Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 9

just read all da partz v ur fanfic ... n dey r just awsome ...
wow mind blowin sonia ...!!👏

Originally posted by: sara5

great i have no words to say u r mind blowing yaar create some more romentic scene between robbie nad kasturi this is not my objection this is my advice d nt get me rong plzz nice work keep it up next part jaldi pist karo 👏

thanx sara.... Suggestions are always welcome.... i didn't mind.... keep reading.... i hope u enjoy it in future too.... thanx for liking it....

Originally posted by: nimmofan

hi dear i m late ;just read d FF
Sonia u rock!!!intezaar karna fruitful saabit hua ..
u just exceeded d expectations dear ;
i simply luved it d way u described every scene btwn RK alongwid lyrics of song superb ;d song selection was brilliant 2 .
i also luv d humour u incorporate & Raunak's take on sir was hilarious 😆
very beautifully written 👏
just waitin 4 next......

sonali

Thanx Sonali.... I love that song too.... and thought it wud be apt for RK.... Glad to know u liked it too.... Keep reading and keep posting ur sweet comments.... will update soon....

Originally posted by: Ryka

Hi Sonia,

That was one sizzling dream😳 . Apna Robbie bhi na...imaginations runs wild 😆 yeh kya Robbie sofe pe? Bechara... I hope he slept well. I love Raunak in this, what an adorable friend he makes teasing his newly wed friend😆 Thankfully kissi ko tho ajeeb laga Kasturi ka 'Sir' bulana. I can so imagine Robbie's reaction when Nandini told him Kasturi has to go home t'row 😆

Devika is like a time bomb ticking away 😕 Lets see how Robbie manages it.

That was well written Sonia, love reading this FF... keep it going 😃

Ryka it was afterall Robbie's imagination na... has to be wild.... Thank you so much for ur sweet comments.... Don't worry about Devika.... I won't let her be successful at any cost here!!

Thanx for ur lovely comments.... will update soon.... keep reading....

Originally posted by: lwfw

soni 👏
today first time i read part1 to part4
very good, thanks for the shaadi and all the dialogues .
and dream too 😉
that song was too good man, you have put comment for all the lines 👏
well done waiting for part 5

Thanx shara.... I'm happy that u enjoyed it.... That song is one of my favourites too.... I hope u like next parts as well.... I'll be updating the next part soon.... do read and post in ur comments....

Originally posted by: davia389

waithng for the updates..
davia

will update soon davia.... hopefully by tonight.... keep reading....

Originally posted by: arohi12

Sonia
Dudde ur a great story teller man.. keep it up! 👏
one of the best ff i've read so far!!

thanx arohi.... keep reading and I hope u like next parts too... will be waiting for u comments....

Originally posted by: robinblue91

just read all da partz v ur fanfic ... n dey r just awsome ...
wow mind blowin sonia ...!!👏

thank you so much.... keep reading and keep commenting...

Sonia

😳 😳 😳 ok i no its my sconed time posting but i forget to tell u somthing sonia..... its a request plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont bring devika sooo soon 😡 if possible dont even bring her cuz i no tht once she comes there will be no more r/k romactic sence 😭 n sry to say it but that'll be a 👎🏼👎🏼 a flop ff ..hehe.dont mind just kiddin....y dont u just kill her on her way to home ....hehe..lol.....😃 dont mind me .......over all u r ff is 1 of da best ff n that now is a 👍🏼👍🏼

Hey Sonia plssssssssssssss update asap.......me dying to read the latest update..........

Luv.......

Originally posted by: white star

😳 😳 😳 ok i no its my sconed time posting but i forget to tell u somthing sonia..... its a request plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont bring devika sooo soon 😡 if possible dont even bring her cuz i no tht once she comes there will be no more r/k romactic sence 😭 n sry to say it but that'll be a 👎🏼👎🏼 a flop ff ..hehe.dont mind just kiddin....y dont u just kill her on her way to home ....hehe..lol.....😃 dont mind me .......over all u r ff is 1 of da best ff n that now is a 👍🏼👍🏼

Whitestar... don't worry... devika won't be able to separate RK here... let her do what she wants.... RK will be together at the end😊....

Originally posted by: zenia680

Hey Sonia plssssssssssssss update asap.......me dying to read the latest update..........

Luv.......

Zenia.... next part will be up with in a moment.... Don't forget to leave in ur comments... hope u like it....

Sonia

Thank you so much for so many sweet responses ppl….. Love u all and ur comments…. I hope that u all like this part as well….

Recap: Devika calls Robbie as he is about to enter his room but he cuts the call…. Robbie tries to make Kasturi comfortable and goes and sleeps on the sofa…. Next day RK does the aarti and Nandini takes Kasturi to make kheer…. Raunak pulls Robbie's legs and then goes to have breakfast… Robbie loves the kheer and praises it a lot Kasturi is happy… Kasturi has to go for her pagphera and Robbie is being grumpy about it….

Part 5:

In RK's room:

Kasturi comes out of the washroom and goes to the dressing table…. Robbie comes and sits on the bed being grumpy…. He's very upset with the fact that Kasturi is going for her pagphera…. So she'll be away from him…. Kasturi on the other side is happy at the thought of meeting her parents…. Robbie sees this….

Robbie: Kya baat hai Kasturi bohot khush lag rahi ho….

Kasturi: (looking at him through the mirror) Nahin woh bas aise hi…. Actually ghar par sabki bohut yaad aarahi hain na isiliye…

Robbie: (under his breadth) Ghar par sabki yaad aarahi hai…. Kitni parwa hai sabki aur main jisse tumhare siwa kuch nahi sujta usse dil ka haal tak nahi samajhti…

Kasturi: Ji kya kaha aapne?

Robbie: (feels like an idiot) nahi kuch nahi… achcha kab tak aaogi?? (Kasturi looks at him) nahi woh actually shaam ko party bhi hain na aur hume shopping par bhi jaana hai isiliye…

Kasturi: (smiles at him) jab aap lene aayenge tab…(getting a bit tensed) waise aap mujhe lene aayenge na…. agar aap ko koi kaam hai toh koi…

Robbie: (cutting her in between) Kasturi main tumhe theek 4 baje pick karunga…. Wud that be fine??

Kasturi: (smiles) hmm….

Then Kasturi gets busy she applies the least amount of make up and then at last picks up her mangalsutra and ties it around her neck…. Robbie is looking at her admiringly..... Then she slowly picks up the sindoor and applies it on her forehead partition…. Robbie's eyes are on her all the time…. She finally gets up and turns around to face Robbie and asks….

Kasturi: Sir aap aa rahe hain na mere saath??

Robbie: Kyun?? Kya tum nahi chahti ki main aao??
Kasturi: Nahi aisi bath nahi hai…. Main toh bas…

Robbie: arre baba its ok…. Main toh aise hi mazak kar raha tha… give me two minutes I'll just change….

Kasturi: ji….

(Robbie opens his ward robe and is about to remove his clothes….)

Kasturi: Aap kya kar rahe hain sir?

Robbie: Kapde nikal raha tha….. kyun??

Kasturi: nahi woh actually na……(pointing towards the bed) maine aap ke kapde nikal kar rakhain hain….

Robbie gets surprised…. He turns to look where Kasturi has just pointed…. Kasturi has placed his clothes on the bed…... He is surprised and very happy too and a sudden smile appears on his face……. He shuts his wardrobe and goes and picks up the clothes… Kasturi is looking at him…. He just gives her one of her best smiles and says…

Robbie: thanx Kasturi….. (Katuri smiles back and then Robbie goes inside the washroom and after 5 minutes come back dressed…. Kasturi was sitting on the bed reading a magazine… When she sees Robbie she keep sit aside and gets up…

Kasturi: Chalain Sir…. (Saying this moves ahead and walks past Robbie when he just grabs her hand and pulls her towards himself…He is looking at her passionately directly into her eyes… She didn't know how to react….) Sir… (Robbie places a finger on her lip...)

Robbie: Robbie….

Kasturi: Ji…

Robbie: Sir nahin Robbie (leaves her and takes a step back)…. Ab main tumhara boss nahin hoon…. Waise bhi shaadi ke baad toh ghar wives ki he territory hota hai na…. unhi ki monopoly chalti hai…. so mujhe tumhe ma'am kehna chahiya na?? toh ab tum mujhe sirf Robbie kaho ya main bhi aaj se tumhe ma'am kahunga….

Kasturi: (surprised at his behaviour) nahin sir… aap ye...

Robbie: Phir sir…. Thik hai toh main tumhe ma'am kehkar hi bulaunga….

Kasturi: ji nahi…. Lekin mujhe aadat nahin hain na….

Robbie: toh aadat daal lo… simple…

Kasturi: itna bhi simple nahin hain…

Robbie: Ok ma'am as u wish… (Saying this he starts walking)

Kasturi: nahi rukiye…. I'll try… (Robbie stops and comes back and stands in front of her…. Kasturi closes her eyes and Robbie smiles at this….) Robbie… (Opens her eyes) ab chaplain…. (Robbie smiles and gestures her to walk… she does so…and both of them walk downstairs… The rest of the members are standing there…. Robbie and Kasturi takes everyone's blessings….

Nandini: Beta sambhal kar jaana….

Robbie: Ji aunty…

Raunak: Have fun Kasturi… aur agar yeh idiot zyada pareshaan Karen na toh mujhe ek phone kar dena…. I'll take care of him….

(Kasturi smiles)

Robbie: (Gives a sarcastic laugh) very funny…. Tujhe toh main aakar dekhta hoon…(turning towards kasturi….) Chalain Kasturi….

Kasturi: Ji sir…(Robbie gives a glare to Kasturi) I mean Robbie… Chaliye… (Kasturi heads forward)

Raunak: (shows a thumbs up sign to Robbie) good start buddy all the best…..

(Robbie smiles and leaves… Robbie and kasturi both take their seats in the car… Robbie is at the driver seat while Kasturi is at the passenger seat beside him and they are heading towards Kasturi's house… Both of them ae quiet and are stealing glances at each other…. Kasturi is thinking about how her life changed in a day….

Kasturi: (to herself) kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki zindagi ek din main itni badal jayegi…. Jab main pehli baar Robbie sir se mili thi tab maine unhe kitna galat samjha tha…. Hum dono ke beech kya kuch nahi hua aur maine toh hamesha yehi samjha ki woh meri shakal dekhna bhi pasand hi nahi karte… mujhe lagta tha ki woh ke bohut hi magroor insaan hain… lekin kal jo kuch unhone mere aur mere parivaar ke liye kiya… ek pal ke liye bhi mujhe mehsoos nahin hone diya ki unhone mujh se shaadi karke mujh par ehsaan kiya hai…. Jo Rbbie sabarwal hamesha mujhe musibat main daalne ke mauke dhundta tha ussi Robbie Sabarwal ne musibat ke waqt mera haath thama…. Mujhe sambhala… yakeen nahi hota ke yeh wohi Robbie Sabarwal hain jinhe kissi ki parwa nahi thi…. Kitni galat thi main…. (now looking at Robbie )Yeh rishta bhale hi meri khushi se na juda ho magar is rishte main aapko har khushi dene ki koshish karungi….

Robbie catches Kasturi's eyes and Kasturi lowers her eyes…. Robbie just parks the Car at the roadside and looks at Kasturi…. Kasturi looks at him questioningly…..

Robbie: Kya baat hai Kasturi?? Kahan khoi hui ho??

Kasturi: nahi bas aise hi….

Robbie: phir bhi….

Kasturi: mere saath kahin chalenge?? (Robbie looks at her a bit surprised….) kahiye na chalenge??

Robbie: (smiles) Kahan jana hai?

Kasturi: Mandir…. Main ghar jaane se pehle mandir jaana chahti hoon….

Robbie: theek hai chalo….. (He starts driving and they soon reach the temple…. He parks the car…) chalo… (Both of them steps down… it's the same Shiv temple… both of them starts walking…. Reaches a flower vendor when Kasturi stops to take the flowers to offer…. Robbie looks at her affectionately and then pays the vendor… then they climb the stairs together in perfect co-ordination… Robbie is all in smiles… they reach in front of the idol…. Kasturi closes her eyes and prays….

Kasturi: Hey bhagwan…. Jo hua woh kabhi socha bhi nahi tha isiliye is nayi zindagi main kadam rakhne se pehle main aapka aashiwad lena chahti thi…. Meri madat kijiyega ki main apni nayi zindagi ko poori tarah se apna sakoon….. (Robbie is looking at her… when she opens her eyes… she sees Robbie looking at her… she looks at him questioningly and he just moves his head to say no…. by then the pandit comes asks them to offer the flowers together…. RK exchange looks and then Kasturi hold the flowers and Robbie places his hands bellow Kasturi's and then they both offer flowers together and leaves….

While descending down from the steps…. Kasturi misses a step and is about to fall but Robbie catches hold of her in time…. Her eyes are shut tightly and Robbie looks at her…. They are very close to each other…. Kasturi feels Robbie's arms thrown around her and she really feels very safe and secure…. She doesn't understand why?? She slowly opens her eyes and found Robbie looking at her intently…. She gets lost in his eyes too…. There is a small kid running down the stairs and when he runs past them accidentally pushes Kasturi and she goes deeper in his arms…. Now both of them gets aware of their surroundings… Robbie leaves her and she gets back …. Kasturi's cheeks have already gone in deep hues of pink…. Robbie gets embarrassed too…

Robbie: tum theek ho na Kasturi??
Kasturi: (lowering her gaze) ji …. (both of them then leaves for Kasturi's house…

At Sabarwal house…..

Puru is in his room reading some file…when Nandini enters….

Nandini: bhaisahab apne kuch socha….

Puru: kis bare mai bhabhi…

Nandini: bhaisahab shaam ko Devika bhabhi aa rahi hai…. Unhe Robbie Kasturi ki shaadi ke bare main pata chalega tab….

Puru: kuch nahi hoga bhabhi…. Kuch nahi kar payegi who…. Main usse kuch bhi karne ka mauka doonga tab na…

Nandini: Matlab…. Aap kya karne wale hain bhaisahab??

Puru: Bhabhi maine sab soch rakha hai…. Aaj shaam ko maine isiliye party organize karwai hai aur press walon ko bulaya hai…. Main jaanta hoon ki Devika press ke saamne koi tamasha nahi karegi… aur agle hafte Robbie ka Mauritius main concert bhi hain…. Maine Robbie aur Kasturi ke kal ki flight tickets bhi book karva di hai…. Robbie apni rehearsals wahin karega aur saath hi saath in dono ko kuch waqt bhi saath mil jayega…

Raunak: (comes from behind) gr8 idea uncle…. Main Robbie aur Kasturi ke liye wahan saara bandobast karva deta hoon… unhe wahan koi takleef nahin hogi…

Nandini: sach bhaisahab ye aapne bohut achcha kiya… tab tak Devika bhabhi ka gussa bhi shaant ho jayega….

Raunak: main chalta hoon uncle bohut kaam hai…. (Puru and Nandini nods and then Nadini leaves too….)

Puru: (with a determined look) Devika main tumhe achchi tarah se jaanta hoon… tum Kasturi ko nahin apnaugi…. Jitna khush maine Robbie ko aaj dekha hai utna kabhi nahi dekha…. Main itna to samajh hi chukka hoon ki kasturi Robbie ki khushi hai aur main kissi keemat par tumhe un dono ke beech nahin aane doonga…

At the Chawla house…..

Tanu and Navneet are pacing up and down anxiously…..
Navneet: yeh Kasturi di aur jeeju kahan reh gaye?

Alka: arre aa jayenge…. Itna bhi jyada uchalne ki zaroorat nahin hai… waise bhi shaadi main itne twist and turn aaye hain… pata nahin aur kya kya hone wala hai??

Bauji: (coming down the stairs) Alka… kadi te shubh bolya kar… jab bhi bolegi ulta hi bolegi….

Tanu: (sees RK approaching the door) Deeeee…… Ma… Bauji dekhiye Di aagayi…

All comes out… rushing towards the door…. Everyone hugs Kasturi…. Kaushalya comes and kisses her on her forehead and then they all come in….

Alka: Kasturi puttar (hugs her)…. Kaisi hai tu…. Tujhe pata hai tere intezaar main raat bhar neend nahi aayi mujhe…( everyone makes faces… Tanu and Navneet looks at each other…. Aree Robbie puttar tum kaise ho?? Kya karu meri na ladli hai Kasturi…. Sabse zyada iski fikar is ghar main mujhe hi toh hai….

Beeji: Theek hai theek hai Alka… jaake sab ke liye sharbat le aa…. (Alka looks irritatedly at Beeji….)

Tiku: (sunny deol style) kyun ma… apni ladli bhatiji ke liye aap sharbat bhi nahin la sakti…

Alka: (annoyed) lati hoon….

(Robbie just looks and smiles…. Alka gets the drinks and everyone has it after sometime Robbie excuses himself to leave….)

JP: kyun beta baitho na….

Kaushalya: haan beta kuch der toh betho

Robbie: nahin aunty…. Mujhe rehearsals par bhi jaana hai…

Kaushalya: beta agar kaam hai toh main nahin rokungi… agar tum rukte toh achcha lagta…

Robbie: phir kabhi aunty…

Kaushalya: arre beta aunty nahin Ma kaho….

Robbie: (smiles) ji Ma… ab main chalta hoon…(looks at Kasturi to take her permission as well… Kasturi smiles and nods in agreement…. Robbie leaves….

The entire family chats for sometime…. Then Sia comes…. Kasturi and Sia goes to her room and Kaushalya goes to get something for them to eat….. In Kasturi's room….

Sia: kasturi tu khush hai na?

Kasturi: Haan sia… Robbie aur unke pariwar ke sab hi log bahut achche hain…. Tu jaanti hain Robbie mera bahut khayal rakhte hain…. Mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi hota key eh wohi Robbie Sabarwal hai…. Woh sach main ek bahut achche insaan hain…. Mujhe wahan kissi ne yeh mehsoos hi nahin hone diya ki meri aur Robbie sir ki shaadi ek samjhota thi…. Tujhe pata hai aaj humari shaadi ki khushi main ek party bhi rakhi gayi hai aurr yahan se hum siddhe shopping par ja rahe hain…..

Sia: wow!! Tu toh bahut khush lag rahi hai… main tere kiye bahut khush hoon…

(Kaushalya listens everything from outside and thanks God silently…. She feels relieved to know that her daughter is happy there at her place….)

Robbie at rehearsals…..

Robbie is in a fowl mood… ab kya kare Kasturi ki yaad jo itni aa rahi hai…. He is shouting at everyone… he even calls off the rehearsals and comes to the main office…. There also he has problems with everything…. Everyone is scared and wondering whats wrong with him…. Raunak is there in the office too… he is in his cabin…

Raunak: (picks up the phone) Mr. Gupta please come in…(after a while)

Mr. Gupta: may I come in sir…
Raunak: Mr. Gupta aap rehearsals par ja kar Robbie se in papers par sign le aaiye… yeh bahut jaroori hai….

Mr Gupta: Ji sir woh Robbie sir toh office main hi hain….

Raunak: office main?

Mr. Gupta: ji sir….(making a sad face) Unka mood bahut kharab hai… sab par gussa kar rahen hain… main ab tak 2 baar daant kha chukka hoon….

Raunak: (taken aback… thinks for a while and understands what the matter is as he saw him in the morning too…. He gives a small laugh…) koi baat nahi Mr. Gupta aap jaiye main dekhta hoon…. He gets up and waks over to Robbie's cabin… when he reaches the cabin he cud hear him shouting….

Robbie: yeh kya hain…. Maine kaha tha na ki rehearsals ki date aap mujhse pooch kar rakhiyega…. (Ruanak enters the cabin….

Raunak: Tushhar tum jaao…. (he leaves thanking Raunak under his breadth and Raunak goes towards Robbie..) Robbie tu ja yahan se....

Robbie: kyun.. main kyun jaao…

Raunak: Kyunki agar tu yahan rahega toh aaj koi bhi yahan kaam nahi kar payega… tu sab par yunhi chilta rahega aur koi kaam theek se nahi hoga…

Robbie: (annoyingly) matlab..

Raunak: (enjoying every bit of it) matlab tu jaanta hai… dekh Kasturi ko lene jaane main abhi thoda waqt hai…. Tu yahan reh kar sara kaam bigadega.... mujhe yahan ka kaam jaldi khatam karna hai kyuni kujhe shaam ki party ki arrangements bhi dekhni hai....Tu ek kaam kar jaakar kuch der aaram kar… chyvanprash kha… body bana…

Robbie: very funny… (walks out with rapid steps and raunak laughs… Robbie is in his room… remembering Kasturi….. Mitwa track plays in the background… Robbie is remembering all the moments he and Kasturi have spent…. A smile on his face…. Suddenly his phone rings…. Its Kasturi….

Robbie: (immediately picks up the phone) Haan Kasturi bolo…

Kasturi: Woh aap aa rahe hain na…. der ho rahi thi….

Robbie: (looks at his watch and sees its 4.15 and remembers he had said Kasturi that he'll come to pick her by 4…. He thinks time passed by so quickly whn he was lost in her thoughts…)

Kasturi: aap sunn rahe hain na…. hello…
Robbie: hello… haan kasturi… main bas abhi aaya… I'll be thr in 10 minutes… tum tayaar rehna…. Bye… (cuts the phone…. Quickly wears his jacket and is about to leave but stops in front of the mirror and says… I love U Kasturi… smiles and leaves)

Kasturi is waiting for Robbie on the other hand….

Tanu: kya di…. Aa jayenge na jeeju…

Navneet: aa jayenge nahin aa gaye hain…

Kasturi turns towards the door…. A smile appears on her face on seeing Robbie… Robbie smiles too…. They both are looking at each other… ajay comes…

Ajay: arre Robbie andar aao na….

Robbie: nahi who bas Kasturi ko lene aaya tha…. Chaplain Kasturi humme der ho rahi hai….

Kasturi: jee… (About to leave…)

Robbie: Kasturi tume sab ko party ke liye invite kiya??

Kasturi: nahin woh…

Robbie: tum bhi na Kasturi… (he then goes where Kasturi's dadaji is standing) Dadaji… woh aaj ghar main meri aur Kasturi ki shaadi ki khushi main party hain… Aap sab ko aana hi hai….

Alka: (all excited) haan haan puttar hum aayenge na…. jaroor aayenge…

Robbie smile… He then takes Dadaji's, Kaushalya's and JP's blessings… all are very happy… Thn he comes back to Kasturi and they both leave…..

End of Part 5

Chalo ab sab jaldi se read karo aur honestly batao kaisa hai…… Will be waiting eagerly for all ur comments…. Hope haven't disappointed you….

Sonia

Soniaaaaa

Awesome again.... Thoda spice kam lagaaa phir bhi 100% very gud... Its not 101% na 😆 ...

I luved the way u r taking Kas and Rob character... Taking the story step by step and not rushing it 👏 👏 👏

aaahhh Devika is going to come and the next day RK going to Mauritius... Yahoooooooooo .. More of RK scenes to read 😍😍😍

Eagerlyyyy waiting for the next part, so plzzzzzzzzz post it sooooon...

Initially wen i saw the length of the post i was happy tat it was very looooooooong but wen I finished reading it, it was like very short 😆 Even After reading so many RK scenes, mann ko shaanti nahin mil rahin hai... Wat to do😆😆... Yeh Dil Maange More🥳

Continue soooooooooooooooooooon dear

Krishi

sonia
👏
😳 nice one. wow , liked it go ahead continue.
your dialogues are good on top of that you have that small comments which help me in imagining 😃

waiting for the next

shara

😍 Things cant realy get any better for a RK fan... u really took me away from reality into the Prefect Paradise for RK 😳 I just love Robbie when he sulks... he sounds very sweet, esp when Raunak teases him 😆 I am glad 'Sir' is history now... that was a very cute scene. Way to go Puru, that was a fantastic idea to counter Devika 👏 I dont why i simply loved Robbie calling Kaushalya 'Ma' Kaushalya is epitome of motherhood... I wish Robbie someday experiences such genuine motherly love.

I loved this part dear. Thank u for ur efforts and time to put up this story for us... We surely appreciate it 😃

it is doing great
i hope that was how kasturi was going
in real 😊
but its great
keep writing