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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sofia_shiraz95

awsome part..
i simply loved it.. 😳

thank you so much for likng my ff and sorry to keep u waiting.... I hope u like the next part too... keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: zenia680

OMG ur ff is a very refrshing change from the current track......Im luvin it.....nd cant wait to read the nect part...plssssssss update asap.........

Hi zenia.... good to know u r liking the ff.... I know the current trackof the serial is very depressing... hope u enjoy the upcoming parts too....

Originally posted by: sara5

hi nice part nice work con soon 👏

Thanx sara.... hope u like the next part too....

Originally posted by: white star

its ok sonia take u r time n as it is sabar ka pal meta hota hai 😆

Hmm whitestar.... smart girl!!! ab read the next part and lets me know phal meetha tha ya nahi....

Sonia

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Thank a lot everyone for such sweet replies and sorry to keep you all waiting…. Hope you enjoy this part too… don't forget to drop in ur comments…. I hope I live upto ur expectations this time too….

Recap: Raunak breaks the news of RK wedding to the family…. Puru suppots Robbie's decision and decides to throw a party for RK… Devika is unaware of all this and Puru decides its better for her to now whn she is returns…..Nandini welcomes the newly weds and takes Kasturi to her room…. Robbie and Raunak share a friendly moment after which both of them walks to their respective rooms…..

Part: 4

Robbie enters the room and sees Kasturi standing beside the window… A sudden smile appears on his face…. He thinks….

Robbie: (himself) ek din main hi zindagi kitni badal gayi hai…. Aaj mujhe jaise sab kuch mil gaya…. Yeh kamra(looks around the room) jo kal tak sirf mera tha aaj mera aur Kasturi ka hai…. Humara hai!! (Robbie slowly walks over to Kasturi and slowly takes her name) Kasturi…. (She immediately looks at him) Kasturi main tumse…. (Kasturi places a hand on his lips and he slowly kisses her fingers and gives her a very passionate look…. Kasturi looks down….. The colour rises to her cheeks and they go pink… Robbie sees this and moves a step closer to her…. He bends a bit to give her a peck on her cheeks….. Kasturi shies away and start moving away from him…. As soon as she tries moving away Robbie immediately catches her hand…. And then suddenly pulls her towards him…. Kasturi lands in his arms and he just holds her looking at her passionately….. (Song time…..)

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (Robbie's hands are around Kasturi and he is looking at her intensely with so much love….)
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (Kasturi can't take his gaze any more and hides herself in him…. She hugs him and he embraces her back…. They hold on each other gets tighter….)
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan (Robbie just moves back a bit and kisses her on her shoulder….)
Dhadkan bani zubaan (Kasturi is still holding him and just closes her eyes in the anticipation of what is coming ahead…. Robbie moves back and smiles while looking at her…. )

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (She opens her eyes and he sits down on his knees and forwards his hand asking for a dance…..)
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan (She slowly places her hand on his and he gets up and pulls her closer….)
Dhadkan bani zubaan (They start swaying in each other's arm looking in each other's eyes….)
Baahon ke darmiyaan (Kasturi keeps her head on his chest and closes her eyes while he embraces her and they keep on dancing in this manner for some time….)

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi (Kasturi is about to ask something when he places his finger on her lips….)
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi (He then moves his head in a no and Kasturi looks own…..)
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi (He then kisses her on her cheeks…. And she immediately turns around…)
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan (He then places both his hand on her shoulders and then slowly bends down and kisses her neck…)

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (He then goes in front to face her and she looks at him too….)
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan (Robbie then takes her in front of the dressing table and makes her sit on the seating in front of the mirror….)
Dhadkan bani zubaan (He sits near her on his knees and then removes her maang tika and kisses her on her forehead….. then removes her left earing looking at her in the mirror…. And then kisses her ear and then the same follows with other ear too…)
Baahon ke darmiyaan (He then removes her necklace and kisses her lower neck and then bends down and removes her anklets and kisses her feet too….then removes her dupatta and removes her hair pins and her hair fall down too…. He looks at her with that intense gaze and she gets up and runs away to the window…. Its raining outside….)

Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand (Kasturi puts her hand forward in the rain…. She smiles as the rainwater touch her hand and starts playing with it…)
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand (Robbie comes from behind and hugs her and places his hand below hers and places his head on her shoulders…)
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand (Kasturi could feel his hand on her bare waist and his breath on her lower neck….A chill runs through her spine….)
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan (There is a strong wind and few drops of water gets splashed on Kasturi's face and collar bone…. Robbie closes the window still blocking her way and then comes forward and drinks the rainwater that on her collar bone and then proceeds towards her face…. Her eyes are just closed…)

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (Robbie holds her face and then places a kiss on her lips…. Kasturi responds back and they share a long passionate kiss…)
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (They then separate and then Robbie picks her in his arms…. She looks at him…)
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan (He then takes her to the bed and carefully places her down…..)
Dhadkan bani zubaan (He then sits besides her and then makes her lie down….Her eyes are down….)
Baahon ke darmiyaan (He then kisses her on her lower neck and camera moves towards the window and its raining outside….. Chalo bachcho bahut hua… aage dekhna buri baat hai…. Chalo kamre se bahar)

Suddenly the phone rings and Robbie comes out of his trance…. He is actually standing in front of the door of his room…. He looks at his phone in frustration… Its Devika…. He picks up the call….

Devika: Robbie kahan ho tum?? How can u be so irresponsible?? Tumhara aaj concert tha aur tum…. (Robbie doesn't have any answers and he didn't want to tell her anything on phone as he knew it would be difficult to explain….)

Robbie: (thinks of an excuse) Hello…. Hello… mom… mom mujhe aapki aawaz nahi aa rahi…. Mom there's a network problem… main aap se baad main baat karta hoon…. (Cuts the call and switches off his phone and looks ahead… he is about to enter his room when… Nandini comes from behind…)

Nandini: Robbie… beta ek minute….

Robbie: Ji Aunty….

Nandini: Beta ye Lo… (Hands over few clothes to him)

Robbie: Aunty yeh kya hai??

Nandini: Beta yeh Kasturi ke liye hai…. Abhi ke liye nighty aur kal subah ke liye yeh dress… Yeh dress main Divya ke liye layi thi….. Beta jis tarah se tum dono ki shaadi hui us bechari ke paas kapde tak nahin hain….Kal subah usse apne ghar bhi toh jaana hai…

Robbie: (getting alert) Kyun?? Ghar kyun jaana hai??

Nandini: Beta pagphere ki rasam ke liye…. Tum dono subah jaldi tayar ho jaana… Tum dono ko saath jana hai aur phir wahin se tum usse shopping par bhi le jaana…. Phir kal shaam ko party bhi toh hai….

Robbie: Ji aunty…. Thanks Aunty….

Nandini: Koi baat nahin… ab tum darwaze ko dekhna band karo aur andar jao… tumhara hi kamra hai….

Robbie: (Gets embarrassed and makes a cute face): Ji Aunty… (Nandini just smiles and leaves… Robbie looks ahead and remembers what he was dreaming and smiles and hits his head slowly….. And then finally enters his room…)

(He sees Kasturi standing near the window and totally lost in her own world… But suddenly she gets aware of soeone's presence and turns back….she looks at Robbie and then slowly walks upto him….. Robbie just gives her one assuring smiles….)

Kasturi: Sir…. Aaj aapne jo mere aur mere parivar ke liye kiya uuse main kabhi nahi bhool paungi…. Lekin sir shaadi zindagi bhar ka saath hoti hai aur aapne apni zindagi ka itna zaroori faisla is tarah….

Robbie: Kasturi maine tum se pehle bhi kaha tha ki maine tum par koi ehsaan nahi kiya…. Main jaanta hoon ki shaadi zindagi bhar ka saath hoti hai…. Aaj humne ek rishta joda hai…. Main jaanta hoon ki aaj tum mujhse pyar nahi karti aur aaj tumhare kayi sapne bhi toote honge…. lekin I promise ke is ghar main na Kasturi tumhe kissi tarah ki bhi koi problem nahin hogi… aaj se ye ghar tumhara hai aur hum apne is rishte ki shuruwat dosti karenge…. Isse hum ek dusre ko jaan bhi lenge aur samajh bhi payenge….. so wats say??

Kasturi: (gives a faint smile) aap bilkul theek keh rahe hain…. Thanks sir….. (Thinks to herself….. )aaj tak mainne Robbie sir ka yeh chehra kabhi nahi dekha…. Mainne unhe kitna galat samjha tha aur woh….

Robbie: Hello…. Kya sochne lagi… tum bhi na dekha main bilkul hi bhool gaya…. Ye kuch kapde hain Nandini aunty ne diye hain…. Yeh night suit abhi ke liye aur yeh kapde kal pagphere ke kiye aur phir hum dono shopping par jayenge…

Kasturi: Shopping??

Robbie: Haan shopping…. Tumhara kya zindagi bhar yehi kapdo main rehne ka irrada hai? Anyways ab tum jao jake change karlo aur jaaker so jao… tum thak gayi hogi na….

Kasturi: ji (and she goes towards the washroom to change…)

Robbie immediately walks over to the bed and clears the mess that he has made b4 leaving…. He then hears the door of the washroom opening and looks behind…. Kasturi has changed into her night suit and has removed all her jewellery except her mangalsutra… she is looking gorgeous and he's just mesmerized…. Kasturi looks at him looking at her intently and just lowers her gaze… he sees her getting unfortable and walks over to her…..

Robbie: Kasturi tum jaakar bed par so jao main sofe par so jaunga…(Kasturi is about to say something….)nahi bilkul nahi main sofe par sounga…. Aur hum is bare main koi baat nahi karenge…. good night

Kasturi: (giving him a faint smile) good night….. (Goes towards the bed and lies down and then closes her eyes and soon falls asleep as she is completely exhausted both mentally and physically too)… … Robbie also goes and lies down at sofa…. He actually keeps looking at her for long and hen gradually falls asleep…)

Its morning…..

Robbie opens his eyes slowly and then looks around…. He is quite surprised as what he's doing on the sofa…. The slowly remembers yesterday's events and an instant smile appears on his face…. He immediately gets up and looks around the room… His eyes searching for Kasturi but she's not there… He walks over to the bed and c's something shining in the folds of the quilt… he picks it up and its Kasturi's one of the anklets…. He looks at it and on an sudden impulse kisses it…. He hears the sound of the washroom door opening and he turns around and sees Kasturi stepping out of the bath…. She is wearing the pink colour suit Nandini gave last night…. She is wearing no make up or jewellery and her water is dripping from her wet hair…. She is looking very beautiful…. Robbie sees her and forgets everything else…. He forgets to shift his gaze and probably thinks it would have been long time that he was thinking about her coz…. He's brought out from his trance when she nudges him…..

Kasturi: Sir…. Sirr kya hua?? Aise kyun dekh rahe hain??

Robbie: Nahin kuch nahin…. Tum is dress main bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho… (Kasturi shies a bit) Main fresh ho kar aata hoon….

Kasturi: Ji… (Robbie walks away and then there is a knock on the door…. Its Nandini she has got some jewellery and a make up kit for Kasturi…..)

Nandini: Good morning beta….

Kasturi: Good morning aunty….

Nandini: beta yeh lo yeh kuch cheezein hai tumhain zarrorat hogi…. Aur tum aur Robbie jaldi se tayaar ho kar neeche aa jao…. Aaj ki aarti tumhain hi karni hain aur phir hum sab breakfast saath karenge….

Kasturi: Ji aunty… (Nandini leaves)

Kasturi shuts the door and comes and sits in front of the dressing table…. She puts on the jewellery and minimal make up… By that time Robbie comes out of the washroom dressed and comes near Kasturi)

Robbie: Chale neechein…

Kasturi: Ji sir….

(They both walk down together…. They are looking very cute together and Raunak smiles as he looks at them…. They both walk down where everyone is waiting for them and then Kasturi walks over to each one of the clan member and takes their blessing…. Raunak nudges Robbie indicating that he should also along with her take everyone's blessing…. Robbie gives a weird expression to Raunak but a moment later joins in Kasturi…. So Kasturi was touching Nandini's feet and Robbie bends too…. Kasturi is surprised by this and so is everyone…. Kasturi looks at him and Robbie looks at her too… once again both of them are lost only to be brought back by Raunak's coughing… They both feel embarrassed…. Everyone is happy and laughs….

Nandini: Kasturi lagta hai tumne ek hi raat main Robbie par apna jaadu chala diya hai….

(Kasturi shies… They then take blessing of Puru and Dushant too… and then Nandini takes them to do the aarti…. It's the first time they do the aarti together and then Kasturi gives it to everyone…. Nandini comes to Kasturi and says that it's the rule of the house that the new D-I-L should make the breakfast which Kasturi is only happy to oblige and she walks away with Nandini…. Kasturi makes the breakfast while Raunak and Robbie are discussing some business and what they are gonna tell the press about RK wedding and Dushant and Puru are just playing chess and discussing about evening's party…. After sometime Kasturi walks out of the kitchen and comes where Robbie and Raunak are standing…. And calls him)

Kasturi: Sir Breakfast tayaar hain…. Aap dono jaldi aa jaiye….(she leaves from there and Robbie looks at Raunak who is laughing)

Robbie: Ab tujhe kya hua…. Tu hus kyun raha hai??

Raunak: nahi yaar… aisi koi baat nahi… bu maine aaj tak kabhi aisa couple nahin dekha na… isi liye…

Robbie: (frowns) Aisa couple matlab….

Raunak: Ab dekh na wives apne husband ko pyar se kya nahin bulati…. Darling… sweetheart…. Dear…. But Kasturi duniya ki pehli patni hogi jo apne pati ko Sir kehke bulati hai…. Very innovative must say….

Robbie: Raunak tu….

Raunak: nahin nahin… hota hai…. Kahan ye nahi pata par jahan tujh jaisa koi hoga wahan yehi hota hoga… (Before Robbie could say anything he just goes to call Puru and Dushant…. Robbie also moves towards the dining table…)

At the dining table….

Everyone is seated…. Kasturi comes out from the kitchen along with Nandini…. Robbie isn't aware the breakfast is prepared by Kasturi…. Nandini makes Kasturi sit next to Robbie…. Robbie is continuosly giving sideways glances to Kasturi…. Nandu, their servant comes out and start serving the breakfast… he starts with the kheer….. Nandini had asked Kasturi to make it as its good to make some sweet and Robbie simply loves kheer…

Robbie: wow…. Aaj subha subha kheer… (he tastes it….) hmmmm…. This is just yum…. I love it… Aunty apna haath dijiye…. (nandini is sitting across him)
Nandini: (surprised) kyun?

Robbie: Aunty dijiye na….(Nandini give him her hand and he just kisses it….)

Nandini: yeh kya..

Robbie: Aunty the kheer is mind blowing…. Bohut achachi hai….(turns towards Kasturi) haina Kasturi??

(Kasturi just looks down and smiles a bit)

Nandini: beta agar aisi baat hai to main tumhari galatphemi door kar doon… yeh kheer maine nahi banayi…

Robbie: Kya aapne nahi banayi? Toh Nandu? Not possible….

Nandini: Robbie beta yeh kheer na maine banayi hai na nandu ne… ye kheer toh Kasturi ne banayi hai…. (Robbie is pleasantly surprised and looks at Kasturi… when Nandini again says) Kyun beta ab jo inaam mujhe diya tha who Kasturi ko bhi…

Robbie and Kasturi both gets embarrassed at it…. Everybody starts laughing…

Puru: Robbie beta…. Breakfast khatam karke tum Kasturi ko uske ghar chod aao… Aaj toh usse Pagphere ki rasam ke liye jaana hai na (Robbie's face fall)… uske ghar se phone aaya tha….(Kasturi looks up at Puru at this) Kasturi beta tum jaaker tayaar ho jao..

Kasturi: ji…. (she finishes her breakfast and then moves to her room… Robbie watches her leaving with a sullen expression… Raunak sees this and laughs….)

Raunak: Robbie Kasturi sirf kuch der ke liye ja rahi hai…. Tu bhi na…

Robbie: Tu nahi samjhega…. Jab teri baari aayegi na bachchu tab pata chalega…. Arre kal hi toh aayi hai…. (irritatedly gets up and goes to his room too)

Raunak: (smiles) iska kuch nahin ho sakta..

End of part 4

Chalo ppl.... jaldi batao... how waz the part.... waiting for ur replies....

Sonia

Edited by sonia_s11 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
Wow! u r soo good, and its so cute.

omg, if only this really happened on the show.

i say we kick out Ekta and put u instead.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
sonia yeh tu bohut meta tah 😛 i swear 😆 😆 😆 will waiting for da next part badly plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon na just cant wait for da nxt part 😆 love u r ff n gr8 job on u r 4th part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was wonderful.. hopr robbie speaks out.. pata nahi kya hoga jab devika ayegi..
pls continue soon
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
Maar daala mujhe, Sonia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't seem to get enough of your fanfic!!!!!

OMG, I have just read it before going to bed and I am positive this beautiful scene is going to come in my dreams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And your style of using every line of the song to depict something was awesome. But somehow I knew that this was going to be Robbie's dream 😛 . There was no way they were going to come together immediately!!!!

Lekin mein kya keh rahi hun, ke agar dream hi itna sensous tha, toh what will happen when they actually do come together in your fanfic!!!!!

OMG, sochke hi paseena chut rahaa hai!!!!!

Awesome, Too Good 👏 👏 👏 .

Desperately waiting for the next part!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
Cho sweet! My heart was beating fast and I was all hyper! You have brought me to the condition I was when RK were romancing! By reading it I am in this condition. What would happen if it really happens in real show! I think that is why Ekta never shows all this, she knows it is bad to get excited! 😆

I loved the part where Robbie cuts Devika's phone call!I am so curious to know what will be Devika's reaction! Too good! 👏 Please continue fast....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
Sonia, I just had to log on today to read ur ff b4 goin to work.....tis soo addictive and very beautifully written.......tis so detailed that I actually imagined the entire scene unfolding b4 my eyes...... 👏 I luved the part where Robbioe cuts Devika out.......and am soo anxious to know how they interact with eachother... I mean Robbie and Kasturi....when will he tell her dat he luvs her like mad.....I hope Devika gives them sumtime alone b4 she unfolds her evil plans after the jhatka she gets seeing them together....

Waiting with bated brath once again for your powerpacked update......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Raunak: Ab dekh na wives apne husband ko pyar se kya nahin bulati…. Darling… sweetheart…. Dear…. But Kasturi duniya ki pehli patni hogi jo apne pati ko Sir kehke bulati hai…. Very innovative must say….

Robbie: Raunak tu….

Raunak: nahin nahin… hota hai…. Kahan ye nahi pata par jahan tujh jaisa koi hoga wahan yehi hota hoga…





🤣

OMG Sonia, I love your Raunak and Robbie, they are just too cute 😊.

Please update really soon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOw mindblowing.........it was so lil... 😉
i loved it.......but this time plz don't make us wait dat long.....update it soon.......yea it was funny wat raunak said about"sir" lolz.....
aur haan
maine pehli bhaar gaana read karke dekha hai.....i actually imagined all the things...superb..... 👏 👏 👏

plz plz plz plz plz update it soon... 😊

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