lil... 😉
i loved it.......but this time plz don't make us wait dat long.....update it soon.......yea it was funny wat raunak said about"sir" lolz.....
aur haan
maine pehli bhaar gaana read karke dekha hai.....i actually imagined all the things...superb..... 👏 👏 👏

plz plz plz plz plz update it soon... 😊

little?? 😛

Thank you so much.... Reading all ur comments is the best part of writing this ff... I'll try to update soon.... Keep reading and yes keep commenting too....

Originally posted by: knumnum

Sohniyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Wat to say.... Mindblowing yaar 👏 👏 👏 !!!

Tat censorship was for bachchon na.... We, grown ups are also here... So tooo bad tat u hv asked us also to get out of the roooom 😆

Watever we missed and missing in the serial, u are making it happen in this fanfic... Absolutely marvellous... I wish I cud put life into this fanfic and characters....

But I have a complaint .... Its tooooo short yaar 😉 😆

I know, I know... Now u dont come with a hammer to hit me 😆

Ab jaldi se tum bhi next part likhna shuru karo aur humein bhi khush karo baalike 😆 😆 😆

Krishi

Krishi ki bachchi.... Type karte karte mera haath dard karne laga and u have complains.... hmm....

And yes censorship wala part main bhi u wanted to be in the room.... arre kuch toh sharam karo 😉!!! waise aap ka hukum sar aakhon par... will post the next part soon... do keep commenting...

Originally posted by: cutykoo20

oh its mindblowing yaaar .................. 😳

thank a ton.... keep commenting......

Originally posted by: rimli_remix rox

asswessomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part sonia
its mindblowing,excellent
just loved this part
especially da breakfast taking part is sooooooooooooooo sweet
plz plz cont soon
cant wait for da next part

rimli

thank u so much Rimli..... I am glad that u all r enjoying it.... keep tuned and keep commenting....

Sonia
Dudde ur a great story teller man.. keep it up! 👏
one of the best ff i've read so far!!