Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 10

can things get any better than this 😆 😆 wow wow wow 👏 nic job sonia ....this part was tooo good ..loved it ... 😳 sonia u desrve a ⭐️ from me.... n of course a lil more ⭐️ n thx so much for not letting devika create any dhamka in da nxt part ....over all u r part 5 was mindblowing 👍🏼 n here hun this is from me 🤗 2 u for u r gr8 ff

good job 👏n lookin farward to u r nxt part 😍plzzz continue soon

ok ok it was a double post

Originally posted by: knumnum

Soniaaaaa

Awesome again.... Thoda spice kam lagaaa phir bhi 100% very gud... Its not 101% na 😆 ...

I luved the way u r taking Kas and Rob character... Taking the story step by step and not rushing it 👏 👏 👏

aaahhh Devika is going to come and the next day RK going to Mauritius... Yahoooooooooo .. More of RK scenes to read 😍😍😍

Eagerlyyyy waiting for the next part, so plzzzzzzzzz post it sooooon...

Initially wen i saw the length of the post i was happy tat it was very looooooooong but wen I finished reading it, it was like very short 😆 Even After reading so many RK scenes, mann ko shaanti nahin mil rahin hai... Wat to do😆😆... Yeh Dil Maange More🥳

Continue soooooooooooooooooooon dear

Krishi

Thanx Krishi.... It so nice to read all ur comments...

Okay now coming back... Krishi laalach buri bala hai... suna hai?? 😆 😆 😆.... but i know humare RK hain hi aise.... even i can't enuf of Rabail and davia ff.... and need to catch up with the other ff too....

will try to continue ASAP.... but don't forget to comment!!! thank you so much!!!

QUOTE=lwfw]sonia
👏
😳 nice one. wow , liked it go ahead continue.
your dialogues are good on top of that you have that small comments which help me in imagining 😃

waiting for the next

shara

Shara,

Thank you so much.... I'm so glad that u r enjoying the ff... and i hope u continue to do so..... keep commenting!!! they are really precious to me....

Originally posted by: Ryka

😍 Things cant realy get any better for a RK fan... u really took me away from reality into the Prefect Paradise for RK 😳 I just love Robbie when he sulks... he sounds very sweet, esp when Raunak teases him 😆 I am glad 'Sir' is history now... that was a very cute scene. Way to go Puru, that was a fantastic idea to counter Devika 👏 I dont why i simply loved Robbie calling Kaushalya 'Ma' Kaushalya is epitome of motherhood... I wish Robbie someday experiences such genuine motherly love.

I loved this part dear. Thank u for ur efforts and time to put up this story for us... We surely appreciate it 😃

Thank you so much Ryka... I really wanted Robbie to call Kaushalya Ma.... it wud have been really touchy if they wud have shown it... but they didn't so thot of putting it here....

Originally posted by: zenia680

Sonia.....wow was this a bonus for us???? I luved every bit of it... I think tyhe story is shaping up reeli well 😛 😛...I hope in the next part we get to see more of RobsKas scenes..... 😳 😳 Am again waiting with bated breath for the next part.......plsssssss do update asap..........

Luv.........

Thanx Zenia.... u r enjoying it and thats all i want.... thanx for liking it.... More RK scenes I hope so too.... keep commenting..... will try and continue ASAP.....

Originally posted by: white star

can things get any better than this 😆 😆 wow wow wow 👏 nic job sonia ....this part was tooo good ..loved it ... 😳 sonia u desrve a ⭐️ from me.... n of course a lil more ⭐️ n thx so much for not letting devika create any dhamka in da nxt part ....over all u r part 5 was mindblowing 👍🏼 n here hun this is from me 🤗 2 u for u r gr8 ff

good job 👏n lookin farward to u r nxt part 😍plzzz continue soon

Thank you so much Whitestar😳.... I'm glad that u were not dissapointed with this part.... yes next part Devika making an entry.... can't keep her on hold any longer....

Will try to post the next part asap.... keep tuned and keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Thankyou so much Sonia! You transpired me into a different world! I liked the pace of the story.....it getting very interesting...I am reading all the parts again and again! 👏 👏 👏 Cant wait for the next part!!!

Thanx RK fan..... I'm glad that my motive of writng this ff is being fulfilled..... Thanx for liking it.... Keep commenting... will try to continue asap😊

Originally posted by: sofia_shiraz95

sonia,
briliant part...!!
cant get enough of reading it..!!

Thanx Sofia..... So good to know that u are enjoying the story.... Hope to keep upto ur expectations.... keep commenting.....

Originally posted by: nimmofan

Hey sonia mindblowing .

I m glad atleast yehan to sirrrrrrr kehna bandh hua . I luved d dialogue-- Sir nahin Robbie Ab main tumhara boss nahin hoon…. Waise bhi shaadi ke baad toh ghar wives ki he territory hota hai na…. unhi ki monopoly chalti hai…. so mujhe tumhe ma'am kehna chahiya na?? toh ab tum mujhe sirf Robbie kaho ya main bhi aaj se tumhe ma'am kahunga…. 😆

Awesome yaar do continue soon u never disappoint us d FF rocks. D conversation btwn R& Ra, RK d way their relationship is developing,d humour ;chavanpraash kha body bana 😆
I luv puru's character in ur ff & chalo ajay bhaisaab ko bhi mauka mil raha hai kuch kaam karneka..
👏

Thank you.... I'm glad to know that u r enjoying the story.... Sirr yes I kicked it off😉.....

This ff rocks coz of u all..... love to read ur comments.... keep commenting!!! will continue asap....

Sonia